Upstate ny

Listening from Aguadilla, Puerto Rico 🇵🇷

Sacramento, Ca

I really wanna like these ai zombie stories more but they all have the exact same story. A character looks for another character, finds them, gets somewhere safe, leaves for supplies, returns to safety then the main character always says"we can't stay here forever" so even though they just got supplies they go get more supplies. This happens until the story ends

Upland, CA

Philippines 🇵🇭

This is a good story, but there is a problem with multiple plot holes. We are not told that days are passing. By the fifth chapter, the zombie outbreak is only a couple of hours old---there is no reason for supplies to be low, especially not if the group is holed up in a diner. the story needs to make note that days are passing, and how many. Plus, in a insular Texas town, I would expect firearms to be way more available, yet none of the characters are armed, and there don't seem to be any firearms in evidence. Plus I can't really see a diner as more than a very short term shelter. Most diners have large entrances and multiple windows, all of which would be a weakness. I would think they would aim at the police station or a fire house. Another thing----while one can assume that the horses either were killed or escaped, what happened to the cars and trucks? Why not get to vehicles and get out of the town? Plus, except for one tiny section of the story, no one is discussing what has happened. Yes, at first people would be far too shocked. But as days passed, everyone would be discussing what they had seen, asking questions that had no answers, voicing concerns about missing loved ones. But no one is talking about the sheer madness of the situation. People would literally be doubting their senses and would be talking to each other to make sure they weren't crazy. Another thing----the group in the diner seems to keep growing. At first there is only a small number, say five or six, but later, there are more characters appearing, with no explanation as to where they came from. Like the story mentions a woman and a toddler. Well, where did she come from? She wasn't mentioned as being with the original group. The story also mentions "elders and children". Where did they come from? You can assume that they let people into the diner, or went out to save more people and brought them back to the diner, but there is no actual mention of them doing this. When you go from a small group to a large one, you need to explain it. And seriously, can the hero stop chanting "We are Crowley!" like a dammed cheer leader? Most small towns are pretty shitty and the people do not take care of each other. Some of the scenes discussed are disjointed. Like young Jake thinking about being afraid in school. But the outbreak occurred during a holiday, where there was no school. Plus, I caught one referral to the "early days" of the outbreak. That makes it sound like the zombie plague has been going on for weeks or longer. Again, a problem with the lime line. In the middle of the story, the outbreak is only, at most, two days old. It is possible that this story is either wholly or partly IA generated. IA generated stories often have plot holes involving linear story telling, expression of emotion between characters, and repeated phrases or scenes that don't fit into the time line narrative.

am listening in Terre Haute Indiana

Dude lets two different groups of survivors die. Comments: “He’s good people!” 😂

Tomasville north carolina

BC, Canada

Thank you ❤ from Cape Cod, MA

Why root for a bitch like you when you're a hypocrite and you sell humans out? Why would I give a flying fuck shit about you and your family and friends??

Philadelphia

Queensland Australia 🇦🇺

London, KY.

Queensland Australia 🇦🇺

as someone fron Huntsville, Alabama I'd love to see one from here.

Fantastic ❤

Fantastic ❤

Chicago

Queensland Australia here

Love this ❤❤❤❤

Lives in a town of 2,400. My town is 1/2 the population lol.

Loving these stories ❤❤❤

Queensland Australia

Give me a break this guy mentions his wife and daughter once directly and once indirectly but the dog oh his dog he can wax poetic for hours about the dog

pacifica ca

I live in St Clair County alabama, this is weird

Greetings from Cambridge Ohio, but i reside in Surfside Beach, SC.

Yeah, I do love a good zombie stories Bro, what are you doing? We’ve already got the food and water. Yeah but I’ve always wanted to have pockets overflowing with cash.😅 Help me open the registers

Port Saint Lucie, FL

Day 2 and they are rotting and got maggots? Not very likely.

Cullman, Alabama i love your channel! ❤

Spot on.... Rio Rancho, New Mexico

stockton california valley 209

Hello from the uk 🇬🇧

DETROIT

it's a story & i enjoyed it.

Faribault, Minnesota

definitely... to be recommended. Thank you.

Hale, Michigan

You have a very good channel going here.

Aransas Pass TX

St Louis

Cranbrook, BC Canada

This is another good one.. from Mendenhall Mississippi

I'm liking the good guy MC in these stories. Gives me hope that if stuff ever went down in any form, good people will find other good people

Aguadilla, Puerto Rico.

Another great story smash the like button you filthy animals