You're Not Alone

[@pietponger4074]

Enjoyed this, nice flow and sunny telling. The part where the girl sings is also good. 👍 would listen again

[@pietponger4074]

Story*

[@pietponger4074]

Rip to your homie/relative

[@nohookninja8525]

Thanks bro I am glad you enjoyed it! He was my best friend.

[@duncanantern7377]

dont know why this popped up on my feed but good job its not bad. Flows are consistant and the story is very well told. Good clarity. Eventually you will start adding similies and metephors n shit in there and youll be crazy. Good work man. RIP to your Mikey

[@nohookninja8525]

Thanks bro glad you liked it! Appreciate the pointers man I will definitely work on them. Metaphors have never been my strong suite.

[@t-rav05]

Bro you killed this, hope to chill soon keep up the good work !

[@nohookninja8525]

Thanks bro! I am glad you are liking them. Yeah it was nice kicking it with you those few times a while back. We'll definitely have to get together soon.

[@pietponger4074]

Nice outro too my guy

[@nohookninja8525]

Thank you. Honestly that was just on the spot to fill up the outro of the beat. I mean it's true and all but not something I had planned. I was listening after finishing the verses and thought it could use something there.

[@pietponger4074]

@@nohookninja8525 best things are never planned, sounds dope