Wow, how cool that you liked it! I'm very grateful because I don't always receive compliments, in fact, most of the time if someone likes a story they don't comment, but if they don't like it they comment, a point is good for growth but sometimes it's good to be recognized for something good too , be at peace!
@morrissoublet252 ай бұрын
When did they manage to launch the ship??
@bertarndt99532 ай бұрын
Repeat, repeat, repeat. A.I. at its best. It like read a paper, that needs to be 500 words. And all you have is one or two sentences.
@markluhman89402 ай бұрын
The write should take some physic lessons. You will never see laser light coming to you until the laser hit you all light travel at the speed of light, a laser is light. You will never see the scattering light before the main laser hits you.
@FictionalReimagined2 ай бұрын
lol
@bonnienichalson51512 ай бұрын
I don't own a dog / meow Meworrr :)
@FictionalReimagined2 ай бұрын
lol
@lynneclark53132 ай бұрын
The girls find "an imposing structure" and all of a sudden it's a SHIP?? And now the ship is a WARSHIP?? What happened to all the "Intruder Alerts" and "Defensive Actions"? The emphasis of the AI is a bit off: calm when it should be excited, soft when it should be high and squeaky, going down when it should be going up. Very confusing! "They were now not just ...." repeated and repeated and repeated. And unexpected and inappropriate pauses. First, they are in space then suddenly, they are on the ground again? Since they were looking up, above the ruins of the city when the aliens arrived. And now the "Escape Pod"? They don't even know where they are. Out in space, yet "they ascend into the sky"? AND I'm tired of "I don't know.".
@FictionalReimagined2 ай бұрын
You know how it is... she looked at me, suddenly we got married... when I saw her I had 12 children lol
@captainobvious92332 ай бұрын
Easily explainable... One of the Girls is dreaming the whole thing. 😎