FREE DOWNLOAD LINK TO MY MIXTAPE -- www.datpiff.com... / a-work-in-progress Was originally going on Facebook alone, but it got enough buzz that i figured i should share with my subscribers !!
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@devildog967928 жыл бұрын
it's mclovin after puberty.
@vietnamesestringycheeseiii85438 жыл бұрын
truuuuuue
@awkwardepicrachel56658 жыл бұрын
+VietnameseStringyCheese III yass
@migo_svgmigo_svg96877 жыл бұрын
makaha_boy check my little freestyles out #MexicanFlow
@chrislongleytx1236 жыл бұрын
makaha_boy hahaha real talk fam
@clipzz-_-yt77176 жыл бұрын
Lmfao
@TheSpanishMonkey3658 жыл бұрын
your flow reminds me of childish gambino
@whitewidowz33228 жыл бұрын
Tbh
@requix118 жыл бұрын
ikr
@LCMxTACO8 жыл бұрын
Same
@The420Ant8 жыл бұрын
Fair shout
@migo_svgmigo_svg96877 жыл бұрын
The420Ant check my little freestyles out #MexicanFlow
@Nolia127 жыл бұрын
Any rapper who says "Lyrical Assassin" should quit or go back to the drawing board.
@mansreallysaid7 жыл бұрын
why
@Nolia127 жыл бұрын
Because its a filler term used ALL the time. It's always, "I'm a Lyrical (Fill in the blank)". Its ridiculous
@henrydwayne85697 жыл бұрын
DCvin your fucking idiot
@Nolia127 жыл бұрын
No. I am a hip hop head. Been listening to it for a long time. If you have a lot of experience listening to hip hop you've heard Lyrical Assassin 10,000 times. He was decent otherwise. A lot of potential.
@mattmillsmpm7 жыл бұрын
DCvin you gotta flex in freestyles bro, its not a song have some leniency
@CarAudioInc8 жыл бұрын
Even if some of that was premeditated, it was still dope. Props
@erichammer38308 жыл бұрын
My thoughts exactly
@BoSsCWOM9 жыл бұрын
Tired of ppl saying this can't be off the top. I can freestyle just about as well as this. It's just about practicing and doing it all the time
@JDSraps9 жыл бұрын
Chaz Bernard Tellllllem
@itzjung8 жыл бұрын
+Chaz Bernard if you can't tell that he has both written parts and frees in there then you are lying about your ability. Garbage.
@GrandaddyCrunk8 жыл бұрын
+Chaz Bernard He didn't rap one bar about something around him or happening in the room. 100% written dumbass.
@BoSsCWOM8 жыл бұрын
GrandaddyCrunk no need to insult me but you don't have to rap about what's in the room to be freestyling. eminem used to create murderous stories off the top. granted Em is one of the Goats but nonetheless. its possible.
@GrandaddyCrunk8 жыл бұрын
Chaz Bernard This is not off the top, it's that simple.
@willtallis49978 жыл бұрын
Thanks for pointing out that he was white......I thought he was a yellow potato
@JDSraps8 жыл бұрын
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@leestenson1898 жыл бұрын
Yo on some real shit young bull ur nice. Please keep doing ya thing.the game needs u
@Dolezal19798 жыл бұрын
+Cora Corso true it always makes me laugh when these videos pop up . and the guy in the blue shirt looked like he was having a seizure. I wonder if that guy in blue has ever listened to anything besides main stream music and if he has i am amazed he is still alive
@coracorso13278 жыл бұрын
+William Dolezal haha yep
@olduggy8 жыл бұрын
good shit homie! dig that shit! check my shit out too when u got time.
@colinmohr21108 жыл бұрын
J.D.S fuck u
@jesseputnam84028 жыл бұрын
white boy needs a co-signer he's got spits all day long
@ener38158 жыл бұрын
jesse putnam not really
@advancedtheories13328 жыл бұрын
Damn who is this kid
@JDSraps8 жыл бұрын
J.D.S my friend 😏😎
@advancedtheories13328 жыл бұрын
this can't be a freestyle though. Is J.D.S interested in becoming famous cuz im just an average joe but ill help out. Maybe email him some people that can help make him famous?
@InfinityGamesOn8 жыл бұрын
+Cade Kennedy Yeah, you really believe yourself xD? Fuck off kid, please.
