"The Reason I Hate Cruise Ships" Creepypasta

[@Ace01010]

For the ending, it would have been better for the mc to have said the girls name instead of the parents to add that lvl of shock.

[@shawnjonesjr4388]

That's what I thought was gonna happen too !

[@jackdare]

Yeah I agree

[@Maverick2736]

Wasted potential

[@Ace01010]

@@Maverick2736 if it would have happened, that moment could have been a place holder for a part 2. But yeah what a waste

[@cherub3624]

There was literally no point in that ending , yet it was presented like a plot twist.

[@Nekulturny]

3:17 fly to the next port to meet up with my parents? Oh sure, let me just pull out my credit card to rent a car and buy a plane ticket, oh right.. I'm ELEVEN... lol

[@thecorruptedcat]

Lol smart

[@hemendraravi4787]

Lmao can’t they contact the other ship and talk to their parents or something it shouldn’t have gone that far right

[@jackdare]

IF this really happened they'd just bill the parents later. These parents don't deserve a kid tho lol

[@eslirastar666]

It would be awesome if there was a part 2 to this told from Josies point of view telling the story of what happened after she threw the kid overboard!

[@deepdive35]

She died

[@calamitouscalliope]

Or did she? ​@deepdive35

[@mckenzieodom712]

Josie was a true hero. Good on her to save some kid that wasn't even really her business.

[@bradydefelice2944]

Even though she’s fictional. It’s real-life people like her that help me have faith in the human race ❤

[@stonedjasonvoorhees5959]

I once got stuck on cruise ship. Sent me all the way to Manhattan. It's alright, I killed a lot of people and found my way back to Crystal Lake, and my weed stash.

[@mikeshinobi1288]

How many have you killed?

[@stonedjasonvoorhees5959]

Hundreds. And when I go into the future I blow up a space station.

[@marshamacmillan]

Lol!

[@stonedjasonvoorhees5959]

@Printer Pine Times Square and some ship yard. Then the sewer.

[@logmaster27]

At least you’re not a taco man…that’s for sure.

[@Timmeh_The_tyrant]

Damn there are a lot of really good writers out there. I am amazed at the quality and creativity of some of these stories

[@chocolatemilkguy1359]

I feel very lucky that creeps has been pumping out the water stories content 😊🤩

[@AJtheAnomaly]

Man chocolate milk is only good if you already have a charge item

[@chocolatemilkguy1359]

@@AJtheAnomaly Everyone has their own play style! What’s your favorite item?

[@MinecrafWolf]

I need my irrational fears justified somehow

[@chocolatemilkguy1359]

@@MinecrafWolf I just like em cause of people’s imaginations for the creatures!

[@smirky-shrugs]

"chass" has a cool sea compilation. Two of em actually and I remember enjoying them, i listened to the first one twice lol

[@thatpacho]

I hope to hear some 3rd person stories in the future. I miss the old days when most creepypastas were in 3rd person. 1st just gets so old after a few years.

[@vanessaashford9203]

it's because these stories all come from r/nosleep, which for some reason everyone thinks means they have to write in first person only, even if there's no actual rule saying so and people who do write stuff in 3rd or even 2nd person get by just fine

[@fairsaa7975]

@@vanessaashford9203 r/nosleep has a rule that says you can't have a 3rd person story without 1st person framing device.

[@vanessaashford9203]

@@fairsaa7975 the rule as it stands (at least last I checked, and based on what types of stories are accepted) really just means you have to have a narrator figure if its 3rd person, but that's really not that hard to pull off, and people get away with playing pretty fast and loose with it (like having the narrator be an unspecified figure who seems to know everything about the events, but has some kind of disposition to what's going on as well). Personally, I don't think it's hard to do this, but people seem to shy away from it often nonetheless, and part of that might also be that any story where even the narrator's place in the events isn't perfectly spelled out to the audience seems to get a lot of hate these days from people complaining how it "isn't realistic" (which I find absurd, because people are totally willing to sacrifice realism or believability in all these other areas, like a character who is literally on the verge of death making sure to write out their whole life story in florid detail, but any even slight experimentation with narrative loses them somehow)

[@Tazirai]

Good one. I kinda wish in horror tales that both could escape sometimes. I guess that's why I write my own.

[@shawnjonesjr4388]

Hope to hear one from you soon ! I'd love for all the protagonists to make it out every now and then too

[@judesliggoo]

I've only known Josie for twenty minutes but I'm already so attached to her

[@cornzzn]

ay let's goo i have a test tmrw morning, this is going to be the last thing i'll hear before doom. night y'all!

