Heya o/ i was wondering at 11:00 where us had the transition on the charity how else would I phrase/approach that kind of transition without restating the original idea.
@syanjain5060Ай бұрын
hi i love your videos. do you still read college app essays?
@iattai16Ай бұрын
what if my driving force is getting away from my abusive family 😁…
@MMemm2385Ай бұрын
I'm so scared, I procrastinate way too much and then I get busy and burnt out. I have the ACT books and have not studied them once, I'm going to start this week but what If its not enough. I feel like I'm too late, and my school really sucks so I feel so stupid. I want a good score so bad but my awful education makes me so doubtful that I could do anything good. Our school does such a bad job at preparing us I feel helpless and alone. Its currently the summer before my junior year and I feel sick just thinking about it.
@jayla9078Ай бұрын
Thank you!! I’m watching this for 2024 college application szn!! 🎉
@melina-i2j2 ай бұрын
thank you for making this video! It really helped me. Going through kinda of the same but in high school
@MiriamLevenson2 ай бұрын
spot on! thank you haley! i thought i was the only one who noticed these problems with essays lol...
@xo_sammy63012 ай бұрын
Hello, can you please edit my essay?
@chrabyfitness2 ай бұрын
haley. thank you so much for this advice. Despite these lame ah comments saying "it didn't work" or "what i did was yadada yadda yadda" you come here with real and helpful advice. kudos!
@Marchie.073 ай бұрын
Any tips on how to title an essay that covers many different topics?
@law11school11girly3 ай бұрын
I graduated Penn in 2023 & I didn’t know my goals or what I was even working for either… DO NOT WORRY!! I’m in a decent law school now with 90% scholarship (due to great gpa @ Penn & a superb essay) now because my parents told me to…. Still confused what I want to do with my life but I’m founding a nonprofit & look forward to the salary increase a JD usually brings… I dabbled with consulting & finance clubs from the College of Arts & Science… opted out because parents pushed me into law track… Most Penn people were insufferable in my opinion about grades & competition… my real friends were amazing & supported each other fully ❤❤❤ if you haven’t found those die hard buddies don’t fret!!! It is never too late to meet real friends. I found my besties senior year because junior year I was abroad & freshman/ sophomore year were covid! Your first job doesn’t have to be the best/ end all!!! You’re already so far ahead of so many people your age!!! I was totally burnt out this year in law school after going straight from Penn. DO NOT FRET!! Be proud of how much you’ve achieved! Try to drown out the toxic noise from Penn peeps!! ❤❤❤
@drtraboro40075 ай бұрын
This lady saved my whole career
@Bambambami5 ай бұрын
Thank you sm (i got a 25 ☠️)!!
@chrabyfitness5 ай бұрын
OOPS. I THINK I ACCIDENTLY SHARED AND COPIED <3
@diegofernandez4765 ай бұрын
this is so funny to watch after getting in like… I did that? you are amazing :)
@thetophatter23225 ай бұрын
I have ONE month left UGHHH, I'm stressing so bad but your tips give me motivation to study with the time I have left
@GoodMythicalShorts6 ай бұрын
got a 35, one english point off of a 36. like 1 or 2 questions was the difference 😐
@drtraboro40075 ай бұрын
How did you prepare?
@ali_emes7 ай бұрын
at exactly 6:50 there is a Mouse Jumping right Behind Lucass!!!!
@kabirhasan9957 ай бұрын
You have beautiful eyes
@user-cr5vh4sw6q7 ай бұрын
Thank you very much for the video, it is what I needed to help with my supplements. They were really very useful and thank you. Keep going!!!
@KiaraGennae7 ай бұрын
I got a 20 my senior year of high school… after taking it 5 times. I really want to retest now that I’m older trying to enroll Into a nursing program. I want a 36 😩
@rochelle33497 ай бұрын
No excessive description(it needs to tell me about you.) Stop repeating the same idea over: every sentence needs to be essential so for the narrative and should bring something new to your essay Transions:
@Shruti-op1yv7 ай бұрын
this. this is the brutal honesty we need
@maka-do2fb8 ай бұрын
Can you edit my essay??
