The Cutie Mark Crusaders [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Darkfic)

[@terrymelody9340]

I find it hilarious how in the picture sweetiebelle looks evil, Applebloom looks possessed and Scootaloo’s just 😃

[@thehive711]

She's just cheesing

[@kayleighz7034]

I think that Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo were already dead, and their souls want to take away the destiny and lives of other ponies with cutie marks, watch it again with that in mind.

[@peterchueng5509]

But theirs part two called the trees are screaming I think

[@DJ-xg4gm]

+Peter Chueng no there different

[@wahwah4404]

they're different

[@yorhano.2typeb141]

+Peter Chueng that's a different story

[@xxxSkyInfinity]

+Vinyl Scratch really really no one thinks that you are from mlp/my little pony

[@coyotealienss]

Sooooo this is what I think happend: The CMC died in a fire that caught their tree house, and now their souls are haunting the apple orchard. Foals that think they are real make friends with the ghosts and then the ghosts kills them....ending their life too quickly

[@journijones3253]

I started wondering what this story was talking about. I think you got it.

[@MasterOfViewership]

+Chloesta PG24 Which is what makes this story dumb as fuck.

[@ViolarulesGaming]

That's what I think happened too, especially since the victim would be strangled with a CMC cape.

[@annesmith5539]

Violarules I don't think they were strangled, it said the cape was tied loosely around their necks.

[@katelynbodiford5680]

Anne Smith I wonder how Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon feel in the story? I bet they're really sad about Apple Bloom Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo's deaths.

[@SnazzGirl]

"the pressure of finding destiny and a bully or two sometimes made adolescence intolerable." I relate

[@wyvernnemecek595]

Applebloom's dead eyes, always void of thought or feeling, were always known to send chills down the spines of adults, but that was when what little was left of her had been intact. Now her spirit need only stare mindlessly at her siblings, begging them for the one thing what she didn't have. "What's wrong," Applebloom said sadly, a lack of anything but depression in her voice unheard by her loving family. "Big Mac? AJ? I'm not a bothersome lil' mouth to feed with a blank flank anymore?" Scootaloo sat atop their joined tombstone, smiling naively, ignorant of why her idle hadn't talked to her in so long. Even in death, she never knew hate or pain in Rainbow Dash's shadow. "I'm sure you're just too tired to wow me about your training, Rainbow Dash. Normally I'd keep asking, but you obviously need me to give you time, so I'll do my best to be patient!" Rainbow Dash's biggest fan said this happily, willing to wait eternity just to hear her idle's voice. The glare of hatred Sweetie Belle sent at Rarity was hellish! "Why do you cry like you care?!" Rarity's sister fumed. "If you cared, you'd have been there to stop us-to stop me-from burning our clubhouse to ash!" Her spite was silence to the porcelain mare's ears, making the ghost filly glare even more. "I hope you rot!"

[@robin_atticus4249]

ooooo this is good!!

[@kxtszukii]

Where was this?

[@wyvernnemecek595]

@@kxtszukii Huh? I wrote this for my own amusement

[@kxtszukii]

@@wyvernnemecek595 Oh i thought it was in the story

[@wyvernnemecek595]

@@kxtszukii NUPE, though I appreciate your thinking that

[@GutiSerenade]

This turned out great! Gotta love them creepypasta-esque stories.~

[@vannamelondemon105]

I love this story too

[@Ladyluv011]

*boi meh too i like creepypasta stories!*

[@TheBrickly]

Alright. It's 11. I should probably go to OH LOST POSTED A DARKFIC. THIS WONT HAVE ANY NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON MY SLEEP.

[@kerrystockwell26]

every time. always. it's night and I watch this. welp. guess who's not sleeping tonight?

[@wahwah4404]

+Annalise “876puppylover” W wow good for you

[@MisterJster]

+Emma Backer y so sarcastic dude, i stay up at 3 o clock in the morning to watch this and i still sleep, whatch u want?

