Admittedly, I should have refined this narration better. Though at the time, my skills with editing, were minimal. Anyways thanks for watching! ^_^
@lunar_spectrum5 жыл бұрын
Nah it was pretty good
@gnarlywagner81713 жыл бұрын
Do a reboot!
@gnarlywagner81713 жыл бұрын
Pretty please!!!
@gnarlywagner81713 жыл бұрын
This is amazing I just think itll get many more veiws with how your channel has grown
@AleksArsonette10 жыл бұрын
I'm a little peeved that he feels something was done to him or he has been wronged in some way. He's the one that followed the guy. No one made him do anything. How does he figure he's going to punish someone for what "they" did to him when he did it all himself. I sure as hell am not going to follow someone I don't think it human anywhere, let alone get off public transit with them when prompted.
@mznxjsk49556 жыл бұрын
Aleks Arsonette curiosity is a powerful force and when you’re left with no hope whatsoever and not logically thinking you’re gonna blame the stranger
@tattoodfreeek8 жыл бұрын
And to think, he could've avoided all this by getting a jacket with book size pockets
@mirelzamora21478 жыл бұрын
mwahahahahaha !! 😝
@Dan-bg5fm8 жыл бұрын
or fixing his mp3
@tattoodfreeek8 жыл бұрын
Wilfred or even just buying a new one. Watching people?? Sounds a bit stalker like to me
@TiernanWilkinson8 жыл бұрын
or reading smaller books. Or maybe getting a smartphone. Or maybe getting a life lol
@tattoodfreeek8 жыл бұрын
Tiernan Wilkinson Spot on
@kingkong38110 жыл бұрын
Does anyone else want to print this story out/transcribe it by hand and leave it on subways just to freak people out?
@DEADdemon10 жыл бұрын
I do that would freak people the fuck out
@tdm17mn10 жыл бұрын
Couldn't you just copy the text and print it out? That would save a lot of time, lol.
@kingkong38110 жыл бұрын
tdm17mn Yeah, but a hand written version would be creepier. He doesn't say he has a computer or typewriter in the story so logically he wrote the story by hand.
@mr.ashenfire262410 жыл бұрын
He did say at the end that he stashed all the paper he could find and wrote down this story hundreds of times to leave in as many subway cars as possible.
@alfiezarezadeh180010 жыл бұрын
i just take my mask of and there sceard
@motokokusanagi98689 жыл бұрын
"I lived in a city called New York" Fuck me, where is that again.
@motokokusanagi98689 жыл бұрын
***** Woah, woah, woah, slow down. Jesus Christ.
@mfuerter19 жыл бұрын
There's a city called New York???
@TheStrawberryWicker9 жыл бұрын
+mfuerter1 really nigga
@thomas-tk6ce9 жыл бұрын
It's somewhere in.... Ummm....... I have no idea.
@wasweiich99919 жыл бұрын
+Motoko Kusanagi New what now? Never heard of it... must be some little town somewhere in the middle east or somewhere...
@TheSuperAmazingTroll9 жыл бұрын
I love his own silent confusion at what he said. "The flanger...The fl...? And soon, the flare of anger in me..."
@junkietv90402 жыл бұрын
U ain't ever felt flanger?
@Firegunsgames9 жыл бұрын
Dang this should be turned into a movie... And it will be awesome and sell.
@WendiGonerLH9 жыл бұрын
There's already a film by this name
@codyc18129 жыл бұрын
+Maditara I agree
@codyc18129 жыл бұрын
+Jonathan Burch Really?
@texmex0079 жыл бұрын
I would love to see this turned into a movie
@Edible_Kittens9 жыл бұрын
I see this more being a 20 minute film, not a whole movie.
@SorasShadow110 жыл бұрын
This is a pasta that could've ended part way through and been pretty average but then it just kept going and turned into its own...being. Instead of ending with the Stranger leading him to a laberynth and leaving him there it build on that and made this *entire world* (or multiple worlds, as it were) to work with. 10/10 Creepypasta, wish I'd noticed it sooner.
@rustedcan93138 жыл бұрын
This story is one of the best I have ever heard. So upset I haven't found this sooner!
