What if Naruto and Kushina Escape to Kumo | Part 6 | Finale

[@bradleykucera6371]

Hey y'all, I am continuing my writing. I have a couple more fics coming at you. My next one is kind of fun and whacky, it is called "What if Naruto was Written by Jiraiya the Gallant". I thank you for all of your support. Please let me know what you thought of the story or what I could have done better. Thank you for enjoying the journey with me. Love y'all.

[@1742Q]

I need you to either make more stories like this or continue the story

[@bradleykucera6371]

More stories to follow my friend.

[@djdriver2344]

I agree definitely need more stories like this

[@bradleykucera6371]

More to follow my friend.

[@nathanchilton7040]

I honestly cried at the end of this story. This has been one of the best stories I’ve ever heard.

[@bradleykucera6371]

haha, thank you. I am trying to evolve my writing and it is good to know that it is having an effect on my audience.

[@votetheodore2048]

one of the best fan flictions I have ever Listened to I really hope the Author makes more fan flictions that are Similar to this one I love when Naruto Becomes the leader of Another Village just Amazing!!!

[@caradpow]

This is def one of the greats. Well done.

[@bradleykucera6371]

Thanks brother, that is high praise.

[@anderswallin3883]

Good story! Keep them coming!

[@bradleykucera6371]

@@anderswallin3883 more to come shortly.

[@anderswallin3883]

@@bradleykucera6371 Cool! I just had an idea for a story. There are a bunch of versions of "what if Naruto's parents survived". But there is none where Naruto becomes popular with the girls and arrogant like Sasuke. He bullies Sasuke since he is weaker than Naruto in this what if, and beats him up in every sparring session. His parents does not know this because he does not act like that in front of them and the teachers does not report it to them because they do not think he is at fault. They only praise him as rookie of the year and all that. He acts like this because his parents are the strongest in the village, his father is the hokage and their training makes him the strongest in his age group. This combined with the villagers kissing his ass like they did with Sasuke in canon, gets to his head and it makes him arrogant. Something happens that causes his parents deaths when naruto is in his teenage years. He blaims Konoha for their deaths and becomes crazy because of his loss and basically becomes evil. He plans to destroy Konoha to avenge his parents deaths. Those plans evolves to taking over the world. He steals Nagato's eyes (and basically takes his place as Pain and Hinata could take the place of Konan) and makes himself the 10 tails jinchuriki to become a god in order to destroy Konoha and "create peace" in the world. He manages this because Minato figured out how to counter Obito's Kamui ability and Naruto uses that knowledge to beat Obito. And his training From Minato, Kushina and Jiraiya makes him very strong. Is this a story that you can make?

[@bradleykucera6371]

@@anderswallin3883 man oh man, that is an interesting concept. I don't like irredeemable characters and I would struggle to write that Naruto. It would be quite a project, it may be doable though.

[@anderswallin3883]

@@bradleykucera6371 I think that it can be an interesting story and split off from most Naruto What If stories. Since Naruto is generally the hero that does the morally correct thing. He could see the evil in the world like Pain does and blaim all the 5 great villages for most of the evil in the world. So his goal could be to destoy the great 5 an unite the nations under one rule. His rule as a god. But something at the end could change his views. Maybe someone could do the "talk no jutsu" on him and open his eyes in the last mayor fight (you can use a character of great importance to Naruto here). And he could use that revive jutsu of the rinnegan as some sort of repentance like Pain did. That would kill him due to the great cost of that jutsu. All of that could lead to the great 5 actually pulling their shit together and start working for a better world. So we can have this evil Naruto story but end up with a sort of happy ending. Naruto would also be intelligent in this what if due to him having both his parents teaching him stuff. I can actually picture him as a version of Sasuke here. A reason for his bad behavior in the start of the story could be him being slightly neglected by his parents. Both of them could be way too busy with their work, so they only train him in the ninja arts but neglects to teach him right from wrong. Jiraiya would spend most of his time away just like in canon to run his spy network so he does not see Naruto's bad side.

[@16jerrell]

Ok it was perfect 👍 from the beginning to the end and it was amazing

[@greyfoxshadow]

Can't wait for the next story you do after this one

[@bradleykucera6371]

Should be coming out shortly. Hope you continue to enjoy

[@RaisingRave-bf9yl]

The Uchiha abilities is to have plot armors saving their assess especially Fugaku and Sasuke.

[@Sarniikhan]

Great story from beginning to end

[@raymarkmaralit5903]

I need more of this. ❤️

[@sherwoodempire2777]

Can we plz get more like this one

[@GeorgeAlexander-r9u]

This was absolutely great thank you for the end part well done sage and the writer again

[@bradleykucera6371]

you are most welcome good sir.

[@willshappley9935]

That was absolutely phenomenal! Keep up the great work!

[@bradleykucera6371]

@@willshappley9935 thank you for the high praise. Next story will be dropping shortly.

[@16jerrell]

Oh yea I been waiting for this 😆😆😆

[@nas_d_goat]

🐐

[@johnfoutch9859]

YES KAKASHI GOT A POWER UP

[@fallostarbor9102]

Thank you bj this was awesome!!!

[@bradleykucera6371]

@@fallostarbor9102 sure thing my man! I am glad you enjoyed it.

[@johnfoutch9859]

wtf this is so wholesome 😢it can make a grown man cry BUT NOT THIS ONE GET IN THERE TEARDROP

[@bradleykucera6371]

Haha, I just wanna make you happy and keep you invested in the story. I am glad you enjoyed it johnny.

[@sayedahmed3116]

Next raised by the sanin

[@sandramunzel4339]

The story is perfekt

[@bradleykucera6371]

Thank you much, glad you enjoyed it.

[@zakdom19]

Did Tsunade go threw with the pregnancy? Also, is Jiraiya still alive or dead? After, the whole interrogation from Anko. As always, another great story. 👍 My only nickpick is that some of the clans got off just a little to easy. They knew that the village was going down the wrong path & waited until the very last minute to finally abandon the village

[@Roqjn]

Hehehe I hope you also post the other fanfic that author wrote about Jiraya Writing Naruto instead of Kishi

[@bradleykucera6371]

He will be posting that one next. More to come my friend.

[@Chucklechampion3000]

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