What is Tone In Writing?

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Jerry B. Jenkins

Jerry B. Jenkins

Жыл бұрын

Have you ever written a story that fell flat?
It might be missing the power of Tone.
The right Tone is crucial to any story helping to convey your message emotionally - the best way to engage your readers.
But what exactly is Tone?
Why does it matter?
And how do you use it effectively?
That’s what you’ll learn in this video.
This video discusses:
[0:54] What is Tone in writing?
[1:44] How to set the right Tone
[1:49] 1. Know your purpose
[1:58] 2. Decide how you want your reader to feel
[2:14] 3. Choose the best way to convey emotion
[2:37] What are some of the various Tones?
[2:41] Examples of various Tones
[3:35] The Road Not Taken
[4:39] The Old Man and the Sea
[6:30] The Horse and His Boy
[7:41] How to develop Tone
[7:51] 1. Remember your audience
[8:12] 2. Layer in details
[8:42] 3. Inject Conflict
[9:02] Strengthen your story with the right Tone
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@GoinBand2
@GoinBand2 Жыл бұрын
I was writing my third cozy mystery and I was having an incredibly difficult time doing it. My mother was dying of dementia and indeed, passed one month later. A couple of weeks later I got COVID. I decided to just stop and rest, give myself time to grieve and time to heal. When I came back to my writing I wrote my mother into my novel and the tone changed dramatically. My husband said it was the best writing I had ever done.
@exceptionalhistory1955
@exceptionalhistory1955 Жыл бұрын
This is a really good point. I don't think I've heard it put into words this clearly before.
@terrydaniels9126
@terrydaniels9126 Жыл бұрын
Love it. No tears writer no tears reader .thanks.jerry
@frankelkjr8041
@frankelkjr8041 Жыл бұрын
The examples and simplicity of this was extremely clear and most helpful.
@snowman4821
@snowman4821 Жыл бұрын
I find it hard to write in different tones, i think. They are all quite similar. This does definitely help! I appreciate your channel so much. You word things so clearly and the examples you give are gold.
@LamarMohamedHusseinFouad-bp2ci
@LamarMohamedHusseinFouad-bp2ci Жыл бұрын
a tip i do is i create a character and put their physical and personality traits and i crate a voice for them then i write it helps i am 12
@law022456
@law022456 Жыл бұрын
Jerry, I thoroughly enjoy your teaching approach to writing. I wish you had been a professor in my literature classes in college. It may have laid the keystone to a writing career many years ago. Thanks for the continued encouragement to those of us who enjoy the written word.
@jinks908
@jinks908 Жыл бұрын
Over many years I've been through a TON of writing videos, help books, advice channels, masterclasses, you name it. The videos on this channel are gold. I subscribed after the first one I came across (which I don't even remember now because I've been binging all of them). You give such clear and effective advice that's not generic. Too much novel advice comes in the form of very vague, sort of catchall terms that seem obvious. Yours has substance and you can tell that you really enjoy sharing your knowledge and experience. Thank you SO much for this channel! Now if anyone needs me I'll be off buying several of your books...
@thepianoman9947
@thepianoman9947 Жыл бұрын
Your videos are great. You keep it simple and to the point.
@miraculousmari3518
@miraculousmari3518 Жыл бұрын
Mr. Jenkins, I just wanna say you, Abbie Emmons, Jenna Moreci, Jerry Jenkins, and the rest of my favorite authors and youtubers have helped and inspired me so much. Love y'all great writing mentors so much 💗
@Sbannmarie
@Sbannmarie Жыл бұрын
Good to see you here Jerry!
@spicysaucyvegan
@spicysaucyvegan 11 ай бұрын
I just found you yesterday and I am so excited with everything you have to share. Thank you!
@sheon33w18
@sheon33w18 11 ай бұрын
thank you, it is such a helpful point you made to write as if your conversing over a cup of coffee with a friend. that i think will really help me out as I am writing my first book and I am having trouble sticking to a tone.
@maggiekerr3319
@maggiekerr3319 Жыл бұрын
I've heard about writing for years, heard many people talk about tone but you explain it in a way that makes all the sense in the world and the pieces fall into place. Thank you.
@StingaB1
@StingaB1 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing this! It means a lot.
@AuthorChaquandaFoxx
@AuthorChaquandaFoxx 5 ай бұрын
Very helpful! I look to become even better with my writing.
