What if Naruto Takes All of His Parents Scrolls And Weapons And Leaves Konoha | Part 1

[@MrCadeRay]

How to make a cringe banished story: Have it take after the Sasuke retrieval mission usually succeeding. Fail if you feel edgy. Make a bs reason to banish him regarding the 9 tails and bs laws to make it happen. Then nake an OC who knows everything then disappears Usually a family member. Have him break the toad contract despite him seemingly forget about it in his battle with Sasuke. Final Step make him an edge lord

[@MrCadeRay]

He's way to accepting of his banishment and doesn't resent the land of fire for literally banishing him, but he hates jiraiya? Nah

[@nassalbraimbridge924]

These authors usually throw logic out the window when writing these. Anything for the plot, regardless of how stupid or unrealistic it sounds.

[@MrCadeRay]

@@nassalbraimbridge924 it's crazy too because they could have used the Akatsuki as a reason. Banishing him because he used the 9 tails chakra in a life or death situation is fucking stupid. They didn't mind when he used it during wave, the chunnin exams, or the invasion. Also have them deny that Sasuke actually betrayed the village is the definition of stupid. He was supposedly "influenced by orichi" an S class missing nin, yet they banish Naruto on the ground of "the 9 tails might influence him" . Also since this story acknowledges the tailed beasts as valuable assets it wouldn't make sense to essentially give him to a potential enemy village. I've ranted long enough. I hate these banished stories. Literally uses all the terrible things in Naruto and multiplies them by 100

[@ascensiongenesis_sigma]

Thank fuck. A real person that acknowledges the idiocy of these stories

[@nassalbraimbridge924]

@MrCadeRay Very true. I know it's hard to write these, but that's no excuse to write BS.

[@ret1sgreyes]

Banished Uzumaki By: bwhite9

[@devonmorgan9030]

The story was amazing I can't wait for part two

[@Thecreatorvoid]

#1 and part2🎉🎉

[@kalelholder350]

Part 2 please if possible😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

[@TheICEDEMON666]

Part 2 please and thanks

[@amandabaldwin5680]

Thank you for posting. I really enjoyed it.

[@Stormfrom]

Part 2 ❤

[@danostextingstories9654]

Can't wait for the next part

[@KedarnathMunde-h5u]

Part 2 please

[@johnathanhenderson93]

More parts, please. I saw similar stories, but they never continued it

[@SerratedSun5841]

Unfortunately there’s only two more chapters past this and the story was abandoned in 2017

[@robertruse6552]

Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like how the story told me in a couple of notes I do wish it was a lot longer I like the character development I like how you had one of the seven Swordsmen how about Naruto pass along a little bit of information I like how you did it I hope you come back make a part two like I said I do wish it was a lot longer and keep up the good work

[@IdealKasimi]

Part2

[@philippa8018]

Please make a part 2 soon

[@darthwitchking]

Naruto by the 80 clone Mark is doing 6 years worth of training in one month

[@banelehlubip5048]

Plz part 2

[@Jaymoney21-l5h]

Fanfic name please?

[@lifewithquezz]

Naruto was not this bright as a kids😭

[@annuchiha30]

Part 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 all the way to 12

[@DashhishigBaterdene]

You know the name of the what if

[@jamesboone8520]

fanfic link pls

[@jjerzey1]

Title?

[@MidnightLost01]

Title of story? Name of author?

[@ret1sgreyes]

found it Banished Uzumaki By: bwhite9

[@mikebaraki1712]

​@@ret1sgreyes thank you but the author still has not finished the story

[@ravwood7277]

why is Naruto aways mad at the wrong people in these type of stories

[@Jtho-rw4lb]

Fr

[@robbiepatterson4705]

Part 2 please

[@CrownThy_Trey]

Part two

[@sayyedaamil9674]

Part 2 plz

[@RYSRTA]

Part 2

[@demondwilson2734]

Part 2 plz

[@josephgalla4034]

part 2 please

[@richardpeck2231]

part 2 pls