The Night Prowler | THE EPIC POLICE PROCEDURAL CREEPYPASTA

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@empathic.supernova 4 ай бұрын

🌟 DON'T FORGET TO LIKE BEFORE YOU LISTEN!🌟 Especially with one this long, you'll forget by the end. Let's face it, even if we don't like the story, we know Dr. Creepen is going to nail the narration! So there's no chance he won't earn the like, right?! Right! So hit that 👍🏻 😘

@ognjen8970 3 ай бұрын

I listen for years, there are rare narations i havent heard from the good doctor and dark somnium 🖤 ive probably heard one or none realy bad story from each, but its not theirs fault. Liked it anyway. Much love.

@tartanmystic4025 3 ай бұрын

Thankfully I can hold the contents of my mind an hour or so. Some of us enjoy the ritual of listening/watching an upload then giving the ones a like that we feel compelled to. Variety is still the spice of life & we all like doing our own thing without expectations from strangers to follow the pack. There's more weight in giving a like because we've "liked" the content rather than this superficial over-nice narrative that's disingenuous when you really look at it. We shouldn't be too quick to sacrifice freedom of choice because of peer pressure ✌️

@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 3 ай бұрын

Horse poop. He mispronounces EVERYTHING. His only salvation is, he gets the most engaging tales.

@elypowell6797 3 ай бұрын

What's wrong with the story? It was beautiful

@ruffadamsthegreat.2662 2 ай бұрын

@@elypowell6797 I forget.🙃

@tommyallison94 Ай бұрын

Great story! Thanks for making me cry at work with the ending… I’m a dad and that’s heartbreaking. Caught me off guard for sure. Love your stuff!

@tartanmystic4025 3 ай бұрын

Hits on a few different levels this one & your sage advice at the end is so important. Its quite special hearing men give honest, caring advice to eachother & I have total respect for you using fiction as a segway to a true to life message. You've done yourself proud with this one ✌️

@RedScarlett-q8t 3 ай бұрын

I'm looking forward to listening to this, detective pastas are awesome ❤😊 Thank you Doc

@dwightkey4070 4 ай бұрын

So good to listen to the master at work, all my best Dr.

@scrappydoo7887 4 ай бұрын

And NOW its time to chill out and relax with my favourite drink. Im definitely listening

@mistydevillier2197 4 ай бұрын

I prefer the supernatural stories. Humans are too disgusting! (I had a feeling from the start who it was!)

@hugger5374 2 ай бұрын

Incredibly fascinating story and narration! Love your page Dr C 💯👏👍💥🫶✨️

@AlexKenas 4 ай бұрын

Listening while drinking hot coffee during a torrential rainstorm by the light of a grease lamp that used to be a tuna can. Place a piece of thick twine in the center between two pieces of gravel or metal nuts in order to keep the wick from falling into the grease and to prevent seepage over the sides.

@Emily-dq6dl 2 ай бұрын

ZERO reason to write a rape scene that graphic. Especially not multiple ones. The author sounded like they wrote them one handed. I only finished it because I knew the ending from the first 15 mins.

@samanthawatts2733 3 ай бұрын

What a great story with great narration. Thank you so much.

@gretchenkiley6615 4 ай бұрын

Woohoo! Just in time for my gloomy drive 😁☔⚡ Thank you, Dr.!

@melissagordon5818 3 ай бұрын

Awesome all around!! Loved it!! ❤❤❤

@janetcw9808 4 ай бұрын

HOORAH, My idea of relaxation 😂

@Melissa___ 3 ай бұрын

Just a warning to listeners, there are a fair few spoilers in the comments so come back when you’ve finished the story

@amandaofhouserobinson6707 4 ай бұрын

Far out.... the killers POV is full on! Well done! Great story , great narration! 😊❤😊❤

@bobzthabarbarian 4 ай бұрын

This one is long enough to last the rest of my shift and the ride home. Life is good. Thanks, Doc!🖤 Holy hell! This was a gruesome story. The writer is... eccentric with their story telling. This one actually made me anxious.

@kaivenice 4 ай бұрын

I think it was a combination of the writing and the Doc's excellent narration. I ain't gonna lie, I felt like an idiot doing it but I made sure all of the windows and doors were locked before trying to go to sleep. I'm not easily spooked, but the Doc hit me outtta left field with this one.

