Does a comment 3 years after this was uploaded still help you? Thank you for sharing this sweet comforting story with us.
@ClassicGhost7 ай бұрын
Yes it does. Imagine! 3 years ago...
@mark_tilltill666411 ай бұрын
Excellent eloquently read!
@EnCryptedHorror3 жыл бұрын
I love the unexpected chortles you often find in these stories. For example, this exchange: '"You're fond of children?" 'I gave her one or two reasons why I didn't altogether hate them.' 😂
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Some of them you have to read with a straight face even though you know a modern audience will give another meaning to the words.
@EnCryptedHorror3 жыл бұрын
@@ClassicGhost I know. The story I'm working on at the moment has a dog called Brian! And descriptions that make Yorkshire sound like a third world country! Great stuff though. Interested to hear your potted bio of Kipling too. If you haven't already read it, Christopher Hitchens did a good piece on Kipling that made me think about him (Kipling) in a new light.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
We won't say anything about Yorkshire here.
@maryjones67223 жыл бұрын
One of the best narrators I've heard in a long time x
@333angeleyes11 ай бұрын
THANK YOU! For explaining the ending and deeper meaning because the end confused me.
@scoutrifle68273 жыл бұрын
It's been years since I read this, and it reminds you why Kipling has the glowing reputation he does. Your reading enhanced the story considerably-excellent!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
It's a lovely story. I will post John Buchan's Fullcircle soon which is a similar tale about a grand old house. A bit like Edith Wharton's Mr Jones.
@kevinmortimer56813 жыл бұрын
A truly magical story in which there is no sense of fear attached to the ghostly encounters, only innocence and a sad yearning. I think the stage at which people will realise what's actually going on will vary considerably, and it puts a whole new context on the question " Have you ever seen a ghost"?.... In all honesty, how many of us actually know whether we have or not? Thank you for your superb reading, you've done a brilliant story total justice!!! 👏👏👏👏👏
@tomatoangel13 жыл бұрын
I had no idea that Kipling's writing could be so lyrical. Quite lovely.
@FarmersAreDummies2 жыл бұрын
I love haunted house tales and I'm glad I found this one. Prefect narration.
@geraldinetaeckens58737 ай бұрын
What a beautiful story! As a blind woman myself, I love the depiction of the blind woman. It is rare to see a blind character in a story. It isn’t depicted as pathetic, helpless, etc. Of course, as always, Tony, your narration is as beautiful as the story. You are just so delightful and bring such warmth to many peoples hearts. Thank you. It was also fun to listen to your depiction of the Covid years. So glad that’s all over. And you should just do a whole hour of singing songs to us lol nice voice. 57:46
@ClassicGhost7 ай бұрын
Ah yes, these will be my records of the COVID years. Glad they've gone
@rneustel3883 жыл бұрын
I love this story so much, and I’ve listened to it several times, but it also makes me almost unbearably sad that he can’t go back again. Your narration (and singing!) was a definite highlight of listening once again!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Ah ha. My singing. It had to be done though I did consider just saying it
@rneustel3883 жыл бұрын
@Classic Ghost Stories Podcast - Tony Walker Well, I’m very glad you sang it. It added so much emotion, I thought.
@puca79083 жыл бұрын
I very much enjoyed this story, I've always like Kipling's stories. I'm so glad you explained that the motorist had lost a child, and that was why he could see them. I knew the children were ghost from the start, but didn't realize why he could see them. Poignant tale. I stumbled upon you site, but now I'm a subscriber because I enjoyed it so much! Thank you!
@mares3841 Жыл бұрын
Spoiler alert!
@Nothingreallytoseehere3 жыл бұрын
Hello Tony , thank you so much for reading this beautiful story. I've never read it before. I recently lost my baby and in a way this story has given me a sense of comfort . Not sure how to describe more than that. Thank you again .
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
I am so sorry for your loss. It is a lovely story. Personally, I do believe in another life from this one here. I don't know how it works, but I still believe it.