[@wahwah4404]

TheBudderBrineWolfGirl ahaha same i always stay up super late listening to these

[@MisterJster]

+Emma Backer lol so tru

[@ThornquillAudiofics]

Ooo, I really liked this one. Feels like a classical little ghost story you'd hear in a small, out of the way town. Well read, Lost!

[@Beans7266]

this fanfic gave me chills at the end, anyone else?

[@sharonwalker3402]

nope

[@journijones3253]

A little

[@shiannsmith3626]

Nope😎😎

[@katelynbodiford5680]

Shiann Smith All we need is an Animation Version of this.

[@katelynbodiford5680]

Sound Level10 Yeah an animated version of this would be great to see.

[@cassius9006]

OMG THIS IS AMAZING! One of the best narrated stories you have done probably and the way you just express this with the details adds great background to this!

[@MasterOfViewership]

+Dragon_ Girl791 Losty is a good narrator, but the story doesn't even come close to sub-par. It's short, boring, and just plain stupid. I can't write very good horror stories, but I could do better than that.

[@paulsiegfried6337]

May you find Eternal Happiness CMC.

[@dejabarksdale2210]

Is it bad I'm laughing at Apple Bloom face in the picture?

[@arthas640]

she looks high af to me.

[@Cryo_the_Proto]

No im laughing as well

[@theartsonist3883]

nope

[@mob756]

lmao

[@tisashorter2494]

Pleas tell me a in the pic that sweetie belle looks like a bada$$ lamo

[@JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing]

Nice use of a piano version of the Luigi's Mansion theme!

[@aurorynfrost9817]

Wrong themes dude the first is discord puppet and the second is dead silence

[@JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing]

@@aurorynfrost9817 Thanks for the info., though sometimes music pieces can share tunes, or at least remind us of tunes we've heard before.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing I heard of that game.

[@killerfrostbite]

Does anyone else just listen to MLP grimdarks as they write? It's just so damn inspiring

[@boomer3southpark233]

CMC at the end made me shiver.

[@kerrystockwell26]

welp looks like I'm curling into the fetal position. but as always...... to most likely everyone..... WUT HAPPENED TO DA CMC TELL ME MORE LIKE U SAID DA NEW FIL OR COLT ALWAYS FINDS 3 NEW FRIENDS ARE THEY SPIRITS WUT IS GOING ON HELP

[@yourcreepyunclecletus7787]

+Kerry Stockwell so im pretty sure that the 3 cmc cause friend among blank flanks lure , if you will, the to the center and kill them because the they are not resting in peace because thier club house burrned down

[@katelynbodiford5680]

YourCreepyUncleCletus I bet it was Slenderman Pony.

[@katelynbodiford5680]

YourCreepyUncleCletus I bet their Treehouse caught on fire because of lightning and a rainstorm they got trapped and died in the fire.

[@chocofloofer126]

GEEZ I cant stop listening to all these fics XD you are truly the ruler of these PRAISE LOST oAo!

[@The_Ineffable_Bentley]

This has to be one of the best things i've ever heard, the story is amazing.

[@retsychan3413]

is this part 2 of the trees are screaming

[@idkanymore1410]

r-really?

[@perfectlyinsane3318]

no i dont think so

[@retsychan3413]

Or

[@retsychan3413]

A prequel

[@yorhano.2typeb141]

I just thought that, this could've a sequel, but the way the CMC died needs to be changed since they died in a fire in this and by the everfree forest in the other.

[@lazarla980]

I always loved this one for its creativity and it's new look on the cutie mark crusaders.

[@2015Drama]

This such a chilling tale. It has a very strong and classical campfire ghost story vibe to it that really makes it stand out.

