When a Screenwriter Collabs with a Dungeon Master: Worldbuilding, Lore & More (feat. Jay)

[@jay_2_smooth]

We making it out of the Ojabog with this one 😈

[@ihavespoken9871]

Is this the first comment Local pinned that wasn’t a hate comment?

[@localscriptman]

@@ihavespoken9871Sean didn’t make an appearance this time

[@ihavespoken9871]

@localscriptman he’s too afraid to diss now

[@shadowbanana8449]

🤯

[@dwydeezdundoon]

youve got a good start, mr.'s Big and Little. please dont go down the preachy route. remember the choose your own adventure format .

[@Mayo-ow5lb]

As a person who has made lore for his minecraft world once,i can definitely relate to this video and will proceed to thank you for creating such masterpiece

[@localscriptman]

Making Minecraft lore is next level

[@JonasBuechnerArt]

My minecraft worlds always have lore. What else could be the reason for a new city to be built than a deep history and religion that motivates.

[@Mayo-ow5lb]

​@@JonasBuechnerArt fr fr sometimes i even like to give my villagers story or friends lmao

[@combatbenyamin]

This is actually dope as fuck and I'm amazed I've never done this.

[@JonasBuechnerArt]

@@Mayo-ow5lb I used to do that with my lego builds as a kid and kinda just kept going when I got Minecraft

[@autumnmarilyn5216]

Distinguishing worldbuilding from lore is so important and I never thought about it, oh my god

[@mrjong-pildasong1468]

Isn’t that common sense ?

[@Jaredragon]

@@mrjong-pildasong1468 no, you arrogant jerk. this man just had the discovery of his life and your just like "ur dum i new dat alredi" I'm happy for you @autumnmarilyn5216 and am glad you found something to get excited about learning

[@davidegaruti2582]

​@@mrjong-pildasong1468it appears not

[@Belugamale8738]

Inspirational Speakers when there is a sudden lack of extended words

[@ratfry]

@@mrjong-pildasong1468While it's definitely a clear cut distinction as this video defines it, I'm an active member of worldbuilding communities where the focus is typically more on creating a world for its own sake rather than creating one for a story to live in. In those groups the terms "worldbuilding" and "lore" are interchangeable and encompass both the systems and the reasoning and history behind them. If someone starts out as a "pure worldbuilder" and then decides they actually do want to tell stories in their world it would be easy to not understand the jargon as described here at first.

[@MinurielVilquen]

The "once removed" principle is so cool, I've IMMEDIATELY started generating ideas for my main antagonist - he used to be a fairly standard "powerhungry jealous God" but now I've made him essentially the younger/twin brother of a very powerful, skilled and vain Goddess who embodies much more of the "tyrant god ruler" archetype. By being the twin, this means that he now competes with her, using his subordinates in creative ways to skirt her control and create his own power (he becomes the God of Innovation & kick-starts the industrial revolution), instead of fighting over the same amount of power (based on landmass, followers and worship) that the other Gods use.

[@patrickterryjr4764]

That’s super cool!

[@benelmore745]

I'm an editor, but watching your videos has helped me communicate better with directors who write their own scripts. In a way, editing is its own form of rewriting a screenplay, and being able to speak in writers' terms has been immensely helpful! Thanks for all you do!

[@localscriptman]

Thanks for your support! I will say that directors can be oddballs when it comes to writing, especially when they're writing for themselves

[@jef_3006]

1:50 I have, on several occasions, forgotten to name a character in my D&D game until I was literally in the middle of introducing them to the PCs during the session. Please imagine for a moment that you're playing D&D, and you meet this powerful local religious leader, and the first thing he says to you is, "Hello! My name is... oh fuck I forgot to name him! I've just been calling him 'the Abbot' for three months!" I actually did that. That's real. And it's not the only time it's happened. It's not like he didn't have personality, or backstory, or connections to other characters/the plot; he was the father-figure of the NPC I was inserting into the party to eventually betray them! He had all of that. He just also didn't have a name. Nowadays I have a spreadsheet of all the major NPCs, which obviously has a name column, so it's pretty hard to not notice until game day now. But without something like that, I'm really bad about it.

[@localscriptman]

Ha yeah and I wanna stress that I was coming at that from a psychological angle, but I don’t think characters having names makes the story fundamentally better or anything. Just helps me with writing them

[@raser4329]

I do something very similar. I could write an endless series about a character, knowing every relationship, every piece of backstory, and every inch of personality, but they won't have a name. D&D is particularly annoying because there is always a random NPC that the party fixates on and I have to create a name and deeper characterization for.

[@nw42]

One bit of advice I’ve heard is to generate a list of maybe a dozen random names. When you’re on the spot, just pick one from the list, maybe tweak it however feels right, and you’re good to go. Just don’t forget to track which names you’ve used!

