Good observation 👌

I’m not sure but I’ll keep everyone updated 😃

I have a very soft voice naturally, it’s just how I speak. I’m glad the advice is helpful for you though 😃

They’re alive

Hey, I’m so glad! If you ever put it out there for others to read, stick a link in comments. I’d love to read it!

Hey, I’m so glad you get so much from my videos! If you are able to upload your writings somewhere I’d love to have a ready through!

@@JoeWebb-TheStoryteller Can I.. Can I just..Can I just upload a small writing piece here!??? Edit1: Ooh yes I will!! The little brown owl peeked through the glass door. A dim yellow light lamp on the desk had made its living with dozens of papers and pens. Fairy lights hung perfectly behind the small post cards filled with pictures from graduation, girls’ night out, coffee dates and sunsets. The half-drunk coffee mug laid so comfortably beside the old radio which played classics of Beethoven. The case was reaching an end; the bulletin board which was once filled with so many suspects now had only two of them left. Finally, a bit of rest!! After a huge world war III on which shirt to wear for a goodnight sleep (though it was already past the night), the soft white cushions were used. An hour may have passed until there was noise from the room. A phone call. Hushed voice. High-pitched laughter. Call declined. The dim yellow light lamp was lit again, it flickered once. Radio turned on again. It screeched. The coffee mug was empty and chipped off. The coffee mug no longer rested beside the radio, its red shattered pieces shone bright. The bulletin board had two suspects, the victim section instead of having three blonde pictures of the dead ladies now held three photos; one from the graduation, one from the girls’ night out, and the other sunset photo. All had one thing in common, a lone brunette, blue-eyed woman had been encircled with red marker (which laid in the mountain of papers). Near the glass door was the dressing table. The mirror reflected the brunette, blue-eyed beauty. Beyond the room, the little brown owl had its eyes largely open, for it saw from the dimly lit room a man. A man with a smirk and a smear of blood on his face. This is a small writing exercise I tried out.. I saw u on linkedin sir, if u like my story/work please please accept my request there

So... Sir? How was the story??

I found it edging towards immersion with very vivid descriptions, and I’m intrigued about where the story may lead to. The most important thing is, what are you thoughts of your work?

@@JoeWebb-TheStoryteller This small story I worked on made me proud. I had taken up some writing exercise after a huge time, I was quite impressed, but i still felt I could have done better (I have read the story too many times and have come with too many better ideas) And ooh my goodness!!!!!!!! U replied!! My work reached YOU!!!! AND U LIKED IT (I hope) this is it!!!!!

You say something to someone clear enough, or show them in a story, doesn’t matter what they do to dismiss or deny it, they’ll always know it’s true

Wow, never heard of this but I’m about to go down a rabbit hole with this. Thanks!

@JoeWebb-TheStoryteller I'm glad you want to look into it. I recommend James DeKorne's website Gnostic Book of Changes. The little white rectangle near the top middle of his website pages is the menu with a key to hexagrams and all the hexagrams. He has compiled many translations to create a kind of concordance and added a very interesting jungian commentary of his own along with at least one corresponding quote for all 64 hexagrams and each of their 6 moving lines. Also, the 5 introductory chapters are a well written summary of what the I Ching is and how it's been used over time. 🧑🏽‍🏫

There’s not really a correct way. The 3 act structure is not really associated with the hero’s journey, and so any interpretations of placements of events in this “recipe” are just personal preference.

Thanks! They’re not quite ready yet, but you can purchase them at thestorytellerdeck.com when they’re ready. I’ll keep everyone updated. 😁

Hey, so I’m not sure when they’re going to be ready as I don’t want to rush them, I’ll keep people updated in videos though 😄

@@JoeWebb-TheStoryteller thank you. 😁 No worries, I was just curious. Good products can't be rushed. If you at some point come up with a wait-list, I'd like to be on it.