This really brought me to tears. This is such a beautiful poem and your voice definitely brought this to life!! Please never stop writing
@MelsThoughts5 жыл бұрын
Awe thank you! I won't stop writing :) There's always more to come.
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
So relatable
@VinoVenitas6 жыл бұрын
"We're divided, but not between beautiful and ugly." I loved that line and the way you followed it up was truly amazing. The beauty with which you delivered this piece was stunning. Well done.
@MelsThoughts6 жыл бұрын
VinoVenitas Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! :)
@dileepbima84946 жыл бұрын
nice
@hbkniya47475 жыл бұрын
Mel's Thoughts kk
@hbkniya47475 жыл бұрын
VinoVenitas monopoly k o
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
So relatable
@Khartoum296 жыл бұрын
I feel this one first hand where ever i go know one wants me around,is uncomfortable or just don't like me I'm too different and don't belong here in this world.
@MelsThoughts6 жыл бұрын
Aww don't say that. You definitely belong in this world and you will meet people who like you for you
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Yeah
@angelabrown79664 жыл бұрын
Your words are kind & compassionate. Truly enlightening & considerate. I wish more people felt like you . BECAUSE, this World would be a better place.
@MelsThoughts4 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for the kind words
@angelabrown79664 жыл бұрын
@@MelsThoughts YOU'RE WELCOME. WHAT YOU WROTE WAS BEAUTIFUL. YOU GOT A GOOD HEART. CONTINUE TO WRITE & INSPIRE. I Deeply appreciate your comment, thankyou
@natherahkarim71463 жыл бұрын
Sorry. Myhurtclosed
@karlie-annafakkeldij73174 жыл бұрын
I get bad break outs on my face and I have tried everything to get rid of it but it doesn't work And it hurts so bad when something says something about it And also I rarely had new clothes I had wear stuff from second hand stores cause my parents could afford new clothes And everyone would comment on then and half the time I would end up leaving class to go to the bathroom to cry trying to avoid everyone that made eye contact so I didn't cry in front of people Cause they would never know how much it hurt
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
That's so sad
@richellelynn79503 жыл бұрын
I'm so sorry you have to go through this😔
@natherahkarim71463 жыл бұрын
Diambodohperempuabodihsebelahtuygsibukknp. Bapadiabgmakanke. Takdekan. Sykerjasymakanketakikutkempuansy. Bin ikutkemampuanorglain.
@whale12753 жыл бұрын
Never stop writing please this is so good
@rogerbarrett19792 жыл бұрын
I know just how you feel, Melissa. I've had that feeling for most of my life. I've always been my own worst enemy. Nobody could possibly hate me half as much as I hate myself, and that's a fact.
@jesseijvj96973 жыл бұрын
I carry my scares from my military service. It bothered me in the beginning but I realized the beauty of life is way important. I'm not ugly and to me no is .. beauty comes from within that what matters.
@jumpiheyo45534 жыл бұрын
I feel like ive been waiting to hear this for a long long time❤❤❤
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Yeah
@mariaricciutelli5094 жыл бұрын
Honest and loyal heart is more important then beauty.
@kaitlynt.m87413 жыл бұрын
This was so beautiful, it brought me to tears.
@subhihangmalimboosubhihang91814 жыл бұрын
I am literally getting goosebumps after each and every sentence, loved it...
@MelsThoughts4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
She is so relatable
@mystiquelou12776 жыл бұрын
Everybody just cant be the same
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Yeah
@jannatmallik27254 жыл бұрын
Why me... I also think ... Why ? .🤧...... Thnk u sissy for the writing .. carry on
@jeanmann7473 ай бұрын
Stop putting yourself down your as good as the next person❤
@noorjanhashim21985 жыл бұрын
I'm bad in your eyes because you look good in everyone's eyes
@mystiquelou12776 жыл бұрын
Amen!people are beautiful each in their own way and but some cannot accept it will come back at you when you offend based on race skintone weight etc
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Yeah
@Aloeprime4 жыл бұрын
Your poems are spectacular
@MelsThoughts4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@dianadmello34782 жыл бұрын
Thank you for message . That awesome video.