@creative27162 жыл бұрын
God bless your little one, gone on before you. Prayers for your eventual relief of the pain.
@martiwilliams45929 ай бұрын
Captivating narration,Tony. Much needed, especially now. Thank you.
@Cinedragon3 жыл бұрын
I like the explanations afterwards. Sometimes certain things go right over my head, but your review helps me understand it a lot better.
@vickinoeske11543 жыл бұрын
What a lovely and sad little story.
@sarahsamaria82833 жыл бұрын
What a bewitching story. The house and grounds are just exquisitely described. It likes paradise and like you said knowledge brought his banishment from it. Knew the kids were ghosts as they just beyond our grasps.
@michaeldean14453 жыл бұрын
Thanks Tony.... Very much enjoyed. Kipling more subtle than I'd have expected for some reason. Very nice story.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
It's a good story. There are various stories about houses like this so I will look some more up, not necessarily by Kipling.
@doeharris53633 жыл бұрын
What a beautiful story l enjoyed it so much told beautifully. Sad ending l was hoping he would stay with her. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧
@banterj11 ай бұрын
I love you …you are just such a gracious man and yes you can ramble on all you want,I LOVE IT,It makes this channel unique to you,I just wish you didn’t apologize so much…maybe it is a British thing,unsure,but be yourself.
@09purpledyer3 жыл бұрын
This is a wonderful story. Your voice is like a friend who has called. I really enjoyed your singing.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@kelliryan4643 жыл бұрын
the perfect voice. It reminds me of Tom Hiddleston's voice when he reads. Tony's is even better though.
@AndreaSzabo71716 ай бұрын
I am getting Jim Jams on and tucking myself in. It's early night for me. 💝💝💝💝💝💝🤭 This is lovely thank you. 🥰
@gigig24923 жыл бұрын
I recommend the excellent movie about Kipling’s son “My boy Jack” & includes the poem he wrote about his loss-excellent poem and the story/movie is very touching. Kipling did not have an easy life. Thanks for this. You read (and sang!) this story beautifully.
@rattyrachel43163 жыл бұрын
Saw that movie when it aired on PBS. Poor kid, tried so hard to live up to his father’s expectations. A real eye opener, though, and I did “enjoy” it. Glad you mentioned it.
@gigig24923 жыл бұрын
@@rattyrachel4316 yes it was tragic for the whole family.
@JulieLevinge5 ай бұрын
One of my very favourite ghost stories plus best narration by a country mile, many thanks for this. ✊❤️👍
@laurabaker88323 жыл бұрын
Just stumbled upon this. I appreciated the biographical information on Kipling as I knew very little about his life. Beautifully narrated.
@bluegreenglue65653 жыл бұрын
So nice to hear well-written prose again. Thank you for sharing this engaging story.
@paulareadman74783 жыл бұрын
I love the descriptions of the landscape and house. A wonderful story
@alancaron984 Жыл бұрын
I found the terror of the tenant contagious. My favorite short stories are ‘An Habitation Enforced’, ‘At the Tomb of his Ancestors’, ‘Wee Willie Winkie’. Was amazed at the contempt a college educated woman had for Kipling I met at a book conclave. Wokeness isn’t new; I think it started in the sixties? Ronald Colman did a fine job in ‘The Light that Failed’. I wish movies would be made of my aforementioned. And if this was made into a movie, I think it might just scare the hell out of some people?
@UKerPerspective2 жыл бұрын
Your chatting always makes me smile 😊
@ClassicGhost2 жыл бұрын
Good job as I don't seem to be able to stop
@glendagraves163711 ай бұрын
That was a wonderful story and wonderfully read. Thank you.
@ClassicGhost11 ай бұрын
Thanks for listening
@Marie-db3gg3 жыл бұрын
You sing beautifully, sir
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
ha! I forgot I sang in this one
@divine.damage3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I love these stories.
@sallythomson7525 Жыл бұрын
So Happy I stumbled upon you and your beautiful narration. Wonderful story!! Thank you!
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
Welcome!
