Untitled Rewrite Fansong 2.0: Welcome to Green Hill Isles

[@AllnighterCallisto]

must really like rewrite

[@morefluid_thanwater]

what gave it away

[@GavCake]

I don’t maybe the profile or the fire songs

[@mouthdreams]

well yes!

[@patch3579]

rewrite sounds so silly when they say "business is booming!"

[@foxans1919]

The thing i like about this interpretation of rewrite is, hes not trying to oversell anything, hes not trying to scare you, hes not trying to be actively hostile, he knows that hes going to win no matter what he does, "it's a necessity, i mean it's not like i need your soul but hey, care more, at this point it's free", so why not have some fun with it? He truly just sounds bored.

[@skyesu4706]

WOOOOOHOOOOO MUTUAL SONG PUBLIC!!!! YAAAAAAY

[@morefluid_thanwater]

OMG SKYYYYYYYYY HI I LOVE YOU

[@skyesu4706]

HIIIIIIIII !!!!!!! :3

[@goldenanimations1018]

@@morefluid_thanwater hey could i chart this in fnf? (i wont release the mod to the public)

[@morefluid_thanwater]

Feel free! I appreciate you asking :D

[@goldenanimations1018]

@@morefluid_thanwater thanks!

[@stormkloudz1]

I didn't expect Rewrite to start rapping lmao, shit had me giggling.

[@GreenStorm8200]

This is insanely well made oh my god. This actually feels like it should be an official song for Rewrite. Absolutely incredible work. I love the little rap part near the end too. Absolutely flawless.

[@plasmaemerald8407]

I can’t tell if this is a cover to high studio song or a custom song, the fact that this is so well written and animated, even the custom art?? THE BF AS BACK SINGER TOO? This is so DOPE, I want more FNF songs where it’s lyrics and not just beeps. AWESOME WORK TO YOU, AND YOUR TALENTED TEAM✨🔥

[@morefluid_thanwater]

This is an original song and all of the assets you see were by me :) sjdfkwjbdfkwj I'm honored you would think a team made this

[@kthawk09]

@@morefluid_thanwateruh what was the stroke you had halfway through?????

[@noyz-anything]

@@kthawk09it’s called a keysmash. it’s how you let people know you’re a tumblr gay

[@morefluid_thanwater]

now wait just a minute

[@plasmaemerald8407]

@@morefluid_thanwater … ..?

[@meme-pr1nc3]

ANOTHER BANGER God the visuals are so crisp and saturated, a digital purgatory of nothing but Green Hills. Rewrite’s vocals are so calming in this song too. And I love the little details in how you drew and animated Rewrite with his demonic/god-like vibe; his spiky hair in a shape of a pentagram, his ears curved like horns, the two spikes on his back in the shape of wings, and his hands doing a similar gesture of Baphomet’s ‘as above, so below’. Driving myself insane listening to this over and over, great work!!

[@courtneyadams-l2k]

I SAW THEY HIT THE PENTAGON MEMES AN THEN THIS??? *WHATS THE PENTAGON???*

[@Pistachio_cream]

​@@courtneyadams-l2k the pentagon is a government building, but in the context of rewrite, it's typically referring to a digital model of a five sided regular polygon known as a pentagon. This comment was, however, talking about a pentagram, a symbol typically associated with the occult and summoning of demons. Hope this helps !! :) Please ask if you didn't understand something :]

[@courtneyadams-l2k]

@@Pistachio_cream ok ty!

[@courtneyadams-l2k]

@ oh. Pentragrnam. My mistake

[@tylermilsap9060]

The "y̶o̶u̶ a̶r̶e̶ o̶d̶d̶, I̶ a̶m̶ GðÐ" is the best part. Keep up the good work!

