||THE MIND ELECTRIC|| Two Week Completed Jayfeather AU MAP

OKAY SO I FORGOR RHE VINES AND SO IM REUPLOADINF THIS REAL QUICK SORRY IM TIRED
After a long few months and a few trips, the map is complete! Thank you to all of my lovely participants for joining the map, and my thumbnail competitors for trying to win! So many lovely thumbnails to see💕
Thumbnails: docs.google.com/document/d/14...
Original Storyboard: • EDITING||The Mind Elec...
Summary
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When Jayfeather was a kit, he had wandered to far and fallen into the Lake. Unknowingly he died, but Starclan brought him back because he was too important. Unknowingly Starclan gave Jaykit sight again, only being used at will.
Later, Jayfeather Stumbles upon Hollyleaf killing Ashfur, thinking it unfair and knowing that his sister will tell their secret anyway, he stuffs deathberries into her prey. Hollyleaf fights back in her final moments, so Jayfeather retaliates, killing her. That night, he stayed up late, guilty. He decided to finally sleep, but was awoken in Starclan by Hollyleaf and others. He pleads that he wasn’t thinking, but Hollyleaf sends him to the place of no stars to think about his crimes. Jayfeather encounters himself, but in the future of the Dark Forest. He’s brought back to Starclan by Flametail pleading him not guilty, and wakes him up, guiding Jayfeather to an abandoned Twoleg nest. There Jayfeather resides.
Parts List
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1- Nebula Animates
2- Ironyche
3- Minku
4- fley
5- Luxian
6- Leowo + ThatOnePerson
7- Skippii
8- Allukallo
9- Northstorm
10- MochiMilk
11- CANNIBAL-LOVEMAIL+NebulaAnimates
12- ThatOnePerson
13- Dustalicious
14- Dustalicious
15- ElsikYT
16- Silverfern
17- Maltose
18- AxleyAnims
19- TheGayonTheMoon
20- Alfazoing
21- Alfazoing
22- Violetfern
23- CHURIMP
24- NotSoMagic Animations
25- Sketched Kib
26- SketchedKib
And the Winner of the Thumbnail contest @MaltoseAnimates ! Thank you for your lovely entry💕

[@n4k4hara]

i absolutely ADORE the expressions of stress & panic when Jayfeather is sent to the place of no stars & the shock when he realises that he might not be ‘the real jayfeather’!! Jaykits existence probably sent Jayfeather into a existential crisis & the parts portray his feelings perfectly!!

[@Wowocats1]

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[@Bear_Song]

I really love the concept of this AU, especially where Jayfeather accidentally dies in the lake and is brought back by StarClan so he can fulfill the prophecy! Really great idea! ✨❤️

[@Juanfilipe766]

Damn he must’ve accidentally died 23 times then,

[@Tururruuuuuuuuuuuuu]

Jayfeather and Hollyleaf: Living the Drama of Their Lives Lionblaze: Oh yeah, my siblings are killing each other and I'm just going to sit here and watch.

[@princeramblerose]

i love the idea of Jaykit drowning and being brought back and Mockingjay! so cool, i love aus that play around with timelines

[@kitsunestudios113]

Yess! We really need more Jayfeather maps! He was such an interesting character, and suffered alot throughout the books. It's kinda sad to see how many people just ignore how amazing of a character he was, just cause he's "mean", like, he has good reason to be a lil grumpy 🤪. Hes literally kinda the reason the tribe exists and that the clans were able to move to the lake. He was so important and way too many people write it off because of his attitude!

[@eckoreckofantasy]

Wdym? Everyone loves and knows jayfeather and theres already a gazillion other jayfeather maps lol Maybe not solely jayfeather as the main character in the map, but you get it

[@bloodfun2585]

Jayfeather is one of my favorite good characters beside ivypool dovewing sandstorm firestar squirrelflight leafpool hollyleaf lionblaze bristlefrost breezepelt (bad to good) daisy purdy cloudtail brightheart mothwing tawnypelt sparkpelt Puddleshine littlecloud princess barley ravenpaw graystripe/greystripe cinderheart cinderpelt twigbranch violetshine needletail sasha and goldenflower

[@alliandreanderson689]

@@bloodfun2585 bad to good? Confused lol

[@Dorpoforp]

But Jayfeathers attitude and infinite sarcasm are his best parts! That's why I love him so much 😁!