@advancedtheories13328 жыл бұрын
InfinityGamesOn Im confused why your being rude, but first of all why are you even angry?
@fartoonomar42887 жыл бұрын
Cade Kennedy r
@P1yoojoe9 жыл бұрын
Killed the freestyle ! 100% freestyle . Y'all don't know flow . Ups to jds
@knownartists22858 жыл бұрын
I would rather be called a professional rapper. Not known as another white rapper. Plus rap is telling a story not stupid shit like trap music. You know the music you hear on the radio .
@cambellcambell24628 жыл бұрын
rap is whatever we say it is since we invented it
@kadamshubham52488 жыл бұрын
Ghost _21_life
@knownartists22858 жыл бұрын
ps4 expert So was you born in when it first came out. Probably not you're probably some kid. Who think he knows it all. Grow the fuck up the shit on the radio is 90% trash now.
@cambellcambell24628 жыл бұрын
I have probably been in this industry longer than you've been alive so don't try to talk to me about what rap is
@knownartists22858 жыл бұрын
ps4 expert Okay y'all got ghost writers though 😂😂 and I'm one hell of a writer. Writers get you famous.
@ChefBoR.D.2 жыл бұрын
JDS man, if ur reading this, i been listening to this freestyle for years from when it first came out and had barely any views. U gotta make more hard tracks like this verse and there's no way u don't blow up. Let me get on a track with u bro I got a similar style just never recorded anything yet lol
@chronicgamesde8 жыл бұрын
See its a decent flow and rhyme scheme and even some okay word play, but seriously where is the depth in this, the entire point of freestyle is to force yourself to mentally deal with a subject while rapping about it, that is why in rap battles you are supposed insult your opponent, and make the lines specific to them. This proves little, and making your name "Just damn superior" makes the entire thing feel shallow as hell, rap stands for Rhythm and Poetry. I listened to your mixtape too, If you want to grow as a artist I would recommend finding some roots in spoken word and written poetry, instead of the mirror.
@pookie71198 жыл бұрын
No, that just makes it sound better. As long as it makes sense and there's good wordplay, then it's fine.
@chronicgamesde8 жыл бұрын
it's called criticism, that's what the comment section is designed for, I even gave precise reason and feedback on other parts.
@bleepbloop17218 жыл бұрын
this guy was not trying to have a point, I want to see him do that
@ssbmfiji50798 жыл бұрын
ChronicGamesDE respect to you
@pookie71198 жыл бұрын
Guys, it's a freestyle. You just say the first thing that pops into your head and make it rhyme. That's what a freestyle is. You judge it on word choice, how well he's staying with the flow of the beat, and whether it rhymes or not.
@Dima-xx9ph7 жыл бұрын
Guy in blue looks like a 3rd wheel in that group
@dannyrigg17448 жыл бұрын
not a freestyle but still pretty cool!😃
@versacebobby64948 жыл бұрын
that makes sense cause he totally reading off of something
@TheWillofAzrael8 жыл бұрын
+Doozer Paolo first im not saying it wasnt a freestyle but you say that like its o so hard to remeber ur own lyrics? lmao u thimk any rapper reads off somthing on stage? frfr lmao. put all that aside tho dude went off
@fcilpino8 жыл бұрын
two types of freestyle: written and off the dome. this was obviously written, but still a freestyle. :D
@dannyrigg17448 жыл бұрын
+Finorb off the top is freestyle ,, to me anything else isn't a "true freestyle" to me, a real lyricists can work from nothing with a strong stack of ammo
@fcilpino8 жыл бұрын
agreed.
@dontshakethejake9 жыл бұрын
"like a rude ass waiter, best believe ill leave you hallow tips" hot damn....
@keyaziahall99367 жыл бұрын
He did tht shit 👌🏾👌🏾
@chrismac14427 жыл бұрын
When u write everything down an practice it for like a year lol
@streetrezistzz10687 жыл бұрын
Chris McNamee when you still like faze
@chrismac14427 жыл бұрын
Street ReZistzz obviously I'll always support faze
@finngrannis-phoenix5477 жыл бұрын
Chris McNamee so what that's still a tighter flow than most popular rappers...
@leestenson69755 жыл бұрын
Hater
@zoejackson66197 жыл бұрын
White boy got skills!!!
