When the Simple Mechanic Repaired a Broken Robot, He Never Expected What Would Happen Next! HFY

[@antsquirly7654]

Good story, well done.

[@FictionalReimagined]

I knew that one time or another I would get some good stories! lol

[@grampaj3416]

Enjoyed it. Simple and applicable. Kinda need that right now with these interesting times.

[@FictionalReimagined]

🙏

[@Keltie-438]

A decent yarn, agree with most comments in someways, but in all a 👍

[@FictionalReimagined]

Your comment is very kind of you! May God bless and may I improve every day to deliver good stories!

[@stevevaden3971]

Good job, a little editing and giving the “mechanic” a name would make it perfect. Original content is refreshing. 👍👍

[@TarsonTalon]

I'm gonna guess they were only able to get away with this because those soldiers had a code to follow. Because the protagonists hadn't used violent methods, the soldiers were not authorized to engage violently. Also, perhaps there were even discussions in their advanced society at that time about the rights of robots, and wiping out a non-violent village to recapture one just wasn't worth it.

[@FictionalReimagined]

If you haven't heard this you missed out!

[@cherub112361]

I've just started listening to your stream. This is one of my favorites, but they are all interesting. Thank you from an old lady that appreciates a good story!

[@FictionalReimagined]

You are very kind and I'm glad you're enjoying it, I hope I can always meet your expectations, but I warn you, sometimes I'll fail hehe!

[@vanguard9067]

If the mechanic were active, his tools would not be covered in grime. There are other incongruities throughout the story.

[@partymanau]

Yep, good Mechos look after their tools.

[@vanguard9067]

@@partymanau yes, sir.

[@redhankyteddy]

good one

[@FictionalReimagined]

Hey, man! Thanks! Sometimes I get the hang of it hehe! lol

[@deckiedeckie]

I liked it.....

[@CryptidsRoost]

Great job, brother

[@FictionalReimagined]

WoW, you don't know how much this means to me! Thank you very much!

[@CryptidsRoost]

@@FictionalReimagined You're welcome

[@frankmosca4613]

​@FictionalReimagined you had me at the first three paragraphs. I've been professionally published in years past, and this is one of the very few of the dozens of SF on here that I've heard which had a real hook that made me WANT to know what happens! Thanks.

[@FictionalReimagined]

@@frankmosca4613 WoW thank you very much... I'm very happy to have managed to deliver something at this level!

[@jasonstanton9358]

Name it skynet or cyberdine

[@FictionalReimagined]

🤣🤣🤣🤣

[@roserea3156]

No name human, but named machine. Seens lack of respect.

[@FictionalReimagined]

There is a film that I don't remember the name of now that the author named the character "the protagonist" at no point in the film does he say his name... if that made this work bad for you, may God soften your heart !

[@jamiepatterson1214]

Nice story, though the caption needs edited.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Your comment is very kind of you! May God bless and may I improve every day to deliver good stories!

[@timopalmer6239]

The robot a name but the mechanic is only known as Mechanic. Anouther AI generated story, getting better but still has AI flawd

[@jimglass5892]

Ask ,Ai to make music it's hilarious

[@valengis2153]

Maybe IS because the IA but the trilogy of the dolar was written by a human and the main character have no name but the horse have one.

[@graphixkillzzz]

your comment reads like an ai bot wrote it 🤷‍♂️

[@valengis2153]

@@graphixkillzzz puede que sea por el idioma, puede que sea una IA, quizás tú eres una IA y no lo sabes.

[@Bartman61]

It’s a bit plain but again in real life it can be plain or just boring…5 out 10

[@FictionalReimagined]

ok

[@graphixkillzzz]

the narrator sounds like he's been reading these things all day and now he's just tired and can't wait to stop 🤦‍♂️

[@FictionalReimagined]

😮😮😮😮😮

[@zarb88]

captions need to be optional

[@jackreisewitz6632]

Really just a stupid story, with more holes than a sponge.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Poor hard-hearted man!

[@jackreisewitz6632]

​​@@FictionalReimagined Your story had great potential. You're poor authorship denied it fulfilment. You owe the story an apology. Learn from your failure.

[@FictionalReimagined]

@@jackreisewitz6632 I thank you and I really consider myself one of the most failed around here... anyway, thank you and God bless you my friend! See you next time!

[@jackreisewitz6632]

@@FictionalReimagined An author is a wordsmith. It is an uncommon skill. You have that skill. Hone it to a razor's edge. You must become your greatest critic. Step back again and again from your writing. Separate the author in you from the audience in you - become two Totally Separated people, each living completely independently within you. Edit, then re-edit your work, until it finally expresses what the author within you yearns to say. And what the audience within you finally hears. Polish it, then let it sit before reviewing your work. You will see it with fresh eyes. When you get blocked up, it's your subconscious telling you that something is just not right. Boldly embrace your inner OCD. We all have it. It can be a stumbling block, or the stairway to excellence. Learn to make it a strength, not a shortcoming. All coins have two sides. I give you full marks for imagination and creativity. Learn to communicate your gift.

[@TheLoobis]

This was kinda gay

[@FictionalReimagined]

🤔🤔🤔