[@hemendraravi4787]

Gl bro

[@zainjullian9100]

hope you do well

[@kampua4life]

This community is wholesome

[@shawnjonesjr4388]

Good luck !

[@jackdare]

Greetings from the future.. your test is now over 😁

[@JimmmyRaynor]

we should go on a Halloween haunted cruise around the Bermuda 🇧🇲 triangle 🔺️

[@TattooedPink]

I'd come 😍🛳

[@JimmmyRaynor]

@@TattooedPink yay 🤗🤗

[@coolkidcrypto386]

That's where I live

[@JimmmyRaynor]

@@coolkidcrypto386 ooooh do u ever see 👀 anything odd or unusual 🤔

[@tonywigton8052]

I will take room 13

[@trashmole]

Love Love Love the Ocean based stories recently 💙

[@danajones5896]

Great short as always, it amazes me always how people will help other people, risk their lives even, some people are amazing, thanks Creeps!👍❤💯

[@notmarvelsloki4721]

OUCH! You kicked me right in the feels

[@sourpatchpumpkin7796]

I have an addiction to ocean creepypastas 😩

[@LiftRider24]

Thanks KZbin for recommending me this while I am booked for the Carnival Breeze in June

[@TheKumarkid16]

What will we do the Drunken What will we do the Drunken Sailor What will we do with the Drunken sailor Early in the morning

[@stevepalpatine2828]

Yo ho, and up she rises Yo ho, and up she rises Yo ho, and up she rises Early in the morning

[@TheKumarkid16]

@@stevepalpatine2828 Way hey and she rise Way rises way hay and she rises way hay And she rises Early in the morning

[@TheKumarkid16]

Put in the Longboat til' he's sober Put in the Longboat til' he's sober Put in the Longboat til' he's sober Early in the morning

[@lelandshennett]

Lmao I read the title as “why I ATE cruise ships”

[@Kruhee]

I would like to hear that story next please 🤣

[@itsjustme7487]

I took a West Caribbean cruise about 10 years ago. Loved it except for the Caribbean storm.

[@itsjustme7487]

@trueblueprussian 23 No. but I did hear that they do keep watch for them.

[@jodijohnson5052]

I will never go on one of those death traps... I'm quite content on land but I do really enjoy small lakes and river. Thanks you for all your hard work!

[@itsjustme7487]

Just wondering...How do you feel about bridges?

[@ihavenopointtomake3656]

Sensible person rivers are cool but the ocean is just plain creepy.

[@sephritine5481]

@@ihavenopointtomake3656 imagine a bridge in the middle of the ocean and it goes up 40 story's 😂 worst combo ever 0/10 would not recommend

[@itsjustme7487]

@@sephritine5481 Many people are afraid of going over the Mackinac Bridge. I have a friend who claims she is afraid of all bridges.

[@TattooedPink]

Cheers! Looks mint, always love your vids you have a wonderful voice x

[@Kruhee]

These chilling water stories are great for summer!

[@kendallgriffin5109]

imagine if he looked at the photo and just went “…josie…”

[@Gillness88]

Josie the hero 🦸‍♀️

[@fonzy675]

This one whole ass made me cry

[@Melcatsite]

That was such a good one, it's been a while since and it was kind of a feelspasta.

[@bassblaster162]

Good story! I would've said, "Sir, ma'am...we need to talk..."

[@Sdulcamara]

My reasons to hate cruises: Norovirus The 65 year-old couple next door loudly reigniting their love life. This guy: Horrific abduction and monsters.

[@jackdurden466]

Such a great story to lead up to a quite anticlimactic ending. The big shock being the chance of seeing a picture of her in a gas station? Come on, it was really gaining tension up until that moment.

[@jackdare]

How about that tri-tonal screech though? lol

[@jackdurden466]

@@jackdare oh yeah, that threw me across the room! 😂

[@96Champ994]

The most scary thing about cruise ships are the copious amounts of dirty fuel they burn. Pollution is the real monster here

[@johncarroll4080]

❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️🤡

[@McRazzler]

I've done the Mule Ride down the Grand Canyon. Awesome. I pulled a Cheer Leader down there too. Good memories.

[@bradydefelice2944]

Is there a part 2 of this story?

[@Horror13666]

Waitttt is this a prequel to that abandoned cruise ship story??