@bobzthabarbarian 4 ай бұрын

@@kaivenice I cannot say I blame you. Doc with his deep British accent, really throws these stories into a different gear, for sure. One reason I had to subscribe after the first story I heard of his.

@Froggy_Bomb 4 ай бұрын

I could be 100% wrong, but from the very start of the story, it feels like the killer is the detective's son. Im only 30 minutes in so far. But I'm callin it now.

@DTWC 4 ай бұрын

I'm thinking the cop that lost promotion to Kevin, he mentioned ac/ dc concert and the first letter had a few of their song titles. Plus night prowler is ac dc song too.

@Froggy_Bomb 4 ай бұрын

@DTWC yeah, I started to think that too, after getting a little further in.

@chickennuggets964 2 ай бұрын

Watching it rn too, that’s my guess!

@Ghost51492 2 ай бұрын

This is so sad. As a OTR truck driver and father of three small kids, this is exactly why from the moment I get off my truck it’s my wife and kids and nothing else. I enjoy having tea parties and playing with toys and doing what my kids want to do. I miss enough as it is that’s why I try to spend every moment I can with them. My job only takes me away for 4-5 days a week, so I consider myself lucky, some people have it worse and I have so much respect for that, it’s definitely tough. But yea to the fathers out there, go out and play with your kids and act like child again, who cares what people think. What your kids think is the most important thing

@TreeOBX 4 ай бұрын

So grateful for Dr Creepen

@rickyhurtt5568 3 ай бұрын

50 mins in and I do believe I've got this 1 figured out

@davidjoyner8628 3 ай бұрын

AC/DC my favorite band as well. You rock Doc

@maryhoyt2609 4 ай бұрын

Wow, what a story! Absolutely brilliant writing and, of course, awesome narration. This is one of my top five favorite stories. So heartbreaking and horrifying at the same time, with a powerful and unforgettable message. Truly a superior job by all. Thank you.

@jenw2469 3 ай бұрын

DAMN. 😞 Kind of thought this was coming, as I always look for the obvious in the NOT so obvious...but I hoped I was off. This one stabbed me. ( No pun intended) Great read, Dr. Thank you. 💕

@rob-u1u 3 ай бұрын

wow, I must be getting old I didn't expect that ending. Another banger Doc.

@sbrown9531 4 ай бұрын

1:53:38 this convo was when I knew who the killer was!!! I’m so good at figuring out foreshadowing 😊

@DTWC 4 ай бұрын

Just got that far, I was thinking him when he mentioned something he said he did the night before.

@saralynnech 3 ай бұрын

You had me at Nirvana. 🤩

@salazarwarlok2244 3 ай бұрын

Brutal story

@BrandyBeach 3 ай бұрын

Awesome as always doc. ❤👏🏻👍🏻🔥 thank you sir!

@lynnharvie4359 4 ай бұрын

Can't wait 🎉

@TRNcBrwn357 3 ай бұрын

Very well told🥺; story kept interest till the end. Thx Doc & Jay🤗

@HOLLOWPOINT953 2 ай бұрын

Great story as always!

@kayi9236 4 ай бұрын

Thank you Dr Creepen!

@claydragon6055 27 күн бұрын

I'm less than an hr into the story, and I'm pretty sure the killer is his son. I hope I'm wrong because I like it taking a bit longer to figure it out if I can at all. That said, I'm like 75-85%, sure it's the son.

@jackalina91 4 ай бұрын

I/we just love ❤️ ❤the long stories & this 1 was really good so thanks heaps Doc! Perfect for the rainy, cold & dark night we have here atm! 😎♥️♥️♥️✌️

@mbgocrazy 3 ай бұрын

Wild story! Good job Doc!