@bronteish15958 жыл бұрын
⬇⬇ If You Aint Got Haters Then You Aint Poppin 💯 This Was Dope Asf !
@laxusdreyar67087 жыл бұрын
pre-written
@Anolj7 жыл бұрын
no fucking way dude that's a freestyle not an impro
@razorgaming73787 жыл бұрын
you have std
@prizmix_yt78597 жыл бұрын
Laxus Dreyar u weren't pre written yr mom just made a mistake
@natedoggg49557 жыл бұрын
HiXo E3 his mom made a mistake? Wonder what we'd call you cuz ur more than just a mistake
@grimfrog117 жыл бұрын
Natedoggg that doesn't even make sense. Sorry that your speech impediment gets in the way before you can form a full insult, but I'm not totally sure there's much for you to say past "you're a mistake".
@BudderAsassin8 жыл бұрын
Dope shit mang you are one of the best freestylers out there......also I see you are a panthers fan like me so yeah great Freestyle!!
@icewallowcomebot51218 жыл бұрын
hes good but I think sir skitzo its better....I'm not hating just saying.
@BudderAsassin8 жыл бұрын
I'd have to check him out.....thanks for lettin me know about him
@icewallowcomebot51218 жыл бұрын
Np bro...
@brandonpaisley42666 жыл бұрын
He is good i like his flow
@joelhenson70099 жыл бұрын
That shit was dope, u got good flow. U should check out my freestyle. It was kinda a joke when I did it but it sounds ok.
@MaSsiVeGaming18 жыл бұрын
Damn this bredda dope as fuck.
@dsaved88loveyou9 жыл бұрын
THAT REST IN PISS PART WAS STRAIGHT FIRE!!!!!! NOT GONNA LIE, WISH I CAME UP WITH THAT LINE!!!! Its all love the bro, no hate bone in my body, You inspired me to write today though, Thank You!!! :)
@brandonmorales819 жыл бұрын
goddamn bro you killed that shit. i hit your link from another video and did not expect anything close to this level of talent. you gotta set up a consistent flow of videos to come out weekly or something. you could make it big bro. keep grindin
@leestenson1898 жыл бұрын
Never ever stop like pi?? Listen man i know hip hop fuck these haters ur dope
@logancentral6267 жыл бұрын
Holy fuck you killed it keep going with it bro
@swagjesus55777 жыл бұрын
he got that ultra gay beta male flow shitss snappin
@snitchezgtstchez7 жыл бұрын
words are straight but you need a studio to fix that voice bro
@voigt949 жыл бұрын
One of the best freestyles I have heard in awhile. You can spit, man! Subbed. Do some more freestyles!!
@marine91098 жыл бұрын
its the real life Mclovin in the house!!! lol
@leestenson69757 жыл бұрын
he said the games so trash jds is all I'm bumping
@chinobandetto62978 жыл бұрын
What's Mclovin doing? hahah
@anthonycoraggio2967 жыл бұрын
Not. A. Freestyle.
@jacobvanpam2157 жыл бұрын
Anthony Coraggio if you honestly think this isn't a freestyle then you clearly can't freestyle for shit.. I can rap off the top just as good as this, if this is written then that's really not impressive whatsoever
@Nguyen2fold7 жыл бұрын
Nice rap but not a freestyle.
@johnclaflin65057 жыл бұрын
your so funny actin like this is freestyle
@FxurZeroFxur7 жыл бұрын
DAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMM
@azaaniqbal15477 жыл бұрын
before you rap learn to spell
@tsusix41177 жыл бұрын
Nigga, its Nerf or nothing
@KevIndigo07 жыл бұрын
If money is the root of all evil, well then im Hades!! YOOO!! Good shit bro
@downysrus65547 жыл бұрын
AstraL Prod. This isn't his song
@franzelaxer66178 жыл бұрын
Looks like mclovin f
@EacanVisualArt9 жыл бұрын
Hey i really like it it was fire BTW can u tell me the name of the beat i wanna spit on it too
@JDSraps9 жыл бұрын
For sure its lexicon by k.i.d
@EacanVisualArt9 жыл бұрын
hah im so stupid i just paused the video and found it before an hour ago. Thanks for the reply tho :))
@leestenson66567 жыл бұрын
J.D.S what was the chain letter line supposed to be I know that was gonna be str8 fire
@devinbowne55568 жыл бұрын
good. but written
@SpaceTunes8 жыл бұрын
4/10
@RideFaster518 жыл бұрын
It's was dope, but clearly not a freestyle lol
@InfinityGamesOn8 жыл бұрын
+Chandler51x whys that mister know better?