@tamarabaluyut30302 ай бұрын
I like Victorian and British
@taliaj Жыл бұрын
I went through a phase when I was in elementary school where I read a number of Kipling's poems and stories. I was astonished by this story, it had a very different feeling and execution than the works I remembered. Truly sublime in its melancholic beauty, yet full of surprising little sunlit treasures as well. Your reading was truly outstanding. I found myself looking up the date. I wondered if this either presaged concerns about his son's participation in WWI or if it followed John's death, but no, "They" is from 1904. Regardless, a keen sense of grief and the translucence of divide between life and death keenly informs this work. The combination of emotions here echoes similar I've felt after a loss, and I was in tears at the end. As much as I've enjoyed your Edith Wharton stories, I find "They" is my favorite from this channel to date. Thank you so much for this wonderful presentation.
@tcup92583 жыл бұрын
Great story , the reading was enchanting . Thank you .
@raissadevereux67627 ай бұрын
Thank you! A wonderful story. It's the perfect companion piece to Playmates.
@rosiemcnaughton99333 жыл бұрын
I don't remember this story, if I ever read it. It really drew my interest. Thank you for the explanation at the end which explained something that I missed completely! Very happy that you and your family are well. Greetings from Michigan, USA.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your kind wishes
@jpeppin13 жыл бұрын
Such a lovely surprise to hear your singing voice!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
I forgot I sang innit
@cawiltu3 жыл бұрын
Great singing voice, sir
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
I forgot I sang in that one!
@margaretisabellezerner45563 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your commentary it adds depth of appreciation of the story
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for saying that
@DeWin1573 жыл бұрын
I found this to be a touching and heart rending story, more spiritual than ghostly in a sense.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
I agree. It’s a spiritual story
@donaldmccleary9015 Жыл бұрын
Amazing story. Great narration. Thanks! I have often heard this story explained and never thought I would like it. Oh, how I was wrong! This is an excellent story. I am so glad I gave it a chance.
@tricivenola8164 Жыл бұрын
Albert Payson Terhune, who bred championship collies and wrote about them, was for a time a neighbor of Rudyard Kipling, during his time in Northeast America. According to Terhune, one morning the great writer was in his study working when shadows appeared in the open doorway. There stood a man and young boy. "THAT, Son," said the man sonorously, "Is KIPLING." They stared at each other and then the visitors left. It's years since I read Terhune's account, being only just able to read at the time, and had to ask my parents who Kipling was. A nice introduction! Thank you for this wonderful reading, and for the commentary afterwards. I'm loving your channel.
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
Lovely story !
@markferguson37453 жыл бұрын
Kipling writes in a poetry rare even for the era, ever reminding of the potentials of the language. Maybe I'm just showing age, but I'm highly uncomfortable with Alexa listening in to my conversations,even be they mostly with my cat these days; but then, I've never left media camera screens uncovered, either.NFN, I did graduate high school in 1984...
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Yes, there must be a horror story involving Alexa out there.
@wmnoffaith13 жыл бұрын
I agree; don't have a cell phone, and I never activated Alexa; even so when you go into your memory, you'll found a data file exactly as long as the exact length of time since you shut your devce and turned it back on. It records everything. I delete it and stop any unnecessary processes all the time; ....but they turn themselves back on.....that's the real horror story
@vintagebrew10573 жыл бұрын
There is a true story on YT regarding a young lad, who, after chatting with Alexa, heard her say these chilling words "I know where you live and I'm coming to get you".....
@jbos51073 жыл бұрын
@@wmnoffaith1 I understand how you feel but not having a cell phone can be dangerous nowadays. I know in the US even a cell phone with no service will connect to 911 as long as there is a cell tower nearby. That's why I think people who travel or young people should have two phones. Hiding a flip phone in a ankle holder could save your life if you're abducted or robbed of your activated phone. But that's just me. Old and paranoid. Alexa gives me the creeps too!