[@jef_3006]

@@nw42 I've heard that advice before, and it does not work for me at all. For a lot of reasons, but one that no one ever seems to think about is races. This is D&D; this random NPC could be a human, or a dwarf, or an elf, or even a beholder! And then there's the male/female/neutral variations. There is not set of twelve names that works as well for a human milk-maid as it does for the leader of the male orcish raiding party, or the dragon that lives in the next mountain over that uses polymorph enough that they gave up on gender two centuries ago. And I, personally, am just as likely to forget to name the dragon as the milk-maid. I find I'm better off just taking 15 seconds to open up a random name generator.

[@bigeye6606]

well in my experience no player remembers any NPC names ever anyways

[@ginge641]

I think a story based around Aegon would work, but with him as almost a force of nature that everyone has to contend with. Like this mf is barrelling his way across Westeros and he WILL get to you and your lands eventually. How do you react to that? How do you stop him? Do you even try to stop him? Who do you align with out of desperation in the face of this absolute ligma male rocking up in your garden and charging at your front door?

[@localscriptman]

Oohhh yeah I think that's the right way to handle him. He's sort of like the Terminator

[@Peagaporto]

In that story the "main family" would probably be the Martell from Dorne then. They gave Aegon a run for his money.

[@LonelyMinnesotan1]

​@localscriptman the difference being the terminator CAN and WILL BE stopped, though at great cost, risk, and no small amount of luck. Aegon HAS to and WILL win, else the whole story doesn't work.

[@teracota8788]

I’m studying creative writing for my Masters and this has basically been my school. Thank you for existing ❤

[@localscriptman]

Thank you for watching, glad I could be of service

[@alexspace9878]

I’m glad I’m not the only one getting to this stuff later on and getting a lot out of it. Best of luck with your studies 🫡

[@tedarcher9120]

You been scammed my dude

[@localscriptman]

@@tedarcher9120 S c a m m e d ?

[@tedarcher9120]

@@localscriptman creative writing masters is pretty much a scam unless your prof is Sanderson lol

[@maliquelovell9093]

I think it's crazy how you only have 14 videos and your content is just so good

[@localscriptman]

Video take long time 👽 but thank you, I appreciate your support!

[@whatisrealknowtheformula6137]

I think it’s crazy that you are so young and your content so comprehensively and sarcastically wise. Keep up the good work.

[@localscriptman]

@@whatisrealknowtheformula6137 Thank you! Yeah I’m gonna be 22 in August

[@Elija503]

@@localscriptmanhey man I’d pay money to talk to you, you should make a discord connected to your Patreon if that lines up your interests.

[@localscriptman]

@@Elija503 There is a discord connected to my patreon

[@HamptonHampton-v2n]

I wanted to say thank you, I’m a very young person who wants to be a screenwriter and you’ve really inspired me when it comes to my writing

[@localscriptman]

Thanks for commenting! I’m glad I could be of service

[@Cityweaver]

Lore?! Lore!! I honestly enjoy fictional history. Its more story...but from the back. I often tell people that the four paragraphs they sent me about why the magical school uniform is green were really great, very illuminating, however, we're going to rewrite them now with proper nouns and action verbs. The adjective is the emotional crutch of the writing world. Like, if they were writing about the lead up to WW1, they would describe how angry the Sebrians were, they would describe the AH Empire, and they would describe nameless, facelsss "rebels" from right of a character sheet and squad tropes. But it would take gentle prodding to get them to simply say "The Austrian-Hungarian Empire annexed and occupied Serbian country. The Black Hand were an independence rebellion group in Sebria and they believed in unity or death. They assassinated the Archduke Franz Ferdinand. Funny story about how..."

[@lory3771]

I have started with a preexisting world before because I have a bunch of ideas I really like to keep around for a particular story. However, I use the preexisting world as a template, not a mold-it’s a jumping off point that can bring with it some pretty cool ideas, but it’s malleable, because it has to be.

[@localscriptman]

Yeah that seems like a good way to do it

[@elfrangofrito]

Yeah, the story I'm writing right now wouldn't even have been conceptualized if I hadn't first thought of a world where supervillains were rising and giving problems to the goverment, to the point the government decides to make a military program of Iron Man like soldiers

[@subghrajputraghav]

I just create an outline of the world with geography, chacracters and history, and just place those together until story.

[@PromptGod]

Bingo, this is how I'm building my world and characters. This channel helped me adjust everything towards themes a the world started creating itself 😂

[@simontheseventh]

Mhm mhm! For me, the trick to writing in preexisting worlds has always been to find a theme in it somewhere - or an underexplored area I can mold into something of my own - then derive my characters from that

[@janjelabear]

Okay so I've been struggling to write a couple of episodes for my cartoon project. I tried using your suggestion of asking why to everything and I've fixed a crucial episode in like half an hour. I cannot thank you enough.

[@localscriptman]

Glad I could be of service, good luck with your thing 👽

[@eyesack6845]

What is the show? Where can I watch it?

[@notgaryking6455]

I am a beginner writer. I don't have a writer's education. And I am so grateful for your content. You make some things so clear and *usablee*! I don't just learn something new, the gears in my head start spinning immediately, whether it's because I already have a story where I can apply it or (what's even more cool) because I start imagining something brand new just to try out these new tools. It's educational, functional and therefore (for me) inspiring. Thanks, man!