@psychicpenguin6158 жыл бұрын
What is the instrumental in this video called?
@JDSraps8 жыл бұрын
Lexicon by k.i.d
@lilchris40317 жыл бұрын
some cocky
@mistymachete7 жыл бұрын
that's not a freestyle, it's kinda obvious
@cbmedia93697 жыл бұрын
fire bro
@Hob1e7 жыл бұрын
No....
@SolesAndSwag9 жыл бұрын
THAT WAS NASTY
@kaeshaephriam65549 жыл бұрын
***** But nasty in a good way right!? Lolz
@MrAlwaysKarmaYT8 жыл бұрын
J.D.S - New Logic
@floydmarsh21889 жыл бұрын
people saying its not A freestyle just because it was 🔥 fire? Grow up people. This man is dope.
@KEYEZ4108 жыл бұрын
right like why is it so hard to believe that just because something is fluent it's not off the top. their are a lot of people who can freestyle and you would think that it was completely written down. people don't know how hard that guy has been rapping so how do they know
@I_AM_3.6.9.7 жыл бұрын
Kechaun Colbert exactly!!!!!!!!!!
@dailygrindentertainment14026 жыл бұрын
Dahm dis Freestyle Hot AF‼️I subscribed. I also Freestyle! Check me out Homie! -DIAMOND JAY
@BackyardMedia7 жыл бұрын
Great bars, but I don't think that's a freestyle so I think the title should be labeled differently. But it was still pretty good!
@user-ub4ep7gt1w8 жыл бұрын
All the butthurt people's saying he memorized the verse 😂
@KBBarron8 жыл бұрын
Dude on the right looks like Nick Lachey from 98 Degrees. haha
Like if u thought this was about to be a trash free style xD
@AriseDuskz7 жыл бұрын
The actual song is called lexicon by K.I.D
@dreyk077 жыл бұрын
"all she wrote" - really, lil' man? Was that an Eminem dis? You trying to challenge Em?? Ohhh, snapp... Now this I gotta see.
@itsot127 жыл бұрын
2:15 I'm braggadocious, ho you know this, flow like hocus pocus, cuz I make your girl disappear and show up where my door is- Fucking fire
@smalls56077 жыл бұрын
He's rapping and looking down for the Written freestyle lol
@eggsytablecloth03028 жыл бұрын
All the emotional raps, and than my ass brang myself here. WHAT. THE. FUCK.
@PsHYk2099 жыл бұрын
Hidden Reactions brought me here. Wasn't expecting you to spit like that and the " I never ever stop like π " thats what true hip hop is.
@JDSraps9 жыл бұрын
thanks man! true hip hop is what I'm trying to bring back!
@fluvvrl70487 жыл бұрын
bro u got bars
@PaRaDoXAgonY8 жыл бұрын
im sorry but he not shit compared to the video i just watched.omg it was the shit
@johngrome27099 жыл бұрын
definitely got some legit freestyle skills man.. it wasn't nothing amazing tho, in my opinion.. it was just pretty good. my bars are shittin on yours for real for real. but me and my squad would let you in the cypher. but I guarantee you would have the weakest bars in one of our rappin sessions.. but not bad. check out the couple vids I just uploaded.. peace
@BelowOblivion7 жыл бұрын
you said you'll treat em like TP hangin from trees.....like lynchin ???
@edwardhoosline73127 жыл бұрын
you all need to check out Dlyan Montayne, Best 5min spit EVER On KZbin, his boy Reeve, they shuttin this shit down
@emmabadbitch87447 жыл бұрын
bra look at u u think u got everything don't u .... opps my bad I didn't get it when u said u is better boy u tripping do u even know wat the struggle is like man hit me up on Facebook if u think am playing boy I rap bout is my life boy u think u is real but really u is just playing urself .... my Facebook is Emily Bowman I am from Tennessee
@zombiejack20017 жыл бұрын
why does this guy sound like filthy frank lmao??
