What If Chi-Chi was the Strongest Human?

[@MasakoX]

Thanks for watching! Please be sure to like, share and subscribe for more videos like this! Enjoy the extended ending!

[@treyevans584]

Great ending man 👍

[@dbzdoctorwho4580]

Hello I am the doctor

[@treyevans584]

@@dbzdoctorwho4580 hey 👋

[@voiceactstart3111]

I love how you point to a Zamasu turned good video, but it's if Radditz turned good DX.

[@sinisterrequiem7742]

@@treyevans584 ii

[@JayCald95]

Masako is the best DB storyteller on KZbin. Really make the mornings more enjoyable. Wish he had a spot in the Dragon Room

[@jordanphillips4781]

Honestly he would make dbs way better.

[@chriscannon8144]

Dragon Room’s still a thing? I haven’t seen anything from them since the Yamcha manga ended.

[@vegetablackpotato4700]

Smugstick>

[@trunks2723]

@@vegetablackpotato4700 eh

[@vegetablackpotato4700]

@@trunks2723 nah maybe your right I guess I just like his voice and his ad cuts and the voices and talking between characters sometimes his telling of story's may not be as good but he makes up for it

[@gopher697]

"...and not on fire. That was nice" Line always kills me

[@snowjohnson8095]

"Unlike Goku in the Original SHE knows how to SHARE"🤣🤣🤣

[@jgoofy8233]

Wait, so you're telling me that the Ox king had a Power Level of 900 and could have actually had a decent match with Raditz? We need a what-if based on HIM now!

[@shadowsonicsilver6]

What if the Ox King came out of retirement.

[@jgoofy8233]

@@shadowsonicsilver6 he becomes the main protagonist of Earth lmao

[@aprinnyonbreak1290]

Raditz: Let's see the highest power level on the planet. *sees the Ox King* H-how about the SECOND highest power level on the planet?

[@richardcollins5189]

@@aprinnyonbreak1290 That's what I think happened

[@oshkeet]

Relatedly, Ive always wanted to see the more obviously magic-based characters of DB stack up against some DBZ guys. A lot of the former have abilities that seem like they'd skirt around an opponent's raw power.

[@Butter_Warrior99]

Finally, a full length documentary of a much better written character. You gave Chi Chi so much potential. Love the dedication Masako.

[@johnbones03]

Chichi: I thought you said you were wearing protection!! Goku: I WAS WEARING MY ARMOR!!!

[@SWyrick366]

"You know you're being bitchier than usual today, AND NOT IN A HOT WAY!!!"

[@TheWarmachine375]

An Alternate Ending for Chi-Chi the Z-Fighter? An unexpected surprise but a welcome one.

[@BCRivers]

In just 3 hours, MasakoX wrote a much better character for Chi-Chi than Akira Toriyama did.

[@seekingabsolution1907]

There is value in building on what others have made even if you couldn't make it from scratch.

[@jgoofy8233]

@@seekingabsolution1907 a valuable life lesson indeed

[@GTExia]

Akira Toriyama has already admitted he sucked badly at writing romance. Perhaps this screws up his characterization of Chi Chi as well.

[@ShadesinMirra]

It is not much of a bar, given that Toriyama doesn't really write more than 3 and a half characters at any given time

[@Socioromanticism]

The video in this format is 3 hours. They *absolutely* spent more time than that writing her for all of the episodes up to the compilation. And a lot of this characterization probably comes from considerations of previous discussions, What Ifs, and roundtables. In practice, it probably took the channel _weeks_ to write her like this.

[@JJ_R]

3:10:30 Masako: “If you wanna see some of my other full stories, check out this one where Zamasu turns good.” *[Points to video link]* Me: *[Sees both video links have nothing to do with Zamasu]*

[@jesserice7777]

😆😆😆 (He goofed.) 🤦🏽‍♂️

[@Dig_Duke_SFM]

@Ты клоун ok?