[@yuin3320]

This video brought to mind something i heard from an rpg showrunner "Characters are all like stained glass. The shapes, colors, and translucense are all different, but the light shining through is always you." And i would also like to add in that actors no matter how close they stick to a script are injecting their own personality, and I've heard that the best directors collaborate with their actors rather than just dictating what they need to do. Just two tidbits i figured could be interesting to think about moving forward, considering what you mentioned in this video

[@flynnzer00]

You know I actually listen to your posts when I'm working on my DnD world. Your videos really help me out a lot!

[@localscriptman]

I’m happy to hear it!

[@halodoughnut190]

You give, hands down, the most helpful writing advice ever. This vid is especially helpful as I’m a dungeon master myself.

[@localscriptman]

Happy to help 👽

[@danieln727]

This has become my favourite writing channel so quickly. I’ve gotten so much further with the screenwriting projects I’ve been working on since I started watching. Thanks for keeping this amazing content coming!

[@localscriptman]

Thanks for tuning in!

[@discreetscrivener7885]

I think the joy of interactive media like DnD is the fact that it leaves room for problem solving. But I think without the dice, the highs and lows would make things fall flat. I think of playing pretend as a kid, and acting out Pokémon battles, and how you’d end up with someone shouting “I use Claw!” “But I dodge you!” “No you don’t, I hit you!!” And the whole thing falls apart. The dice prevent that issue, because chance decides to what degree you are successful, combined with your stats. Usually it’s up to the DM to decide the circumstances of your success/failure. But as I said the great thing is the space given for problem solving. In a different campaign, I came up with a cool move wherein my half drow would shadow step and stab the orc Chieftess we were fighting- but I failed and she caught my wrist. So I was put into problem solving space again. I ended up being able to negotiate with the chieftess and find out her motives. We were only there in the first place, because on a random side adventure we killed a bull mammoth sacred to a group of centaurs. The centaurs were going to kill one of our party members in its place, but was willing to let him live if we got rid of the orc camp that they had a rivalry with. During the course of the fight we realized that all the orcs were female. After talking to the chieftess we discovered the centaurs had taken all their men folk captive. We ended up siding with the orcs and brokering a truce between the orcs and centaurs. This was in no way part of the main plot our DM had planned for the day. But our choices and failures pushed us into problem solving mode and therefore into meaningful gameplay.

[@discreetscrivener7885]

Another DnD story I want to share: Someone’s paladin died during a side quest, and everyone was really bummed out. The DM had an idea to circumvent it, but said the player had to accept it without knowing what it was. So my friend’s human paladin was resurrected as a teifling. Which opened up all kinds of fun character angst for later.

[@pastlife960]

As someone who is working on a stupidly big fantasy story and world that is always one step away from spiralling into an uncontrollable mess of plot lines and lore, I appreciate this.

[@gentlemanbard3649]

At 18:33 you can just hear in his voice, this is not just a collection of characters he's pushing through an epic backstory... these are nuanced, complex, friends.

[@tallismarlowe2224]

so, here's the thing: i am in fact a writer who starts out with a premade world where the lore is already codified to an extent. i'm a writer, editor, and teacher in the beyond skyrim-arcane university projects and honestly, i love being able to just jump in and fill in those "hows" and "whys," and then build off that lore to fill in the gaps. we have unofficially designated loremasters who we can pester and who are usually happy to either infodump or find us resources. the thing with starting off with a pre-defined lore set is that you get to touch on pretty much every aspect of the world. compare the father teaching his two young children how to hunt to why a tree looks the way it does to a god pulling the strings behind a massive tragedy. one of the things that i (try to) teach my students is that you have to follow not just an internal logic in your story but the external mechanical and technological constraints of your game engine - you'd be surprised how many times i've read something that just would or could not happen. knowing your limits and where (and why!) you can or can't twist, pull, change, or push them is one of the most important skills a writer of any discipline can learn. dialogue is especially tricky given the interactive nature of a video game and it has unforgiving limits, which is why we have students work on it so much. what's that? an ellipses? oops, that's a crash to desktop, game engine can't handle that. i've learned so much from my time in video game writing that i can apply to my fiction writing to the point where seeing the overlap between writing disciplines is really fascinating for me, which is why i like your videos on screen writing so much. and i will be stealing that "fire up the darling killer 3000" for future lectures, so thank you for that lol.

[@ThuderDragon2408]

Recently I’ve found it very useful to represent every group/organisation with a character who acts as the “face” of that group. Even opinions on events can be encapsulated by a character. E.g instead of “the doctors refused to operate because it’s too dangerous” it could be “doctor Connor refused” from which you can go into his character and personality to see why he felt that way.