@yvonnewaja1728 ай бұрын
Very helpful 😊 Thanks a lot
@SamOfTheSmokies768 ай бұрын
Here is my ACT story. I've taken ACT 4x and about to take it a fifth. First time, I took it in my junior year and got a 19. Second time in my junior year, I got a 20. Third time in my junior year, I got a 22, but notably, I got my reading and English up by 5-6 pts to 25 and 26 respectively. Problem is my math and science remained both at 19 for the past three tests. The last test I took though, I got a 23. English went down by one, reading went down by 4... but my math went up by 3 and science went up by 6!!! If my reading hadn't gone down and my English and reading had at least stayed the same, I would've gotten a 25, which is what I am currently aiming for. I take it in four days and my goal is between a 27-30, a 36 would be lovely, but for me as a person who struggles to take tests, it's most likely not realistic, but hey you never know. One tip Ik is that reading and science test the same skill and they shouldn't be but at max 1 pts apart. I still haven't gotten there but hopefully soon! Wish me luck and I'll be back with my new score soon :)
@vincyinsane8 ай бұрын
Hey do you need a video editor? To enhance the quality of your videos? I can do that and I'll edit your first video for free as an example . lemme know if you want me to work for you🎉
@user-je6pg1be5d9 ай бұрын
your fourth activity- orchestra one... so we dont get any recognition or certificates for these right? we just do it and list it in application...am i correct? please reply,,,
@sushilgautam32909 ай бұрын
Watching her on deadline😂
@enrique533510 ай бұрын
I think their problem is the fact most people have an idea of what they wanted to do and seen the timeline as (graduate hs, go to college, get an internship, graduate, then find the job) when there’s so many missing pieces but instead of thinking it out methodically they spend all their time trying to get into their dream school and once they get accepted they think it’s where the road ends and they take their foot off the pedal and get comfortable, that is a mindset that will kill you. The higher up the totem pole you go just means more responsibility on your plate, more eyes on you, and the expectations will only grow and you need to remember that for the rest of your life. I also think the lack of give a fcks came from a bad habit that started to spoil your head. When you mentioned it I was waiting to hear “what made you feel this way.” You said the breakup isn’t an excuse and it’s not but it’s how you reacted to the breakup/tragedy. Tragedy comes in many forms but from how you out it, you took it pretty rough (no judgment), procrastinated once and rather than catching your mistake you decided to do it again and formed a bad habit that also changed your mindset in a negative way. I think it’s crucial that you look back at it, how you reacted, and LEARN from it so YOU KNOW HOW TO MOVE WHEN IT HAPPENS AGAIN. Tragedy will come again. Could be another breakup, could be financial blow, fired from a job, or one day could receive news that someone you held very close to your heart is no longer here. Either way you need to keep it pushin and understand it is not an excuse to take your foot off the gas. This video is a year old but all in all if things are ever going bad I think it’s important you take a day to reflect on not just the negatives and struggles and say it’ll be ok, but what YOU did to get yourself in that situation and what person YOU NEED TO BE to overcome it.
@ryankordas578410 ай бұрын
A A .0/“ P Alo a. M. A. M. Zma zp Lo. O
@DazHuang7210 ай бұрын
Did she just list what I did?
@smartify538910 ай бұрын
really informative and straight to point, NO BS video. one word - underrated.
@oikawaspeach_716510 ай бұрын
u being so transparent about these things is so uplifting and useful. i felt so bad abt my ecs but ur video makes me feel like i can get in my dream college too!!!! u have no idea how helpful this is to me. thanks a ton girl<3<3
@Jmei110 ай бұрын
How would I do the activity description if I was just a member😅
@oikawaspeach_716510 ай бұрын
this video gave me faith that even if i didnt have the resources in highschool to participate in flashy extracuriculars i could still get in a good college~ thanks a tonn<3
@oliviamou6010 ай бұрын
1) metaphor must be integrated throughout the essay (not just intro or conclusion) Fresh perspective ..not an object..should mean something to u personally, don’t use one everyone heard before 2) do not make direct statements..make more descriptive and specific 3) narrative of personal transformation and change but a lot of people do not include what changed they talking about. Catalyst doesn’t come from their experiences …my parents caused me … focus should be you …you be the source of personal change Thought process from point A to point B . “My fish died so I had to keep track of my fish food so I had to be more organized.” 4) do not focus on other ppl/somewhere …Talk abt YOU…at most one paragraph abt someone else 5) no excessive adverbs/forcing descriptive words Bring me into your life. Background, significant moments Adverbs can be too elementary 6) do not *repeating same idea over and over again* Essential for narrative Same thing over and over again Last sent 1st paragraph and first sentence of 2nd paragraph are too similar
@zomacchy1610 ай бұрын
this is the EXACT same facts as elevated’s college app editing vid. No offense to Haley, just pointing it out.
@ericfischer422010 ай бұрын
your so awkward in ur videos and they make them 10 times better and more entertaining
@virajtayshete338210 ай бұрын
Loved how you stayed raw and real. One of those few essays that never really feels boring even after reading it a couple of times
@virajtayshete338210 ай бұрын
Its so hard to follow what's the right thing to do when It comes to college essays but its so easy to follow "what not do to" thanks for sharing these invaluable college insights
@user-zr9jz9ny2b11 ай бұрын
instructions unclear, im now on the fbi watchlist
@DonSyndrome11 ай бұрын
To be fair, not many students start their own charities. Hahahaha
@wishIKnewHowToLove11 ай бұрын
how many hours did you spend?
@damianchin845111 ай бұрын
Thanks gang
@AninomousUser11 ай бұрын
wehlp i took notes, lets see how this essay writing goes. thanks haley.
@pamelaminkovska542811 ай бұрын
Hello! May I ask about where you got your beautiful top from? It seems really comfortable!
@shrek3397 Жыл бұрын
Lol this is actually the most useful essay video
@jessicashniderman4413 Жыл бұрын
Going to an Ivy and being 😊surrounded by cute boys? There’s the life!!!