[@lazybooz7818]

Actually its you are flawed I am God

[@asadmalik5239]

​@@lazybooz7818 ☝️🤓 "EM ACTUALLY "

[@Coil_phighter]

​@@lazybooz7818😂

[@Andras1125]

​@@lazybooz7818 yea I figured

[@courtneyadams-l2k]

I am odd, you are god

[@wtbis]

"Rewrite is so adorable!" the adorable in question:

[@anton2fangs]

The song and visuals is too good

[@Renegade_Mutt]

...it's odd seeing you here

[@jonathanpierrelouis1267]

@@Renegade_Mutt a strange sight

[@MyUsernamesWereTaken]

WE MAKING IT THROUGH GREEN HILL ZONE WITH THIS ONE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@BR0DCASTINGRR]

Facts!!!!

[@Rich_king3901]

i like how at the final part he talks in each ear back and forth if you are wearing headphones

[@F3rniz]

This is great. Dude dropped the hardest bars and thought we wouldn’t notice.

[@TheBonneter]

0:54 I know he's essentially a god and evil but the idea of him planting his victims in a garden of flowers seems oddly comforting...

[@Coil_phighter]

thats what he does, he tricks you by comforting you and in doing so hes making you more vulnerable and easier to attack/kill so if you think hes nice im sorry to break it to you but he aint

[@PeaceARCrn]

@@Coil_phighter i'm cooked.

[@Coil_phighter]

@@PeaceARCrn a sans main I see *equips horror axe* let's brawl

[@zdark6382]

Most of EXEs seem to love turning victims into plants, and I am all here for it honestly I believe the first one to start doing this is Lord X

[@cecil.projectmp]

I have this idea in mi Oc

[@Strider_Mane]

*_WE’RE GONNA QUESTION OUR PURPOSE IN LIFE WITH THIS ONE, BOYS 🗣️‼️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥_*

[@TheForthPersonInTheRoom]

I love the art in this i have incredible respect for anyone who can draw flowers like this :]

[@eekook7341]

This is amazing, like everytime i see it in my recommended i stop whatever im doing and listen to this

[@morefluid_thanwater]

This is so unbelievably sweet i am 😭😭😭

[@jonathanwhitaker9259]

WATCH.

[@Alex.VR.Official]

BRO DROPPED MAD BARS AT THE END OMG👿🤌🏽🤌🏽

[@boop6616]

I’ve managed to chain the first and second song together, they go together so well

[@Sukunatupiniquim]

Man I loved, especially the part when chaged the calm vibe to complete banger

[@Smileyentertainment_Ah]

He's just standing there... 𝗠𝗘𝗡𝗔𝗖𝗜𝗡𝗚𝗟𝗬!!!!!!!

[@MintAddictWolfy]

I remember you showing me part of this!! Great job on finishing it!!

[@nunezarts7]

THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING, YOU MAKE SUCH BANGER MUSIC, PLEASE KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO 😭😭😭

[@sonicbones8233]

This is so calming and relaxing for some reason good job

[@ViolaGama-xr6iu]

This is burning hot!!!!!!!!!!🔥 I like this song bro 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

[@Coil_phighter]

bro appeared, dropped the 2 hardest rewrite songs and dipped, thats a true legend

[@RewriteSonicR]

YOO THIS SOUNDS TOO GOOD!!

[@Rich_king3901]

IKR its too fire they killed the lyrics and animation

[@yeetus_featus6928]

I really like this project of how much dedication is being put into it!

[@ChristopherTheGamerOfficial]

Another rewrite song, absolute W. All the art looks really great!! The animation in the video is also really good!!! Song goes absolutely hard, I’m really glad you made another song.

[@Degenbrecher]

i crave the instrumental to this holy moly this is AMAZING

[@ShallyArtdemon1]

Rewrite really does know how to spit bars🔥🔥

[@yourdemiseishere]

Damn, the words and play here are amazing. Even if i dont know what the red ruby hare is...