[@ileananicolescu5244]

The evil Jay was an amazing ideea for this AU it fits sooo well i just love this AU MAP ❤️❤️

[@alukallo]

I am so honored to of been in this map with so many TALENTED ANIMATORS, YOU GUYS THIS LOOKS INCREDIBLE!!! :D!!! Thank you for letting me join in this amazing project! Can't wait to see what awaits us next!

[@DressShirtDaryl]

your part was my favorite! :) beautiful backgrounds too!

[@alukallo]

@@DressShirtDaryl :O TYSM!!!

[@artistheart33]

Oh wow, I love this! Ooooh, I'm already guessing that it looks like time is going to pass and Ivypool will be the one to bring back Jayfeather to the clans and possibly have him!

[@iemelt]

This is the first AU map I've watched and I love the concept, and the animators did an amazing job with the expressions!

[@iemelt]

I'm surprised I get a heart, considering I was a few weeks late.

[@motsonagic]

I had so much fun working on this project! Everyone did PHENOMENAL! I cant wait to see more amazing MAPs from you, Nebula. 💪🏽✨

[@motsonagic]

also i cant wait to rewatch this for the next year and a half

[@AlexFromElsik]

I'm excited for this MAP, it was a pleasure to work with you and everyone did so good, thank you for having me in

[@PersonThatIsOne]

THIS MAP TURNED OUT SO GOOD EACH AND EVERY ANIMATOR DID SO WELL ITS BEEN GREAT WORKING WITH YOU!!

[@melodysmusicaladventures596]

Alternate title: *Holly is a complete hypocrite, as always* Also this map is criminally underrated and deserves more love

[@tfhowthattaken]

On god

[@asroczka]

Hollyleaf: **kills Ashfur for no good reason** “I did nothing wrong” Jayfeather: **Kills Hollyleaf on order to get rid of (in his mind probably) a potential threat** Hollyleaf: “YOU ARE A BAD PERSON”

[@DaisyBelll]

Are Hollyleaf haters always so stupid?

[@ozymandias7]

Aww man this is super cool!!! All the parts look really fantastic, everyone did such a stupendous job!!

[@bentfork06]

YOOOOOO ALL YALL DID SO AMAZINGGGGG!!!! I'm so happy to see such an amazing map using one of my favorite characters and a song by Tally Hall/Miracle Musical :D

[@unavailable_leDog]

*Hush now* *Hide all the little ones* *Rush now, into the middle of nowhere* *Singing and laughter will die* *Dreamless sleep follow the Nowhere King* *When his kingdom comes, darkness is nigh* *Quiet, crawl throught the in-between* *Silent* *Secretive feeling of fearsome* *Hatress that reaches the skies* *You will bring joy to the Nowhere King* *When he sees the light leaving your eyes* The music is good tho. Also the audio lyrics from 3:29

[@eckoreckofantasy]

Man i love this map!! The concept is so interesting and the music fits in alot, great work to everyone on this!

[@showerwaterr]

THAT WAS AMAZING (im okay now!! I dont have a concussion!! Luckily!!!)

[@cannibal-lovemail]

AWESOME!! Everyone did an amazing job, I’m glad to be apart of it!

[@violetfern1427]

Ahh i loved working on my part for this map, it was my first underwater scene and I absolutely adored playing around with the physics :D! Thank you for letting me be a part of it, happy new years!

[@kindjuh]

OH GOSH- two week?? This?? Done in two weeks?? WHATTT, IT LOOKS AWESOME

[@macarrones05]

This came out so good!! I love the concept so much, can't wait for the 2nd part! I'm pretty sure the song playing was The nowhere king's lullaby, that's gonna be awesome

[@jasperthefish]

aaaaaa it looks amazing :D everyone did so well on their parts

[@Boobear_223]

This came out fantastic!! Im very proud to be working with these amazing artists!!!

[@sketchycat-9078]

Wow I. Hyped I’ve been following this map and am pretty exited

[@Mimikai4884]

- sniffs - Oh this, This is beautiful - points this beautiful MAP - also Happy New Years 🎉

[@MinkuAnimations]

HOLY IT TURNED OUT AMAZING!!, IT WAS SO FUN TO WORK ON!

