Viszlát Nyár [REDO] - WIP

5 months since I uploaded my original part, but now that we're finally closing in on getting the last parts in with just about 2 remaining ones, I've decided I've got enough time to do a re-do
The last part was... okay? It's just insanely lacking in my honest opinion. The movements are stiff and some of the tweening is awkward to say the least. My art's also gotten way better since then, hence I want to reflect that in my part too.
Plans for the part:
-A lot of tweening but only the first tweening shot (shown in the WIP) is as complicated as that.
-Using After Effects' camera and 3d layers to make the backgrounds more interesting to look at.
-Change Mothwing's expression from one of shock to one of shame. The moth's wing sign has already happened, so her expression is supposed to convey that the moth's wing being shown to her is a reminder of why she's there in the first place. Maybe make the wing a little more tattered to show that it's been in use and that this isn't the first time Hawkfrost has grabbed it.
aand that's about it.
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/ soloratiste

[@imatiredSara]

Omg even in such a short time you've improved by leaps and bounds! :O I can't wait to see this finished! (And hopefully the last two people get their pieces for the map in soon 😅)

[@koaluvrr]

Aaa it's so good

[@tussy9798]

Te magyar vagy?

[@soloratiste]

if this comment is asking me if im hungarian or i speak it, i do not it's for a multi animator project im hosting using the song which i found via eurovision 2018. the title is in hungarian due to the song in english just being called "viszlát nyár (english version)"

[@tussy9798]

@@soloratiste Ooh, I understand! :)