[@morefluid_thanwater]

red ruby hare is supposed to invoke the idea of red herring (hare-ing) aka something used to distract people from the central idea that should be focused on :p

[@royalnova4942]

The uneasiness that comes off the green hill art is so good

[@morefluid_thanwater]

I hope you know this comment means the world to me

[@Xevent244-sf6iy]

This is relaxing tbh, love the switch up at the end love this

[@Iamback123dotexe]

WE'RE HITTIN' THE PENTAGON WITH THIS ONE🗣🗣🔥🔥‼‼💯💯‼‼💯💯

[@rewriteofficial]

you are not hitting the pentagon on my watch

[@Not_Insanity]

TURN ON THE TV THEY HIT THE PENTAGON-

[@Astraphenex]

@@Not_InsanityITS SUCH A TRADEGY *insert rewrite sobbing noises*

[@michaelgow8389]

​@@rewriteofficial *Tails would shoot the Pentagon with his arm cannon while you weren't looking* Tails; you were saying?

[@rewriteofficial]

@@michaelgow8389 …

[@Buttermilk_the_pony]

I have rewatched this video too many times-

[@ChickyNuggieMan]

This was so worth the wait.

[@ScrawnyShauny]

This whole song is fire, but I just have to say that the first 18 seconds is my fav part, followed by 1:16 - 1:28. Both parts are so ethereal and eerie, and in the beginning it kind of sounds like Rewrite is trying to find his words, before finally saying "hello, I am God." The little animation of him is sooo good too, my obsessed, possessed brain perceives him as friendly. I can't get enough. Me love.

[@larswillems7510]

I knew rewrite could sing, but this man got BARS its unhealthy

[@emerlthegizoid9919]

Another lofi rewrite banger lets gooo! Keep it up!

[@fusenah2092]

the way he says "curse yourself" sounds like the funny lowtiergod man. love the song though

[@Floofmaster5000]

I dont know why, but this is calming for some reason. (Also good job on the animation!) also, I was here at 96 views, neato, aint it?

[@Rich_king3901]

THIS IS SOOOO GOOD OMG!!!! (i love it good job its fire)

[@raul-music]

this is really well made dude, 9/10 imo 🙏🔥

[@Business_Dude1]

Wake up babe he uploaded a banger again.

[@Unkn0wnf0ll0w3r]

i cant stop rewatching this thats how good this song is. edit: holy crap i just realised his little tail at 2:17

[@morefluid_thanwater]

:3

[@Unkn0wnf0ll0w3r]

@@morefluid_thanwater :]

[@DefenderTails]

2:14 THE DETAIL THAT, USING PHONES, HIS VOICE GO SIDE TO SIDE HERE IS SO GOOD 😭

[@ignacioflores2218]

1:22 I love this part

[@VioletaMaricela2701]

Same

[@Sunlight_Cactus]

Rewrite rapping is crazy

[@Byara335]

BEYOND crazy bro!

[@VioletaMaricela2701]

REAL, AND I LOVE IT

[@MariaSalda]

This is my favorite part 0:39

[@R_Criti]

I love the fact this gives like a Kendrick DAMN album type beat on the halfway mark 🔥

[@pilarramirez4596]

Yup, Rewrite is the new vocaloid.

[@freeza_thefrozenhedgehog]

THAT'S WHAT I'VE BEEN THINKING HELLOOO

[@BouncyBees]

This is the only rewrite song imo that matches Springless in quality but for some ungodly reason rewrite saying "baby" is the funniest thing to me Somehow him saying "THEY HIT THE PENTAGON!!" seems more in character to me, but still this spectacular and your art is extremely consumable. (Wait at 1:19 did is soul leave his body omg-)

[@crappyrebster5169]

I guess you could say this was a "gift by god". (Fr tho this song is an absolute banger)

[@smal5504]

WHAT??? THIS IS SO GOOD???

