The Zombie Chronicles: Toronto, Canada | A Zombie Audible Short Story

[@neilkendrick4976]

am ever-so pleased to find this.

[@storystream10009]

Thank you for the kindness, Glad you enjoyed the story

[@cariocasarda]

This story is breathtaking, please get out of the city, super populated areas are a crazy nightmare😢

[@ellenmendoza7246]

You read beautifully.. good story

[@shebagabow58]

Hahahahah when he mentioned mime what came to mind was that street Spider-Man that was on younge st like 8yrs ago, his little tight faded costume, my son was so weirded out by him. They should have went to mississauga and boarded up an arena. Stopped in at danier for leather jackets and gloves !

[@patriotcountry4716]

I'm glad I found this channel. I love listening to the zombie stories 😅. And I've enjoyed the few I've listened to so far. Thanks for providing this great entertainment 😅

[@ronaldirwin9922]

sounds like you are doing a great job of leading that zombie horde toward other people....

[@NinjaFox-pe3dv]

Man, these are all so good. Real people dealing with chaos and death. None of that big flashy Hollywood style bs. Zombie apocalypse huh, well I'll just hack into the government casual, as one does. Good thing im not only a world class hacker but also ex military and a professional Rube Goldberg machine designer... 🙄🙄🤦

[@neilkendrick4976]

okay... fair wait... [no spolers]... but listen, this is good: to be recommended.

[@storystream10009]

Thank you for the positive vibes

[@ConnieFalling]

Toronto is an NDP hell hole Maybe the homeless fleeing the zombies can take over the condos

[@storystream10009]

Kinda sounds like Portland, Oregon

[@patrickancona1193]

@@storystream10009the entire west coast, north east & every large city at this point, don’t have to look for apocalypse stories we’re living one

[@hospitalcakewalk]

Emily sounds like she literally just finished nursing school and holds a grudge because she wasnt able to use her skills. None of us nurses sound like that. We're all tired. something about working 50-80hr weeks with people constantly in your face yelling at you/ fighting you/ attacking you/ making you bruise and bleed will have you hoping for the end of the world.

[@booksale5]

This sounds like the zombie content authored by Derek Slaton. Which the literary style sounded familiar and I was listening to other content. He said that he writes the whole story but only uses AI to read and maybe he said spellcheck?

[@bearjawhomestead]

What happened to the people that made the broadcast from the tower. Wasnt it already a stronghold?

[@storystream10009]

@@bearjawhomestead it wasn’t a strong hold yet, but after the broadcast they fought their way out. I left the ending open to interpretation, because I’m going to link this story with Dave to the story with Damon in whistler. Thanks for listening

[@bearjawhomestead]

@@storystream10009 ahhh.

[@kevinlorick4705]

Please invest in a thesaurus.

[@storystream10009]

@@kevinlorick4705 Thanks for the feedback, This was an older story, all new story’s get filtered through grammarly . I can only improve moving forward, thanks for listening

[@ultimaetsolder]

If it was Toronto it would be all Indians. Diverse crowd. Its like India.

[@bearjawhomestead]

What ai do you use to write these?

[@Farsight-6181]

Hi. This video of yours is under Creative Commons Attribution license (reuse allowed). I would like to use it on my video as a background music. I would state that the audio is not mine and give your proper credit. I really like listening to your stories, I hope using your video would be alright. Thank you!

[@Farsight-6181]

I included your audiobook narration here: kzbin.info/www/bejne/lYuyhHx5n5Jml80 Also, the credits are on the description. Thank you for lending me your story!

[@storystream10009]

Yes, of course

[@emmanueljohnespiritu6427]

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[@michelelyons9410]

Good story! But the eding was a little confusing. Why throw away their lives just to make a broadcast of nothing important? Marcus gave up his life, for what exactly? the others are trapped in the broadcast booth with a horde of zombies outside--they are going to die. The broadcast was hardly some inspiring speech or call to arms, nor did it broadcast any information that would help others survive. So why was it worth all their lives to make it? If you are going to die to do something, then it dammed well better be something worth it.

[@storystream10009]

@@michelelyons9410 they didn’t, I left it opened for another adventure. Dave survived, not sure about the others

[@joeavery6344]

It's a story, I just got into it. I'll wait and figure out the ending and I'll come back and explain it to you if I can.

[@bullstag47]

Quite a few cliched lines. Gotta keep an eye out for those…

[@storystream10009]

This was one of my first writings, I have learned a bit since, but not much. Thanks for the feedback

[@devil5hlygrim972]

Need better Ai prompts, every story is almost the same

[@storystream10009]

@@devil5hlygrim972 thanks for the feedback, I’ve been slowly changing the format of the chronicles series because I felt the same way, so now I only release one a week and hopefully the change story progression and formatting will Be noticabale

[@devil5hlygrim972]

@storystream10009 maybe try writing yourself a short paragraph for each one of them I am a horror writer as well I tried using AI but it never felt original however maybe if you give it unique prompts and toss it a theme or a specific detail it might spit out what you want Or maybe jump in and edit parts of them and then send it through one more time for it to be looked at by the program

[@FatBoy_Inferno]

I really hate Dave.

[@storystream10009]

i tried to make him like the dave from DDE, I guess i did a good job writing the character