[@iantaakalla8180]

I remember that this trick is pulled to express the fall of the Amaroutines in FFXIV. In general, when Hermes forces the disaster of Meteion and her song of despair, plenty of Amaroutines sacrifice themselves to make Zodiark. Some others counter that by instead following Venat and following in a sense of hope that later people can overcome, and reject the recreation of paradise most Amaroutines seek, creating Hydaelyn. (Venat knows this because she meets FFXIV Warrior of Light/Azem, who admits to her the plan of Hydaelyn.) Then the world is sundered into fourteen shards, and only three Amaroutines (Lahabrea, Elidibus, and Emet-Selch) are left to try to reconstruct their society by rejoining shards. Emet-Selch is the only person left who really remembers what goes on, and is broken in trying to enjoy life but bitterly remembers how everything was torn from him and is stuck. There is a particularly good scene where the weight of this on every remaining Amaroutine is shown succinctly. Hythodaelus, as a nice person but is not a person counter to Amaroutine society, sacrifices himself and moves to the left to indicate he is part of Zodiark. Venat, as a person who puts her trust in the future and believes in moving forward, moves to the right to imply that she is forced to be Hydaelyn and sunder the original world. Emet-Selch, as the leader of the Ascians who just want their world back, is stuck in between. In this, you succinctly see the bind that Amaroutines have come to because of Meteion causing all of their creation magical to turn against them and ruin their paradise.

[@StinkerTheFirst]

The "once-removed" principial is fascinating. You have this archetypal paragon, but they are in the backstory. The person in the main narrative that has their role can then be compared and contrasted with them. What differences are there? How do they feel about this? A writer can get a lot for this once-removed character just by having this paragon in their backstory.

[@burburkang]

Only 4 minutes in, and I’m already so thankful for writing advice like this. It educates where some lack and it affirms what others have been doing right all along.

[@uniisnor]

The "on gameplay" section says everything about, with out actually saying, the players are the antagonist of the story. The story is set to move in a direction, and with out player involvement it will land at that destination. The players actions get in the way of the story's progression and it then needs to take a new path to completion.

[@Badepfropfen]

Man, getting TTRPG content from a writing channel like yours is blending my two favorite things. And shout-out to Jay! This setting rocks!

[@ShockedTaiLung]

Didn’t expect D&D stuff from this channel but as a huge nerd I am pleasantly surprised

[@localscriptman]

🤓🤓🤓

[@ShockedTaiLung]

@@localscriptman 26:12 🥸🥸🥸

[@LevidianXerg]

I made a world long ago full of characters and lore and what not. Eventually I hit a dead end, my characters had no depth no background or story and this stopped me from progressing further. Now that I know my mistakes I think I'm going to revisit it and try to improve it, maybe even start a new one in the same universe. Thank you for the help Local.

[@whdphd7116]

couldnt have been timed better, decided to finally take the plunge and make my own campaign last night. another flawless w for the Local fandom

[@localscriptman]

👽

[@audrey7673]

you're the only channel where I don't skip ad reads out of sheer respect for the segue lol. thank you! for the bit about once-removing, it tied together and brightened up quite a few things in my worldbuilding. looking forward to the next!

[@distantsea]

Why chaining is really interesting to me because I subconsciously did it for a while and almost always I found that the real story that mattered to me was found in that backstory. Turns out, the king being a huge authoritarian because he lost his daughter long ago is way less interesting to me than actually writing about the daughter going into the great big world and getting captured. She has to make connections with other captives and grow strong to escape, all the while while her father tries to track her down. Finally seeing that she has indeed grown up when he catches up to a daughter who freed herself. It's wild how often it happens to me, to the point where sometimes I'll create a scenario I know I'll never use just to construct a backstory that would be a more interesting front story.

[@StinkerTheFirst]

YES! Writing is a lot like exploring. You can find things you didn't expect.

[@sildurai8287]

The one thing i took from all my role playing experience is that you don't make good stories directly, but you make situations with many different possible outcomes. This ensures that player interactivity is consequential. Oh and of course the other half is to react with your characters as soon if there is anything, that could provoke an interesting (and consequential) action. The story will then emerge from that.

[@macchupichu]

Everytime you upload, I am filled with the glad. Your content 100% deserves the attention it's getting and way more.

[@GregMcNeish]

First time seeing your channel (I'm from the D&D world), and this blew me away. I'm getting into short story writing as well, and both the common ground and differences of the media fascinate me. I subbed before we even hit the 10 minute mark. Cheers!

[@localscriptman]

Thanks for your support!

[@gladiatorvee]

literally already in love with this channel from the thumbnails alone. i'm in the process of writing out a script for my webcomic idea and i need all the pointers i can get. subscribed.

[@lilowhitney8614]

I love starting with a pre-existing world. For one, it helps be come up with details that make the story feel more lively and less generic (as giving details based on a big picture idea tends to give more generic results). For another, the limits on what I can do are half the fun. If I have a plot point I want to do but the worldbuilding details go against it, I now get to problem solve my way into a situation where the plot point can still happen without changing the worldbuilding too much (which tends to create interesting complexity hat wouldn't have happened otherwise).