[@jackdare]

_Aruba, Jamaica, ooh I want to take ya_ _Bermuda, Bahama, come on pretty mama_

[@grim326]

These were some pretty terrible parents

[@inaminute1826]

Creepsmcpasta still has that great & recognizable voice I remember haha.....

[@kingkooki7761]

i’ve listened to this three times now and i somehow keep missing the actual story part of the story

[@orangukey]

Felt like there was more to this story

[@therealMRDEVIL]

damn this one needs a sequel so bad

[@Shakkarz]

Just like my grandparents they love those cruises I've been on one but I was little.

[@LeeroyPorkins]

Tune in next week for "I Love Rick Rolling."

[@theequalizer694]

Really scraping the bottom of the barrel for these jokes huh?

[@LeeroyPorkins]

@@theequalizer694 Seven people disagree

[@nigelmitchell6245]

Could of added more to the end but it was still great

[@nicksilverstein1193]

Great story!

[@rabbitraisin]

Lmfao I read the title as the reason/hate cruise ships and thought it was a two small stories and "hate cruise ships" lmfao like going on a cruise full of hate of something 😂

[@balloonballoon5028]

Titanic 2 looks great

[@joseypenn]

this is terrifying cause my name is Josephyne and i go by Josey

[@Nickowar]

*don't start working for cruise lines*

[@killingerk]

the whole story it's awesome but I would change the ending I would have the guy said the name and they would have like how do you know that

[@Matt-Faire]

Did I hear a reference to the overexposure therapy creepypasta?

[@AuoraWolf5911]

I just got back from a cruise

[@onyxone8084]

It would've been better if the person said her name at the end!

[@crazyparanormalinvestigato2007]

Great story has elements from the movies ghost ship and deep rising

[@wyntersteele1a]

Yes and it brought to mind the game Little Nightmares

[@generalchill3413]

Ye bro me to

[@scepticalhyenas5750]

*SCP* *_S_*_ ecure_ *_C_*_ arnival Cruise Line_ *_P_*_ rotect_

[@rakiahbaker5589]

I've been on a cruise ship in New York. 🛳 🗽🏙

[@cadillacdeville5828]

Well they are definitely awful if you are sensitive to motion sickness

[@randlerichardson5826]

CreepsMcPasta hey 👋

[@anonymousanonymity7937]

We should go over the Bermuda triangle and drop a bunch of fish with blood and guts just to see what comes up to feed. We might need a cage.

[@too_ql]

No

[@hivisnotacrime413]

All I want is parallel universe stuff

[@frankiecarlos4040]

Poor Josie

[@candiceperry5817]

It is awesome to ride on the cruise ship

[@jackdare]

But cruises are AWESOME

[@denisjose616]

this youtube channel reminds me of another one, a brazilian one called "David Erick".

[@jeffn4836]

Before I commit time to this, is this another case of ocean themed clickbait? Where it shows some gargantuan creature on the thumbnail and ends up being another lame mermaid or sea manatee spitting acid? Or is there an actual large sea monster in this?

[@GrinningMarionette]

Clickbait.

[@ayrahn7893]

Holy shit, glad im not the only one who gets pissed when they click on an ocean themed story expexting kaiju and eldritch beasties only to be met wirh fucking ghosts and sea rakes.

[@josiewilson4499]

Das my name 😆

[@adi8724]

Hey, can get a large meat lovers and a large cheese 🍕 ,

[@theyenvydezzi0513]

He should have said her name

[@its_a_me_jt]

Man sssoooo many ocean stories lately

[@ninifrmdao]

same

[@Darkshade_01]

Nice

[@NSN_CYND]

I also hate cruse ships! :D

[@AlishaWolfe]

This story made me kinda Sea Sick🤢

[@INFINITESYKOSIS]

I am devil sent 😈

[@jburnell5094]

too short

[@samcrazycatlady8308]

❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜

[@hinatahouga]

🥺💔

[@strawberrycubes4774]

I just had to dislike, I'm sorry, but I need that sweet 777 likes and 7 dislikes.

[@AlishaWolfe]

The Dislikes are probably Bots

[@too_ql]

Mediocre 😞

[@andresk4694]

What a stupid ending. Already told us the name, already told us the protagonist didn't remember but now does. Meh

[@DashingPunkSamurai]

That story was kinda weak sauce. And the ending was far far far out of left field.

[@jackalina91]

Boo hoo at least they took you places hey? I got left behind every time. To get abused.

[@jayteepodcast]

Gibbering mouther

[@samuelsimmons6647]

Say what?!

[@thecricketanimationarchive7880]

not first

[@thecaptain596]

3rd