@amandaofhouserobinson6707 4 ай бұрын

Hey that story is crazy good! As i said before the killer's POV is full on!! Im not trying to be awful but just wondering if maybe you could put a content advisory warning somewhere in description?? I know this isnt a channel for the faint hearted but just wondering if it would be a good idea? Sorry, just a thought. ❤😊❤😊

@tartanmystic4025 3 ай бұрын

Common sense should be enough to "warn you", that any channel with "Creepy", "Creep" etc in the titles is telling you already. Anyone over school age should be able to listen to a story online & cope as an adult. Sorry but I think all this shite of putting more work & responsibility onto other people because weakness is being called "sensitive", is unreasonable & actually crazy. Maybe some folk should avoid being consumers of media & work on coping skills instead.

@Robjec53 2 ай бұрын

@tartanmystic4025 there is a pretty bug difference between a story about a monster and one about serial assault. (Can't remember if youtube auto censors that word). It is very outside the norm for a creepy pasta channel, and I wouldn't blame anyone for not expecting it.

@anjejg777 3 ай бұрын

Thanks Doc! You're the best!

@annettew5740 4 ай бұрын

Thank you Doc!🤗💜🕷

@empathic.supernova 4 ай бұрын

Thank you again good doctor! I do hope you are enjoying your summer; and that you remember how many of us feel blessed and excited when we see a piece from Dr. Creepen (in other words, you are a blessing who brings joy to untold #s)! That should make you smile ♡ You should be proud of yourself, give yourself a small pat on the back ♡ When you are inclined to get down on yourself, remember how much we all look forward to our next Dr. Creepen encounter ♡ Much love Doc p.s. not sure why I wrote that... I guess God felt Dr.C or someone else needs to read it. You may not be where you want to be in life, but if you can make even 1 person smile, then you are special to someone. And that means you have significance, value ❤ Someone NEEDS YOU to give them a reason to smile ♡ We ALL do ♡

@Melissa___ 3 ай бұрын

Great story, feel like I’ve heard it before but just as good second time around

@korosheht5446 3 ай бұрын

I was suspicious of his son from the start but the author did a very well job of washing my suspicion away as the story kept going

@sheamccaffrey1568 4 ай бұрын

7:54 I almost thought it was gonna be said that Lara was 6 years older than Dylan and I was gonna say damn Dylan can pull lol

@drew1554 3 ай бұрын

Fricken crazy dude!

@nancyM1313-Boo 4 ай бұрын

❤👑❤ Thanks Dr Creepen

@NateF-tw2kl 3 ай бұрын

Amazing story!

@ablahday2558 3 ай бұрын

Fu*king BRUTAL descriptions of the crimes! 😮

@annhemmings1323 3 ай бұрын

Omg didn't see that 1 coming 😢 how so very sad .lovely kind words at the end the my friend ❤❤

@SleepyLeeeee 4 ай бұрын

That was intense. Thanks!

@rando42069 3 ай бұрын

Thank you for your comments at the end. I appreciate the sentiment that we need our fathers, and mothers, to realize that kids need their loving attention at least sometimes. When calling your dad to say hello yields a "How's your car?" as his greeting, it's disappointing. People say that's how he shows his love, and I'm tired of hearing that trope. If you mean "I love you," say it.

@ernestinadominguez7551 3 ай бұрын

Yes sir, sad in deed. Don’t leave for tomorrow what you you should do today, time waits for no one.

@DSWL_ 4 ай бұрын

😳 a long one? 😎✨

@amandaofhouserobinson6707 4 ай бұрын

I love the long ones!!! ❤❤😊😊

@aholuthedistinguishedgentl929 3 ай бұрын

Damn...this was right on time. Old school detective

@tomkloster1251 4 ай бұрын

Im only halfway through it. I think I know who the killer is. Let's see. Great story, Dr Creepen!

@BrettAltwasser-jo4ys 4 ай бұрын

This was a great story!!!

@Alex-cf1fg 3 ай бұрын

Hits on a different level when you realize that Kevin doesn’t even recognize his own sons voice just proving his point

@zkybixd 4 ай бұрын

im a niiiight prowler i sleep in the day

@Golf_Hack 4 ай бұрын

This might be the worst detective ever.

@joemamma137 4 ай бұрын

Oh no. Should I invest 3 hours?

@DTWC 4 ай бұрын

Not using dmv lol

@queenofthejungle4511 3 ай бұрын

I Know right! What's DNA??

@Robjec53 2 ай бұрын

@queenofthejungle4511 DNA wouldn't of helped the case, since there was nothing to compare it to. There is no reason for his sons DNA to be on record.

