Rainbow Factory [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

[@thelostnarrator]

Want more Rainbow Factory? Check out the newest fanfic reading that won the 10th Anniversary RF Writing Contest! kzbin.info/www/bejne/n6rKd6xjpbioqc0

[@tootired4thisbs]

Listening to this as I wait for the video to be uploaded!

[@littleowl22778]

Wow its been a decade since this was written by the amazing author, Wow! Where has the time gone? I just finished re-listening to this video as I got a little bit into the premiere of the winning sequel fic story reading, narrowing ( pun foal'ly intended 😂, oh don't me mind me, I've just mare'ly been in the punoney mood neightly ;), honestly I don't know whats goaten in to me haha) I hope you like my attempted jokes😅 & that you can understand what I'm trying to spell pun- equine wise. 😊

[@littleowl22778]

Also, I recently finished an entire review take, taking apart what was the horseland 3 seasons and the next video recommended is called Ranking EVERY episode of My Little Pony, Friendship is magic, with 200+ on the thumbnail, and it's 3:43:50 minutes long. I know it's technically should be split into hrs,min's,sec's but its late, I'm not the best ay math, and honestly I can't be assed to gather the last few collective brain cells to work it out into words lol. But I sure as will probably watch it at some point like.

[@tateschell4761]

why is Dash always insane or killed/tortured in every fanfic??

[@maniacapril6060]

taryn schell because reasons

[@screwball2721]

taryn schell Because Rainbow Dash is the coolest

[@kalicokat9967]

Ashlyn Raines Holy crap we have the same name aside from the "es" lol 😜

[@anthonyrape]

taryn schell because she's more likely to be crazy or die than the other ones not including that yellow one.

[@Natalie66796]

taryn schell I feel bad for her in everything she either dues or is a psychopath

[@sutomuarashi]

Unpopular-ish opinion, but i don't see anything wrong with Dash's character in this fic whatsoever. She is the element of loyalty, which how I see it makes the fanfiction all the more terrifying, someone who embodied a reliable older sister figure who wouldn't care about your death is much more scary than some random crazy person you've never met.

[@kitayawolfe1548]

To be completely fair, Dash's anger only really came when she saw that Scootaloo failed, even with her help. Think about it, she put so much time and effort into making sure that Scoot never ended up here, only to have it all be for nothing. I'd be pretty pissed, too. At that point, there was really nothing Dash could've done.

[@heiscute4207]

I even feel bad for Scootalo

[@mrs.alucard6669]

I see it as Dash embracing her Dark Side fully... because she's so afraid of failure?

[@bleakautomaton4808]

Who remembers the Dawn Somewhere version of Rainbow Factory? Still funny 😄

[@Thrackerzod8]

@@bleakautomaton4808 lol i watched that version first, before the actual creepypasta

[@peepcrafts2135]

That moment when you relize the person who made the story was named aurora and the pony who's wings broke was named aurora.

[@ChokaSpoka]

I think it was their oc

[@CeoOfTheBOIS]

0_o

[@scarlettgachafever233]

My name is Aurora

[@maximillian1109]

Ohh, self inserts.XD

[@suzannab4414]

Aurora is Auroras oc

[@PointyTooth]

33:35 I’ve been shook by how good the voicing is, omg. Sounds like the original rainbow dash.

[@Its_kipness]

What if it is?

[@pureviolet2742]

:o yes

[@h3llcat_01]

She's the voice actor of rainbow dash :)

[@sleepylinny_]

@@h3llcat_01 ashleigh ball would be so proud of thelostnarrator :')

[@unlikeable.1554]

@@h3llcat_01 *DEATH*

[@KalinosOfficialAccount]

Rainbow: Any final words..? Scoot: *Gets close to Rainbows ear and whispers* "...It's free real estate..."

[@Frankenweenier]

inkwid whyyyy 😭😂😂😂

[@LudicrousTorpedo]

( Me behind RD shoots her with a *HEADSHOT* )

[@TheLethalArtist]

XDDDD YESSSSSS THANK YOU!!!!! 😂😂👌

[@kechiko]

underrated comment lmao

[@imperiumCirca41]

Js hi sshsisyizUIshsishsis

[@kristenscherer2982]

rainbow: any last words? scootaloo: you have beautiful eyes. rainbow:well thank you! scootaloo pushes her in. scootaloo: TAST THE RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@artandrandomness339]

High Fivers) I thought that too XD

[@galacticwolf8587]

Feel the rainbow Taste The Rainbow Skittles

[@lrloulou844]

Kristen Scherer lol

[@maniCARNY]

taste

[@magicanimal176production5]

Lol!

[@unnamed1613]

RD: "Any last words?" Scoots: "Do you know what happens when you hit a chicken?" RD: *confused* "What?" *Chickennoises closing in from a distance* Scoots: "You done goofed"

[@admiralstone2456]

Ah, a man of culture, I see.

[@maryjasmine3634]

😂😂👁👄👁

[@Reboppin]

G o o d e n d ?

[@Dusk_Mightyena]

I had to play a lot of Smash Bros. just to learn that

[@Rikkity]

Yes UNLEASH THE CUCKOO!

[@mariaaa7714]

- Any last words kid ? - " I don't even recognise your rainbow mane when you hide yourself in that mask of shame " - What the ? - "You don't even deserve those wings you bear ...." - You know what, just go away .

