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@SilveryBlue1010
@SilveryBlue1010 20 минут бұрын
Poor Bruno, having a manic mother like her.
@SilveryBlue1010
@SilveryBlue1010 30 минут бұрын
This is the opposite of what we used to. It just MC is not cheating. Not like Willow 😂
@ESHAKER-MAIN
@ESHAKER-MAIN 45 минут бұрын
27:42 the picture frame has goro's minion in it 😅
@jason_eh
@jason_eh 46 минут бұрын
Just feel sick for the kid...dam messed up mom. Oof.
@bernarddavis4379
@bernarddavis4379 52 минут бұрын
Let's see...meet a crazy person and accept food or drink from them. Got it. DUMB!
@bernarddavis4379
@bernarddavis4379 Сағат бұрын
Should've took a cab, idiot.
@chendry42
@chendry42 Сағат бұрын
Nah he is def neglectful amd uncaring... the mc is dbag and the wife is an insecure bia.
@bernarddavis4379
@bernarddavis4379 Сағат бұрын
That coworker needs to be fired.
2 сағат бұрын
Loved the twist from the common stories!!!😊
@tachi6786
@tachi6786 2 сағат бұрын
First time Mc have a White Moonlight
@razerblank9789
@razerblank9789 2 сағат бұрын
Kyaaa Is this my request where the fl has the system but still george story
@xnocturnus_
@xnocturnus_ 2 сағат бұрын
At 18:29, the damn guy just needs to get a divorce already! The child is suffering! At the end, its not that the system played her. She was too desperate trying to get her task done rather than finding ways to be sincere. All her actions have motives and no sincerity. She was always planning and calculative.
@Dante999000
@Dante999000 Сағат бұрын
Meaning all she ever did was plan and calculate as you said but never did anything out of the goodness of her heart.
@Artility1
@Artility1 2 сағат бұрын
How can they have regret if they never loved each others 😅
@ReallyUnexplainable
@ReallyUnexplainable 3 сағат бұрын
I know it sounds cool to get super vindicated and come out as a boss.. but literary speaking, this story would have been better if instead of touring the world, he went to see charlotte. I know they wanted to give her a last smack in the face by rejecting the fact that she wanted to show him that she was worthy of him, and that she liked him. But she did show it, both when he was sick and when she didn't have anything anymore. It would have been cool of him to just let bygones be bygones and go see her at the hospital, like she had before. Sounds like a better story to me.
@Ivansiel
@Ivansiel 3 сағат бұрын
hard for me to hate her completely. The ML is kinda bad too.
@emeralh9415
@emeralh9415 31 минут бұрын
Well she's clearly a psycho who doesn't understand others... Maybe hard to hate her but can't sympathize either, everything she did was wrong and always in her own interest... Never other's
@Dante999000
@Dante999000 3 сағат бұрын
Olivia is stupid; for them to regret, you have to give them unconditional love and kindness then let them take that love and kindness for granted; once you leave, they'll miss that kindness and regret it. Everything that Olivia did only gave MC and son reasons to stay away from her and live peacefully without any regrets since she never treated them with love and kindess.
@Ivansiel
@Ivansiel 3 сағат бұрын
wdym... she treated him well before but his feelings never changed. I think his "indifference" ended up pushing her into a deeper level of madness.
@Dante999000
@Dante999000 Сағат бұрын
​@@Ivansielyou know what, another comment pointed out that all wife ever did was calculate and planned but never did anything out of sincerity, and after looking back that comment was right; she never did anything out of the goodness of her heart but just did everything like they were household chores. That mindset of just completing her task without any sincerity set herself up for failure.
@ruylopez7406
@ruylopez7406 3 сағат бұрын
norma louise bates-mother norman bates-son PSYCHO(bates motel)
@atlus6412
@atlus6412 3 сағат бұрын
Olivia is most likely controlled by her System. She's broken beyond Repair. Treating her husband & child like some NPC is cruel.
