Why Scorpius is an underwhelming mayor

[@TheRealRiver2763]

ok I just need to say this. I put this video out too fast. There are some things that I either forgot to say or realized were wrong, there are some ideas that I didn't think of before making this. Still, I am proud of the presentation in it, and it's not really a terrible video so I won't bother remaking it. nobody will read this anyways lol because nobody will even click on this video...

[@ricolewi]

The video, it's short and it's sweet. One thing puts me off though. How you're saying things so fast and also with an accent makes it hard to follow the video, I think you could try to slow down and be more coherent with what you're saying. Also implementing appropriate short quiet gaps between sentences can really get you far with doing commentaries. Your editing is for sure really stylistic so I think work on pronunciations and you will make a really good video!

[@TheRealRiver2763]

I am aware I talk too fast, and my Polish accent doesn't really help with that... maybe I could try adding subtitles to this and future videos, that could definitely help. thanks for the feedback!

[@ricolewi]

@@TheRealRiver2763 You're welcome. Don't forget me once you are famous!! ✨