[@TheOfficalPebbleKirishima0624]

That song is bomb (Pegasus device)

[@angelicsakura4928]

"You Use To Be A Legend And A Righteous Mare" I Was Just Listening To That Song

[@TheOfficalPebbleKirishima0624]

@@angelicsakura4928 all of the failures help to fuel success and the bloody and visceral weather game of chess

[@rainbowrenegade1479]

@@TheOfficalPebbleKirishima0624 so you'll sit upon your throne and you'll roll your diamond dice then you'll send us all to die in your pegasus device

[@hankhoses8668]

@@rainbowrenegade1479 In the Rainbow Factory where fears and horrors come true. In the Rainbow factory where not a single soul gets through. In the Rainbow Factory where failures pay their toll... Now I've awoken and I'm taking back control.

[@danielthemaniel1697]

Dash: Any last words? Scoot: You have your mother's eyes

[@confirmedworm]

LPShub yyyyaaaassssss!

[@TheBest-yr8ej]

LPShub I CRIIIII 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

[@theedoomslayerofficial1143]

LPShub what duh fahk

[@osmondfar2]

And they were always too FUCKING CLOSE TOGETHER!!!! *Escapes and kills Dashie*

[@HELLS1NFERNO]

Ohmylordthankyou.

[@CocoaBeans101]

RBD:I DID LOVE YOU!!! I THOUGHT YOU EVERYTHING I KNOW IN HOPING YOU PASS!!!YOU FAILED ME!!! What I thought:YOU HAD ONE JOB!!!

[@bradleybrown9920]

DJ D3RPY Failure: Goddangit rainbow!

[@zachwrenn]

Deme taught*

[@crazycrafter9309]

HAHAHAHHAHAHA!! XD XD

[@Kitsune54333]

Damn this hit hard

[@sandsandlovesand3181]

*listens to reading* *remembers that Pinkie tasted the rainbows at the factory in that one episode (Sonic Rainboom I think???)* Me: Huh. That's pretty terrifying.

[@cupcakepheonix1425]

omg xD

[@Duke-Orgulje]

Pinkies a cannibal O_O

[@yourfriend5883]

@@Duke-Orgulje PiNkAmEaNa cUpCaKeS...

[@midnightscarletrose6485]

Did everyone forget about Cupcakes lol. Pinky is a loveable cute Cannibal lol

[@rose_akira8735]

SAND SAND LOVE SAND .....Oh...god...cannibalism?? Maybe the give the leftover bodies to Pinkamena hehehe

[@rainbowfactorydash6193]

"I'd rather be exiled from a place that treats ponies like this then live my whole life while others don't live theirs" -Orion. What inspiring words.

[@Treyway11]

U killed scootaloo sooo 🔪 any last words?? Wut u thought something was here?

[@-R4B1D]

Give me a cup of your rainbow juice *NOW*

[@wes3996]

@@-R4B1D or draw 100

[@kickrocks4081]

Will you get me a blow torch and some more peanut butter

[@scootalooandfuntimefreddy1195]

fun time factory freddy

[@Leaf_Honey]

RAINBOW DASH: SO ANY LAST WORDS SCOOT? Scootaloo : I.... I shat myself.

[@bradleybrown9920]

Leaf the leafeon Yo, scootaloo. that is just weird!

[@xxthexdarkxdragonxxthedark4508]

I'M DYING XD

[@YuckCanuck]

They don't wear pants... Clean up on aisle death.

[@Duke-Orgulje]

OH MY GOD!!! I’M DYING!!! XDD

[@glorious_funtime_pain5594]

this is the best one

[@sweetgumstudios8512]

When the video ended i saw a rainbow outside my window

[@cathleenzhang6997]

😱

[@danielthemaniel1697]

Omg it's Scootaloo's rainbow…

[@angeldrawsreannesings2711]

...o.o... T~T rip scoots

[@tydyman2003]

sally wilson lol jesus

[@dior61]

sally wilson You aren't even a fucking pony 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@trademark7596]

*insert rainbow factory theme here*

[@aachidouin1542]

Rainbow factory

[@ariesrenae4163]

I wanna job there!

[@ajojosreference3085]

@Dubstep The Furry, remind me to avoid you.

[@ariesrenae4163]

@@ajojosreference3085 why? 😈

[@ajojosreference3085]

@Dubstep The Furry nothing against you in particular, I’d just like to keep my color where it belongs.

[@vengeance4927]

Alternative ending: Scootaloo disregards love and failure because friends and success are more important. She completes her test and passes, forgets about Orion and Aurora, and never has to go through the pain.

[@Thewavedemonjackal]

There’s an au like that where she passes her test and works at the rainbow factory

[@vengeance4927]

@@Thewavedemonjackal Oh cool

[@achillesisagamer875]

@@Thewavedemonjackal where can i find this i would love to read this

[@Thewavedemonjackal]

@@achillesisagamer875 it’s a tumblr thing called “ask rainbow factory scootaloo. But some dubs of it on KZbin. Look up “Ask Rainbow factory scootaloo” and it should be one of the first videos you see.

[@achillesisagamer875]

@@Thewavedemonjackal okay thank you!

[@ChrissyL0v3]

I finally realized the meaning of the song with scoots and the "yellow pony" about them trying to escape the rainbow factory.