@wmnoffaith13 жыл бұрын
@@jbos5107 I don't disagree with you but I'm not young and don't travel. ,Having a cell phone also means that people always know where you are, and not all people are sane. My sister has an acquaintance who stalks people; she'll go on one date with a guy she meets online, and then she spends days just watching to see where he goes. For instance, he might say he can't see her the next day because he has to work late, she is watching his cell gps, saying He is 37 miles from home; where is he?
@babs675 Жыл бұрын
Beautiful reading. Thank you ❤ Thank you also for an outline of the story at the end. I did miss a couple of points, myself, so I found it so helpful. ❤
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
+@babs675 Thank you Babs
@jenniferlevine54067 ай бұрын
Just catching up on a few stories from the back catalog. I love this story, great concept. It's quite touching, I just wish he didn't have to go away forever. Oh and someone has a lovely singing voice I notice! Thanks for the great reading!
@kelliryan4643 жыл бұрын
Thank you for narrating one of my favorites. I live in a famous haunted house and have always loved ghosts, yet Alexa terrifies me. Bless you a thousand times. I binge listen while doing my needlework and manuscript illuminating.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
You live in a famous haunted house? How interesting.
@kelliryan4643 жыл бұрын
@@ClassicGhost it appeared in season 2 of Paranormal State (the messenger was the title of the episode) the show people were truly vile and left out all the recordings of the real ghosts in our house and only used their phony footage. When my husband died in our home all unpleasant activity stopped and only happy haunting remains. Sometimes an uneasy nostalgia is felt in the forest surrounding our house. I do love it here. What can be better than a haunted house in the forest at the edge of the sea?
@martiwilliams45923 жыл бұрын
Really love this story. Thank you for introducing us. Wasn't a fan of Kipling in English lit. but you and your presentation has changed my perspective--with the added bonus that dishwashing is no longer a dreaded chore. Dishes magically vanish! Thank you very much, thank your family from me and please, continue for bringing us such enjoyment.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, this is a beautiful visit to the English countryside and a grand old house. Nothing nasty about it. Bittersweet sad at the end, I suppose
@bethysbarn6 ай бұрын
I absolutely love your voice! I’ve just found your channel and I listen to audiobooks every day while I’m doing other things, so I’m really hoping that you have narrated many others, so that I can listen to you reading instead of others who really don’t sound as good or read them half as well as you do! Thank you for sharing 🥰❤️❤️❤️
@ClassicGhost6 ай бұрын
Many many many …
@jhb14933 жыл бұрын
Thanks and Greetings from Medicine Hat, Alberta - a place with a strongly remembered link to Kipling!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Also one of the best named places on the planet
@carlapomeroy38083 жыл бұрын
What a treat after a long day...rambling through the countryside. Thank you!
@davidbailey44043 жыл бұрын
My particular thanks for this one. Sentimental of me perhaps, but it's always been my favorite of all Kipling's stories. You read (and sang) it beautifully, and your outro added to my appreciation of what is really a very subtle and nuanced tale. Cheers!
@uslines2 жыл бұрын
Beautiful prose and reading.
@harriettemacy73992 жыл бұрын
I love Rudyard Kipling and I love your reading. Thank you🌠
@soniaPrager3 жыл бұрын
Si beautiful!! Thank you!!
@DeidreL92 жыл бұрын
Such a beautiful story. My late Uncle was immensely fond of Kipling, and now I understand why. The link with Burne-Jones is amazing, he’s one of my art idols. You brought this to life so beautifully and gently. Thank you so much, hi from Melbourne x❤️
@ClassicGhost2 жыл бұрын
Hello back. Glad you liked it.
@barbaraprest7833 жыл бұрын
I enjoyed that very much - thank you
@JoannaLopez-h7t Жыл бұрын
You read perfectly… your voice and cadence give one the perception of involvement from the periphery. Thank you for sharing your great talent!
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
Thanks for listening
@baruchben-david41962 жыл бұрын
An excellent story, well narrated. Thank you.
@57trensota75 Жыл бұрын
Just right! Lovely story and perfect reading
@morganlowe33533 жыл бұрын
I loved this so much
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
It's a lovely story. Glad you liked it.