[@goldenflame4884]

When I first saw the scull I thought, Apple jack. what are you doing down there (something sweet to bite first part) but then I saw it was a unicorn

[@goldenflame4884]

Skull*

[@purplejellyfish24]

I LOVVVVEE HOW YOU STARTED IT OFF WITH FLUTTERSHYS SONGGGG 😆😆😆😆 THE ERRIENESS AND THE OVERALL MOOD…PERFECTION✨✨✨✨

[@sonicthefakerhedgehog8691]

Once upon a time in the magical land of Equestria,There was a pony who was so ugly everypony died. the end. THAT'S HOW I WANTED THIS STORY TO GO NOT SOME WOODS THAT I SWEAR TO CELESTIA IS MOST LIKELY PENNYWISE'S GARDEN OF THE DAMNED!!!

[@sethragrey9651]

as soon as you said 'once upon a time...' i thought it was going to be a bad story, but i was proven so wrong! i loved the story!

[@MadelineGaming]

Well, lets see it's 11:50, and I'm watching a darkfic! How wonderful!

[@Insp.irationalapp]

5:28 it's supposed to be "filled with REFLEIF", which is why the next sentence says what it says, because the parents think their children are okay at first

[@theunknownartist.101]

I love the creepiness and how you read! Great job!

[@monkas2553]

wait are the CMC killing the Colts and filly?!

[@derpyhooves4287]

Dinky. jr I dunno

[@queenkaterose]

Maybe their ghosts are

[@mckaylamarille8630]

Jealousy maybe?

[@stravve4969]

I love how its mlp with Luigi's mansion playing in the background XD

[@LoubyLou21]

They were all killed in Sweet Apple Massacre.

[@rampagingpedestrian2124]

id like to think this happened after 'the trees are screaming' fic

[@laylamia]

Please...that fanfic traumatised me

[@LoubyLou21]

@@elliotgraham6663 Stop what??

[@LoubyLou21]

@@laylamia 😔

[@andreeahalinga8142]

We don't talk about that--

[@pixlatedduck]

Why do Applebloom's eyes look cross-eyed?

[@kaistar0322]

She's secretly been Pony Pennywise this whole time.

[@scorpiogamer3307]

That's alright, I didn't need sleep anyway.

[@mlprocks101crystalennote2]

I think this just made my fear of woods stronger!

[@HauntingHunters13]

I really want to listen to the Muffins story but now ya have to have membership in order to listen to it.

[@oakenshadow6763]

This is one I put off listening to for years for some reason. I was not expecting that ending.

[@tianoc-g4811]

The curse of the Cutie Mark Crusaders ;after a forest fire occurred in the evergreen forest destroyed the tree house with them in it. Or it could be a good linked aftermath to another story from "the trees are screaming" when they ventured into the forest and were attacked by the haunted trees!

[@AdrienneZDubberz]

let me get this straight,the 3 fillys died in their tree house on fire and their spirets would make friends with a living filly or cult that also had no cutie mark at his/her first day of school and at the end of the year,he/she goes into the woods and looks for them and mysteriously died whereing a cmc cape.

[@rainbowrenegade1479]

Yeah pretty much

[@mystery5252]

I like the use of the Luigi’s Mansion theme it’s one of my favorite songs.

[@gameralien3206]

You got nice horror stories and the art work it's perfect

[@Sentifray]

0:26 WE CALL HOME

[@TransgenderSisyphus]

It's me again I'm gonna watch dis

[@TransgenderSisyphus]

I like it

[@Sentifray]

Lost is good at what she does

[@alexlovesfellsans5621]

Sentifray 19073 lel

[@rainbowsylvie16]

YAS BOIIIIIIIIIIII

[@Boba_loving_freak]

is this connected to the trees are screaming?

[@Boba_loving_freak]

apple bloom looks creepy on the cover

[@zapcraftihoof8318]

Welp, say hello to the new and improved S.O.D. The Spirits Of Destiny

[@aperson4708]

lol the luigis mansion music tho

[@green5310]

Oh my... That suspense. This was an awesome reading :0

[@LAME_PYRO]

Hello the lost narrator I have been watching you for a while and I LOVE it your voice the pictures and all hope u post more!