[@inactive6730]

Chrissy L0v3 was it the magpi pony one??

[@chicken9372]

Who's the yellow pony?what happen? How? I don't watch my little pony anymore ;-;

[@inactive6730]

@@chicken9372 her name is aurora, named after the person who wrote the grimdark. She isn't a cannon character in the show.

[@kmperriz]

I guess she's LOYAL to her job because she don't show mercy doing it

[@carameltherelorian2544]

Damn bro

[@mrdabrow]

*doesn't

[@ari-burr2401]

Woah-

[@Nahkoma81]

Right so right

[@verystupid6728]

Ranbow Dash: Any last words,Scootalo? Scootalo:Only one, YOU STUPID PEGASUS, I TOUGHT YOU LOVED MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Random pegasus:What?

[@bradleybrown9920]

iNebulaz _Playz Sonic"but a Pegasus": *kicks Rainbow away*

[@revaslatts8011]

Ohhh man! Poor little Scootaloo could've been killed. 😔

[@beatriceretops]

@@revaslatts8011 she was

[@sunshinemilkshake9152]

When you realize they all would’ve passed if Aurora’s wings didn’t pop out of place: 👁👄👁

[@silly_eevee]

Mhm

[@missingtvhead1943]

We should blame the wings

[@Thewavedemonjackal]

Wasn’t she the one who was mentioned to be sick at the beginning? They said it was Hoof and Wing. Maybe that affected her wings?

[@Cottagecat2368]

💀 you right

[@yummy-i8e]

ok but who tf is aurora

[@Omgeeve3]

“Any last words?” Me: according to all laws of aviation there is no way a b- *they murder me on the spot*

[@tulikachatterjee8787]

Kinda like in among us lol ( • ~ •)

[@bluebip9080]

@@tulikachatterjee8787 lol true XD

[@tulikachatterjee8787]

Thanks

[@savannahashley9120]

“Any last words?” Me: The fitness gram pacer test-

[@amandadepuy3984]

"Any last words?" Me:✨We've come to talk to you about your cars extended warranty✨

[@SuavelySeaTurtle]

Rainbow: any last words Scootaloo: FLINT LOCKWOOD

[@LyzzaVirus]

Cop Carl noises incoming 😆☠️

[@pokeyunicorn_4837]

*flints food rocket comes flying in and shoots cheeseburgers at dashie*

[@mrholeio3060]

*LINT FLOCKWOOD*

[@tulikachatterjee8787]

CHEESESPIDER...ATTACK!!!!

[@x0electricspinel0x]

*RUNS TOWARDS RAINBOW DASH OFFICER EARL STYLE*

[@thezambambo2184]

"In the Rainbow Factory,where fears and horrors come true,in the Rainbow Factory,where not a single soul gets through."

[@ThyKingith]

*all ponies dance in the factory crying softly*

[@bluebip9080]

Me: Ha! Jokes on you, Rainbow Factory doesn't exist in our world!... *Sweats nervously*

[@scootalooandfuntimefreddy1195]

in the fun time factory where fears and horrors come true in the fun time factory where not a single soul gets through

[@M4X6672]

wait lol-

[@scootalooanddreadduckies774]

@@scootalooandfuntimefreddy1195 thank you orion

[@lrloulou844]

Rainbow: Any last words Scoot: Yes, taste the rainbow Scoot throws skittles at her Rainbow: let's use these instead Both: YAY

[@killer-1862]

XD

[@beatriceretops]

Lol i love this

[@cuterose9376]

Yes 👍 😂

[@Rainestorm999]

Good ending

[@ill8694]

Rainbow dash: Any last words? Scoots : You have something in your teeth

[@come_home_killua9735]

Or more like “your breath stinks”

[@toxicstar9413]

Lmao

[@come_home_killua9735]

@@toxicstar9413 but it’s true

[@Treyway11]

Oop

[@skylarfeuerborn9799]

"I tried so hard!" AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MAAAATTTTRERRR!

[@twitchdemon]

Skylar Feuerborn beautiful

[@dawdle9175]

Skylar Feuerborn Linkin Park :3

[@recorddipp9099]

I sang that in my mind when I heard that.

[@artistica-artyc.9210]

I HAD TO FALLLL TO LOSE IT ALLLLLL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MAAAAAATTEEEEEERR

[@uhpurrple]

Skylar Feuerborn BSIWIDHOABSVZISLWH THATS SUCH A GOOIID SOOOOOOONG

[@najminnessa781]

*Insert "You have beautiful eyes" joke here*

[@Soup_hugz]

“You have beautiful eyes” “Why thank you!” “They remind me of my boyfriend!”

[@tulikachatterjee8787]

Did i loose my self up in those a-e-a-e-eyessss

[@tisashorter2494]

RD: Any last words.... SCOOT: I ship you with applejack RD: Fu*k you

[@bobert538]

Rainbow dash: now scootaloo, don’t touch that cactus. Scootaloo: *touches cactus* Rainbow dash: 39:59

[@ohhellofuckoffyoutube]

How dare you !😂

[@bobert538]

Lavender Games 😂

[@ohhellofuckoffyoutube]

@@bobert538 hi :)

[@bobert538]

Lavender Games hi

[@bluebip9080]

Asdf movie reference :D

[@axolotlapricotl]

Now I don't want to know how skittles are made XD

[@GerthuyaRana]

Hehe ❤️

[@alyssasanchez9682]

hahaha your really funny hahahaha

[@taylorh1872]

*Twisted Grin* Taste the Rainbow!!