[@balrog262]

@Ты клоун BOOO

[@CerealExperimentsMizuki]

It shows 5 comments but there's only three.

[@ArrikKitsune]

I enjoyed these videos of Chichi far more than I expected. This was quite a treat since I always wished that Toriyama had elaborated on magic in the DBU since all we really got was Baba, Babidi and Buu until we hit Super with Moro. Great Work as always MasakoX!

[@eliandervalderen5849]

Yeah it makes sense that Chichi will have to step up against Moro. After all thanks to her quick actions there is no Majin Buu for the Grand Supreme Kai to channel himself through in order to interfere with Moro or to call on the reincarnation of Kid Buu to lend his key to the Spirit Bomb to destroy Moro.

[@balrog262]

This is a great idea. To be fair Chi-Chi can still be the lovable tiger mom while increasing her power and training steadily with Goku. Even in the Original Canon, she is legit the strongest woman on earth. I actually think Chi-Chi is rather sweet and endearing. I don't get the hate for her. I agree that Toriyama doesn't want to stumble so he just does what he thinks is safe. The badass mom trope really is what Videl and Chi-Chi should be developed into.

[@broly7507]

Actually it’s android 18

[@balrog262]

@@broly7507 She is an altered human. Chi-Chi is just a human.

[@oshkeet]

Plus Chichi would work really well playing off Goku as one of my favorite kinds of pairings: Both of them are actually kind of clueless hicks on a lot of subjects, but simply because of Goku's obliviousness and goofiness Chichi comes off relatively more capable than she actually is and always thinks she's the voice of reason. Basically "A goof" and "Also a goof but high-functioning goof hiding it much better." Ironically, thats the source of a lot of great Vegeta and Goku jokes, where both are clueless about some social grace or something, but Vegeta acts way more confident that he totally does and unlike Goku is smart enough to keep his mouth shut.

[@infinityheart_tm9270]

@@broly7507 Once again. How did Krillin do it.

[@thomastakesatollforthedark2231]

@@infinityheart_tm9270 he's a chihuahua

[@TheWarmachine375]

3:34 It would have been interesting to see Chi-Chi use that helmet capable of firing lasers or pass it on to Pan

[@jesserice7777]

🤔 If only......

[@BotSupportIronValiant]

Seriously, thank you for making it possible to get through my work days, listening to your stories helps relieve the boring droll so much. Would have liked to see Chi-chi fuse with goku though, that would have been awesome

[@theclown5763]

So I'm hoping for "What if Launch was a Z-fighter" this December - you could have her use some specially customized ki based weapons / pistols, guns, rocket launchers and some creative ki based gadgets in battles. + her mastery of ki makes her able to make her sneezing ability unlock other shades of hair and personalities alongside it. How about a red haired launch that's determined, energetic and fight driven, a pink haired one that amorous, lovey dovey and clingy, a black haired launch that is focused, serious and stoic, a green one that's intelligent, clever, jealous, sneaky and witty, and more etc. (But she cannot control in which she will change when sneezing)

[@atomicreactor6033]

Pink Launch would probably get alone with Ribrianne. As much as I don't like her, I could see some weird team up until they had to fight each other or Launch sneezes and Blonde Launch goes ham on Ribrianne

[@theclown5763]

@@atomicreactor6033 Agree! Launch's split personality has so much potential!

[@PrinceNexus_]

This is such a cool idea.

[@theclown5763]

@@PrinceNexus_ IKR?

[@PrinceNexus_]

@@theclown5763 If you know the power bow from the raditz what if, it'd be interesting to see a version of that for Launch; it could change shape depending on what state she's in. Maybe red could be gauntlets, green could be kunai, pink could be a bow... the list goes on, and since it would only work with her, you could even give it a run in the ToP...

