Grammar Range and Accuracy
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2 жыл бұрын
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@JahedHassanKhan
@JahedHassanKhan Ай бұрын
Please Score it.... "In the current world, people want to own something. A great number of individuals tend to express the intention "it is main." Similarly, in many countries, it has been seen that people try to own a home rather than rent one. In my point of view, this is a positive development. In the following paragraphs, I will try to discuss the causes and supporting arguments before reaching a logical conclusion. Firstly, people feel comfort in expressing themselves as owners of a house. In some countries, owning a home gives a social dignity that is much more important than money. Mainly, this is why people want to own a home. Secondly, you can decorate your own home, but for a rented home, you cannot even change the paint of your bedroom. Furthermore, there are possibilities to extend your home, like building more floors with more rooms. For instance, if your family increases by more children, you can extend, but for a rented home, you have to change the house. Moreover, there is no hassle for changing when you are in your own house. Shifting to another home is not only troublesome but also costly, and there are chances to damage the furniture. Another point worth mentioning is that owning a home is a one-time investment to get wealth for yourself and future generations. On the other hand, renters do not think about the mortgage of the house. Sometimes, to own a home, people need to take a big amount of loan. However, a house owner has to take the risk of damage from natural disasters. Similarly, there are some maintenance costs borne by the owner, not the renter. To sum up, it can be said that to get mental satisfaction and social respect, people want to own a home, which is a positive development considering the long-term benefits."
@CodeCrunch_84
@CodeCrunch_84 5 ай бұрын
YOU DESERVE MORE SUBSCRIBERS ❤❤
@heattransfer8003
@heattransfer8003 Жыл бұрын
Would you mark this 6.5? People have different views about sharing information to the different kind of areas of work such as research and development facility, business and academic world. I believe these vital informations which may be useful for humankind should be shared without any restrictions. On the one hand, there are several reasons to argue about why should people share information regardless any obstacles. It is clear that, the development of society made a huge progress from the Stone Age to today. This progress would not be possible without sharing information between different kind of areas. For instance, I personally work in a research and development department in defence industry and all papers which I submitted to the department was inspired by other researchers who contributed their valuable work on internet. Moreover, these papers do not only contribute to a specific area of work, but also make people’s lives much more easier by other related fields which inspired by these data. On the other hand, one can also argue that these data should stay in the place where it has been developed. One of the reason is that, scientific centers, companies and universities are the place where important information is being created and they are competing with each other. As a result of that, these institutions reason privacy issues and do not feel to share the data in public. Additionally, scientists put so much effort to create important informations so that they would not want everyone to be informed about these data. To conclude, while there are some reasons not to share information which cause several issues, I believe that, people should always be open for both transmitting and receiving information in places where science is being made.
@minjoshi
@minjoshi Жыл бұрын
7.0
@heattransfer8003
@heattransfer8003 Жыл бұрын
@@minjoshi i got 6.5 in real exam. Thanks
@rumanasumi8566
@rumanasumi8566 Жыл бұрын
Please bro Don't use background music otherwise it is great
@DhruvChovatiya-gn1rv
@DhruvChovatiya-gn1rv 2 жыл бұрын
Superb sir excellent
@DhruvChovatiya-gn1rv
@DhruvChovatiya-gn1rv 2 жыл бұрын
Nice sir
@preetycheema1886
@preetycheema1886 2 жыл бұрын
My topic was describe an occasion you lost something in public place
@rebellifestyle2369
@rebellifestyle2369 2 жыл бұрын
Bhai, gaane bja lo pehle tum itni tezz. Vo bhi informative video me. Baad me pdhaa dena.
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
This was the first ever video. I tried to improve now. Anyways thanks for your suggestion
@rebellifestyle2369
@rebellifestyle2369 2 жыл бұрын
@@minjoshi oh, sorry sir. Keep doing. You're helping students like us. More power ❤️🤝
@krishansinghdeol9280
@krishansinghdeol9280 Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much sir this video are very nice
@StarNetworkRescue
@StarNetworkRescue 2 жыл бұрын
Great effort sir ☺
@Divyesh-jb9ek
@Divyesh-jb9ek 2 жыл бұрын
❤️🔥
@mahipalsinhdarbar6118
@mahipalsinhdarbar6118 2 жыл бұрын
✌🏻
@sumandeepkaur1984
@sumandeepkaur1984 2 жыл бұрын
This one is the easiest i found over others
@sumandeepkaur1984
@sumandeepkaur1984 2 жыл бұрын
Thnq sir
@emiliotaylor4957
@emiliotaylor4957 2 жыл бұрын
❤️ ρяσмσѕм
@etrenome6717
@etrenome6717 2 жыл бұрын
Really???? I mean it's kinda obvious that violence has been going down lately.
@mahipalsinhdarbar6118
@mahipalsinhdarbar6118 2 жыл бұрын
🙏🏼👍🏼✌🏼
@zolt8490
@zolt8490 2 жыл бұрын
Good job!
@samraqureshi936
@samraqureshi936 2 жыл бұрын
Nice
@eprohoda
@eprohoda 2 жыл бұрын
Mihir!top ~talk you later! 💪
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Can't wait!
@fatehaasif390
@fatehaasif390 2 жыл бұрын
I was just thinking about this topic and got it to have ideas. Thanks
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@smitacharyalife180
@smitacharyalife180 2 жыл бұрын
👌👌👌
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks
@aartirajput_11
@aartirajput_11 2 жыл бұрын
It is really helpful for us. Your explanation way is amazing sir.🆗🆗👌👌I hope so, this essay will be help other students.
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@smitacharyalife180
@smitacharyalife180 2 жыл бұрын
This is on real life based cue card 😂you know already that
@asher6242
@asher6242 2 жыл бұрын
PЯӨMӨƧM
@smitacharyalife180
@smitacharyalife180 2 жыл бұрын
The perfect one💯👌
@amitchauhan1624
@amitchauhan1624 2 жыл бұрын
Nice
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks
@smitacharyalife180
@smitacharyalife180 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for this video♥️
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
My pleasure 😊
@smitacharyalife180
@smitacharyalife180 2 жыл бұрын
👌💯💯
@explorerfoodieyt9328
@explorerfoodieyt9328 2 жыл бұрын
This one is really very useful 😃😃 Thanks a lot sir
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@भोजराजसिंघशेखावत
@भोजराजसिंघशेखावत 3 жыл бұрын
Helpful vedio sir.
@minjoshi
@minjoshi 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks and welcome