[@vilet918]

that was pretty good havent heard a good dark reading in a while

[@nightmaregaming7190]

well, the upside of watching this at night is I don't sleep, or have nightmares Oh, and it's also just a dang good quality video

[@offcenterprofilepicture6274]

woah, this is the first fic in a very long time to spook me.

[@remcat03]

I don't understand what the image in this video is depicting.

[@SilentCanScream]

remcat03 The CMC standing around the skull of the blank flank that died through their course.

[@remcat03]

SilentCanScream Ah. I see. Thank you for that. But then, why do Scootaloo and Apple Bloom look happy, and Sweetie Bell looks mad and/or sad.

[@SilentCanScream]

You know how those crazy ponies are some are happy that another guest has joined them some are angry that they are disturbed who knows.

[@werehornse]

+SilentCanScream How did they die, if I may ask? It doesn't really describe it....

[@Dani_1012]

+Rising Moon They said there was a burnt tree house in the middle of tue forest which was were lye there graves which to me sounds like they died in a fire that occured at their club house.

[@dashielove7232]

The end bit gave me shivers down my spine to honest thought the three fillys were the cmcs but I was wrong

[@EtherealN0ir]

i dont really care if this messes with my mind, im just gonna sleep after it.

[@buggjuice1988]

I was to busy humming Discord's puppet and this story was awesome!

[@blackrb123ryan]

Thanks for the Dead Silence theme

[@elitefries3088]

Lost this is a awesome reading! The thing that has me confused is, who could've burnt the clubhouse down? I know you don't know, but it is a good question.

[@josegar30]

It was the cmc. They did a crusade and well (lower my hat pass my eyes) it didn't turn out the way they hoped ...

[@elitefries3088]

Jose Garnier but it said they were burned in the club house... What could have the- (sorry it's little hard to recap), what could they have done to cause a fire that bad and not have been able to get out... It could've been a sabotage.

[@josegar30]

Well incident happen. Maybe they got too cocky (since they never got seriously hurt) and did a fire stunt, maybe a circus thing they saw, and boom. If it was sabotaged, I say that tiara wanted to humiliate them and cause a horrible slow death. So now the cmc are giving the little kids a quick and happy death. What you think?

[@elitefries3088]

Jose Garnier I see what you mean with them getting to cocky, but they don't usually try to pull stunts off at the club house, and I think if it were Salvatore's it would be Tiara trying to bully them by taking away their meeting place, not intentionally trying to kill them...

[@josegar30]

You bring a good point, but they are kids. And from taking care a few, sometimes kids just don't know when to stop. Even if they never did anything at the club house, what is there preventing them to try? But with tiara your right, but what could have happen to make her that jealous or angry to burn someone property? Now I'm getting interested in tiara.

[@pinpupgaming12]

Omg, wow, that was so creepy I loved it! GOOD JOB

[@rosetiger1179]

why there a skull in the leaves and why is there

[@katelynbodiford5680]

rose tiger It's a Unicorn Skull and the CMCs are ghosts because they died in a fire that burned down their tree house and their Spirits became angry by their early deaths and can't rest in peace. And they're cursed for eternity.

[@shawanderson5747]

Wow you mastered it amazingly I am inspired

[@fatecosmic923]

Omg, the first time I listened to this, it was in the afternoon, but it's 2:17 AM, a-and i'm probably gonna have nightmares.

[@Dan-lc1ky]

I love the picture, the mane and tails have an interesting pastel color. Sweetie belle has an sinister look on her face, and also a sinister beard.

[@HauntingHunters13]

I really like this a lot it fits the storyline

[@bassoongal7879]

3:41. What is the name of that song? I swear it’s a song from one of the Luigi’s Mansion games( but a piano cover), but I’m worried I might be wrong

[@youngvolottle3801]

scaryer than the trees are screaming! AND THATS SOME SCARY SHIT BRO!!!