[@WilliametcCook]

Gohan: Mom? Vegeta's here, looking for you. Chi-Chi: What? Vegeta? Well, tell him I'll be right there- Vegeta: _FIGHT ME!_

[@cynicalnitro8416]

"Something Goku can't counter" Goku LITERALLY countered death without Dragon Balls after his fight with hit. Suffice to say if Goku has dealt with something enough times, he finds a way past it.

[@anthonythomas305]

Chi-Chi is an great character in Dragon Ball. It would be awesome to see her fight again as a Z-Fighter

[@moneymankkk5797]

Dragon ball not z

[@ultradude25yt]

Alert Alert We got someone with jokes

[@ultradude25yt]

💩 > chi chi

[@Gameguy5289]

Man I just love how Chichi is a bit more of a main character than Goku is in this story and I love it.

[@shadowsonicsilver6]

I really want to see this version of Chi-Chi in another What If but it is Future Chi-Chi, holding the Power Pole, Future Paur hovering around her like a Fairy Shield.

[@TheWarmachine375]

*thumbnail* Chi-Chi the Sorceress Supreme!

[@jeanpierreruiz6393]

"Chi-Chi knows how to SHARE" best lime ever 😂👆

[@CesarACastillo]

I honestly believe that the reason Goku never taught anyone else Kaio Ken was because as far as I can remember is they never asked. Besides the only people it would really benefit would be the pure humans. It would allow them to be alittle more relevant when most everyone else has either Super Saiyan or in Picolo's case can fuse with other members of his race.

[@CesarACastillo]

@Lee Zenkais aren’t applied when a Saiyan hurts themselves. Self inflicted wounds equals zero Zenkais. The self inflicted harm of the Kaio Ken would fall under this. Look at what happened in Super when Goku combined it with Blue for the first time. If Zenkais applied to Kaio Ken then he’d have surpassed Beerus in that instant or at the very least closed the gap between their power significantly.

[@Cailan_Mors]

@@CesarACastillo pretty sure they stopped getting zenkais after Freeza anyway

[@blackashketsoup7330]

We need a what-if Ox King-didn't-sit on-his-butt-with-his-Dragonball-breaking-power-level 😂😂😂

[@aprinnyonbreak1290]

What if the Ox King actually trained?

[@josiaharaki7310]

Ox-king is nearly double start of Z Goku?

[@crazybeatrice4555]

@@josiaharaki7310 apparently

[@priestesslucy]

@@aprinnyonbreak1290 he did train. He was one of Roshi's students after all... And apparently far eclipsed even his master between his Mao power and Roshi's tutelage...

[@MayconMLG]

Ultra Instinct Ox King

[@ayatanjum3522]

A different ending! Great, thanks Masakox. Yeah!!!!!

[@smithwesson1896]

2:20:20 Wonder what Chi-Chi's "Super Ox" form actually looks like

[@hackerninjaexe5791]

The thumbnail already show ya what she looks like

[@blackashketsoup7330]

Thanks for the compilation and new ending! eyes 👀 peeled ears 👂 listening

[@nerdynerdfurry]

I love how MasakoX probably unknowingly added stands to Dragon Ball

[@silasstryder]

Thanks for updating the finale, it totally makes sense Pan would jump into the magical teachings with her potential an all. Although she didn't appear much in DBS they definitely fixed the future potential problems with GT Pan and I'm excited to see where they go with her post DBS. Definitely will have parallels with the original Dragonball as she trains with Marron at Kame' house but also have adult present Trunks and uncle Goten as good role models as well. Plus Vegeta and Goku are so powerful now they'd be busy training with Whis or doing stuff away from Earth so Pan can have her own adventures with Gohan watching in the background just encase she needs help, but she probably won't lol. Reorganized Red Ribbon army working with the Pilaf gang and wishing on the dragon balls to bring back King Piccolo or Cell, anyone?

[@greyisometrix]

I like the voice acting good sir. Really great writing, great following/inventing your own story. This is a really impressive video in multiple ways. Major props.

[@cobrabear6497]

1:36:19 "Krillin gets back up after wrecking kami house" i love those little dbza references thrown in.