@zarbonsan11425 жыл бұрын
this should be made into a movie
@JamesMcCloud9669 жыл бұрын
31:48 My brother overheard the video and yelled out "CONJUNCTION JUNCTION, WHAT'S YOUR FUNCTION?" So I've been laughing my ass off uncontrollably for the past few minutes.
@BRUHHHHHHH9 жыл бұрын
+James Bot XDDDD YOU JUST KILED MEE
@beyankahanson51579 жыл бұрын
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HA ha
@Alex32rap7 жыл бұрын
Jejune Jimbo ow yeah
@intheshade30187 жыл бұрын
Just when i thought it was over...
@posthumanoid10 жыл бұрын
This is possibly one of my favorite pastas you ever read, and in one take...You did a fantastic job. You are my favorite pasta narrator, Jr. Keep up the good work. I've listened to this story maybe...fifteen or more times. It also helps me sleep, but not in a boring way...hard to describe.
@wrestlefanrecordings69585 жыл бұрын
Junji Ito could adapt this into a manga, change it from New York to Japan, put it on the Japanese trains. He could make the subway passengers hideously deformed, he’s good at body horror.
@SneakyMuffin9 жыл бұрын
This was in one take? Godamm, CreepyPastaJr, nice work.
@kynaston1474 Жыл бұрын
Surprised how much this one holds up after all these years. I can't say I find it scary anymore, but it's still a little unsettling.
@shadetheripper742110 жыл бұрын
When he was screaming in his head, All I could hear was. "NOTICE ME SENPAI!!!"
@rosylinramos39410 жыл бұрын
PLEASE SENPAI NOTICE ME!!!!
@gabrielleshipley827710 жыл бұрын
What does Pluto say since he's so far from Sol? "Notice me Sunpai!"
@55555online10 жыл бұрын
Gabrielle Shipley :D
@Carlos-weyprotein10 жыл бұрын
same here
@M0oranshi10 жыл бұрын
Wow... I so want to print this story out and leave this at a trainstation. I travel the train every day and stop in alot of stops, so this creeped me out. Would that be a mean thing to do? Personally, if I found something like this on a random day it'd make me excited as hell.
@mr.ashenfire262410 жыл бұрын
Do it for Halloween or something lol.
@BrightDarkness201310 жыл бұрын
I'd totally do that too. Sounds fun.
@bryceandrew1310 жыл бұрын
I always do things of that nature. What's the harm in encouraging people to use their creativity?
@TheOutsiderStudios10 жыл бұрын
You might find it on Creepy Pasta wiki.
@mr.ashenfire262410 жыл бұрын
i say do it!!!
@CreepsMcPasta12 жыл бұрын
And the results are in... /watch?v=vt2i0ts-uck
@IMfin210 жыл бұрын
haha.. flare of anger = flanger
@kazoolhu917610 жыл бұрын
lolwut
@Feath3r3dmask9 жыл бұрын
Laughed too hard at that
@raggedmythgaming77855 жыл бұрын
XD just got to that part i never hesrd him mess up before
@VaultGeek9 жыл бұрын
One of my all time favorite creepypastas. I love the creativeness and sort of sci-fi, you don't see it often enough compared to the normal overused horror formula. Great job!
@skylark6079 жыл бұрын
His hands were spaghetti, knees weak arms spaghetti, there's spaghetti on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti.
@MitchTran9 жыл бұрын
+Skylark i thought the same
@anagonzalez65338 жыл бұрын
+Mitch Tran I love
@arthas6408 жыл бұрын
+Skylark Eminem must really love spaghetti. Most of the people I know just call it "That Spaghetti song by Eminem".
@RWard-dz9oy8 жыл бұрын
Lmfao
@jhart199638 жыл бұрын
He opens his mouth but spaghetti won't come out!
@Idontknowhattoputher10 жыл бұрын
I got an adult Spirited Away vibe from this. Im so in love with it. Id be really excited if this happened to me...
@MegaJoaquinP10 жыл бұрын
This is one is definitely my favorite creepypasta and CreepyPastaJr is also one of my favorite readers ever! Keep up the good work!