@trentberry6968
@trentberry6968 3 сағат бұрын
That was depressing
@Lava8d6c
@Lava8d6c 3 сағат бұрын
Fr😢
@0mtrebellcyury993
@0mtrebellcyury993 3 сағат бұрын
The system duped her 😂 so she did all that for nothing and ended up with nothing
@tetsuryuu01
@tetsuryuu01 3 сағат бұрын
Olivia is one crazy woman and her system is far too ignorant of human interaction
@hcook1023
@hcook1023 3 сағат бұрын
I think the system is pretty normal just couldn't understand the crazy woman influencing it Maybe this is how villian system get started lol
@guardianreviews324
@guardianreviews324 3 сағат бұрын
"A planet naming rights"?
@Lava8d6c
@Lava8d6c 3 сағат бұрын
First I see two things that are wrong why are you meeting your ex she is not the only one who does this they are many people that do this also the women is crazy so both are in the wrong i understand why she is like this you live your kid with an ex where are your parents dude was planning on cheating EDIT:This is my take of the story
@aqze4rd815
@aqze4rd815 3 сағат бұрын
It's not his ex it was the girl he used to like
@Lava8d6c
@Lava8d6c 3 сағат бұрын
​@@aqze4rd815 if you look through everything the first thought was to leave the kid with her the 1 of the root problem
@adnansaifi768
@adnansaifi768 3 сағат бұрын
True every character was wrong
@chendry42
@chendry42 Сағат бұрын
Its like the story just swapped the original male and female leads from the stories we get all the time. But of course instead of simping loser they made the fmc a crazy hateful bia. Both sides are total trash ppl in this story. Its kinda the marriage for superficial reasons and one develops feelings while the other just remains a heartless piece of trash.
@chendry42
@chendry42 Сағат бұрын
​​@@aqze4rd815 the ex that chose another dude over him aka full fledged ntr effect but the chacters supposedly asians of course extremely hogh probability of being a hardcore sad sack bottom feeding cuck hence why any pretend man would lop his own balls off to be with a hobag that did that to them in the first place.
@fredsmith5782
@fredsmith5782 3 сағат бұрын
Man roles have switched. I’ll need to finish the rest to see how things go. (Edit) I don’t know how to feel about this one other than the system is quite cruel. A lot of the times in these stories the system would force the main character to become a simp for the target. A lot of the times it ends in heart ache for the main character. As for Olivia’s case she treated the situation more like a target and not someone she legitimately fell in love with. Either way this story is rather depressing in a different way from many of the others.
@theeonewhoaskeed
@theeonewhoaskeed 4 сағат бұрын
damn the level of paranoia edit- but i actually felt sad for her in the middle when bruno delibratly provokes and hurt him imo they should have go to a family psychologist along with child psychologist for burno
@dark.anonymous
@dark.anonymous 3 сағат бұрын
Yeah she is basically trying to wish problems into existence but if he did have a thing for Fiona at one point even if she's a child specialist I'm sure there's plenty of others he could've consulted someone else and not caused more troubles with his wife. I can't always rip on only the bad female character in the story I have to be fair 😂
@Lava8d6c
@Lava8d6c 3 сағат бұрын
​@@dark.anonymous he left the kid with his ex let them bond so I think both are at fault
@Dante999000
@Dante999000 3 сағат бұрын
​@@dark.anonymoustrue but in this story at the very least, Olivia is a bad influence to their kid.
@SilveryBlue1010
@SilveryBlue1010 14 минут бұрын
She deliberately starving the kid and serve him the food that had been heated over and over, and trying to manipulate the kid saying only her that loves him. No wonder he didn't like her.
@dark.anonymous
@dark.anonymous 4 сағат бұрын
What a twist on the system story
@arshdeepsingh3797
@arshdeepsingh3797 4 сағат бұрын
Steven groomed valentina😂😂
@Weirdestgirly
@Weirdestgirly 4 сағат бұрын
whyyyy david??? you were our best friend now you became ah 😭😭😭😭
@SuperStephen20
@SuperStephen20 4 сағат бұрын
It's a fictional story it can have whatever it wants
@exp.srijan386
@exp.srijan386 4 сағат бұрын
These system stories are 🐂💩
@Arc.Z
@Arc.Z 7 сағат бұрын
I heard female version of this story on some other chanel
@scribble9431
@scribble9431 7 сағат бұрын
3 broken people with their twisted love triangle creates a perfect recipe for disaster. Damm.