[@Guntherson220]

Wow, Goku not learning Instant Transmission wasn't nearly the death nail it would have been in just about any other 'What If?', nicely done.

[@liamthegreat1092]

1:03:30 my only complaint about this and also in the original show is that it seems like the power poll is at its limit but Goku took the rabbit gang to the moon. I would expect the moon to be MUCH further than the lookout.

[@puppylover4865]

I really love this one. This one is definitely even better because Chi-Chi is not that loved in Dragon Ball.

[@balrog262]

Well, she is my favorite female character after Launch.

[@puppylover4865]

@@balrog262 I like Chi-Chi, but I like Bulma better.

[@balrog262]

@@puppylover4865 I like Launch best.

[@puppylover4865]

@@balrog262 I respect your opinion 👍.

[@nicwoolfe3885]

I like to imagine that in this What If, Raditz took Raspberry’s place for the Moro Arc

[@dragonitematero]

What ever happened to Raditz in this story anyways?

[@nicwoolfe3885]

@@dragonitematero He kidnapped Gohan, Goku and family chased him into space, got Gohan back, then told Vegeta & Nappa about the dragon balls as petty revenge

[@guardiantree8879]

Granted she wasn’t as active now, but I think the changes to Gohan, Goten & Piccolo warranted a continuation on their behalf’s.

[@darkabyssshine]

I love whenever he goes, stop it! “No, not like that stop it!

[@TrueBlood256]

Thank you for wrapping that story up the way you did I really enjoyed it

[@armandbier2502]

1:03:35 "further than it had ever done" the power pole had previously reached from the earth to the moon, which i think is longer than korrin's to kami's

[@gdragonlord749]

When Nappa chose a person to fight, what went through my mind was, "eenie meenie miney you."

[@scottylilacleona9193]

Just realized a minor funny. 1:03:38 “the pole had extended further than it had ever done” but then, Goku used it before to go to the moon. Not a major thing or anything, just a thing I just noticed.

[@cookiemaster4477]

This is simply my favorite what-if from your channel IMO. Great job as always Masako!

[@tianoc-g4811]

I really enjoyed the series and I do appreciate the extended ending you've given this movie. Chichi's involvement is very in character in this particular story as well as her resolve in the end of it; I would love to see this side of her in the original series. Overall you did a great job on the series and I like to see more of the other ones like Z fighter Bulma, Saiyan Krillin, Mark Hercule & Android Yamcha, and female Goku ( which I think 'Lotus' would have been a better name for her)

[@balrog262]

LOUTS IS PERFECT.

[@jaymuse127]

Masako...i know it's easier to take a pre-written character and improve on a story, but if anybody were to animate them...this is the third one they should do. R & R obviously and Resurrection F...Good Frieza. And thank you for listening to the fans. Perhaps the third amendment will come if they animate other arcs.

[@balrog262]

Gine would be the second one for me.

[@retrovt782]

I like the alternate end we get to see her pass down her skills and abilities

[@werecatauthor4249]

I love chi chi's development in this but I also love baba getting more development as well

[@681jhk2kz]

Your videos are FIRE!!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@KefkeWren]

I would definitely watch this version of Dragon Ball.

[@berryNtoast32]

This is my favorite What If! The tweak at the end it only positive

[@takeruneverborn4740]

See Toriyama take some cues from DBZ Whatiffery to know how to make the Wife/Female Companion more likeable and competent as well as actual getting to know the Hero and appreciating him despite his glaring Faults and building it as equals Bless Masako and the Whatif Round Table and other What If Producers of the DB community

[@painvillegaming4119]

Other then chichi Toryama didn’t really make any of the other female characters unlikeable hell bulma is like one of the most importing characters in the entire show 18 is getting back into action And ok videl I have a few problems there

[@takeruneverborn4740]