@Lozard232410 жыл бұрын
This needs a Part 2 where he starts to learn who made the labyrinth then a part 3 where he tries to get to them
@blockhead1349 жыл бұрын
Id say that the suspense and creepiness of these stories comes from the unknown
@Lozard23249 жыл бұрын
***** Nah but I can see where it would seem so
@Lozard23249 жыл бұрын
***** Yeah but at the very least here more of his travels or even from another strangers perspective. It just seems like another story that had so much more it could give.
@san_toad9 жыл бұрын
You have no imagination fuck outta here
@demonjmh7 жыл бұрын
DB RPG no it should be left where it is not everything needs an explanation leave it to your own imagination
@stephaniegray916911 жыл бұрын
55 minutes of pasta. This so so good. Listened to it twice; wonderful writing, and a great voice to accompany it!
@unbuggable59436 ай бұрын
2024. Still my favorite pasta. Thanks.
@donnaongley50517 жыл бұрын
"The Strangers" , LOVED IT! Great story, and read very well, with all the inflections, made me feel like I was there almost 👏👍🏻 As far as having the little "mistakes" just made it more real to me..... like the person in the story i.e.: telling the story, showing the emotions, fear, anger. WELL DONE👏👍🏻👍🏻
@CreepyPastaJr12 жыл бұрын
Yes, hence the tiny mistakes and what not D:
@kathyannalexander45066 жыл бұрын
CreepyPastaJr lol its still a good ass story... the flanger ... the fuck? Lol 😅😅😅
@cdnreddevil7793 жыл бұрын
WHO ARE YOU TALKING TO
@CreepyPastaJr12 жыл бұрын
In the words of Jerry Springer, "You are not! The father!" :3
@Aaaa-gs7ww11 жыл бұрын
I loved this pasta, it left me guessing what would happen, I didn't know the ending halfway through, like I do with most pastas. I could only guess a limited amount.
@theycallmeklee2 жыл бұрын
This is still one of my favorite creepypastas. You really are the best!
@mksabourinable10 жыл бұрын
I have brown hair, brown eyes, am white in a white majority place, but not noticeably tan or pale, average height and average build. I have no discernible features. I wear unremarkable clothes. I wear a bit of make up but nothing too noticeable. And when I lived in Vancouver I would sometimes ride the skytrain back and forth from one end of the route to the other. I just did this when I wanted to escape, not deal with the shit at home or the weirdness/lack of safety of walking down the street. It was relaxing to ride the train and just look out at the city, and watch all the people who came and went. So this pasta is weird to listen to for me haha
@mister_stang10 жыл бұрын
If you want to get away from the bs just buy a Mustang GT500.
@mksabourinable10 жыл бұрын
Isaac Martinez Oh yea because someone who takes public transit can totally afford a luxury car.
@ZackShadows10 жыл бұрын
Kate You never know man.
@joaquimafonso613310 жыл бұрын
SHE IS ONE OF THEM!!
@MrPants43210 жыл бұрын
Unless your last name is actually "Speaks", your username is superlatively douchey.
@NatalieDelaCruz05273 жыл бұрын
Ahhh, memories. This was my very first creepypasta and I have been hooked ever since. I love coming back to this and still seeing that it hits the same ❤️
@lemong14432 жыл бұрын
still apart of my childhood bro keep up the great content
@patrickprochazka18678 жыл бұрын
I am going to print this out and "forgett" it in my citys sub.
@realMrVent8 жыл бұрын
Don't forget to give the pages a handwritten font, rough edges, a slight stench and leave them when no one notices.
@danielloftin60684 жыл бұрын
fix your spelling
@theragingcreeper90408 жыл бұрын
one of my favs.. I remember when u posted this...so long ago...you've improved so much!
@HawkSupport12 жыл бұрын
First off, I absolutly LOVE this story. Second, the way you tell these storys is amazing! Third, It's awsome how you respond to qeustions and comments. Fourth, You are awsome because you don't bug us to subscribe or like.
@TheGreatBryan2511 жыл бұрын
This is definitely one of my favorite CreepyPastas. It is so well written (or spoken). A truly brilliant piece of art.