@sheilawarren4223
@sheilawarren4223 Жыл бұрын
I’m a new children’s author and some of this may not apply but I adore you! For a successful author you are a magnificent speaker ❤
@OlettaLiano
@OlettaLiano Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the great tips on Tone, Jerry. It's much appreciated.
@archaontheeverchosen7980
@archaontheeverchosen7980 10 ай бұрын
I just found your channel and it's been a big help and inspiration. I noticed it's been 6 months since you uploaded last I hope you and your loved ones are doing well.
@brie3063
@brie3063 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this video. So many things to think about now
@terrystrong9787
@terrystrong9787 7 ай бұрын
These videos are a great class in writing
@olgathehandmaid
@olgathehandmaid Жыл бұрын
These lessons are so new to me, I know my writing is going to flourish under your guidance and generous information! I wasn't building on a solid enough foundation until now!!
@charlievankesteren8756
@charlievankesteren8756 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, great presentation.
@janetsingperry5834
@janetsingperry5834 Жыл бұрын
Thank for you this video. I am editing my manuscript and it is invaluable to learn these lessons from you. Your voice comes across as encouraging and very helpful. I appreciate it.
@aaronchapa1117
@aaronchapa1117 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Jerry! Hope you’re doing well.
@kamilla1960
@kamilla1960 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Jerry!
@Cabin_Fever13
@Cabin_Fever13 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for all your content!
@gillianlonergan7872
@gillianlonergan7872 11 ай бұрын
Just so useful. I am finding all these lessons so to the point. Thank you
@twan688
@twan688 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the new video Jerry!
@martinbraude
@martinbraude Жыл бұрын
Thank you Jerry. I really value all your advice. God bless.
@ascensionwalkies
@ascensionwalkies 10 ай бұрын
thank you Jerry. Great clarity on tone.
@caseyzimba9935
@caseyzimba9935 Жыл бұрын
As always, advice that I can understand well. Thanks so much.
@elinornerenberg560
@elinornerenberg560 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for a simple approach on tone.
@mageprometheus
@mageprometheus Жыл бұрын
Thank you. Another note in Obsidian on writing. I read "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening" as a young boy and it's never left me, always triggering my goose bumps.
@freelycommon
@freelycommon Жыл бұрын
Love the videos Jerry, can you do one on what makes a quality Prologue and what it should include? I'm an aspiring writer working on my first novel and I thoroughly enjoy your videos but I've never done it before.
@celebiglives9842
@celebiglives9842 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your videos!
@cathydrummond9869
@cathydrummond9869 Жыл бұрын
Very helpful and informative. Thanks.
@davidplaysrobloxfortnite6352
@davidplaysrobloxfortnite6352 Жыл бұрын
Thank you!😀
@SentientSoup
@SentientSoup Жыл бұрын
As an aspiring writer I really appreciate all of your advice. Thank you. I hope you are well.
@rayroz-justforfun354
@rayroz-justforfun354 Жыл бұрын
So good! it make me understand what tone i need to my story. Thanks a lot!
@lindal9885
@lindal9885 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for excellent examples of "tone!" Also enjoyed seeing the vintage typewriters on your bookshelves. I imagine you learned to type on manual typewriters in high-school like me! There was one Selectric in the room!
@travlkar1
@travlkar1 Жыл бұрын
Good for thought. Thanks, Jerry
@Joe-243
@Joe-243 Жыл бұрын
I Love the left behind series
@user-mr1mn2yh1y
@user-mr1mn2yh1y Жыл бұрын
Well, that was informational. Thank you.
@tomaria100
@tomaria100 2 ай бұрын
Thanks, Jerry!
@bradp7327
@bradp7327 10 ай бұрын
Thanks for giving what schools charge big bucks for. May the Lord bless you and your family.
@RaniNazz
@RaniNazz Жыл бұрын
This is really good point nice wonderful and amazing beautiful sharing
@larrybone4065
@larrybone4065 Жыл бұрын
Really good. Great suggestions of what to do. There is still so much to be created in the writer's head but these suggestions give tools for navigating along the path of one's story.