[@covvardice8296]

Not saying anything others haven’t said a bunch already, but thank you for this channel. As an older person who struggles with not ideas or concepts for characters and worlds, but struggles with how to structure these things into a cohesive way to turn it into a narrative on paper, seriously just the basic structure on getting these things down on paper in the way you’ve explained in your previous videos. It’s truly invaluable youve helped me tremendously

[@LongOrShortDock]

Thank you so much for making content and putting words to these concepts. I am getting more into writing because of you, and your video about dialogue has helped tremendously. Currently, I am drafting an SCP article, and it would not happen without your great advice. Side note, when I played DnD in high school, I developed my campaigns directly from my friends PCs’ backstories. In this way, I outsourced what my stories were by coaxing creativity out of my friends, and the way I did this was the Socratic Method of asking “why is this?” Hearing you go on about the “why chain” near the start of the video is very similar to what I did, and hearing it was so nice.

[@olavapedersen6049]

As someone who primarily watches your videos to become a better GM, this is a gift, thank you

[@ianeiii]

This sounds like the coolest campaign I've ever heard. 100% would by a book. Love the channel man

[@ahennessy7998]

As I'm revisiting a world I created about 2 years ago, but never made a story for, this video has been invaluable. Thank you!

[@miisa_iisa]

This is so well timed because I’m making my first dnd campaign so I wanted to watch one of your videos to help and there was a lore video waiting for me 🙏

[@tismantis5436]

You inspired me to write! I love the way you do your videos, it makes me feel like writing is actually something attainable, and not just for a certain "elite" persons, thank you for everything random internet guy!

[@localscriptman]

Thanks for tuning in

[@AreimaYT]

"most of the conversation about worldbuilding is very superficial" Got my subscribe. I am a writer, primarily flexing my muscles on running DnD games for the last 15 years. I knew everything you said, in a way, but what you said still helped because its useful to have new perspectives on old information.

[@LKEngine]

That is a great way to handle world building... Lore is the why, the what, when where and who come during storytelling.

[@sethreyes8988]

Kurt Vonnegut once implied that the best story has no point. That we end exactly in the same position where we began, because that is the true reflection of life

[@ernyoung8357]

Kurt Vonnegut has written the majority of my favorite books. I love him and his dryness and wit so much. However, I think that anecdote about the "line of a story" moreso was meant to reflect his philosophical outlook on life as whole, rather than a silver bullet template that all the best stories should follow. In my opinion, he's basically saying "Life is absurd and there's no meaning to it beyond that, so a realistic story is an absurd one." In regard to the subject of this video (creating lore out of worldbuilding through causality) I'd argue that whatever story you write SHOULD have a point. You could say the purpose of running/playing a game of D&D is many different things, but I think most people wouldn't say that purpose is to create a true reflection of life. Curious to hear your thoughts on my take! Reading this got me to stop what I was doing and really think about why we consume entertainment and play games.

[@sethreyes8988]

@@ernyoung8357 Sometimes I struggle to differentiate writing and life advice. 😅 I would actually agree that a good story needs a point, a theme to resonate with, or a goal for our protag to strive for. I'm probably thinking more of "coming full circle" like in the hero's journey when the hero finds themselves back exactly where they started except wiser and with a whole new perspective on their life.

[@thefriendlydefault9684]

Such a great thing to come home to after a 12-hour shift, time to sit back, relax, and not so patiently wait for the next upload.

[@BlueAndy_]

Im so happy that you are going into the gaming direction with this video. Since i started watching your videos i really like your opinion and thoughts you shine on media i seen before but could now see in a different way. I whom is really really into game development and for that word building/story writing will try to learn from stuff like this. Thanks

[@aixohanta]

currently planning to write a book with silly little characters ive created back in secondary 3, this helped so so much

[@Hiddenphantom9999]

The skillshare transition was crazy!! lol Love your videos, dude. Been binging them since two days ago

[@AcelLeca0]

I never understood how one could make stories. I am also a bad storyteller in general day to day, but my god was your explanation crystal clear you have no idea how much i resonated with your explanations. I am PUMPED THE FUCK UP MAN.

[@olaoluwaoluleye129]

God, i love these videos. Honestly, i wish i could have played the game without knowing my graduation would get interrupted with a dragon

[@amanofnoreputation2164]

An example of the "once-removed" effect is, as it would happen, in Zelda. Hylia is the perfect iteration of the wise-queen archetype and is a literal goddess, the Zelda of _Skyward Sword_ and basically all the other mainline Princess Zeldas are these "wise-beyond-their-years" kind of messiah figures who just kind of know everything and always tell Link what has to be done next whenever they show up, and then finally the Zelda of BOTW is a nerd who, even though it wasn't actually her fault, is made to feel like a screw-up and is afflicted by guilt and self doubt. There isn't even any particular in-context reason that the archetype "decayed" and became more complex other than the 10,000 years of complacency purchased by the Shekiah's plan to defeat the first Calamity being so successful. She still has those messianic moments, but they always seem to come upon her like some kind of possession or deeper personality like the Nameless Pharaoh form _YuGiOh_ and there more sense that she's a person with limitations and desires.

[@ChefSuplex]

Been waiting all week for this video! great insight and the delivery is hilarious as always! 💯💯

[@localscriptman]

Thank you, I’m really proud of this one since it took so long

[@cloudxlofi2104]

The sponsorship transition is next level.