@missclockery20769 жыл бұрын
that's amazing. it's the second long creepypasta I found myself listening to and it was really...well...creepy. it had that dark atmosphere all the time and you narrated it perfectly ! awesome job !
@thomasmcintosh94328 жыл бұрын
4th anniversary of your hundredth video and one of my all time favorites :D
@mercedeslove61308 жыл бұрын
Thomas McIntosh AMEN
@SinisterDreams139 жыл бұрын
one of my favorite creepy pastas, I always love re-listening to this one
@roxymax12219 жыл бұрын
I know right!
@isispearce49789 жыл бұрын
Still a better love story than Twilight.
@lesbianduck78629 жыл бұрын
Isis Pearce are you serious? please tell me you're not
@isispearce49789 жыл бұрын
As serious as the fact is that your username is lesbian Duck.
@lesbianduck78629 жыл бұрын
Isis Pearce i dont even know what the hell that could mean
@conorspinks81309 жыл бұрын
lesbian Duck it means a female duck that has homosexual tendencies
@lesbianduck78629 жыл бұрын
Conor Spinks i obviously wasnt asking what a lesbian duck is....
@ryanperez54579 ай бұрын
Dude is picking a fight with a guy that literally ignored him at every turn. Imagine picking a fight with someone for sitting on a train and minding their own business
@loner656510 жыл бұрын
this is a good creepy pasta, long and not scary, but provided me with excellent food for thought.
@JustaRock35 жыл бұрын
This was the very first creepypasta I listened to I found on KZbin one cloudy day when I was around 14. Now been listening to them for years. Thank you Creepypastajr ❤️🖤
@athenasrevenge9310 жыл бұрын
37:25 Are people in the City really that rude? I'm a New Yorker, but I live in the suburbs and I'm apologetic when I bump into anyone. I have ADHD and Asperger's , so this happens a lot because sometimes I zone out due to so many sensory stimuli, so usually it's my fault. Even if it isn't, I'm not an asshole like that guy, even when I'm angry.
@xxcjwasherexx11 жыл бұрын
is it just me or can someone make this into a continuos anime series i sure as hell would watch it
@Dark4156k11 жыл бұрын
This is one of my favorite stories.
@DorianCairne8 жыл бұрын
Nice. I read this ages ago and I've been looking for it ever since. good reading, too, especially for a single take.
@CaptainWaterboy10 жыл бұрын
should have movie deal.
@eavesDropSound10 жыл бұрын
Fuck that. Turn this shit into an Animated Movie, not just any movie; Miyazaki style! lol
@wrestlefanrecordings69586 жыл бұрын
CombustableLemons The role of the Stranger could go to John Lithgow.
@dvader47315 жыл бұрын
@@wrestlefanrecordings6958 lol excellent choice
@kemcorpvirtualenterprises377611 жыл бұрын
BTW this was probably one of the best pastas I've heard so far. Super intricate and interesting, I LOVED it.
@rolandrodriguez124310 жыл бұрын
This is my favorite creepy pasta
@babybug202311 жыл бұрын
As much as it wasn't that creepy, that was still amazing! I loved the humor in it and it felt fairly realistic, emotion wise. Whoever wrote this deserves a standing ovation, and a publication. It was so engaging that I didn't even realize how long it was until it ended XD This is a pasta that should become a classic!!! Five stars from me, my friend.
@ZarPof8 жыл бұрын
Midnight Meat Train anyone? This was an EXCELLENT story. Oddities, discovery, parallel worlds, trying to understand, all story plots I find intriguing. A very well cooked pasta.
@beyondstatic59888 жыл бұрын
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@jhart199638 жыл бұрын
I can definitely see the influence
@C.R-Iptyd8 жыл бұрын
this was the first creepypasta I ever read. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this.
@TheHiddenMadHatter10 жыл бұрын
Maybe this could explain all of the monsters legends in our world, travelers who stopped traveling because they gave up trying.
@iChokedASmurfOnce12 жыл бұрын
An absolute epic story dude! So glad I clicked on this. I might try and find one of these 'Strangers' on my journeys on the bus and train. I'm so excited!
@hoeistjongah90537 жыл бұрын
this story needs his own movie am i right guys
@zarbonsan11425 жыл бұрын
i just wrote this as a response to another guy here so your damn right man!