@loganparrette24297 жыл бұрын
Get it...because it wasn't a freestyle. All pre-memorized. Pathetic
@MokeBowl7 жыл бұрын
its fake but still a nice song if you just put it on a track you wouldn't get exposed as much
@kennypaul8288 жыл бұрын
Lol. For actual meaningful rap KZbin "c4 vs everybody"
@brandonwilson89329 жыл бұрын
For those of you who think this is written, It's obviously not. The bars aren't even that great. If this was written I would hope it would be way better. This freestyle is sub-par at best. He's just getting more props because he's white.
@syfyvoid1047 жыл бұрын
I like your rhyme pattern not just using end rhyme I like good job bro keep it up !
@davidgiles40998 жыл бұрын
yall gay,, you should be in the living room,, 3 full grown guys in the bedroom having fun,, that's gay
@nj20baller8 жыл бұрын
I like your skill, it's so fake style. just copy future like panda. lol have you heard of changing lyrical speed.
@myequalmind7 жыл бұрын
if you wanna hear a produced song on this beat, listen to Lexicon by K.i.D (KYLE)
@davidausbun8 жыл бұрын
I ain't gonna lie. This was pretty wack.
@DNATruLyricist8 жыл бұрын
why can't it be a Freestyle?? cuz its good?? what, does a Freestyle always have to have fuck ups and sound shitty?? how do u know this isn't a Freestyle? why cuz he's to clever?? what?
@olof17228 жыл бұрын
He doesnt rap about anything real time, he just keep looking down in the ground and trying hard to not fuck up the flow...
@DNATruLyricist8 жыл бұрын
+Ludvig Forsberg so nothing wrong with that
@DNATruLyricist8 жыл бұрын
+Ludvig Forsberg yal are all haters man smh
@Brokanglass1158 жыл бұрын
bruh sick but for real you need make ur rap name Mc lovin real talk.
@leslys12008 жыл бұрын
The guy on the right is fan girling right now. Looking like he's about to pass out from hearing some basic verses. It was alright but damn chill bro
@codymiller90862 жыл бұрын
Never knew you could actually sound like a suburb in a rhyme till i heard this. Ill send 5 kids to challenge you if you can get through one of them id be surprised.
@hobojo154677 жыл бұрын
Clever word play and rhymes but it's not a freestyle. Just a good flowing written.
@glitched78848 жыл бұрын
It's always hard for me to believe that something is a freestyle when I see it on video. I'm just pretty sure that anyone will do anything to make themselves look good. Also this is pretty lengthy to be a freestyle... but I don't really know.
@aaronrose25067 жыл бұрын
i've gone through so many freestyles by "white boys" and every single one sounded like logic or any other shitty wanna be Eminem or g eazy. but this is pretty damn good my dood
@GMEN65959 жыл бұрын
Dude you need to release some more shit man, this was FIRE
@94SixFiveTD9 жыл бұрын
Love how you fucked up yet kept it burning! That's true skill bro!
@permashock80687 жыл бұрын
Free style is impromptu rap during a battle. This was dope, but definitely scripted.
@bobdaphyco21ps4gamer38 жыл бұрын
Why did he steal some lyrics from lexicon on TheBuffNerds' channel?
@simeoncannalte30168 жыл бұрын
There is difference between Freestyle and Off the dome. This was Freestyle. Google it guys.
@NezzyEbk7 жыл бұрын
He was not freestyling I am an actual freestyler you have to take breaks to think cuz u don't think up of 3 minutes of straight fire with no brakes
@braydon1mcgee8 жыл бұрын
Bits a pieces of this were copied from songs. Your good but not good enough to diss every freestyle artist on KZbin because I just watched 3 videos before this and they all did just as good or better.
@dantedemello8 жыл бұрын
Why are people surprised white people can rap.
@dougyrobbo13897 жыл бұрын
Sick Flow Generic/weak rhymes 7/10
@mathewmetcalf32937 жыл бұрын
sounds amazing i remember when i spit the same exact freestyle on face book 8 years ago high as hell and the post was removed so id like to battle you ps the spit you wrote was copyrighted.
@kymahnilitaujhone8 жыл бұрын
if y'all wanna be honest a freestyle didn't necessarily have to be off the top of your head in that moment. every rapper's song is a freestyle. before you judge learn your music
@andrewmaclean37008 жыл бұрын
insanely overconfident for your skill level. most wasn't bad. definitely not a freestyle.