@@painvillegaming4119 I know man but we are talking about the Main character Love Interest and the Other Potiential Main Character Mother I like Teen Chichi in the 23rd World martial arts saga espically when she impress Goku with her fighting style but after that one of adventure to see Grandpa Gohan the moment Chichi became a mother to Gohan and found out Goku true heritage she became relatable but barely tolarated by the fandom until we hear the actual reasons she is the way she is that why I like this version of Chichi she is more involved and actual show more of Intrested in Martial arts and has something to bring to the relationship her knowledge and expertise in Magic based combat something Goku cant learn but Gohan and potiential Goten can sharing both her and Goku genetics and also Goku is more loving towards his wife and knows what marriage is and agreed to it👍🏾♥️😎

[@painvillegaming4119]

@@takeruneverborn4740 I am not really disagreeing with you I like this story I just really think people being giving toryama a hard time sometimes for no reason

[@casteanpreswyn7528]

@@painvillegaming4119 its not for "no reason". Listen, I love DB, DBZ, and even most of DBS, however Toriyama is one of the worst, yet successful, authors of all time. Dude is like legitimately bad at writing but great at coming up with ideas to paste onto Journey to the West.

[@LioGunne]

@MasakoX : I have a What If for you. How about Hercule finding out about the Dragon Balls? He could wish himself to be strong as the Z-Fighters: more stamina from Android 18, Zenkai from Goku/Vegeta, regeneration from Piccolo.

[@JJ_R]

So, basically, you want Hercule to become Cell…

[@samuel_goopster6600]

@@JJ_R What if Hercule became an Android sounds nice

[@LioGunne]

@@JJ_R I see how you'd make that comparison, but not quite. I'm not saying he should have any absorption abilities or anything; He's often bragging and taking credit for what the Z-Fighters did. I just meant for him to earn his title of being a champion of Earth.

[@LioGunne]

@@samuel_goopster6600 That would be interesting. 🤔

[@danieltanuwijaya7675]

@@samuel_goopster6600 Hercule as an Android would make him far stronger than 17 or 18. Lapis and Lazuli are AFAIK normal teenagers before becoming Androids, while Hercule is the strongest non ki using human on earth.

[@JDeO1997]

39:35-39:55 Goku: Ahh, Hugs are nice

[@batfreeze56]

My favorite What-If from you, excellent. We need more primarily OG DB videos.

[@zerrierslizer1]

MasakoX: Roshi gave her a serious look, Sizing her up. Me: oh. *oh dear god no.* MasakoX: *no not like that, STOP IT!* Me: *oh thank GOD!*

[@Dave-ug1rx]

First time commenting here but I really enjoy your work. All of your what-ifs are well done and well told. I like what you do and hope you continue to do so. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more. Just a simple, honest review.

[@Sigismund-von-Luxembourg]

I think the two must do what ifs are "What if Dr. Gero turned good" and "What if ki control was common knowledge on Earth"

[@TheKingOfRooks]

I watched these as they came out, and I watched this compilation when it did too. Now I'm back again for some good Masako masterclasses in Dragon Ball storytelling.

[@jacejan3128]

"What was that?" "Just a space duck." "Quack" "Majestic."

[@SWyrick366]

"What a majestic creature."

[@miniman649]

*listens to Gohan just getting into Vegeta's pod willingly* ok, can someone slap that brat already? He is literally the Abridged Goku of this story, causing problems constantly.

[@thomasmontoya302]

This is so much more wholesome than the OG grouchy Chi-Chi. Thanks MasakoX!

[@tntsonic7482]

Yoo adding alternate endings?! Thats awesome. You should do that more.

[@Detahramet]

This went from "What if Chichi was a dragon team member" to "What if Chichi was the main character in Z instead of Gohan". Not that I'm complaining.

[@JJ_R]

Amended ending? So we got something new *and* something more! Neato!