[@janaeporter3513]

This was EXACTLY what I needed right now and if my work ever gets published I WILL credit you for “why I am so darn good at writing” 😂 Also I’m basing characters of Lucas and Jay because *incoherent excited writer noises I can’t describe in words*

[@localscriptman]

Major win, so glad we could help

[@_Aarius_]

I like working within a pre-existing world because the limitations that come with that force more deeply working through the issues I want in the story, how they intersect etc. It's HARDER but I find it ends up with a more interesting/deeper story

[@FearnOl-Glenn]

You had me for the long run when you said, "I've personally found most of the conversation around world building has been superficial and foundational." I thought I was the only one. Thank you thank you thank you for digging in.

[@actualturtle2421]

I'm a songwriter and you've given some advice that has opened up a whole other world of possibilities for me. You've really given me some insight on a different storytelling process that has helped me crank out a good handful of bangers in the last few months.

[@edenmckinley3472]

I like your method of working with archetypes. Personally, in my novel writing, I like to play archetypes in full and explore them to their greatest potential. I also love creating backstories for characters who personify an obvious archetype. The making of a legend is more interesting than the legend itself.

[@dawnsybebo2632]

Thanks so much for making videos! Your explanations are really concrete and make me feel like I can really tackle the storytelling problems I’m having and make progress 😄

[@DestrinProductions]

That sounds like an awesome world! I've been working on a world of my own and I feel like it's gotten stretched thin. This video will really help give me some ideas on how to clean up the history and lore, so thanks!

[@sea4851]

Your videos are not only practically helpful, but are also fun and inspirational. It's so good to find a channel where I know I will always love and learn about writing just a little bit more. Thank you. Also, thank you Jay! This was so much fun.

[@localscriptman]

Thank you, we really appreciate it!

[@dougquinn9705]

Love the video and I wanted to thank you because your channel has been so very helpful for me, as an aspiring game developer. I have had almost the oppossite problem as I inherently understand how to create complex, deep, spontaneous narratives between groups (sometimes large groups) of people, but I don't have any idea how to write a story myself...let alone create a lore, that will help people create stories. What I can tell you about ttrpg's or table top games in general, is that DnD occupies a very unique experience and handles narrative construction unique to itself. It is only really able to do that because of both age and storytelling traditions that have grown around it over several decades. In other games what motivates the player to behave in a way that is coherent with the story, are incentive mechanics. Every game has different ways of doing this, and there are many different perspectives on agency of the player, and adherence to the story. There are too many different takes to recount here and I can try to give an example if you want. The purpose of these mechanics is to both provide a character ability or mechanics consequence that the player has bought into. this is tied to a narrative element the GM (game master) incorporates or ties into the world's lore. The trick is that the player has already bought into that story because they have chosen that option, and GM can use that to motivate the character in accordance with the story as they have just unknowingly agreed to.

[@drereviews8868]

Along with my screenplay projects I’ve also been writing a novel series and creating lore and world building is so fun

[@LunaProtege]

The "once removed" thing sort of sparks some ideas given how it plays into a handful of characters I played in a game that I'd like to use if I ever ran a game... However, in that case, it wasn't so much falling with each removal so much as raising up. It started with Orphea the First, who for her descendants would become as myth, was the illegitimate child of a dragon who was also a lord of a distant land; the story as it came to be told was her descendants was that in a land to the far east her mother Kirika seduced the dragon under the assumption that her own strengths could only truly have flourished with sorcery, and that would require a magical bloodline which she didn't have enough of. The result of this was her being branded a criminal and conscripted, and the culture's sense of honor and shame placed Orphea the first as having the same social status as a criminal herself save for a direct punishment. So she left the land with her own children, only to presumably die drowned on a beach trying to buy time for the ship carrying her kids to leave for the west. This act of dying in water would repeat twice more, but with hints of betrayal added. Orphea the second started as a slave on a pirate ship, only to help start a mutiny and save the new captain through trickery and magic, only to be pushed into a fight with a squid by the very captain she saved, and died. Orphea the third would die at the hands of a fey creature that beguiles and drowns those that see it, and this happens because she tried to save someone else from this fate, only for that person and the rest of the party to leave her to die. By Orphea the Fourth, we're dealing with a character with trust issues, more ready to run than risk herself, though she may come back with help, and a belief in fate, and a fear of water... So she's wound up in a desert land of iron gods and machines... However, despite all of this legacy, she manages to live, thrive, and overcome the machines and the iron gods and become a demi-god; one interested in helping others follow the path to godhood through the overcoming of fate, one she's already done once, and likely will a few more times. ... And then there's her children, in addition to leaving a town she formed in the hands of her first daughter, Orphea the Fifth, her second daughter Astra recognizes that her mother achieved all she did while being a fool caught out of her depth, and so seeks knowledge and wisdom so she can one day support her mother, and then Orphea the Fourth's illegitimate son named Zagreal born the son of a demi-god of strength named Zenon that she stewarded; and Zagreal has to deal with trying to reconnect with his father by gaining the approval of his stepmother.