[@icystreamshere]

Alright, my man Let me tell you this I've found you today by accident, but I'll comsider it a very lucky coincidence. You are very talented, especially taking into consideration that you're self taught. I am also very into your rewrite specifically. Never been unto exes much, but yours... I love it. I've subscribed, continue your work please

[@morefluid_thanwater]

I'm so happy you enjoyed my song! I should clarify this is not my EXE, it comes from a Friday Night Funkin Mod called VS. Rewrite! If you like this jingle I have a good feeling you'll love the mod and its song :)))

[@icystreamshere]

@@morefluid_thanwater yeah I know, thanks I meant your interpretation of the character. As I've read from the other comments, your's is not fully canon, so that's my deal

[@Hos_one]

0:36 my face when i heared the "BABY": 🙀

[@Mike_toonz]

This is a master piece

[@GOOGLEDRlVE]

Why is there no second like button?? edit: also sorry for posting that other comment on your other fanmade video

[@AuthorityGuestAlternative]

REWRITE SPITTING BARS??? POG Ps: I love how 2:11 part actually plays in seperate ear buds

[@DaBoiHimself]

Dude this is so good, I wanna cover it 😭🙏

[@viiuan]

btw i would Love to know more about your interpretation of rewrite! whether you explain it here or elsewhere :3

[@morefluid_thanwater]

this comment means everything to me. I hop u understand that 😭

[@viiuan]

@@morefluid_thanwater and this song means everything to me so it balances out :3 im thinking about it forever and ever legit though i keep listening to this and just having so many feelings about it and i'd love to hear more thoughts of yours

[@morefluid_thanwater]

Tbh what you see in this video is most of what I have, Green Hill Isles is just my rendition of Rewrite's world and whatnot. I'm currently working on another project that explores it just a teeeeeeensy bit more but if you know canon Rewrite lore, you mostly know about Green Hill Isles :3

[@viiuan]

@@morefluid_thanwater i honestly don't know if i've managed to find the canon lore in detail 😭other than what i've inferred from existing videos and stuff. if you could point me to a good source for it i would be grateful :3

[@morefluid_thanwater]

There are two main sources I pull from: the actual rewrite fnf mod page and Springless's socials and KZbin channel. You can find her as SpringlessMusic on YT and Twitter, and especially on twitter she posts concept work, development, and answers a lot of questions people have! The mod page is a bit outdated at this point but is a good starting point before heading over to her twitter. Hope this helps and good luck on ur Rewrite journey 🦅

[@JigsawJester]

AMAZING AS ALWAYS :)

[@8BitWar_]

This is SO FUCKING GOOD! More ppl need to see this fr

[@Im-a-egg.]

New favorite rewrite fan song.

[@youneskacimi7746]

1:53 LOW TIER REWRITE ?????

[@Da_piggy_noob]

DAMN THIS SONG GOES HARD :0

[@Myth-bt4wi]

WHAT IS THIS MELODY???

[@Sylvan404]

I gotta ask, what's your thought process behind making the lyrics to the rewrite songs? I ask because they fit WAY TOO WELL. Edit: Forgot to mention, loved the nod to Thriller Gen!

[@morefluid_thanwater]

I write down everything I want to achieve in terms of ideas, write a single line, and then go from there! Warning I'm about to rant here: For example, I wanted to think about Springless's comparison of Rewrite to the snake (I assumed of Eden). A lot of people believe that in canon the snake is Lucifer, although nothing in the actual Bible says this, so I discarded the idea of a fallen angel - and therefore, the kind of imagery that would paint him as a higher being. Instead I wanted to make them more down-to-Earth that in canon which is why Rewrite is like, somewhat less condescending in here than they are in the mod. Then came the idea that his silly little digital world is Eden how it is now - abandoned and quiet. But that doesn't actually work with what we see in 'Sonic Animation Test', since there are flowers and trees and fun purple things (ew). So I decided to revamp the scenery - there are only flowers, and the single tree that bears fruit. But this space is neither heaven nor hell, and exists after death. And so: 'And you might've gone to heaven / But I'll do you one better' 'You'll find my world to be a sanctum...' And of course, to imply the idea that Rewrite might have a spiritual/emotional attachment to the Green Hill Isles, 'I'll plant you in the same garden that I sprang from' idk if what I wrote translated well. There's def a lot of ideas I wanted to put in but I'd already rewritten the lyrics like. Twice. So if I find myself making another song I'll put them in there Thank you for your question!!!!1! :3

[@Sylvan404]

@morefluidthanwater Sorry for the late reply, but neat. It's nice to see all the smaller details add such depth to a song like this.