@star_dust312
@star_dust312 8 сағат бұрын
ML didn’t catch his happiness.
@royalbeast3140
@royalbeast3140 8 сағат бұрын
Simp, I've got a clue that seems to be all these stories
@scribble9431
@scribble9431 8 сағат бұрын
Haha, I love it.
@Utk_playz
@Utk_playz 9 сағат бұрын
Bro is really savage💀
@jadesorono6694
@jadesorono6694 10 сағат бұрын
Love the system 😊❤
@AlienoidGamer
@AlienoidGamer 10 сағат бұрын
The names reverted back 3/4 the way through lmao, lazy ass AI channels can't even get their shit right
@kamotechipsandmore
@kamotechipsandmore 11 сағат бұрын
If she is istj then what's the mbti of the mc? maybe intj? or infj?
@rajiva.roopchand5322
@rajiva.roopchand5322 11 сағат бұрын
I'm happy this morning🙂
@devilopment3291
@devilopment3291 11 сағат бұрын
hmm? oh now it's incorporated three trope : system, nurtured actress, betrayal. honestly, George was so ruthless and thorough 👌
@Yoshikawa_ame
@Yoshikawa_ame 12 сағат бұрын
Another story with pitful Ex. Different people have different perspective and understanding. What i saw was a Top studious student who probably has difficulties to understand Human emotions and how relationship work and all, only wanting to focus on her study and carrier but then she FINALLY learns and understood how relationship and human emotion works AFTER HER BOYFRIEND [MC] DUMPED HER ONE DAY SUDDENLY, WITH LAME SHIT EXCUSE OVER PHONE MESSAGE. She understand and learned how her indifference action and reaction hurted the one she loved and so now she's trying to mend her mistake, helping MC with work, taking care of him and saving his life and protecting him while endangering her own life but He's not Ok with this and Wants her to stay far away.......... Do i hate MC? NO, I don't hate him (afterall he was genuinely hurt by her action) but i also don't like him. He was a BIG Coward. He Never had proper communication with her or tried to make her understand that her action hurt him (somethings are need to be said, told or explain especially when you are with person who doesn't understand human emotion much). Plus, he even left her suddenly, dumping her that too on phone msg. Sure i can understand his action and reason but i don't like it. He let her be her, indulging her and She continued that not know her indifference is hurting him. Wish we had Julia POV. All i can say, COMMUNICATION IS FUCKING IMPORTANT.
@goutam149
@goutam149 12 сағат бұрын
Women like her are a curse to the human civilization.....
@mt8956
@mt8956 13 сағат бұрын
To long should have broken up from the beginning, how can he feel indifferent and still hold of on the break up instead of doing it that same night of the video
@Multiparadox
@Multiparadox 14 сағат бұрын
Cheat code... The first time, I'm hearing that in the novel world 😂
@jokerthief1946
@jokerthief1946 15 сағат бұрын
Willow = We lay low.
@TheWANN69
@TheWANN69 16 сағат бұрын
Slap mokoto.. And mumble... It all Willow fault.. Still why she didn't gave divorce and hand black card
@bigainzfan6934
@bigainzfan6934 16 сағат бұрын
System based tale with vague reward that leaves the ML as a manipulative mastermind or a guy filled with as much revenge as plot armor. I don't mind stories that make me think but with a ML that had a plan too open for enterpretation I just couldn't get a grasp of what our revenge focused character was thinking. Grrr I want to add more system based stories to my list but my favorite cast of Willow and Makoto didn't leave much of an impact to want to listen to this story again. Sad to say it but this is a one read it and be done with it for me.
@Naveen_Gurgaon
@Naveen_Gurgaon 17 сағат бұрын
For anyone who haven't heard it yet , this is the best story on this channel ❤
@tachi6786
@tachi6786 18 сағат бұрын
That women is truly disgusting she say she love only him say he should trust her but she made love with her childhood friends afterwards she want to divorce and remarry him what a B*tch