@goldenfox334 21 күн бұрын

@Robjec53 well if he's ever had blood work done then it's on file.

@idaherrimon415 3 ай бұрын

WOW! vi didn't see that coming.

@sayUlumme79 3 ай бұрын

Loved it. Even though 8 figur3d it out near the beginning who did it😂😂 still a great story ❤❤

@space22way20 4 ай бұрын

Excellent story

@RAThatFNGirlChicago 4 ай бұрын

Hey now iAm back Doc!!❤❤❤

@bobiijae790 4 ай бұрын

Is this possibly apart of the Robert Cassidy story line or does it just nake mw think if it

@bobiijae790 4 ай бұрын

Wow I was definitely half asleep writing that one, my typos are a scary story by themselves hahaha you are sweet for giving me a ❤️ you are the best!

@JimmyBombs215 4 ай бұрын

Thx Doc 🫡

@einienj3281 4 ай бұрын

Thank You dear Doctor 🥃🍨🩷

@BandWagonBedlam Ай бұрын

SPOILERS!!!! I'm sorry, Doc. I'm a long-time listener and I adore your narrations. I don't like coming out of the lurk to say something less-than-positive, but maybe from here on I'll try to be more active and supportive. But this story made me irrationally upset because of the combination of length, plot-holes, and false misdirects based on plot-holes. I generally prefer the longer stories when they're cohesive and well-written. This one did not make the cut, unfortunately. Dylan didn't have a car so where did he hide the first car? Frank talks to his mother on the phone, but later Dylan says that his grandparents died before he was born. It was clear in the first 10-15 minutes that the author was setting up the son to be the murderer, but I hoped it was a red herring, setting up for an awesome twist ending, particularly after all the inconsistencies. Turns out it was all just... poor writing... Great narration, great message. This story though... the ones that are ALMOST great, then fail spectacularly at the finish line are the ones that hurt most. See Game of Thrones. Anyway, sorry to be so negative, but had to get it off my chest. Hopefully no one sees this and it's just venting into the void. You're awesome though and I always look forward to hearing your narrations!

@williamswiger7547 4 ай бұрын

I saw this ending from the start......lol

@kalvinlabuik3366 4 ай бұрын

I always did I was a very much hands on dad

@alangovern2112 17 күн бұрын

That was without a doubt the most disturbing story Ive ever listened to on this channel. Way too much detail.

@LoveCatThei 3 ай бұрын

That hurt

@grumpy_grimalkin 3 ай бұрын

Wow, the time setting has Mobile Phones and CSIs... but DNA, lab and forensics were never mentioned....what kind of police force are they? 😮

@Robjec53 2 ай бұрын

DNA wouldn't of really been relevant to the story though. The officers teenage son wouldn't be picked up by forensics, so it can just be abstracted away as someone else's job. And fingerprints were mentioned, they couldn't get any. There was no reason to bring that back up at each crime scene. All it would add to the story is a a paragraph each time saying we got nothing.

@WARDBOYDA3rd 3 ай бұрын

He rode thru the hood 🤣🤣🤣 aaah you know what kinda neighborhood this is huh

@michelecrutchfield6885 3 ай бұрын

Sounds too much like Richard Ramirez story. But well read indeed

@patrickpatrick9132 4 ай бұрын

I’m going to try semaglutide to lose fat around gut. I lift four days a week. 53 but getting a belly.

@susanhorn3952 4 ай бұрын

Good evening doctor 🍷

@michellej7831 4 ай бұрын

Yayyy good story 🎉

@Swiss_Shoots 4 ай бұрын

I'm I feel like I've heard this story before. Not complaining its so good. Thanks for another great one doc

@DrCreepen 4 ай бұрын

It's a reupload due to another spurious copyright claim... I did a bit of work on it to make it worthwhile, though!

@crystalm4324 4 ай бұрын

It’s also a pretty accurate historical amalgamation of a couple extremely famous real life serial killers. Bits and pieces will always sound familiar.

@crystalm4324 4 ай бұрын

It’s also a pretty accurate historical amalgamation of a couple extremely famous real life serial killers. Bits and pieces will always sound familiar.