[@skibblez4822]

:3

[@poisonweb773]

Taste the rainbow ❤️💛💚💙💜

[@xLunarRosesx_Willow]

I feel the ending line is very powerful emotionally. Rainbow Dash: any final words? you miserable, horribal fool" Scootaloo: "You have beautiful eyes..." The fact that even in her final moments scootaloo couldn't help but quite literly look up to RD in such a way tells a lot about the two characters, as Rainbow Dash is the element of Loyalty and taught Scootaloo everything she knew probably on a moral stand base as well, it never once describes her hating RD but only being heartbroken. I think it'd be very interesting to see more from Rainbow Dashes perspective in the situation and life with the rainbow factory Edit:yes I'm looking way too deep in a my little pony creepypasta

[@xLunarRosesx_Willow]

@@midwich14717 :0 I MUST DISCOVER THANK YOU INTERNET STRANGER

[@hopesrainbowworld1130]

Scoot’s not mad, she’s just disappointed

[@raccmeta]

Nothing like a good creepypasta to put you to sleep :)

[@ForgottenDaydreamer]

I know right!! ^-^

[@artisticcomedypones9272]

Candi Lilz ikr! Especially if it's ur favorite one :)

[@openchestyt4745]

Candi Lilz i know right and..... Am i the only 10 year old BOY here

[@xiorez]

Candi Lilz yes 👌👌

[@xiorez]

Openchest Yt I'm 12 o

[@Iaem129]

The voice acting in this is top fucking tier. My God. I could feel the emotion, the pain, the fear, the anger in all of the voices. So professionally made and accurate. Well done Lost, and everyone else who worked on it.

[@ScreamCheese69]

"I...love you too.." AHHH MY HEART... it gets me every time.

[@Acelynn.s]

Is that a reference to a blooper

[@honeybee4144]

anybody else thinking of when pinkie tasted the rainbow in that one episode? 0_0

[@goobertube505]

Spiiiiiiiiiiicy!!! Rd: "(chuckles) yeah rainbows aren't really known for their flavour" THEIR MEANT FOR THEIR INGREDIENTS

[@lewifeoftord4826]

yes, now i know why the rainbows are so sour....

[@alexislaktin2481]

MiniKitty40 omg help

[@TheBest-yr8ej]

MiniKitty40 OH FUDGEEE!!!!!

[@thatoneweaboo5772]

MiniKitty40 yep... Very disturbed now.

[@someedgyhorseartist3131]

I just realized how much Orion's hair looks like bacon I had to say it

[@kittehfaux7159]

It is bacon.

[@lokiwintersoldier6954]

Mr.Fox indeed

[@fandomfortress2820]

i cant unsee it.. shit

[@dr.atmospherehide830]

Ikr

[@mamabear2847]

OMG IT DOES ...... DAMNIT now im hungry for bacon

[@BigMikiBerry]

"u have beautiful eyes" "are you gay" "shush"

[@Idk-kp7os]

LMAOOO

[@Idk-kp7os]

@Destiny Bujanowski LOL

[@Idk-kp7os]

@Destiny Bujanowski PLS SAME

[@KatOwO2235]

ok, I'm not a pony fan, but I did get into The Rainbow Factory and it's sequel The Pegasus Device can you read The Pegasus Device?

[@ow5929]

I also want her to

[@jusky_]

PD took like 3-5 hours for me to read. It would be a long video.

[@revaslatts8011]

THERE'S A SEQUEL!!!!! SEND ME A LINK RIGHT NOW!

[@xolli5450]

PataponCreeper I can relate. I don’t like MLP but I like MLP creepypasta

[@lunahetfield]

PataponCreeper when i was a little kid I thought Rainbow Factory was an actual episode in mlp, i didnt know that it was a creepypasta, so apparently that was my first exposure to creepypasta. Yt recommended it to me i kinda got nightmares from it, but i loved it thxs yt

[@sugarquill1015]

Awwww HECK nawww dat ending!!!! HECK. NO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! *Blurts out a bunch of cuss words*

[@ribathefox3668]

Sugar Quill 101 CALM DOWN! CALM DOWN! DONT BREAK THAT! (Smashing noises) oh dear... WHAT!! (Throws vase at me) OOF!!!!! (Gets knocked out)

[@rachelwhite4950]

Some random 14 year old XD XD

[@theprehistoricplayer3553]

Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep

[@Jroobelucios]

I don't even get what happened... cliffhanger much

[@casda5226]

Sugar Quill is that amethyst star

[@Lemonbackup]

RD: Any last words? Me: Your not a cool potato RD: ....

[@bradleybrown9920]

Sugar Lemon Oh Snap!

[@zoewr5428]

Sugar Lemon SAVAGE!!!!

[@bradleybrown9920]

ZodiacKitten *high hooves*

[@zoewr5428]

*hoof bumps u*

[@bradleybrown9920]

ZodiacKitten 😎

[@themintfox8937]

I love how when Rainbow Dash says “Rainbows” you can just hear the unstableness in her voice. Bravo 👏 👏 👏

[@cerystalgaming84]

is it weird that Pinkie Pie tasted a rainbow in the show?