@cadaverous611 жыл бұрын
Added to Favorites. This has to be one of the best Pastas I've ever heard.
@choirofdogs558 жыл бұрын
"And soon, the flanger-flare of anger in me gutted out" omg I can't stop laughing
@LickyMy9 Жыл бұрын
I love how the whole story where hes trapped in other worlds he’s been noticed and even almost beaten to death. Then he says “ive finally been noticed! Yes!” Lol
@gbproductions79016 жыл бұрын
I still love it two years later in 2018 almost in 2019
@eavesDropSound6 жыл бұрын
Exactly why I came back after all these years lol
@OverAttachedBf12 жыл бұрын
I didn't think I could actually watch it all. I'm thankful I did.
@pip51887 жыл бұрын
Easily one of my favorites
@BaDMrFrOsTii11 жыл бұрын
Oh man! Thank you so much for narrating this, it's my favorite creepypasta!
@harley64388 жыл бұрын
This is my favorite story ever
@user-pv5jv1ef9b12 жыл бұрын
I really didn't want this story to end... this is such a good story
@ColonelRoge7 жыл бұрын
You just don't know how to cook a good rat spider.
@lobernut17262 жыл бұрын
“He was some kind of freak” says the one creepishly watching randoms on the subway
@inwemeneldur20258 жыл бұрын
Spider-Rat, Spider-Rat, does whatever a Spider-Rat does
@darthproxis18 жыл бұрын
lol
@arthas6408 жыл бұрын
mmm... spider-rat, just like mama used to make
@marybester10708 жыл бұрын
darthproxis1
@marktincher8618 жыл бұрын
Inwë Meneldur
@TruFox2211 жыл бұрын
I can't believe you did this for an HOUR! Thank youse for treating me
@sarahderosa26268 жыл бұрын
These are my favorite type of Creepypastas! I hate the gory ones. But this is just perfect. Anyone know any other similar to this?
@jhart199638 жыл бұрын
I don't know if its in the same vein as this creepypasta. but I would recommend "The Pit" it's just as good and well written.
@austinpugmire28438 жыл бұрын
The Showers is one of my favorites. recommended highly!
@virodox8 жыл бұрын
my friend that never existed and pen pal are my favorite pastas. also similar as this one
@jhart199638 жыл бұрын
Virodox Dude when it comes to quality, pen pal has to be the one of best creepypastas ever made. Whoever wrote that seriously needs to write professionally.
@virodox8 жыл бұрын
true true
@ryanperez54574 жыл бұрын
A Classic OG creepypasta
@whitepaws609 жыл бұрын
Poor rat spider LOL!
@femmefuntime9 жыл бұрын
strangers....waitin up and down the BOULEVARD their shaaadows seaaarchin in the niiiiiight
@AuroraBorealis1707 жыл бұрын
morgan megurine streetlights People Living just to find emotion
@andyrichardson5326 жыл бұрын
Love the Minotaur reference at the end, and a +1 on a great story! Really good psychological creepy stuff!
@soup331emd510 жыл бұрын
That was a well written storie. Very interesting and strange.
@soup331emd53 жыл бұрын
Oh Christ I actually commented.
@lucarioinfamous11 жыл бұрын
there's a reason i return to this story to listen to it over and over again (this is by far my favorite pasta)
@justinoleon95429 жыл бұрын
This might rival 1999. I really love this.
@jenniferhartmann99858 жыл бұрын
woah...this was one of the BEST stories EVER. thank you for narrating it!!!
@user6kh-4mw4 жыл бұрын
*The love story between him and the stranger= Flanger*
@WastelandSeven10 жыл бұрын
That was just plain awesome!!! Love the Minotaur analogy. :) I think this is one of the better creepypastas I've heard in quite a while.
@Neville_Arroyo10 жыл бұрын
BEST PASTA I'VE EVER HEARD! :D
@Mattywouldratherberapping10 жыл бұрын
Agreed i honestly feel like it could be a freaking movie this author was very talented
@Neville_Arroyo10 жыл бұрын
I Agree
@ivanmelo698510 жыл бұрын
Me too this was one of the best
@vinyl262710 жыл бұрын
Reminded me of spirited away.