[@Dan-Dillon]

D&D permeates every aspect of my life, so, this is awesome. Very cool seeing into the process and expansion of this setting and story!

[@browniebear]

*Hello Future Me* has a fantastic video on Worldbuilding & exploring 2 methods; Hard Worldbuilding and Soft Worldbuilding. Someone in the comment section of that video aptly described each by saying: Hard worldbuilding creates a story for the world. Soft Worldbuilding creates a world for the story. I go goofy with inspired giddiness when I refer to that video and now with this one (even tho I've not finished it, I still know this will be insightful/inspring cuz Lucas LocalScriptman is no less than a prolific writing prophet bestowed upon us by the Sacred Elders of Storytelling)

[@localscriptman]

Whoa high praise. Yeah I’m familiar with his stuff, he’s pretty good

[@Bottle_O_Glue]

glue (Translation: Yippee! another video from the local script man now I get to watch it at 1 am and think about how to apply its information to my story and then maybe do that in like 5 months :D. But seriously, you give us some of the best writing tips on KZbin for FREE!? Absolutely Foolish. 10/10)

[@localscriptman]

Glue

[@lorenzo1425]

You not playing games gives a lot of insight into the really functional way you view characters. Deep local lore

[@toso2890]

Man you just sparked the next idea for my campaign. Love your videos dude, helped me alot with my writing and storytelling. Dont forget us when you become famous 🙏🏾

[@localscriptman]

Thanks for watching, I will not 👽

[@spicyoniondip2742]

I just wanted to tell you how much I appreciate your content. I’m an amateur writer attempting to make my first serious project after years of not writing with purpose, and your videos have been genuinely helpful and enjoyable. Thanks a lot!

[@porkyorcy1715]

describing it with that ball simile was great

[@einholzstuhl252]

2:40 John the bleg is now my favorite bleg in all of fiction xD. Thanks for all the videos. They are very helpfull for my writing.

[@4xdblack]

I had a whole essay talking about this very topic. People who just world build, and people who just write stories are equally feckless. World building IS writing, and must be treated as such.

[@localscriptman]

Oh I have feck. I have so much feck

[@4xdblack]

​@@localscriptman Oh come on ScriptMan! You know, I Feck, You Feck, He she me Feck, Feck, Fecking, We'll have thee Feck, Feckorama, Feckology, The study of Feck!? It's first grade ScriptMan!

[@connor8198]

I'm not big into DnD but Ive done plenty of text based rp games in the past. I think what you mentioned near the end about the dice changing the experience is something I need to think about when it comes to text rp. It seems like all games are either just the DM stringing the players along in their own story like a group of people locked into a theme park ride with no real agency, or the rp is an aimless sandbox that never gives anyone a reason to care. I really do like rping so I hope I can figure out a good way to go about it in the future. Anyways, great video, thanks for the content bubba

[@Ambreil]

26:13 me re-reading the paragraph i wrote at 3 am last night

[@crazyfishrmn27]

You're elevating the way people think about storytelling, Mr ScriptMan. Kudos to you

[@redfalconx8138]

Please do more of these, I really enjoy it and this video is the best ive seen so far. Perhaps a series of worldbuilding like for religion, culture, fleshing out cities, nations, gods, etc.

[@imthescrubjay]

Whoa, I'm mad early and I don't even have notifications on

[@patience耐心]

How in the world does the first five minutes of this video gave me more help than about most part of the writing advice I looked up, holy

[@Rexxy06]

Love your content bro, when I heard you were gonna do a DnD video I was ecstatic and you did not disappoint. I'm excited for whatever else you got in store for us.

[@whateveryousay8510]

Local's videos are so great for me personally, because he presents concepts in this "rational, it all makes sense" type of way. Like a math, in a good way

[@localscriptman]

Thank you, I really appreciate that. Definitely what I’m going for

[@lunaponta594]

oh my god, a longer localscriptman video tomorrow will be such an amazing day

[@ryanratchford2530]

Love to see your exploration into magic systems & worldbuilding. Look forward to your personality stuff!

[@wavebuilder14udc75]

4 minutes in and all the problems i was having with my storytelling and Worldbuilding suddenly got so much clearer.

[@EphemeraEssays]

The ball analogy is such a simple, beautiful way to put it. Great video!