@Reese33591
@Reese33591 Жыл бұрын
Great info thanks
@BrutalSnuggles
@BrutalSnuggles 11 ай бұрын
I haven't watched this video, it's only your latest. I've just recently found your stuff and to be honest if I'd recognized you're name I never would have watched you. So glad I did though, I'm not done yet but I'm 12k words into what I imagine as a 100k word manuscript, thank you so much for the wisdom and encouragement
@asanctifiedlife
@asanctifiedlife Жыл бұрын
Great information!
@akioasakura3624
@akioasakura3624 Жыл бұрын
Thank you once more mr Jenkins. Thank you so much for not using music too, I find it annoying. And sir, could you pls do a video about writing a fight or battle?
@lynntoytrainmuseum8973
@lynntoytrainmuseum8973 Жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@kaylawilliams7326
@kaylawilliams7326 Жыл бұрын
Thank you ❣🙏🏽👑👏🏾🌞
@dennorskeoffisiellehoppeta9243
@dennorskeoffisiellehoppeta9243 Жыл бұрын
Amazing Stuff!
@clint_oreilly
@clint_oreilly Жыл бұрын
Well noted :)
@happyeddy2314
@happyeddy2314 13 күн бұрын
Merci!
@cowgirljane6976
@cowgirljane6976 Жыл бұрын
On my next rewrite I will be pondering tone to analyze whether I am using it to my and my reader's advantage.
@melanienaidoo775
@melanienaidoo775 9 ай бұрын
Thank you jerry
@bonniebeingbonnie001
@bonniebeingbonnie001 Жыл бұрын
Voice Vs. Tone
@1MeowNow
@1MeowNow Жыл бұрын
thx
@juanstudios2290
@juanstudios2290 Жыл бұрын
I am just 12 years, but I wrote more than 30 stories
@sangitamangal8079
@sangitamangal8079 Жыл бұрын
RIP jerry . u were an inspiring author. may your soul rest in peace.
@GreenDre
@GreenDre Жыл бұрын
What do you mean by that!
@raghvendrasinghsengar8360
@raghvendrasinghsengar8360 9 ай бұрын
😢WHAT THE FU... NO WAY
@mattiOTX
@mattiOTX 9 ай бұрын
Im not sure how to write the tone in my book because growing up I read the bible a lot. I ended up writing my story to follow that. It's almost a religious piece but the tone shifts as the changes in people in the story shift including character growth.
@bradp7327
@bradp7327 10 ай бұрын
Jerry, did you get Left Behind from the C.S. Lewis passage?
@audiomyths722
@audiomyths722 Жыл бұрын
Hello! Sir hope you're doing well. I've a question regarding writing novels. Nowadays use of AI are strictly prohibited for writing professional. So in that case is it good to use Ginger Writer for writing profession.
@audiomyths722
@audiomyths722 Жыл бұрын
Sir is it mandatory to write professional screenplays using a screenwriting software or I can do that directly by using MICROSOFT WORD maintaining the format of writing a professional screenplay.
@MywritersNook-ye9ze
@MywritersNook-ye9ze 9 ай бұрын
Jerry iam a slow learner. I don't know much about punctuation in writing. I love to write but I only use periods. When I write. Is there any help for punctuation.
@firzen1e
@firzen1e Жыл бұрын
Amp up the volume please.
@hypixal1512
@hypixal1512 Жыл бұрын
I'm writing a Book right now Called Gods Country its a Modern day civil war Based in the United states. I have noticed that the quality or the amount of details I am puting into the actions has gone down making it less interesting to read, are there any tips on how I can make it so that does not happen. Also how do I make good Dialouge that I fits into the storyline and the scene I would be writing.
@101group8
@101group8 10 ай бұрын
Hi Jerry Great content. We are launching our new Online Radio in Perth Western Australia and would love to restream your shows, with your permission. Regards Michael 101 Media Group
@iOnRX9
@iOnRX9 Жыл бұрын
@rentonreva2047
@rentonreva2047 Жыл бұрын
comment
@bethduggar5589
@bethduggar5589 Жыл бұрын
How about sarcasm
@LamarMohamedHusseinFouad-bp2ci
@LamarMohamedHusseinFouad-bp2ci Жыл бұрын
@NovelistJerryJenkins i want to publish books i am 12 as of this year but i barley show my friends should i publish ?? a tip i do is i create a character and put their physical and personality traits and i crate a voice for them then i write
@eprohoda
@eprohoda Жыл бұрын
@NvoelistJerryJenkins !Yo. really unusual .do you wanna promotion?.farewell-🤓
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