"The Model" Original New Creepypasta

[@macabrehorrorYT]

I'm very proud of this story - I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it 🖤

[@occupyislam1657]

Very talented, I loved it! I thought that the artist made the torsos stay alive somehow.😄 Imagine if you added that too, haha.

[@West_desert_casserole]

That was my thought, the art would be alive. I was wrong,it used to be alive

[@rainbowdash_cum_jar]

I didn’t know you wrote your own stories! That’s very unique and awesome for a creepypasta narration channel, subbed! Can’t wait to hear more!

[@MatyForbes]

You are extremely talented and unique, I know this is gonna be Top Notch ! 💘

[@kathymcguire8287]

❤😮😮😮❤

[@xeternalflowerx2000]

Actually one of the best creepy pastas in a while

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you!

[@elbaestridge6503]

Hi Mac. I listened to this story four months ago, and I loved it. This original is perfect, and the way you are narrating it is superb. I like this story so much that this is the second time listening to. Keep sending more ❤️😯.

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Great to hear that, thank you! This is definitely one of my favourites that I've written 🖤

[@jenniferspoon5143]

OOO SNAP? Here I go. Threatened my kids with washing dishes if they bother me for the next 35 minutes.

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Enjoy!

[@Letmebe_2363]

😂😂 I know that right!

[@ChristopherDwiggins]

😂😂😂DIRTY! New parent, I'm gunna need to remember that one!

[@Neku628]

Better than scarring them with creepypastas. That would be rude to do as a punishment.

[@roden70]

This was amazing! What a creepy conclusion at the end. Great work!

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Glad you liked it!

[@Arbeiter2]

I think that it should've built up more of a reason to care about these people so that the ending would be more effective

[@michellesimpson2851]

Brilliant. I thought the storyline was fantastic and quite original. The narration was perfect as always. Great job 👍👍👏👏🙂😊🥰💕💕

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you! 🖤

[@hugger5374]

Wow!! You have done an amazing job with this one Mac! Loved it! Standing ovation 👏 ♥️ 👏

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you so much! I certainly poured my heart and soul into this, like the artist in the story 😉

[@hugger5374]

It's definitely one of my top favorites of yours!

[@danjelkewl6949]

Excellent story and narration. I also personally much prefer music in the background then ambient.

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you! I appreciate that I've used ambient rain more often than not lately. Going forward I will switch it up depending on the type of story

[@user_J117]

For this story the music fit nicely

[@JanaSzIsBasicGlitch]

Beautiful story ❤️. But thats the worst about "fallen angels" that noone expected that they know how heaven looks like, thus they are not fascinated by heaven, they are fascinated by angels them selves, they know of light and it's lies and where it can blind you, yet they are willing to risk it sometimes. This reminded me of past back when I was at artschool 😁🤟. This is really awesome.

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it

[@jenniferspoon5143]

OO SNAP! A wonderfully descriptive story. Go You!

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Glad you liked it 🖤

[@MyJC19]

This kind of reminds me of "Blue Beard"

[@nostromza3433]

I thought this was about Junji Ito's model

[@jenniferlonnes7420]

Great buildup and suspenseful!

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you 🖤

[@carnitagroves7758]

Eve's middle name must be Snoopy! 😂😂😂😅

[@commentmaster_666]

Incredible story - captivating from start to finish 👏

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it

[@sverigeismyhjarta7830]

I so Knew this was going to happen to her! Why was she so stupid! He hee

[@babyIwelcomethepressure]

It's always the butler 😁

[@elbaestridge6503]

The best story ever 😮.

[@macabrehorrorYT]

Thank you!

[@dirkbruere]

Carry on screaming

[@tauruschorus]

Have you written all of these, or only those you title “Original Creepypasta”?

[@tauruschorus]

Whoops - imma read pinned comment. Your stories truly Chill Me!

[@macabrehorrorYT]

There's a playlist on my channel with all of my originals 😃

[@mattwalters6834]

Honestly, predictable plot.

[@xeternalflowerx2000]

Yh but tbh actually an interesting plot