@anaderol54083 жыл бұрын
Thank you - most enjoyable.
@bburns24783 жыл бұрын
Excellent!
@crazy42772 ай бұрын
Thank you! ❤
@zenamorgan17543 жыл бұрын
I can listen to you all day👍❤️
@poppyconner46363 жыл бұрын
Thank you! That was beautifully done
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@julielevinge2662 жыл бұрын
One of my favourite stories, what a treat to find it here. Beautifully covered✊♥️
@ClassicGhost2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@DreamingCatStudio6 ай бұрын
I’ve never heard this until today. Thank you!
@jaquelineturner61193 жыл бұрын
loved this thank you xx
@Laura-tp8wz2 жыл бұрын
Just wonderful!!! Thank you!!!
@RedcoatsReturn3 жыл бұрын
A strange thing….that many of us have really seen ghosts…even those who are adamant that there is no such thing. The astonishing fact is…we didn‘t even realize they were ghosts!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
There's a story in that.
@RedcoatsReturn3 жыл бұрын
@@ClassicGhost Indeed there is….indeed there is…..kzbin.info/www/bejne/gKbYm3uJf5mshac
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
@@RedcoatsReturn Aha! Great video.
@wmnoffaith13 жыл бұрын
absoutely true!!!! This happened at my great-aunt's wake, my parents were up by the front row, on the receiving line go to each person and kissing them or shaking hands, and saying, "I'm so sorry, etc. etc". On the way back in the car, my father said to my mother "well, Uncle John was looking good". (Uncle John was an old man in his 90s, who was my mother's great uncle). All of a sudden, my mother goes pale, and is startled. She says, "What are you talking about?". My Dad: "I'm talking about Uncle John. He still looks good for his age". My mother was silent for a couple of minutes and then says" Uncle John died around 9 months ago; we went to his funeral, remember?" My father evidently saw my Uncle John standing at the end of the receiving line, and he looked so real, that my father completely forgot that my uncle had died and was buried. This is a true thing that really happened. Now it's funny that my Mom didn't see Uncle John, but my father assuming he was real and not a ghost, didn't exactly go around asking other people if they could see him.
@cousinsister693 жыл бұрын
I often wonder how many people we see that are ghosts. I've seen 3, always so fast but they were exactly like you or me. I knew, or should I say I made the presumtion that what I had seen were ghosts. Because they vanished. I guess there could be other explanations. Hi from Oz. 👇💜🙃
@carolrios92162 жыл бұрын
For once, I just listened to this story in the morning, when I 'm not likely to doze off. I realized that I had never before managed to listen to the end. So that was a real treat, like getting a new story. And what a good one. Definitely my favorite Kipling.
@greedyfirstalgorithmlast262 жыл бұрын
Tony, I absolutely adore this Story, Kipling is a writer I have adored since 1957 when I read Kim and The Jungle Book . I was 7 years old in 1957.
@ClassicGhost2 жыл бұрын
It's a lovley story. Very much in the House Beautiful tradition. I like it too. I like it especially because it's a summer ghost story
@rattyrachel43163 жыл бұрын
Tony, I really appreciate your comments and explanations following this beautiful story, particularly regarding the symbolism. It opened up a whole new dimension to an already amazing tale. I enjoyed this story and your narration immensely! Thank you! 🐀
@creative27162 жыл бұрын
Ah! So enjoyed, I'm gonna have another listen. Always loved R.Kipling.
@samnelson23433 ай бұрын
Thamks as ever, tony. Love your works
@terigunderson5905 Жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
I am so sorry not to have thanked you immediately! Thank you.
@BarbaraJV1 Жыл бұрын
What a sad story. Rudyard Kipling lost his own son, John, very sadly during the 1st world war 😢
@martiwilliams45922 жыл бұрын
Ditto just as vivid, painful this time around. Masterful, Tony. Thank you.
@stephenrose1343 Жыл бұрын
Came across this, looking for a ghost story. I'm glad to have encountered this sympathetic narration of a story that I didn't know. Thank you.
