Share one of your essays! Let’s see how you did! 😊
@ParwizRaeeskhail-fu2xhАй бұрын
In my opinion, I would definitely rely on my friend and family's advice. I think they are the ones who always want better things for us. Additionally, online sources are not always right; for example, once I ordered a book online , and it was written many features about the book, but when I received it , it was not as good as they said. I strongly agree with Paul's Idea that our family knows about our interests and therefore, they are likely to give us the best advice. Give me feedback plz❤
@optimalenglishwithreggie7050Ай бұрын
Very good! I recommend mention you agree with Paul at the beginning because you have the same opinion, and then toward the end mention Claire because she has a different opinion than you and Paul 😊. Check the template again
@ParwizRaeeskhail-fu2xhАй бұрын
@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 score out if 5
@ParwizRaeeskhail-fu2xhАй бұрын
@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 score out of 5
@ParwizRaeeskhail-fu2xhАй бұрын
@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 score out of 5
@ParwizRaeeskhail-fu2xhАй бұрын
@@optimalenglishwithreggie7050 feedback me out of 30