自分用 0:08 People need to ~ (終) 5:00 It makes the content~(終) 10:00 The effect was ~(終) 15:00 It had enough power~(終) 20:00 The labor was struggling ~(終) 25:00 Our objective~(終)
A few small corrections from (0:00) to (5:00): 0:14 - The books are for different "skill" levels (replace "ability" with "skill") 0:23 - Some people do not agree "with" abortion (replace "for" with "with") 1:20 - I don't know how he can "pass" the course (replace "achieve" with "pass") 2:28 - The family had to move "to" a house that allows pets. (add "to" between "move" and "a house") 2:50 - The deadline to apply for the summer camp was "the" 10th (add "the" before 10th) 3:24 - They had an "argument" "during" dinner. ("argument" was misspelled. replace "over" with "during") 3:57 - "The" team needs to understand the "mood" in the store. (add "the" in the beginning. replace "atmosphere" with "mood") 4:12 - His attitude made her "angrier". (replace "angry more" with "angrier") 4:36 - In order to avoid "traffic", they left early in the morning ("traffic jam" is technically correct but "traffic" sounds more natural in this case)
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5:00 - 10:00: 5:35 - I "believe" that people can do anything (replace "have belief" with "believe") 5:45 - What sports team do you belong to? (For those in the team) What sports team do you "root for"? (For fans of the team) 6:42 - He lost too much blood "from" the accident. (replace "by" with "from") 6:52 - Please "breathe" deeply and relax ("breath" = noun, "breathe" = verb) 7:19 - I have chest pain. ("a" is unnecessary) 8:27 - I can "finish" by 5PM (replace "complete" by "finish") 8:59 - It is made "of" smaller components. (replace "by" with "of") 9:44 - "Fruits and flowers" contain seeds. (add "s" to "fruit" and "flower")
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(10:00) - (15:00): 10:55 - We would like to avoid "the" crowd to arrive early 11:28 - The sales "are" on the decline 11:43 - It is 40 "degrees" outside 12:00 - They could describe the surface in "detail" 12:24 - I need more time to "decide"/"make a decision" 13:20 - The doctor could not find the "cause of the disease" (more natural) 14:02 - The pen was dry and hard to "draw with" 14:11 - I missed the class due to "the" soccer game 14:54 - Education is important for "the" country's future. 14:58 - The effect was like magic (removed "a")
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(15:00) - (20:00): 15:17 - There are electric cables behind "the" TV 15:50 - Please write down "the" employer name 16:35 - "The" school was established in 1992 17:19 - Everybody "passed" except him. ("passed" is used when talking about tests or exams) 18:05 - You could express your "feelings" by saying. 18:58 - He "wrote" a famous poem 19:18 - The course "costs" $100 (more natural) 19:27 - He took finance class in "the" morning 19:47 - "Learning" foreign languages is fun (more natural)
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(20:00) - (25:00): 20:00 - It had enough power to freeze "vegetables" 20:37 - Please gather quickly "in"/"inside" the gym 20:50 "The" government can decide "the" country's "laws" 21:07 - The library changed "the students' study habits" 21:35 - Don't hide "the mistakes you've made" 22:06 - He was hurt "from" the accident 23:04 - We "are aiming" to increase the number of students 23:29 - What is "the dinner's secret ingredient"? 24:54 - The "worker"/"employee" was struggling to work long hours
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(25:00) - (30:00): 25:07 - Are you interested in speaking foreign "languages"? 25:18 - "The" government delayed "legislation" because of the earthquake 27:03 - My father "became" a mayor when I was 10 27:13 - I like to eat "a" healthy meal for lunch 27:46 - It is merely a "small amount of" money 28:41 - "Its" surface is mostly a blue liquid 28:50 - It is made "of"/"from" multiple ingredients