Toefl Writing Academic Discussion 2024 (Sample Essay Included)

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2:19 In my opinion, online information is better than friend advice when choosing to purchase products. I think this way for two reasons. First, while choosing products you can search for specific features in the product. For example, if you want to buy dry hair shampoo you can search for products that are suitable for your hair type. Second, the internet is a good source for searching for ingredients for the product which is beneficial for understanding product is good or bad. I see Paul’s point regarding asking for a friend's advice, however, I would argue that the products we need may be different, and this may not be good advice.” I would be very happy if you evaluate my answer.🌟

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

Hi great job! The introduction could be better and you don't have to say for 2 reasons. Just mention your two reasons and prove them before going to Paul's point! Try using the template in the video :)

[@DanielaZugarazo]

Great video as always. Thank you so much!

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

My pleasure!

[@miguelalvarezmartinez3012]

Thanks Reggie!

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

@@miguelalvarezmartinez3012 You're welcome Miguel!

[@Nabieeinhaneul]

Thank god I was hoping that you could make a video about the writing section, Thanks budd! And your speaking tips videos really helped thanks again.

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

Im so glad! More to come! Next will compare a bad and good writing example!

[@Nabieeinhaneul]

@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 look forward to it.

[@badrshedid1321]

One of the best explaining videos

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

Thanks bro! Glad it was helpful!

[@ribhafatima7960]

Also make an other video for advanced words that we can use for enhace our score.

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

Will do!

[@THALITASILVACOSTA-gs8vx]

Thank you for the explanation. The first time I took the TOEFL iBT test, I got 18 in writing. I am studying through your videos to get 20+ next time! Can you do an explanation video about the first writing question using templates? I can't wait for it! ^^

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

Okay sounds great! Coming soon!

[@ribhafatima7960]

Which web site do we use for mock test?

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

Many students use different sites. On our Patreon for paid members we check their writing. Put to two per month. And you will have access to real classes of other students 😊 www.patreon.com/OptimalEnglish

[@ribhafatima7960]

Is the length of essay is enough for toefl exam point of view??

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

If you follow the template in the video you should have the write amount of words. Usually between 150-160. 😊

[@ribhafatima7960]

@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 Are 150 words enough? i have heared from many people that it should be minimum of 250 words.Sinnce i know that the more i write i can make more mistakes. I am concerned about this point.

[@optimalenglishwithreggie7050]

@@ribhafatima7960 250 words is far too much. The instructions say a minimum of 100. So in 10 minutes you only have time to make a good essay with 150-160 (perfect) 180 MAXIMUM :)

[@ribhafatima7960]

@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 okay thankyou for response