Writing The Harvard Business School Essay

[@gustafapplequist9059]

This video was informative. Given a choice between these two, I would rather sit next to Alula.

[@davidfillmore533]

Yeah, but I'd rather get admission advice from Sandy

[@ChoateGo]

The hate against sandy is so interesting. As much as I like Alula, Sandy’s being informative and educational since the video is less about them having a discussion and more about lecturing on how to write hbs essay. And to be fair, when sandy cuts Alula off, it’s when Alula spewing out pc bs in a circuitous way.

[@MIMS207]

Wow... props to Alula Eshete

[@РодионБегляк]

Dear Sirs, please spell the word 'bregy' (?) for international applicants...

[@BoxzerzZ]

They are saying "braggy". Bragging means to boast about oneself in an arrogant manner. Avoid writing like this in your essay.

[@РодионБегляк]

Thanks, Christian!:)

[@OS1540]

why does the old man keep cutting the student off when he's trying to explain the essays? Comes off as an annoying know it all. Let the student get his thoughts across then offer your input...you're old enough to know how that works, right?

[@xXseb1347Xx]

have you ever been in a conversation before ?

[@OS1540]

you mean where people let each other finish their thoughts? why yes, I have been in a conversation. By the way, this is not just a "conversation". This is an analysis to help us learn what makes a strong essay. If two people are involved in the analysis, we should hear what both have to say without one trying to hijack the discussion with an "I know more than you" attitude, which is what this old hack did.

[@xXseb1347Xx]

i hear you but in my opinion the young gentlemen was repetitive and Sandy was just helping him be more straightforward

[@LifelinegamingFilms]

That’s the HBS guru, u douchebag

[@samaysoni4015]

The guy on the left looks so done with his shit

[@myb1161]

Am I the only one here who likes Sandy and dislikes the student?

[@Dakid015]

Looks like it...

[@madeleineherencialarsen7731]

Read one good essay.. To try your taste

[@becoming5703]

Hi there I’m Helen 😂😂

[@TheKshetij]

Keep videos short and crisp for God sake

[@NadejdaIvanov]

Why on earth did you invited that consultant?? Next time invite a smart guy so that he will say something meaningful! We wanted to hear the student not the meaningless comments of that consultant!

[@myb1161]

"That consultant" is Sandy Kreisberg, also known as the HBS guru, and he knows way more about the HBS admissions process than that student ever will.