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@heidijk676 5 минут бұрын
I’m not sure if it just keeps repeating bc of a glitch or bc that’s how it is written - either way certainly not going to bother to continue listening
@janesmith599 54 минут бұрын
Mt. Pocono Pennsylvania 😂
@SessVideoz 54 минут бұрын
Philadelphia
@leejackson3774 Сағат бұрын
Fort Worth TX
@jessicascalf6852 Сағат бұрын
Murfreesboro Tennessee!!!!!! Great narration!!!! Ty so much!!!!
@stenmutt9812 Сағат бұрын
Anaconda, Montana
@nellienel1708 Сағат бұрын
New York City!! Love Your Stories!! ♥️🌹♥️🌹♥️
@jamiehudson8163 2 сағат бұрын
The main characters in all of your stories have a weight of responsibility but don't act. They wait for things to get worse. Then they make dumb decisions. Can you please write a story with main characters with common sense.
@neugbauer8813 2 сағат бұрын
Westminster md usa
@antarcticmoongiant2691 2 сағат бұрын
Post falls idaho! Trump 24
@samuelsmith7368 2 сағат бұрын
Medina Tennessee
@jamesblakeman 2 сағат бұрын
Hampton Roads, VA
@LanishaAlmond 2 сағат бұрын
Why did it have to be James? 😢
@roseTears2104 2 сағат бұрын
Sydney Australia 🎉
@neilkendrick4976 3 сағат бұрын
cheers, i do so like these stories. may your week go well.
@jayleegrindle5556 3 сағат бұрын
Weirton, West Virginia.
@arlinburton4967 3 сағат бұрын
Camden ,Tn
@markjardis5393 3 сағат бұрын
Garden City Michigan. Wayne county ak Detroit
@krishaskin8809 3 сағат бұрын
Douglas Kansas😄
@teresaannnolen8019 3 сағат бұрын
Mendenhall Mississippi
@MatrixDownload5150 10 сағат бұрын
Southern California outside San Diego
@Londa-cq2ez 10 сағат бұрын
Are you from Oregon??
@storystream10009 10 сағат бұрын
Yes
@Crowbars357 12 сағат бұрын
So no real change to California?
@jamesblakeman 13 сағат бұрын
Hampton Roads, Virginia. Might make a great location for an ambush. Characters could be trapped on the peninsula forced to escape through the Bridge-Tunnels with the risk of them flooding or take their chances with the James River draw bridge.
@michelelyons9410 14 сағат бұрын
Good story. The idea is good, but at the very beginning there are lots of plot holes. First, how where the "towering walls" built, in the middle of a zombie apocalypse?,. We know that Alara designed them, but how was such a monumental building project done in the middle of a world wide disaster? Then, who is the leader here? Nobody, or any group, seems to be in charge. In five years, there would have been a leadership, a military, farmers, etc. Then the determination to go to the equipment depot before anyone actually checked to see what the problem with the water supply was-----shouldn't they have checked out the filtration system first, to see what was wrong, and what parts needed to be fixed? Then, I somehow doubt that a very dangerous supply run would be undertaken by the most valuable people in the community. Alara is a builder and a good fixer, she would be far to valuable to risk. And the nurse, as the only medical person they have, would never be allowed to leave the safety of the community. While it makes a good story, other people would be selected to go on the foray, not the most valuable people in the community.
@philipsmith228 20 сағат бұрын
Chicago
@claireporter8165 21 сағат бұрын
❤ Wales 🏴 uk
@lorddemonoss3945 21 сағат бұрын
Post apocalypse California here 2024
@Danzigsam Күн бұрын
Its a little repetitive
@captainamerica6525 Күн бұрын
Michigan
@robertharrell1183 Күн бұрын
Benfarting Fort Wayne in
@chrislaurenceleo Күн бұрын
LONDON UK.
@michelleparks8269 Күн бұрын
Michigan
@morganfreeman1507 Күн бұрын
This replaced my usual jovial demeanor
@toddwilson2297 Күн бұрын
Burlington NC
@michaelthomas115 Күн бұрын
Jackson TN
@russellmelling4098 Күн бұрын
Burscough, UK. WTF America ???
@captainamerica6525 Күн бұрын
What about it?
@barbaramitchell8018 Күн бұрын
Chesapeake, Virginia
@rommelcastillo1503 Күн бұрын
Metro Manila - Philippines.
@jeffreykeith6494 2 күн бұрын
Louisville, Ky.
@TheContractor82 2 күн бұрын
CHARLOTTE NC
@kevinlorick4705 2 күн бұрын
Baltimore, today real life seems much more scary than zombies.
@TheHenry971 3 сағат бұрын
You got that right 😏
@jessewhales8680 2 күн бұрын
Misson tx
@jamesgilliard7745 2 күн бұрын
Are we missing chapters? Feel like there's huge gaps in the story
@storystream10009 Күн бұрын
This story is meant to be a 20 chapter story, I broke it down to an hour, kind of testing it to see if i should invest the time to complete the full book.
@jamesgilliard7745 Күн бұрын
@storystream10009 I'm sure everyone listening would be down for a full book. Maybe upload a couple of chapters at a time? Keep us all invested.
@KirkKirkham 2 күн бұрын
Cypress TX
@GTfromAG 2 күн бұрын
🥦💨🎧🍿😎👏🏾👏🏾
@neilkendrick4976 2 күн бұрын
least i was awake, this time... still enjoying these.
@doughovious5317 2 күн бұрын
Indiana
@dandaman2753 2 күн бұрын
Not bad and nicely narrated but the story seems like it might have been AI generated or partially AI generated. I say that because one minute this small group of survivors joins with one other group and then another group but then those groups are gone with no mention of what became of them. It's not like chapters are missing but it's like they were never written in the first place. Still I liked it because there weren't zombies, and let's face it zombies and the zombie genre are as dead as Disco. Literally. What kept me listening was that it was just a small group of survivors at the end, rather than the story of the whole world collapsing at the beginning and having so many characters and every day to day life chapters when that's not what apocalypse books are about. Authors please just get us to the end of the Apocalypse, we don't need the backstory and seven chapters at the beginning of every post-apocalyptic book on how we got to the end of the world. Just start it at the end of the world because that's what a post-apocalypse fiction is about anyway. I suggest everyone gives us a listen and decide for yourself.
@storystream10009 2 күн бұрын
I try to stick with main characters, they might meet up with people or groups, and those groups may relay information, then they vanish, they were only there for the vessel to deliver the information. Thank you fro your feedback and listening, I appreciate it.
@dandaman2753 2 күн бұрын
@storystream10009 Oh, in that case I sincerely apologize for suggesting it might be somewhat AI generated. It's way way better than any story I could ever write, it just seemed like a few sentences were missing here and there but maybe you're right and they just weren't needed once you got the information across.. And this story definitely did keep me fully interested to the very end. I liked many aspects of this story so I thank you for writing it and posting it for all of us to enjoy..
@Nikomairi 2 күн бұрын
Love this, from Auckland New Zealand.