[@something4848]

My mission was Protect 3 kids this story tells when where I can fail

[@Violent_Wolfen]

That was creepier than I thought it would be even if most of it came at the end.

[@TheBronyChronicler]

I should listen to this again in October under the covers on a rainy night.

[@colorfulcupid]

I really like your voice. =3 it gives it that spooky feeling.

[@kaelyn077]

I love your voice it sounds amazing at night

[@sydrauch7661]

so did the cmc kill the fillies and colts or somepony else

[@nahshoncolon4337]

clever that u added the Luigi's mansion theme

[@moof3381]

this was so amazing ! loved it

[@MadiiPlays]

Maybe its that they had already died previous, and there spirits haunt the acres now, killing others like them?

[@Stranger312656]

The Crusaders are always recruiting ')

[@nowthats20cooler49]

I can't believe I watch this right before bed

[@johnathanjohnjohnston4667]

I could recognize the same music from scarethearter it added just the right atmostsphere

[@star_glider3105]

Um…I didn't feel like screaming or anything if that's what you're thinking…

[@endersteven2747]

luigi's mansion is playing in the background nice job lost

[@Flowerbarrel]

Oh boy...this was creepy and sad..,the Luigi's Mansion theme helped a lot. And that picture.

[@psuedomyspace]

The Cutie Mark Crusaders. Not to be confused with the Stardust Crusaders.

[@nephylias3507]

I know it's long time ago, but when I listen to the melody, isn't it from "Discord's puppet"? But the song is new... *thinking hard*

[@CurseWormz]

can i just say i love ur voice :P

[@therulerofanime]

I have to say I got chills when she said CMC

[@lilycarter7345]

Awsome reading it is kinda like creepypasta and let me just tell you i love creepypasta

[@GriffinProductions]

GENIUS! No really, this is genius!!

[@splinkyz]

All aboard the tear train, noot noot.

[@safakak3459]

Wait what happens if foal whom the CMC ( ghost of them at least) having having adventures actually obtains his/her cutie mark before the start of the semester?

[@safakak3459]

The first day of summer I mean

[@lilyy4427]

Got goosebumps that the end!

[@joeypoland2756]

if i remember correctly over the years i think the original cutie mark crusaders creepy pasta was them luring diamond tiara to their clubhouse then kill her and cut off her cutie mark and hanged it on the wall and they got their cutie marks as killers

[@gren8te319]

i love the video starting with discord's puppet

[@Toxic--Water]

Luigi's Mansion 2 Background music!!!

[@tylersackett6302]

Um......HOLY AMATERASU!!!!! WTB that was SCARY!!! WHY DO I LOVE IT!? I have goosebumps now and I don't know wat pop culture reference to make. (R.L.stine's Goosebumps, Are you Afraid of the Dark, Stephen King, or the Twilight Zone) I'm going to..lay down now. Great job Lost. Keep on making awesome fan fic vid..(falls on bed asleep holding a Okami plushy) P.S. #Luigi'sManshionIsAwesome! ....../)

[@ciiath]

me: looks at a bunch of happy ending fanfics also me: HECK NO, I NEED SOME SCARY STUFF

[@juicyorange3940]

OMC lost that was well spoken truly terrifying and fantastic. 😳😳😳

[@crowders1107]

I love when u read these stories there so suspenseful

[@revaslatts8011]

Can you please make a video where Twilight Sparkle meets you? You can play yourself while Magpie plays Twilight. C'mon, Curse Word, I'll be your best friend! 😊

[@annesmith5539]

I kinda thought it was weird that they didn't mention Apple Bloom when talking about who lived on the farm, but I didn't think she'd be dead.

[@bexwolfe9227]

One of my favourite darkfics

[@harrisonblanck4658]

So the cutie mark crusaders weren't the villains it was something else... creepy.

[@opheliathebeequeen562]

I'm loving this

[@wingedchickadee4909]

This was awesome!

[@liamdalemon1525]

Wait, why is my bed warm and why does it smell like pee?