[@SammiD71]

I love this version of the story, up to the Frieza saga. It makes sense for this what if to be more pragmatic and be like “yeah chi chi is insanely powerful at this point and would be able to fight side by side with Goku”… you gotta remember… in the OG series, Goku had to fulfill an ancient alien prophecy that they weren’t even sure was real to be able to defeat Frieza. I feel the weight of that should’ve remained, with Goku still Soloing final form Frieza on his own.

[@SammiD71]

What I imagined would happen, is that frieza would aim to strike down Gohan, but ChiChi notices, and steps in the way of the death beam, sacrificing herself for Gohan. As she falls to the ground, Gohan catches her sobbing uncontrollably begging his mom to stay with him. “Please mom, don’t go again! I can’t lose you!” Goku sees this and flies straight to ChiChi’s lifeless body, cradling her in his arms. Goku goes blank, vacant and emotionless, as frieza powers up another death beam “Oh my I’m terribly sorry! My fingers slipped! I was aiming for the brat, you see. Let me rectify that mistake” Then in the last second, Piccolo arrives freshly fused with Nail, and crushes Friezas hand “Not gonna happen” Then piccolo wails on 2nd form Frieza like he did in the main timeline, giving Goku some time to stew on what just happened… …His wife… his lover… his best friend… gone… And she can’t be wished back by the dragon balls now since this is her second time dying (Goku isn’t thinking about the Namekian Dragonballs right now as he’s reasonably preoccupied) As this is going on, frieza sees he’s on the ropes, and he won’t be taken down by some Namekian scum, so he quickly takes evasive maneuvers to get time to transform.

[@SammiD71]

Frieza throws the battered and beaten piccolo to the ground, ready for his new super saiyan plaything. At this point, it plays out the same as it did in Z, with Gohan taking Piccolo and his mothers body to their ship and leaving, for Goku to have his legendary battle.

[@mikeuchiha5972]

"And sized her up" Takei: Oh My~ King Kai: DAMN IT TAKEI

[@riphelix]

I could listen to you tell alternative dragonball stories all day

[@M.W.K6996]

While there are a few things I'd change, I really enjoyed this fanfic. I truly wish Chi-Chi would have been a Z Fighter in the canon universe. Fighting along side her husband and allies in all their battles against their greatest enemies (as well as the tournament of the other universes). I mean, she was suppose to be "The Strongest Woman In The World".

[@josephalviar3281]

Thanks for the content MasakoX and what if you can mix and max “What If’s” like What if Babidi turned good? and What if Chi-Chi was a Z-Fighter?.

[@Maximus4587]

With _What If Chi-Chi Was A Z-Fighter?_ getting an extended ending in this video, maybe you could rewrite Part 12 (the Universe Survival Saga) of _What If Raditz Turned Good?_ when the eventual "full story" video for that series comes out...

[@spuzzfipple951]

44:50 I had to listen to that a few times. I know now you're saying "Crane student" and not calling Tien a "Cringe dude"

[@ehsanulalam4541]

The fact you made goten not be able to be use magic unlike Gohan sounds like something Toriyama would do

[@raditzdaimao1357]

I like what you did giving chi chi her own kaioken 👌

[@happysideoffear777]

dang I really like this. It makes it feel like a dbz where all the characters actually matter

[@KayLoo202]

i adore the long form of these!

[@ejohnson1767]

I have been looking forward to the bulk of these what-if stories. More than I have the Dragonball Super manga.

[@CheeseLoverRed]

Raditz and Ghost Nappa go on adventures together.

[@Gsmooth84]

At the beginning, the what if was very great without a doubt, but when we get to the King Piccolo saga, it focuses more on Chi Chi and in some way, Goku gets pushed to the side. From there on it feels more like a what if Chi Chi were the main character. I would be on board for that if it were. Don't get me wrong, I like the fact that Chi Chi has more involvement with Goku and the Z fighters, learns magic getting a new gi and getting better character development in the process, but this is still Goku's story not chi chi's. I feel like this fic took away from Goku in some way.