[@churimp6187]

I LOVE THIS MAP SO MUCHYESSSI HAD SO MCUH FUN PARTICIPATING!!!! EVERYONE DID SO GREAT

[@papper_rabbit7754]

this is amazing!! i love

[@arrowan6796]

OMGGG I ADORE THISSSSSSS GREAT JOB

[@rxsyaa]

YESSS THIS WAS AMAZING!!

[@mapleshadeeatscats]

This was amazing and it’s my favorite song!!! I was singing along the entire time

[@bat_socks]

Wow this is just- AMAZING!

[@jeremy-loves-cherries]

I couldn’t make it to the premiere but I still enjoyed it! I really enjoyed the water scenes!

[@Namelessghouleo]

I HAD SO MUCH FUN IN THIS MAP NEBS OMG IT WAS SO FUN

[@ShallowStep]

AMAZING I love the funky toon to it

[@skippii3947]

AAAA TURNED OUT GREAT

[@COCKSUCKERCACTUS]

i missed the premiere BUT THIS CAME OUT SO WELL AA

[@Bee8467]

Underrated!!! Awesome!

[@GlacieThat1Dog]

i need more maps with memes at the end!

[@sketchedkib2971]

IM GLAD I GOT TO BE APART OF THIS MAP WOOO!!! IT TURNED OUT SO WELL

[@Iamhungryforfood]

I’m excited for this map I’ve been waiting for it to be finished! Everyone did such a good job in this map! This map was such a great idea! The song was perfect and the script was amazing I can't wait to see this!

[@Fizzymilkshakee]

Damn, Jay got sent to the time-out corner

[@mistyWC319]

Nah bro that was the time out out corner

[@IronycheinPain]

YOOOOO THE MAP WAS FIREE IT WAS SO GOOD adnrjek

[@YumeQueen]

niceee

[@ocelotik9677]

Это очень крутой мап! Идея и исполнение очень хороши.

[@nyajones4605]

THE STAR CLAN COUNCIL EXSITS-

[@kotlc4life]

Jayfeather in this AU is basically like a Tigerstar. Honestly I don't like the plot of his story in the AU, but this is amazing

[@youdontneedto123]

i dont see how he's like tigerstar at all especially since tigerstar never learned from his mistakes and killed many more cats than one :/

[@kotlc4life]

@@youdontneedto123 True. It just feels a bit more acting like- maybe an evil Yellowfang?

[@manymomath5466]

@@kotlc4life (ik im pretty late) Though it’s interesting, he has no reason to kill hollyleaf in first place, not for ashfurs sake. It’s way out of character, in cannon he was actually happy ashfur died. Instead, having hollyleaf kill both ashfur and leafpool would have made it more sensical and impactful for jay to result in killing holly.

[@SparkclawStudios]

omg

[@burningash]

Ah ofcourse, hollyleaf killing a man so her reputation isint ruined but instead she ruins it herself sends her to starclan but she finds jayfeather killing her for the saftey if his clan is just so much worse

[@snakesandstones4252]

Lmao I don't know about that... hollyleaf didn't just kill ashfur because her reputation might be ruined--he also literally was going to murder her and her siblings to spite a girl for rejecting him. Liiikkkee--if anyone is a danger to the clan, it was Ashfur who has in canon proven time and time again to be a vindictive, narcissistic, cruel psychopath... even before the fire scene, he took part in a plot to murder his clan leader again because a girl rejected him and likely in hopes that brambles would go along with Hawkfrosts plan, thus murdering squilfs father and allowing ashfur to swoop in and get with her. Like. Hollyleaf did everyone a service by murdering him, and it wasn't like she had plans of going on a murder spree after or plotted violence upon any of her other classmates. At worst, and I think it's a major stretch to say this at all by the way and thoroughly disagree... you could say her intentions were on the same level of morally gray as Jay's in this AU. Following your reasoning, they both killed someone to save their reputation as the creator states Jay partially killed holly because he knew she would blab their secret. They both also thought who they were killing was a threat to their clan mates (even if hollyleaf really wasn't and ashfur most definitely was and would sell any of his classmates souls to Cat Satan to get back with the woman he went on a handful of dates with, got rejected by, and proceeded to obsess over for the rest of eternity).

[@Juanfilipe766]

Seems accurate lmao

[@burningash]

@@snakesandstones4252 so yrah jay did the same thing as holly yet holly goes to starclan