They Were Considered Invincible, Until They Faced Humans | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

[@ghostshipproductionsllc]

these stories were decent but they are all starting to sound to much alike. all to often a ships captain loses his daughter or an ancient earth fleet that the enemy scoffs at saves the day. And god knows there is the old "the captain fights hand to hand against the leader of the enemy even though he could have just shot him and sacrifices himself for the cause. Or the captain stays behind to sacrifice himself for the cause as the ship explodes. All of that and how many more times will you hear the writer say that the rail guns tore through the ship like paper. This worked at first but seeing the repetitive uncreative nature of it has lost me.

[@frankhaugen]

It's chat gpt so its retelling it's own stories it has been trained on 😂

[@alpha2gproject783]

Not going to lie, I could tell it was AI generated but considering I would just put it on as background noise when working or cooking I didn't pay too much attention to how deadly similar they all are.

[@sgtbjack]

I listened to one where the captain of a human ship shot the enemy of the alien on his alien ship...in the head with his sidearm lol i was like "wait like through his bulkhead, than space into the aliens ship....crazy"

[@aleksandarl6975]

"Fingers dancing across.." heard too many times.

[@jamesfreeman956]

Yeah like James T Kirk

[@SelwynClydeAlojipan]

The problem with this story is that it wrongly says that the human ship had five crew but describes only four: Green, Thompson, Davis, and Thompson. Then they rescue some humans but only Dr. Chen is named and given a role in the story. So basically the author misuses the number of humans and even the crew of the Kalnari who remain unmentioned in the plot. Eventually the two ship captains just sacrificed themselves in a stupid and inane plot that could have made sense if not for the simple-minded author.

[@jamespseaman4136]

I can’t believe that this story is so loaded with commercials!

[@legionx4046]

? I got none

[@jamesfreeman956]

It could be that battle is like car racing, its always a battle

[@kennethabagis8392]

It's always the fate of the galaxy.

[@six-gunsound1145]

88. Good story but the jump cuts were a little jarring. I don't blame you for doing a lot of editing in a short time frame. Thank you for continuing to create new stories where so many other people are making careers out of increasingly desperate efforts to revive past stories.

[@DavidNieuwenhuize-pq1jm]

i like the stores

[@michellegoewey2939]

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! 88😊

[@reinovator]

Cool story but how many times by how many different you tube channels. I'm about done with these. oh well I was looking when I found this. I guess I keep looking

[@spacemanvic3961]

AI written?

[@bobgabriels8456]

what's with 88 ?

[@Perurikun]

i'm curious myself. i do know that White supremacists tattoo 88 on themselves.

[@kennethabagis8392]

It's a com panel .

[@Speedkid]

88 this is a great context for more.

[@xitodivaawesome1525]

hi

[@modeler308]

IF you're going to use known Star Trek references, STICK to known canon. Tellerites do NOT have 4 arms.

[@mikeh7917]

I think the AI just picks random syllables for the names of alien races. They accidentally picked the name of a Star Trek species.

[@darkage5]

Calm down clown. It's not that big a deal. Not even the same species as the tellerites from StarTrek.

[@etakataka702]

🤦

[@kennethabagis8392]

Tilerites, another star trek ripoff.