@JazzySpazzy1035 жыл бұрын
Here because CTFDN narrated this recently. This was one of the very first narrations of a creepypasta I ever heard. It helped me fall in love with the genre, and I've been listening since 2014. Thank you CreepypastaJr.
@Welcomeyear07 жыл бұрын
"The flanger of..... The fl.... ಠ_ಠ *looks at script* and soon the flare of anger." Sorry thought that was reeeeeally funny😂😂😂
@CreepypastaHorror8 жыл бұрын
I still listen to this story from time to time.
@cherylramirez-amaya533110 жыл бұрын
mr.creepy pasta,im so addicted to you!Thank You for sharing everyones creepy tales that have me looking around the dark room wanting to turn the lights on and run with my tale and back side all full of goosebumps chilled to the...well you get it...creep on,,,,,,,,,
@sethkane9710 жыл бұрын
you spelt tail wrong
@sethkane9710 жыл бұрын
when you mentioned your tail you spelt it tale again Loftty OG
@DarthJediMan11 жыл бұрын
This is by far the best creepypasta I have ever heard. Thank you so much for making this. It must have taken much imagination.
@silverroddo14688 жыл бұрын
Mutter by Rammstein early on in the story. Rammstein seems to create good mood music if it were to get rearranged for piano, so that's cool.
@HeroKirito1310 жыл бұрын
This is my favourite Creepypasta. Just wonderful.
@ashasharret66259 жыл бұрын
I did this and I was gone for 2 years but I got back and guess what?.... I BROUGHT PRESENTS!
@sarcasmwizard33879 жыл бұрын
YAY PRESENTS!! What did you get me?
@ashasharret66259 жыл бұрын
Cocaine!
@evelravenloch4408 жыл бұрын
+Asha Sharret It's five a.m., I'm the only one awake in the house. Deep in thought about this story as I shift through comments. I see yours and burst out laughing SO HARD my husband in the other room (behind a closed door) pokes his head out after a minute all bleary eyed to find out what I was laughing about. He's been asleep for five hours, it wasn't a light sleep! Your little exclamation mark at the end of 'cocaine' made it sound so *happy* in my head XD
@coolblackhawksfan448 жыл бұрын
This is one amazing Creepy Pasta Story and CreepyPastaJr you are the best Creepy Pasta Story telling KZbinr out there and keep it up CreepyPastaJr making the amazing and epic Creepy Pasta Stories on KZbin.
@iamNOTaronpurschemorales19669 жыл бұрын
One of my favorites but I'd be a liar if I said that the protagonist didn't bother me; sure, the Stranger could've said something, but ultimately our guy didn't have to follow. It's like in this story it wasn't curiosity that killed the cat, but you won't here the cat say it was his fault.
@winstonwins10965 жыл бұрын
By far one of my all-time-FAVORITE CPs.
@MassachusettsTrainVideos11362 жыл бұрын
Cp doesn't mean what you think it means
@kianexplorerofthings31749 жыл бұрын
30:45-30:49 "The flanger--dafuq"
@quagsire7539 жыл бұрын
+Kian Shull no he said "the flare of anger"
@Bluesit328 жыл бұрын
+Quag Sire No, he said "Flanger" and muttered, "The fuck...?" before correcting himself.
@demonjmh7 жыл бұрын
TheBlues32 well I know one thing is for sure he didn't say "dah fuck" because he's an intelligent human being who speaks correctly
@vixenpeaceful80065 жыл бұрын
I herd that too I had to laugh at that
@tylerschannel2 ай бұрын
I love listening to the old version
@ShadowDawnExclusive10 жыл бұрын
I'm sooo gonna follow someone until the end of the line now x)
@migujos8 жыл бұрын
I've been riding the creepy pasta train for a while now and this one has become one of my favorites. I've heard many and have been less than satisfied. This one quenches my thirst for creepiness and gives me hope for awesome creepy pastas I have not found yet.
@MrSkyzel10 жыл бұрын
All I'm thinking in the beginning about his mother: "Just facebook her, you obviously have internet if you're posting this!" Haha.