What if Qui-Gon TRAINED Anakin in Revenge of The Sith

[@DrJRaven]

You have successfully laid the foundation of an excellent screenplay that would make a great film.

[@Exaris79]

Actually the story might had been better if Anakin can see QuiGon's force ghost. Kyle Katarn has a unique ability to see both light&dark side ghosts.

[@Tmhjr_Baskar]

Qui-Gon was alive, though. It was Obi-Wan who died in part 1.

[@warrenbeall4946]

Good story! I think it might have been good to have a more thorough understanding of why Anakin killed (not murdered) Palpatine and Dooku, but it's okay! Especially with Palpatine, I agree with hesitation with Mace Windu, "He's too dangerous to be left alive!" As for Dooku, MAYBE he could have been redeemed (my only concerns with that are the murders of Sifu Deas and Yaddle). The shock on his face when Palpatine told Anakin to "Kill him now!" in canon is telling! With said betrayal, Dooku, I would hope, would see the error of his ways.

[@DrJRaven]

Excellent this is.

[@TenkoBerry]

This be Good, Part 2 I^o^I👍

[@YayoHernandez-b1j]

Jedi & Lords. How's it going? Also? How are the other what if scenarios that I said to you going on? Are they on your list? also great what if

[@Tmhjr_Baskar]

Given Anakin's upbringing with Qui-Gon it doesn't seem like he should have gotten close to Palpatine in the first place - not unless there was some crazy catalyst that brought the two of them together. I'm sorry to say, but in this story their bond doesn't make sense. Given his mastery of the force, Anakin should have been aware that the nightmares weren't normal. Especially if they're of the same form or type as the movies. If the dreams given to Anakin were of the Dark Side, he would have noticed the difference between his prophetic visions compared to the dreams. You referred to them (the trio) as Independent Jedi, so why would Palatine try to manipulate Anakin against the Jedi? This one too doesn't make sense to me. If Anakin considered them to be somewhat independent of the Jedi then this plot wouldn't have had the impact on him that Palpatine would have desired or wanted. If anything, it would have made Anakin wary and watchful. While I enjoyed this second half, the lil things I mentioned are like lil drill bits driving me crazy. And then theres the "lil" thing that seemed to be a focal point in part one. One word to sum it alllll up. Maul

[@DarthCrow]

Cool