The Undertow (Original)

[@kimmichael1480]

I like the verses. In fact they are really good. Somewhat reminiscent of Willie Nelson's Pauncho and Lefty's song. The only weakness is the chorus. In my opinion the hook is not relatable to me or the audience. With a stronger hook this could be a great song.

[@birk3383]

Appreciate the feedback. And thanks for checking it out!