@rosblueyn3 жыл бұрын
I'm glad I discovered you. So thanks 💐
@tempest_devs5 жыл бұрын
Everyone is beautiful no one is ugly those are just labels that people give to others nd if u show people how those labels are affectin they wont stop thats the cold society we are in😕
@patrickmulenga40952 жыл бұрын
Your words are so deep🥺
@samara_s054 жыл бұрын
My friend and I were talking about after school clubs we used to go to and she mentioned she saw me at one once before we were friends and laughed with her friend about how I looked
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Hm
@marciakirkbride42104 жыл бұрын
We will rebuild! Together!♥️
@kamashatanner29685 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@mathurinmikehandy86573 жыл бұрын
Beautiful
@aminbadrul49574 жыл бұрын
God creat human is perfect....ugly for jin n ghost...but...beauty from inside.in our heart..not the outside at all..pure heart..can express the outside...anyone have there own beauty....must be grateful....what we have...that its...💖💖💖
@anne-marieluhembe57335 жыл бұрын
Loved it♥️
@MelsThoughts5 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Me too
@tabathagilbert2015 жыл бұрын
It should never be about what someone looks like it should be what's on the inside you can be with the most beautiful woman or be with the most good looking guy but no personality or no ❤️ can kill a person every time that's ugly .looks are just looks be beautiful on the inside and don't worry so much who you are on the out side .beauty is skin deep .
@LVSnailSandwichContent4 жыл бұрын
Why people are ugly, it's really hurtful. I think people are born with all 3, they can't help it. Looks, personality and heart or no heart. I got one out of the. A heart. So I look old, like a horse and never had a hairline. Quiet and easygoing. Destined to be alone at the end.
@nicodemuspeterson62636 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. ❤️
@MelsThoughts6 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! ❤️
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Yeah
@spicydorito37043 жыл бұрын
i have to dance to this in my gcse dance
@alexis.danielle88954 жыл бұрын
This hade me crying I think about my self as something that should not live when ever I see someone pretty I ask why her when it can be me I never understood why it could be me and I hated my self for thinking that
@alexis.danielle88954 жыл бұрын
Ethereal Poems can you stop this is something real
@mystiquelou12776 жыл бұрын
Im ugly and i embrace that thats it i dont care we are not in a real life competition
@MelsThoughts6 жыл бұрын
I agree, life is more than looks and it's easy to forget that
@Elma_01403 жыл бұрын
"Ugly" "disqusting" "fat" "worthless" These are the words I think when I look in the mirror. These are the words I think because I despise her. I despise the person I see everytime as I pass my reflection. These are the words that repeat my head everyday. These are the words I use to describe myself. I have so many insecurities. These Insecurites make me push myself away from my family and friends. These Insecurites made me anti-social. These Insecurites are controlling my life. THESE INSECURITIES ARE HORRIBLE AND TODAY I REFUSE TO LET THEM CONTROL MY LIFE ANYMORE. I just wrote this poem (pls don't copy)
@mikaylalindsay60284 жыл бұрын
why do the pretty girls always try to flex by saying "I'm ugly"
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
It's so annoying
@mikaylalindsay60284 жыл бұрын
@@etherealpoems7838 for real 😥
@lionessroarsjohnson26844 жыл бұрын
If your looks are ugly, that is just the way it is. It happens.
@shwetaupadhyay79644 жыл бұрын
So beautiful poetry 😍 Love n blessings from India 💕❣
@MelsThoughts4 жыл бұрын
@etherealpoems78384 жыл бұрын
Her poems are the best
@natherahkarim71463 жыл бұрын
Soalmnpulani
@heshithsachintha60324 жыл бұрын
Inside or outside are we really ugly?
@geomantilla5 жыл бұрын
Amazing work. I admire you and your mind.
@MelsThoughts5 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@geomantilla5 жыл бұрын
@@MelsThoughts Hey, I'm a dancer and I made a quick video to your words from this piece. It's on my Instagram @geo_mantilla. Let me know if you like it :) I hope you are well. Much love 🖤👋🏼
@MelsThoughts5 жыл бұрын
@@geomantilla I just saw it and wow I just want to say thank you for using my poem in your piece! It means a lot, especially now that I've had a dark cloud over my head. Thank you again and keep it up! :)
@calebhampson7207 Жыл бұрын
Hey Melissa! I am interested in using this for a dance performance! Do I have your permission to use your poetry for it?
@rsaint32225 жыл бұрын
Hi. Thanks for this ☺☺
@MelsThoughts5 жыл бұрын
No problem!
@raeesahgonzalez64404 жыл бұрын
I love your voice
@MelsThoughts4 жыл бұрын
Aww thanks!
@izromer62133 жыл бұрын
Everybody here you are beautiful
@emaayuhartika385 жыл бұрын
Can i re perform this?