[@SammyTheSillyOne]

This dude did indeed drop some heat

[@Buried_Blu]

Bro didn’t drop heat, he dropped fire 🗣️🔥

[@Thereal_cheeze]

SPRINGLESSMUSIC NEED TO SEE THIS MASTERPIECE 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥

[@Osy_za_OC]

I love the idea that Rewrite is so self aware, that he knows he's a exe!

[@Nightshadethegecko]

Holy sh11 this is FIRE AF! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@classicshadic8791]

HOLD UP LET REWRITE COOK!!🗣🗣🔥🔥

[@Hyppa_monk]

This is the best rewrite song

[@harleydodsworth9539]

Honestly,my two fav mods have gotta be rewrite and silly single(silly guitar) they're just PURE GOLD

[@FNFsanic]

Obsessed the lyrics are so good?? So is the vibe!!

[@miriampc1]

I sing along to this song and when I do I actually sound like rewrite sonic O.O

[@Andras1125]

Fire 🔥

[@Jako_Trades]

REWRITE'S SPITTIN MORE FIRE THAN ANGEL ISLAND ACT 2 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Seriously though, this goes so hard. great job!

[@Scr0_nkly]

1:30 WHY IS IT SO CALMING HELP AHH EVEN THOUGH THIS SONG MADE 1 DAY AGO- AHH

[@amistake9675]

Can get a longer version of the first part? I like how calm it is.

[@tigerwolfpip]

2:08 ayo why does that kind of singing remind me of luka as a Vocaloid not that movie

[@funnyman4311]

Rewrite said "Watch this shit I'm boutta drop some heat on this bozo" and dropped more heat than the sun. We stood no chance.

[@mr.playandc]

This song made me realize my earbuds have been in backwards for a while now

[@justinjohnson2483]

at 0:35 he says "memorize my name, baby all five letters" he is referring to his "name" "sonic".....

[@Sir_GrimReaper]

What's with the "..." Stuff?

[@justinjohnson2483]

@@Sir_GrimReaper the first " " was to quote then the last " " was meant 5p be sarcastic cause he isn't actually sonic

[@Sir_GrimReaper]

@@justinjohnson2483 hm.

[@Sir_GrimReaper]

@@justinjohnson2483 i get it now.

[@Xeptangle]

idk about yall but there are PLENTY of springs in this music

[@ShawnThe1Guy]

AND BUS- INESS IS BOOM- ING, TURN A- ROUND BUT YOU DON’T FOOL ME! LORD KNOWS HOW MUCH YOU’VE CON- SUMED ME🗣️🗣️⁉️⁉️🔥🔥

[@scarasleftarm_]

doctor: rapping rewrite is not real he cant harm you rapping rewrite:

[@Lil_Scorched2011x]

Rewrite be hitting bars 😎❤

[@princespeipei2317]

would there ever be a chance of getting this and the first untitled rewrite fansong on spotify?

[@shinox23]

Ok... Bro cooked... And we ate well.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@cecil.projectmp]

Drowning a Tails With This!!!! ❤❤🔥🔥

[@morefluid_thanwater]

amen brother!!!!!!!1

[@cecil.projectmp]

​@@morefluid_thanwateri'm ready

[@miriampc1]

The smooth animation on 1:22 btw 👀👍

[@barkinglights249]

holy this is good

[@FeverVoidthing]

CAN I PLEASE have the instrumental to this i wanna try and make a vocal cover

[@morefluid_thanwater]

I'd love to hear it! Please dm me via twitter or insta for the instrumental :)

[@FeverVoidthing]

@@morefluid_thanwater got it!!

[@SugaMudic]

Power via Dominion,via domain hits hard...

[@Shizalina]

i love this