[@infiniteego]

Nah

[@spaceuchiha3329]

Idk

[@jaspernavall8204]

*spicy*

[@revaslatts4301]

I believe the correct word would be disturbing!

[@Aleson94]

Pinkie really “tasted the rainbow” I wonder if it tasted like skittles

[@momoplays9669]

I love how all this is just to make rainbows.))

[@scarletnight4554]

it's not just for that (even if the other reason isn't completely justifiable)

[@GhostGaming-lg7ub]

scarlet night say it so we can call you a monster yet secretly agree

[@scarletnight4554]

+Ghost Gaming for the pride of the flock I believe is what dr.atmosphere more or less said in the sequel "pegasus device", the flock referring to cloudsdale, the reason they have the flight tests is to rule out what pegasi are and aren't fit to fly, and the reason they exile those who aren't deemed fit is so they wouldn't taint cloudsdale's name and pride (and after the workers at the factory needed "resources" after finding out they could kill other pegasi and extract spectra from their bodies, they had one last use for the failures,hell the flight tests existed probably long before luna was exiled to the moon)

[@GhostGaming-lg7ub]

scarlet night I would agree but I don't know a lot of the things you mentioned because Im not a brony Im a proxy

[@TheBest-yr8ej]

Cutter Heart amd of course your profile pic is frkken pinkie pie, lol sorry i jest watched the reading of cupcake :b

[@mercedeswalt6621]

Very well done! Although, I always wished the original story would have had some of the foals escaping to whistleblow the factory. It just felt that with Scootaloo’s plan, Orion’s compassion and Aurora’s sacrifice that there should have been some element of a good ending. But then, I suppose it wouldn’t be a grimdark. My favorite was Dr. Atmosphere and your crazy Rainbow Dash.

[@perfectlybalanced8995]

If canon Rainbow Dash found out about this. I can’t imagine the kind of suffering she would inflict on RF Rainbow Dash

[@MadhuCatlover]

She would sonic boom her 😁

[@justjay205]

Rainbow dash: "Time to die!" Me: *loads gun* "Not today."

[@uglebeffus]

LittleMissDarkness RD: I SAID DIE, POTATO!!!!

[@radarvis295]

Me: *aims at LMD with 50 cal sniper rifle on rist* not on my watch

[@magicanimal176production5]

Yep.

[@Duke-Orgulje]

Asdf movie reference?! XD

[@CeoOfTheBOIS]

dispatch, call in air support.

[@Weebooyah]

A rainbows tale isn't quite as nice, as the story we knew of sugar and spice, but a rainbows easy once you get to know it... with the help and the magic of the PEGASUS DEVICE!

[@superfluffysheepgaming7363]

Fullmetal Alchemist in the rainbow factory where your fears and horrors come true in the rainbow factory where not a single soul gets through ×2

[@Acelynn.s]

Now let's delve deeper into rainbow philosophy. Far beyond that of cloudsdale mythology. It easy to misjudge that floating city. With it alurring decor

[@CammieDragon]

and social psycology

[@hankhoses8668]

But with all great things comes a great responsibility that of Cloudsdale being weather stability, how you ask are they up to the task to which the answer is in a simple facility.

[@robloxfan1290]

In the rainbow factory where your fears and horrors come true

[@itsjustmenova]

28:33 The door slamming made me jump, fall off my chair, and rip my headphones out of the headphone jack These sound effects are so good, they definitely improve the atmosphere

[@gvilla004437]

When I watch that part it got interrupted by an Arby's commercial

[@tododeku8591]

I just hear “ smoking has consequences “

[@silly_eevee]

@@gvilla004437 WE HAVE THE MEATS

[@fishstx5897]

"You degenerates" Me: *Drv3 flashbacks*

[@user-fh9pg7jh8f]

Degenerate 𝓶𝓪𝓵𝓮𝓼

[@knownmints]

DEGENERATE MALES

[@revaslatts4301]

I'm outta here now

[@thedirtgods3963]

@@suraimubugbearcosplay3421 GUNDHAM IS THAT YOU?!?!?!

[@midnightplayz7998]

am I the only one who realizes when they leave the carriage when they arrived at the rainbow factory they could've flew and left away from that place and ultimately escape their deaths

[@lunargames5246]

Nope, or attack and get those tasers and start beating ponies with it. But it's a story and called logic most when they see someone dressed in pure black after some guy says "I'm just handed lots of money to deliver you guys and keep quite" would say "Fuck this shit, See ya Bitches!" and take off. But they don't because. . . .plot. Usually how it goes, because plot. Also pigment can be created by taking and boiling then letting dry then crushing into dust any naturally occurring object like flowers, leaves, bugs, etc, etc. also in a world with magic why not give it to the unicorns? they raised the moon and sun before making rainbows should be easy. But. . . history of pigments aside. Yeah most would've said F-this and left who'd want to live in a racist/ego city anyway? also what happens if your a Pegasus turned alicorn and fail the test? would they kill a god like a literal god? or if two Pegasus give birth to a unicorn would they have to do like twlight where she made wings for rarity since by birth that pony is a Pegasus? More questions then answer for me

[@thrackerzod6097]

They would've simply been chased down, they're children whom failed their flight test, up against guards whom have likely had to deal with ponies trying such things beforehand.