@MelsThoughts5 жыл бұрын
Sure :)
@vimalamala76584 жыл бұрын
The person ugly or beautiful I don't care about it I respect everyone the world wild I don't care white red black what aver the good heart open mind talk nicely no pour or rich guy tall or short this me myself I must respect human be helping tip people that all enough
@sarathtoons40253 жыл бұрын
Super
@africanqueen52924 жыл бұрын
I wish I was beautiful. 😔
@vimalamala76584 жыл бұрын
No body is ugly
@dileepbima84946 жыл бұрын
nice attempt
@mellisakirabo35473 жыл бұрын
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢am dead this poem describes my life
@sharonpiccone90944 жыл бұрын
"THIS IS 'SOO TRUE', THAT'S HOW I 'FEEL' ABOUT 'YOU', YOU ARE 'REALLY' BEAUTIFUL, I 'SEE' 'VERY BEAUTIFUL BEING',& YES WE GET 'CAUGHT' UP, IN DUMB 'RETORIC'& THING'S THAT 'DON'T 'REALLY' MEAN A THING, WHAT 'MATTER'S MOST'-"WHERE WILL I 'SPEND' MY. 'ETERNITY'!!!..WORD'S CAN BE 'DEADLY' & 'THEY DO', HAVE A 'LASTING EFFECT', RECENTLY A USED TO BE FRIEND, PUT ME SOO 'FAR' 'DOWN'& IT WAS 'SOO TOXIC', THAT IT 'OCCURED' TO ME, IF 'YOU' 'REALLY', FEEL THAT WAY, YOU CAN'T 'POSSIBLY' BE MY 'FRIEND', IT WAS LETHAL, IT MADE ME 'STOP'& THINK, 'WOW' HOW COULD THIS 'POSSIBLY' BE A 'TRUE FRIEND'!!!.. SOO 'MANY 'TIMES', HAVE I 'CRIED' WHILE TAKING IN, WHAT YOU 'WRITE', NEVER STOP, & 'REMEMBER'- "YOU ARE SOO 'BEAUTIFUL' 'NSIDE & OUT'& THERE IS A 'BEAUTY' THAT 'PERMEATES' THE 'INSIDE & OUT',& IT 'OVERCOMES' & 'OVERSHADOWS' THAT WHICH 'COMES' FROM THE 'PERFECTLY' 'BEAUTIFUL' BUT 'SHALLOW' WOMAN, 'CONSUMED' WITH HER OWN 'OUTWARD' BEAUTY!!!..😘😍😊🎆🎇🎈
@rickmasi46203 жыл бұрын
NERS
@crystalsky82446 жыл бұрын
💕
@MelsThoughts6 жыл бұрын
❤❤
@jesuanthoniyammal28323 жыл бұрын
Your daughter's face is so cute and you have a best friend for yourself, and all you and your brother's qotes just cheatings
@suha62366 жыл бұрын
Ugly ...OHHHHH MY NAME IS HERE 'UGLY' :) JUST TO GET BULLIED MORE
@Deepika1574 жыл бұрын
This is not poem this reality of many people life including me Those who do not come in the standards made by the society are ugly And i am in one of them
@shahalamthokdiyathikkiya45545 жыл бұрын
Oh god
@sujatanair11395 жыл бұрын
Super 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
@vimalamala76584 жыл бұрын
Please don't fill you self why the man good heart enough don't think about ugly OK
@asokapurasinghe75535 жыл бұрын
Celebrate but no more apologies or touching messages cos there is no sender I May have to return to the sender.Noone responsible.its o.k.
@jesuanthoniyammal28322 жыл бұрын
don't you feel guilty about what you are doing
@vimalamala76584 жыл бұрын
I really make mistake because I stay far from you forever what have to loving someone no used only get pain inside some one got family wife children all so I was do mistake fault love wrong person now imposter myself I don't want anybody's entry my life if anyone abomination perplexed me you know how many comment
@aisyahbaby9533 жыл бұрын
Nt wht i.mean
@AnonyMous-et5hp4 жыл бұрын
di ba pati pangit ginagawan mo ng isue pangit kasi ako diba hehehe
@vimalamala76584 жыл бұрын
What for I call ugly I don't like the two actors simbu thirusha that why I message too that all but others really I won't used the word ugly
I don't like all your negative thoughts. It's b.s. to me. Let me give you an answer. You just confident in yourself. I don't like to read your writing. Why on earth you have readers I wonder. It made me headache to read your articles.