What if Naruto Finds A New Sensei After Kakashi Refuses Him For Train | Part 1

#narutowhatif #sensei #kakashi #training

[@robertruse6552]

Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work

[@MichaelLee-zn6jw]

Part 2 please!!! I love the divergences from cannon. Interesting that they took in Sakura; I understand she has motivation to get Naruto, but interesting choice. Also replacing Hinata with Hanna, and Hinata going for Kiba. Also the retreval team was interesting with the two clan heads replacing their clanmates. Made for too easy of a battle in my opinion.

[@malcolmandrews2779]

This is what should've happened for Naruto during the first Naruto Franchise!

[@virginiarichards6186]

Great story please make part 2 ❤❤❤❤❤❤

[@richardpeck2231]

part2 plz

[@keezinmosime9664]

P2 and P 3 ❤❤❤

[@yasserhussein3556]

Part 2 pls 🙏🥺🙏🥺

[@RaisingRave-bf9yl]

Oh and Jesus what wrong with Kakashi, Sasuke and Sakura.

[@Alexmurphy64]

Part 2😊

[@Holyrelic0]

The Fox and the Hound REVISED By: sageof6way

[@rosielight4829]

Part2 please 🙏 thank

[@mikolasvii5525]

really hope for more parts!

[@alextalbain9269]

I like how this story gets straight to the point, action, and story beats instead of wasting time with unnecessary dialog, cut aways, and arguments. This was made even better by what happened to Sasuke-bastard and Sakura-bitch. Please make part 2 ^^

[@rethinklogic930]

Respectfully, your attention span is absolutely fried. The writter speeds through plot points so fast that the story is un compelling, filled with errors, and isnt true to the original story. Stories the add the elements you dont like have more compelling 3 dimentional character development and actually interesting plot building.

[@BaLiSTicOptix]

​@@rethinklogic930 I agree, this story started out great and then it rushed through and now I'm done

[@user-pq3ek3bu7u]

omg pls pls make part 2,3,4,5,67,8,9, ect !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@user-ow9to6fs4t]

Love the episode need part two please 💚💚💚💚

[@TheJlb28]

Part 2 please

[@anthonyhuffman1692]

I like this story and especially like that. There is a feel of completion. Do the length of the story and it doesn't leave it just hanging? You know, some things could happen afterward. But you know, it feels like a story that's complete in and of itself. My problem is the flow of the story isn't right and at times it feels like you're just reading facts instead of someone's life. But other than that good job.

[@lordplague3555]

Feels weird that Naruto don´t call Hana "chan" or "big sis", considering how young she is. Think she would get giddy by that =)

[@RaisingRave-bf9yl]

Need more parts.

[@rurubellon5562]

Why do alot fanfiction say that Suna is next to iwa?

[@patrickpack8166]

Peak for killing sasuke and demoting kakashi

[@robbiepatterson4705]

Part 2 please