[@Coco-yp4ly]

Midnight Playz your right

[@xonxt7479]

they have tasers

[@kayzagiles2296]

Aroua couldn't have

[@lpsparadise9874]

Dash: Any last words? Scootaloo:...TASTE THE RAINBOW! Dash:Nope. "Throws in" scootaloo: YOU WILL TASTE THAT RAINBOW. "Pulls in" Dash:NOOOOOOOO I DONT WANNA TASTE THE RAINBOW!!!!!!! They melt they end.

[@Natalie66796]

Lps Paradise skittles are made from mlp pony's confirmed

[@bradleybrown9920]

Lps Paradise helps *dash and scootaloo* nopony is going to taste da Rainbow!

[@kittokattxx]

you mean ^helps scootaloo and not dash because dash is terrible* Dash is going to

[@bradleybrown9920]

Hopeful The Fairy Kitten *Bitch slaps* Nopony corrects meh!!! °^°

[@EB-vb7uz]

Lps Paradise 😯😵

[@panicatthepityparty8377]

Do these places ever get health inspections XD

[@atlasbread]

Dr. (Whatever his name was): Dont fall behind or my helpers will have to "motivate you" Me: Lemme guess, you want to motivate them with a *_controlled shock_* Edit after 2 years: I'm gonna be completely honest i have no recollection of this comment

[@raineblackstar3522]

Got em.

[@tododeku8591]

I-

[@crimsonshade5441]

Mission accomplished Thats right we got em artoo Trying to put a FNAF referance without us noticing

[@revaslatts4301]

Sister Location!

[@Thebutterflydancer]

Im here to WAKE YOU UP AFTER 5 YEARS hehe~

[@theprehistoricplayer3553]

Life lesson: Eat M&M’s and not Skittles.

[@wyhko1398]

o h 👍

[@mrholeio3060]

Hell ya

[@exoticalpha039]

Contact the rainbow...Taste the rainbow! Me: Hell naw! To the naw naw naw!

[@revaslatts4301]

Don't eat skittles? I don't get that warning at all! Oh no, ARE THEY MADE OF RAINBOWS TOO?!?!

[@dawnfrazier34]

my name is Aurora and when he said my name I jumped because that scared me.

[@gabrielchristner2245]

Then why is your name dawn Frazier

[@akkioama3939]

Gabriel Christner right?

[@tulikachatterjee8787]

Akkio Ama i know right

[@adey5042]

She can make her username whatever she wants, it doesn’t have to be Aurora

[@FreeKickMaestro]

@@adey5042 or probably because it's a kid using his dad's account

[@kuvitella8966]

My friend: “Watcha listening to?” Me: “My Little Pony...” Her: “Your a little old don’t you thi- ......**slowly walks out**

[@CammieDragon]

crap

[@THEKOSZMAR77]

I like to rewatch this solely for Rainbow Dash voice. Someone really nailed it.

[@v0id3d_st4rs]

RD: “Any last Words?“ Scootaloo: “Feel the rainbow, Taste the rainbow” *Stuffs a hoof-full of skittles into RD’s face*

[@LukasEqualsZero]

Hey who wanna know how skittles are made? *twisted grin* edit: can people stop replying to this i commented this 4 years ago as an edgy 11 year old edit: its been 7 YEARS PLZ IM A GROWN MAN NOW😭😭

[@msbluelovespurple]

NOPE *Jetpacks away*

[@RobloxianGamerzz]

Yes plz (puts on skittles hat) (grabs pack of skittles)

[@thecolorpurple4807]

Here's how it goes. A pony gets slaughtered in Stalingrad; City of Blood. It then gets covered by Nikolai's Vodka. It gets into little pieces and that's how it's made.

[@meganatkinson395]

seriously!!!! I'm eating a pack of skittles right now

[@Leaf_Honey]

I know how they are made, rainbow dashs pee flavors them..wait *looks on table* I'm eating skittles right now! AWHWHWHWHW!! IM EATING RAINBOW DASHS PEE!!!!!!

[@calebunga7271]

get out of mah shed! %2 of people will get that reference

[@shadyguywithshadeswhosells7786]

The-MehBurgers ! I did

[@cringeonaccident9682]

The-MehBurgers ! the Simpsons?

[@AustinDreemuur]

Shed.mov

[@semiautomatic.companion]

The-MehBurgers ! i did

[@vvda1483]

Shed.mov I think

[@genesisrail]

That Rainbow Dash impression is spot-on

[@Kickback2108]

I've been a Brony for 4 years...and this is the first time I've experienced this fic in it's pure form . No songs No parodies Just the real thing and man was it every bit as horrifyingly entertainin' as it was made out to be It's currently 11:46PM down here in 'Straya and this was a horrible decision. So glad I made it

[@Cuntypostaldude]

There are songs you imbecile

[@revaslatts4301]

There actually are songs and parodies.

[@charlesneal5268]

Me too

[@NobodysHere_Imalreadyinside]

​@@revaslatts4301We know..?

[@shiningarmourluna4ever662]

24:54, "I'm one of the four Colts in this factory". A colt is a baby male horse, under the age of 5. Unless he is a giant baby, the word you meant to say was "stallions".

[@shiningarmourluna4ever662]

I feel like I'll be correcting a lot

[@applepiecomics3835]

ShiningArmour&Luna 4ever oooh burn

[@yodabear6145]

Any last words, Scootaloo? I should have... twerked more...