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
Thanks for listening
@bethanypuleo2 ай бұрын
I like the explanation at the end. It's old English, so sometimes I miss a detail or two. I knew the ghost girl had touched the narrator, but I had not connected that it was his own daughter. After the explanation, it made so much more sense. Thank you.
@vintagebrew10573 жыл бұрын
Saving this for the Witching Hour.....
@nancynickerson43412 жыл бұрын
Wonderfully descriptive!
@susanotway78752 жыл бұрын
Another great one Tony! Thank you. Also always enjoy your chat at the end.
@mariannanickel4903 жыл бұрын
Tony, I recently found your channel. So glad I have. Your are such a skilled voice actor, and listening to your voice is calming, despite the the ghostly content. I’m a fan!!!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
I have ambitions to do non ghost story stuff
@martiwilliams45922 жыл бұрын
Ditto,ditto ditto this time around. Listening on the tv, back to the pc to give lots of thumbs up. Masterful, Tony. Thank you!
@ClassicGhost2 жыл бұрын
This video is getting a lot of interest at the moment. Was it suggested Marti or did you dig for it?
@martiwilliams45922 жыл бұрын
@@ClassicGhost I searched for it. I really love this story Your narration enhances it. Lots of minds with a single thought perhapsThank you, again.
@robynhenry26072 жыл бұрын
Rudyard Kipling wrote The Jungle Book!!
@carollynnberwindscheffler3986 ай бұрын
8 just now reading your comment put that together!!!¡! How did I miss that????
@brendangilmore42973 жыл бұрын
When you mentioned an Indian story I immediately thought of The Moonstone by Wikie Collins
@benitaager75673 жыл бұрын
So great to listen to. Brilliant story teller
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Thank you
@wisdomoftheearlychristians2037 Жыл бұрын
My favorite book by him is Tales from the Hills. Some of them are absolutely hilarious, and some are so well written, and have so much pathos, you can be moved to tears. If you haven't read it, it's a must read. In my top 10 favorite books.
@gailpinto45713 жыл бұрын
I'm from India, and I have to say that I love your channel - moreso for your comments at the end. I've always wanted to discuss a story after I've read it, and you do that, and it just feels so complete. Your own short stories inspire me (I'm working on some fiction myself at the moment and I need all the inspiration to keep going!) and I enjoy them so much. If you're looking for some spooky Indian fiction, I would suggest Ruskin Bond. The unfortunate part about Indian fiction is most of it just isn't written down (especially the folklore), and what is, is in regional languages like you mentioned and hasn't been translated.
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
I'll take a look at Ruskin Bond. Thank you :)
@janisbaumrucker34313 жыл бұрын
Your voice is hypnotizing.
@BigDog3663 жыл бұрын
I bet the line 'I stood up in the car' confused some younger listeners!
@railway-share38203 жыл бұрын
I used to live in the next village to where Batemans (Kipling's house) was. Never visited the house though although I was sometimes in the village. The Sussex countryside often has a dreamy quality. A good story, well read.
@bethanypuleo2 ай бұрын
I do like that the peasants both don't like the car but also acknowledge later that if they had a car, then probably some of the sick children would have survived. Just a bit of irony. 😉
@martiwilliams4592 Жыл бұрын
Has it really been a year? Listening again with a slightly different perspective, "new" ears. Masterful, gripping narritive as always, Tony. Thank you!
@ClassicGhost Жыл бұрын
it might be 2 you know, or 3
@amysays39802 жыл бұрын
To have one more contact with a loved one that's passed on, what a gift that would be 💔
@Idazle3 жыл бұрын
I had read Kipling's story before but it's certainly a completely "enhanced" experience to listen to it in this superbly narrated version. By the way, aeropress is one of my favourite coffee brewing methods :-) Thanks for the narration!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the coffee Carlos!
@ClassicGhost3 жыл бұрын
Yes I have an aeropress
@ZenBreeze3 жыл бұрын
I completely missed those subtleties. Thank you for your informative comments after the story.