[@Trap5656]

Decided to get the very last part out of the way first. Huh? 🤔 So that's what happen to Chi-Chi in DBS makes sense with where her character is at. At least we get the idea of Chi-Chi been involved in the Moro Arc still. 👍 I like to still think Gohan still trained with the Z-Sword at somepoint, breaks it, and still got the Ultimate Form from Elder Kai after free him, because Ultimate Gohan with Magic sounds awesome. Oh boy Pan training with Chi-Chi and Fortuneteller Baba. Finally yeah if Chi-Chi was a Fighter she would happy and everybody else too now to start from the beginning to watch it over again, but full story time. Anyways again overall another good series, and looking forward to your next video soon.

[@LabMatt]

I just finished watching the playlist a few days ago Time to do it again

[@Eric-gp3hi]

An amended ending great! I’ve been looking forward to the super and end of z ending.

[@crazybeatrice4555]

1:03:34 is wrong, because goku took the power pole to the moon at one point against the rabbit villain in the pilaf saga.

[@johnathanholmes1297]

Chichi is mama to three boys here. Gohan, Goten, and her eldest, Piccolo.

[@YungBlitzArt]

Love how masako gives us the concept of a dragon ball that you can’t “tire of” , it has so many things that could actually fill in those gaps of filler, instead filling them with great side stories or background stories

[@youdom5]

Awww, I like the End of Z segment with Grandma Chi Chi and Pan!

[@TorManiak]

You know, that makes me kinda want more Magic-based Z-Fighters in Dragon Ball. We only have Buu if we can even count him as a Z-Fighter. I mean, the concept of Inner Beasts as magic(despite being more related to Ki IRL) could open many other things, since you could have some of the humans learn it as they are kinda weak right now. They could be weaker, but have more options, like Jacks of all trades.

[@enderborn6860]

original Chi-Chi got a kaioken like aura one time whene she got called old lady by Marron so its stands to reason that there´s more there

[@randallrona9618]

A better, stronger and fighter version Chi-Chi is the best version than the Canon version. She is a legit fighter that worth her with a title as "The Strongest Woman in the World". Thanks, MasakoX.

[@mixmaster3028]

I really like this idea. I just rather have her learn more martial arts in medical stuff but I really love the design for her

[@Ivo.33]

watched this a few times and as I near the end of the year, I'll say this, certain elements in this gave me joy, gave me hope, everyone might not understand but keep at it there's something big coming

[@IsaacClodfelter]

Goku's first death felt cheap due to the contrivances that lead to it. Him dying there would be completely fine, him dying there because he had to pee *and* the bathrooms at the restaurant were closed *and* the closest one was at the tournament grounds. Just a very small detail that in my opinion was flubbed from a writing angle.

[@thegirlfrommars4386]

Actually, I found there was something very Toriyama about it. He'd usually do stuff like this.

[@natedawg6755]

38:35 just call it what it is, CLOTHES BEAM

[@Chikararyoku]

nice new ending though in this story, without Hercule lying about beating cell or taming Buu, I wonder how Gohan still met and fell in love with Videl

[@TheBlackestShinobi]

16:58, "Aww, hugs are nice.."

[@charlesgillilan]

Have to ask, would the Moro arc even reach earth? The Grand Supreme Kai isn't missing a chunk of his power. I like the ending better.

[@lostonessoul5154]

interesting choice with the new ending. I like it.

[@MarjorieDGreen1313.]

Chi Chi is a boss and beastie as hell. In my book, she's the true M.V.P in this verse of DB

[@john98765333]

Roshi had no reason to tell her about Nam, that goes agasint the whole point of Him entering the tournament, to make sure that they lost. lol

[@acenolan2450]

Great job. And any what if without buu is a good thing! Chi chi needed a greater impact then she normally would.

[@Pheonix0324]

I still think Chi-Chi's influence on the story would make for a couple more interesting changes in Super, but still such a classic what if regardless