[@kaz-ij7pw]

Silverfox HAHAHA Lolz

[@Leaf_Honey]

I AGREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@ezioautordegranday555]

Silverfox I'd ws rainbow dash

[@shaunibabe1]

yall are nasty u like pony ass

[@julianneh-h5307]

gross

[@furu2068]

Dash: Any last words? Scootaloo: You have beautiful eyes no homo

[@lpssparklecake4406]

"GET THE FUCK ONTO THAT FEILD,BEFORE I FAIL YOU MYSELF!"I love that scene 😂

[@lisaafuang7402]

😆

[@crowsmask8905]

😂😂😂😂😂 gotta love Guitiu

[@verystupid6728]

And heres another joke Rainbow Dash:Any last words,Scootalo? Scootalo:Ya, Play Five Night at Freddys, Pretty good game.

[@bradleybrown9920]

iNebulaz _Playz Pinkamena: Oh Hell No! *dies in The Pegasus device*

[@nopurple7972]

It's scootaloo

[@sonofcthulu8772]

Another joke RD:any last words Scootaloo: *YA LIKE JAZZ*

[@revaslatts4301]

@@sonofcthulu8772 That's it, I'm about to quit life! *jumps into the Pegasus Device while blindfolded*

[@pinkanenome4934]

(24:48) "I'm one of the four colts" A colt is a male horse under the age of four. - Littleshy

[@tododeku8591]

There are only four boys...

[@TheDnDTavern]

This was so damn good. Ive tried listening to any grimedark storys but never managed to listen to them all the way through. Finally been able to listen to this

[@emissary8071]

.........I read this story 2 years ago. Now i'm watching this. I'm going to have nightmares again...............dear celestia....

[@alyssasanchez9682]

hahaha I don't get nightmares that easy

[@brainffulf]

+Alyssa Sanchez same lol

[@alyssasanchez9682]

+Paintmotion The Pietato Queen do u like the rainbow factory

[@brainffulf]

+Alyssa Sanchez yeah I like it but I personally like human(?) creepy pastas more.. Idk why though

[@alyssasanchez9682]

+Paintmotion The Pietato Queen idk I love creepy pastas I just wanted to ask u

[@DulyDownward]

Oh id love to know how skittles are made now >:D

[@DulyDownward]

UNLESS THEY INVOLVE SCOOTALOO

[@alexislaktin2481]

Erin Cogan you mean chicken

[@ribathefox3668]

Sonica The Cat 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

[@dearestkitten503]

AND IT TASTE DELICIOUS!

[@sonofcthulu8772]

A giraffe who eats a rainbow and has a Jamaican man milk it and boom *SKITTLES*

[@saucyluis7249]

that rainbow dash voice sounds exactly like her

[@AntechamberVAL]

On a binge of watching these readings atm. Super underrated concept that needs more attention

[@xxashesxx5430]

same lol

[@maximumbirdage8440]

i like the ammount of cursing even from the children :3

[@niscuits]

MaximumBirdage There teenagers

[@Dark-goosey]

@@niscuits is correct you know

[@itsmenyandog3871]

Theyre teens

[@mrdabrow]

It was just funny

[@lupinhallow9697]

I'm just here thinking why the hell didn't they run away when they all failed Like they could have lived They had a chance to escape But nooooo exiling sounds cool so let's do that

[@dawdle9175]

Lupin Hallow XD

[@gustavofring7254]

Yeah and when Scootaloo went through the vent down, all the ponies in the suit were walking. So she could have just flown above them! The suits were probably too heavy to fly in anyways .

[@lildinosaur5051]

No please not a cliffhanger I need to know what happens !!! does scootaloo die or live

[@scarletnight4554]

Lil Dinosaur she lives, there's a sequel by the same author, it's called "Pegasus device", it's an amazing story, you should read it

[@lildinosaur5051]

+scarlet night THANKS ALOT 😊😘

[@scarletnight4554]

Lil Dinosaur it's kinda long though, just a heads up

[@lildinosaur5051]

scarlet night OK thanks

[@mr.cup6yearsago211]

Lil Dinosaur I think scootaloo lives. Not sure tho.

[@myvideos37]

OMG Rainbow Dash's voice actor almost sounds exactly like the real deal!

[@raineblackstar3522]

Lost really sounds like her, huh?

[@glendaleegonzalez3274]

@@raineblackstar3522 yup. :D

[@janellehenry9698]

RD: Any last word Me:let me guess I hate u Scootaloo:...You have beautiful eyes Me: wait what 😂worlds best last words

[@scarletnight4554]

those weren't scootaloo's last words

[@flo-we9wu]

*Aurora falls and breaks her wings* Me: "Dat crunch doe" 😂

[@xxthexdarkxdragonxxthedark4508]

RD:Any last words Scoot?Tell my mom... I-I, I ate the last cookie...

[@beatriceretops]

RD: WHAT THAT IS TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU’RE WORSE THAN ME!!!!!!!!!!! UGH! GIVE BACK THE COOKIES 🍪 BEFORE YOU DIE PLEASE!!

[@ponyempiresunite9702]

RD: Any last words. Me: Can you itch my back.

