When I Came To After The Blow To The Back Of My Head My Cheating Wife's Lover Smiled And Said It Lo

[@richallcorn]

"WHERE" do you get the "One-Liners" for these? THEY HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH THE STORY!!!! This never happened in the story!!! "When I came to after the blow to the back of my head, my cheating wife's lover smiled and said, "It looks like you've become a big disappointment to your wife. That's why she told me she'd have to find another rich sucker. And since you had that damn prenuptial agreement, the only way to get any money out of you is to kill you..." He didn't even get threatened ... his WIFE was murdered!!! It's like a different story!! This kind of sloppy writing does NOT deserve a thumbs up.

[@Ivy-jx2jy]

I read this at Literotica under the Murdered Wife

[@bbarr815]

Plot and characters kept me listening.

[@nooneofimportance2110]

Wait ... since when does insurance pay out on suicides? The writer's dad offed himself, after his wife was brutally assaulted and murdered, so there would have only been the mother's insurance at best. I know this is a fake story, but still ...

[@kerenmorado-rh2di]

The tension builds with every revelation. Did Kelly's elaborate plan involve her own demise, or was it a botched setup by her real husband?

[@theEVILone0130]

Interesting story that had me curious throughout the whole story. I wondered about the first husband but figured it was the second husband's family member behind the killing that or the AP thinking the deceased wife was attempting to blackmail the AP and that he was behind it.

[@jimmycantar8571]

Too many words too little substance.