Ok this story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line behind it I do like the character development I like how you deviated from the actual story I do wish you was a lot longer I hope you come back pick a part 2 and keep up to you at work
@rosielight48295 ай бұрын
Part2 please 🙏 thank
@dragonkingdom955 ай бұрын
More, this story is rather good
@Astro-ce3hb3 ай бұрын
Please give us the next part.
@touyamochizuki2894 ай бұрын
Part 2 please
@highrhinoАй бұрын
WTF Jiraya says he knows that pain is using the 6 paths technique and the real one is not with them but then the fight goes the same as cannon with him being confused there is 3 of them...