nice. much better than the other video. not that there is alot i can evaluate. it does seem like alot of your tech is unintentional and your playing in response to mistakes (and idk short hop kinda seems difficult for you in scrap situations (edit- after re-watching, i notice you never sh out of shine, if its your style cool. if its not -get checked), and in a neutral situation you can short hop fine). but again most of this just comes with time. i think an interesting video idea, if your up to it, is to play someone for a few games and show some habbit that the opponent has. like if they like to fsmash or dash back grab alot, show them hitting that on you in an early game. and then show in later games your adaptation to punnish that habbit. -or some abstraction of this idea. combo videos are meh, cause at this point its like weve seen it all. but good job mang.