[@exetior.6669]

That's the best Rainbow Dash fan voice I've ever heard!!!!😨

[@MollyMargolisBillCipherIsBae]

"Aurora starts with the test, but pretty much right away she breaks one wing, dislocates the other, and chips FOUR TEETH. She does all of this during freefall, which I'm pretty sure was impossible beforehand." -Rainbow Dash Presents

[@MollyMargolisBillCipherIsBae]

Also, I had no idea that Orion was so Heroic...

[@SuavelySeaTurtle]

Everyone. The sequel is called Pegasus Device. Btw scoot-my-boots doesn’t die.

[@MichaelJones-rz5sw]

Is it an actual sequel or is it a fan made sequel. Because a lot of these more famous mlp creepypastas always have a lot of fan spin offs or sequels not made by the orginal author.

[@y.9645]

is even canon tho???

[@aceirish8630]

@@MichaelJones-rz5sw it's by the original author, and I actually find it better than the first, brings a lot more info on what's really going on

[@amandajohnson811]

Rd: any last words; Scootaloo: Tell your my mum i love her!!!!!!!

[@couqhdrop]

This is why I study for all of my tests...

[@Sinister_Shortee]

"Three hooves pointed down." How can the hooves even point DOWN?

[@rainbowrenegade1479]

I think they moved downwards

[@shalandaelder6232]

@@rainbowrenegade1479 XD

[@ambernodderdorket2934]

Clench your fist into a ball. Flick your wrist down.

[@NomDatNom]

Does Scootaloo survive!?!?! You can't just leave us hanging like that..:-(

[@scarletnight4554]

there's a sequel called "pegasus device", information of scootaloo's fate is explained (eventually)

[@itreallyhurtswhenipee]

Fearlessheartgirl Rulez u has rainbow kitty profile pic

[@French_Fry]

I don't even remember my past, I don't remember who I used to be. I don't remember my friends of old, I don't remember my destiny. My mane is purple and my coat is orange, what I've become, I have no idea. I only know one simple thing, the name they gave me: Absentia -pegasus device by sylphstorm based of the sequel to this

[@revaslatts4301]

Fortunately, yes

[@amandadepuy3984]

Rainbow Dash: "Any last words?" Scootaloo: "The Fitness Gram pacer test is a-" *automatically dies*

[@dakotatolley1819]

"Fluttershy never even took her test" Bro, fluttershy straight up said "fuq dat shiz"

[@nickichambers9328]

She gets RD Friend privileges.

[@Kitsune54333]

I think because of Rainbow Dash she was never harmed

[@russellgxy2905]

That fact that I didn't cry once during this… I don't know whether to be concerned or not.

[@stickyicky5921]

neither did I

[@toxicityf3468]

I didn't cry, but it made me sleep with a loaded Benelli M1014 and an Incendiary grenade.

[@scar9264]

At least you didn't smile and start laughing.... god, I must be so fucked in the head

[@bitchlasagna8821]

+Scar I know I didn't

[@eggost4076]

+Scar I did..... And my head twitched a tiny bit..... Also fucked in the head

[@rezialproductions5887]

I watched Cupcakes right before this, and I suddenly don't feel sorry for Rainbow Dash anymore....

[@asiandradash]

O_o Dafuq? I still feel sorry for Rainbow Dash. Is that a bad thing?

[@Duke-Orgulje]

Me too, yup

[@recorddipp9099]

I feel bad because most of the creepypastas have RD being the one killed.

[@idiomatic444]

I love these creepy things. They may not be scary, but they are amazing

[@SadInferno6669]

" i am Hoot- Scootaloo"

[@bigbangman99]

Dootaloo = Skull Trumpet confirmed

[@SadInferno6669]

***** XD

[@KarienMusic]

Why not inscribe certain words into the machine?

[@DulyDownward]

XD

[@ow5929]

Mang, I can't believe we're going to pony hell for nothing!

[@lime3041]

RD: any final words..? Scoot: I like skitles , "taste rainbow" RD: umm....yeah...no

[@Idk-kp7os]

LMAOO

[@beatriceretops]

Scoot: how dare you...

[@gr8atstuffgamer142]

Rainbow Dash:Any final words Scootaloo:Just plz dont vote for Donald Trump. Rainbow Dash:Shit, already did, sorry.

[@bradleybrown9920]

gr8atstuff Gamer Nuuuuu!!!!

[@dragonsrule148ajajpw9]

gr8atstuff Gamer lolololololol

[@juhakanko6206]

gr8atstuff Gamer SO U WANT KILLARY CLINTON?!!!?!?!?!!!!???!??!!

[@littlecloud1749]

HmMm hOw about raibOw DaSH aS prEsidEnt of ThE unItEd StAteS OF EMeRICa?? OwO

[@ScarletHuntress76]

gr8atstuff Gamer Ouch

[@alisonpilllover]

Im accualy so sorry for Scootalo,Her heart just got borken by the Pony she loved the most...AM I THE ONLYONE WHO CRYED?!;-;

[@HauntingHunters13]

I cried

[@moriottotry]

*the judges point they're hooves down* Me:Nope *flies to the east gate*

[@stephanieknoll5480]

That's..... The.. E... End.

[@bodden1969]

Steven Hill no read pegusis device

[@themysteriousblood1508]

This has been by far my most favorite MLP fanfic and the actors were flawless and when Orion died I had actually almost cried I would recommend this to anyone wanting to get good feels and get a great story with amazing actors

[@justsomeguy6350]

I agree, it’s a really good fanfic! This is one of my favorites yet.