They Attacked A Hospital Ship... Earth Unleashed Its War Fleet | HFY Stories | HFY Sci-Fi Story

[@ronsindric4241]

As a one-time Chemistry Research Scientist, I have one comment/concern. My work was on new anti-malarial medications; the data, key samples and ancillary notes were copied no less than three times with the duplicates carefully hidden in safe and secure places. The data aboard the "NIGHTENFALE" was probably treated likewise. Stories like these are learning opportunities that should help enlighten reader - listeners as well as attempting to entertain people !

[@salnollola3020]

This story could've been told in half the time. Quality, not quantity.

[@markparrott114]

Another story where they stick the word quantum in front of everything! Please stop!

[@OneOutlander]

I had to stop. The same propaganda kept being repeated over and over, not word for word but the same concept The story would have been half the size if you got rid of the repetitions

[@kjellmesch8060]

Yep, unfortunately a common way of stretching out a 5 minute story to 20 minutes.

[@t.n.-js6ei]

Half? You give the script kiddie way too much credit.

[@jasomkovac9115]

Yup. Same thing, over and over.

[@jamesf333]

Concept was great, however I agree with the rest of the comments here, really poorly written. If a masterful pen restructured this, it could be a wonderful exploration of possibilities.

[@seanb9292]

Sounds like AI writing. Tends to restate certain portions constantly.

[@markschneider8815]

"I was holding the gun, and it just went off."

[@nancyburridge8785]

This needed a competent editor so badly. There is a viable story here but it isn't easy to see buried as it is under unneeded repetition and shallow plotting.

[@t.n.-js6ei]

Competent editor? Even an incompetent editor would do better then the dreck produced here.

[@netgod3com-FUYouTube]

@Galaxy Sci-Fi Stories Teach your AI voice that the "S" on the end of the word "debris" is silent, the word is pronounced "day-brie"! The repeated "Asterisk Nightingale Asterisk" was grating to hear. Do better or stop posting this AI generated crap, this particular niche has plenty of good and well written stories, more noise is not needed. Overall, this story feels like woke bullshit with a Sci-fi war / conflict theming overlayed.

[@frankolson3712]

i dont know if this story was good or bad, never finished it after 21:31 with another chen in the story and so many asterisk mentioned

[@t.n.-js6ei]

What KZbin desperately need to add to their report system is a checkbox for crappy AI produced stories like this one.

[@danielmussard2006]

too long, repetitive, use a word counter at the end to count how often the words quantum, comprehensive and advanced alone are used. A lot of room to improvement

[@khriswildt5633]

Once again you have a story that's really stupid because you start out saying how much further advanced this ship was and it ate through the shields like butter and then all of a sudden you got technology 10 times better than they did same bulshit different day!

[@CarlosRodriguezVon-SamosadeAqu]

A good plot line, but I'm overcooked by 19:48 with this need to include every sub grouping of humanity and the inconsistencies in the story telling, the story needs continuity checking, de-identifying, and compressing.

[@Daehawk]

Kinda boring. You simply tell us about all the overwhelming tech Humans suddenly sprout..on and on and on......not mush detail in the aliens reactions and such

[@Avery_Hikari]

A good potential plot but taking far too long to get started. Actually, I don't know if the plot ever kicked off as I finally had to stop. Remove around 60% , which is nothing more than repetition and unnecessary filler, and just tell the story.

[@BJCMXY]

I strongly suspect this is simply an AI generated story, on top of being an AI Narrator. The repetitive nature, the inconsistent spelling, and so on. If a human had been editing this, I Would be appalled by their lack of skills, even English as a secondary language readers would be appalled over the repetitive nature and inconsistencies. Plus there are far too many plot holes.

[@carlmcnabb8006]

Another, blah, blah, blah, with guess what, a Sarah Chen, what are the odds. Story had grest possibilities, then the writers screwed it up.

[@Reh8111]

As soon as the name Chen appears I switch off.

[@colinmorgan7771]

chen again lol

[@Ziggy-w3z]

Might be a good story, WAY too repetitive.

[@haveraygunwilltravel]

Happens alot. I just push not interested.

[@edbergin4902]

Do you ever bother to proof read your stories? (Asterisk).

[@ronsindric4241]

It is entirely obvious that ypthis post was created by an unenlightened piece of software with human input provided by a non-writer; someone who struggles with linguistic sophistication, words that are almost monosyllabic and a sentance structure worthu of a third grade comic book. While this attempts to go beyond tales of military concept, it steers the reader/listener into a literary void. Another set of observations- a few interesting elements, but waaaaay too repetitive. Needs the kind of tightening up GOOD proofreaders and editors could offer.

[@timlewis5096]

Another AI who left school too early. Useless and a total waste of time. Do not waste your time, leave and watch something done by a human not a bloody computer with its circuits in grade one!!!

[@t.n.-js6ei]

Did the AI even GO to school?

[@rajanram342]

Started off ok. Went straight to hell with 3 chens and 2 rodriguez and repeating gibberish thats supposed to explain the drive and weapons. Now i am pissed i didn't get a good ending for a stroy that started really well. (Asterisk) Dont recommend this channel (Asterisk).

[@Jens-Viper-Nobel]

This is starting to get the most arrogant self overestimating of humanity that I have seen across several sci fi channels. To the point that the Galaxy Sci Fi Stories is even dehumanising humanity itself. The leaps in tech getting so ridiculous and impossible that the stories are becoming unglued in and of themselves. You guys at Galaxy Sci Fi need to slow down, move away from automated AI story scripting to a considerable degree, and start to make stories where humans are actually humans and not invincible to a ridiculous degree that even gods if they truly existed could hope to match by half. You are by now painting humans as some sort of creature that has only human names in common with humans. Where the hell did you go so fundamentally wrong?

[@tonysmith7621]

Far too repetitive droning on and on boring and pointless

[@KennethStrothers]

Inferior AI junk 😮

[@KaushikSarkar-uo2lt]

How many Chens are there??

[@calvinrogers4434]

Lots of them Chen is one of largest nam on our plant