[@erianle123547]

This was a wonderful exploration of worldbuilding and how a story/campaign can build itself organically as the writer(s)/DM/players expand it overtime. As I see it, a D&D campaign, as well as similar games, is a collaborative storytelling experience. I liked how you mentioned the DM running two parallel timelines, one where the players aren't present so the DM can know what would happen without the players interfering with world events and characters. The two key aspects of D&D that make it what it is are player agency and randomness of the dice. Firstly, players don't know what happens in the untouched timeline that the DM has built, which is what gives meaning to player agency. Their choices are their own and will have an impact on the story no matter what happens because one way or the other they are changing the timeline. By creating new events, erasing others, giving rise to new important NPCs or killing off others before they become important. Essentially, no matter what the DM has planned, player agency and the choices of the players at the table will always have the greatest impact on the story overall. This is best seen at the end of a campaign where the DM can reveal the original timeline and show the players how/where their protagonists altered it. As a DM, you can also drop hints throughout the campaign, which helps to give an illusion of depth to world events. The 2nd being the randomness of the dice, which takes the collaborative storytelling experience between the DM and players and throws an unexpected wrench into everything. While looking at rolling dice on the micro-level, it might suck to keep rolling low in a fight, more so if your character dies, but it means the story isn't completely in the hands of the DM or in the hands of the players, allowing both sides of the table to turn the exploration of the story/world into an active experience. The DM isn't just telling the players lore or recounting world events they wrote a few hours/months/years ago, because the DM doesn't know what is gonna happen next so they remain just as engaged as the players. I use to write collaborative stories set in all sorts of fanfiction settings, ranging from generic fantasy like D&D, to Star Wars, to the Naruto series, and when two or more writers work out a goal for a story and then feed on each other's ideas as they go back and forth, it results in some amazing storytelling. However, when they don't agree on a similar goal or story arc to explore, with each writer wanting to do their own thing, it often results in arguments and abandoned projects. Which is why rolling dice in D&D is so important to the style of collaborative storytelling that is D&D, as well as similar games. The DM sets the scene, takes the roles of the NPCs, setting the foundation of the setting in real time so the players have something to explore and make their own. However, it's up to the players to ultimately design the protagonists, or the main characters of the story, which means they also determine the overall direction of the story being told. The further collaborative elements between the players helps give depth to the story overall as the player characters get better acquainted and begin to work together or develop interpersonal friction where desires and interests of both the players and the PCs clash or collide. Can you run a D&D campaign between a DM and a single player? Yes, you can. However, the thing that truly makes the D&D style of storytelling so unique is how the interplay between the players, as well as between their characters, changes the course of the group in unexpected ways, similar to how the randomness of the dice allows for the unknown to influence the story leading to a more organic story within the campaign. It's also what allows a single campaign idea to be reused or replayed, either with deferent groups of storytellers, or the story elements can be reworked into new stories, new characters, new plot hooks.

[@Quon_the_Destroyer]

I really enjoyed hearing how screenwriter was able wrap their head around d&d and it's relationship with lore and worldbuilding. cool stuff

[@secretscarlet8249]

That skillshare segueway is amazing 😂

[@RookSha]

This was a sick watch. Extremely helpful, stuff like why-chaining and once-removing especially for me. if you have more techniques, tips and methods for people that are dumb like me and didn't realise these top tips it would be extremely cool to see a video on stuff like that.

[@projectafterworld2557]

A writer dictates the story. A GM facilitates the story. A reader interprets the story. A player instigates the story.

[@beegfeeg4473]

I think what has helped me the most with writing a world is to not view it as a story that you are writing, but rather to tell the story of a world that did exist. Whether that be a world that once was that is now lost, or is still an existing world is up to how you write it. It take away the disconnect from the writer to the world, where you will write more like a distant omnipotent being, rather than a bard or storyteller, retelling the stories of yore.

[@arcticnerd5994]

This video should be called screen writer discovered cooperative storytelling

[@Elias54321ify]

I love your videos man, really intelligent and inspiring stuff so please keep it up !

[@localscriptman]

Thank you! I will

[@sentelscribbles6583]

Hey man, I been doing research for a job I've been trying to apply to and stumbled on you completely by chance, and now I'm like multiple videos deep, where they no longer have anything to do with my topic. Just wanted to say thank you, I appreciate and am fascinated by your particular mix of chaotic goblin energy and clear, organized, to the point and most of all FUNCTIONAL information.

[@SizzleCorndog]

No joke idk why but this got me into the headspace I needed to be in to set up my next dnd world and i had to grab my phone to write down the premise in the shower

[@ItsDesca]

This type of content is fucking FASCINATING and helps me so much with my own stories. Thanks for taking the time to make these videos :)))

[@StarlasAiko]

I have worldbuilt for most of my life and never got good at it because I kept neglecting the lore. I am now working the other way round, starting with the creation myth, mythology and lore (using pre-Helenistic Proto-European mythology as guidelines) before even thinking of any maps and dungeons and stuff. The actions of the gods will shape and reshape the world. I already have three Ends of the World: The First Dragon War, The Devine Rapture, The Mage Wars. Each time, the landscapes and maps changed drastically beyond recognition (which is why I didn't draw any yet) and each time the civilised/thinking races were razed to the brink of extinction, loosing much of their technology (due to not enough craft/tradesmen surviving to keep the technology alive) and effectively being thrown back into somewhere between the Neolithic and Bronze Age, struggling for survival in isolated villages with hundreds of miles of untamable wilderness in between, each one believing themselves the very last survivers of the last cataclysm, leaving the world littered with ruins from one, two or three apocalypses ago, with artefacts of unimaginable power, made of the sacred Iron or the mythological Steel (or even the unholy demonic Plastic of the First Age).