The Zombie Diary of Alex (A Zombie Apocalypse Short Story)

[@johnschofield3418]

So he got bit and just walked it off

[@storystream10009]

I took an idea out of Z Nation where the guy was immune to zombie bites; just trying to mix up the stories so they are not all the same.

[@arthurchadwell9267]

​@@storystream10009-- the dog saliva was the secret cure!

[@wyntersteele1a]

Did he really keep lamenting over a dog after losing a daughter? May be I heard the story wrong.

[@storystream10009]

He felt some way about the dog because he couldn't do anything to help, and he saw the death; he has hope that his daughter is safe, and he holds on to that idea since he doesn't know if they're still alive or not.

[@erichoepelman7764]

@@storystream10009that’s not how it came across. His going on about his dog really took me out of the story

[@ScullyPop]

I'm glad they're recommending fellow narrators. Loving your content for sure.

[@richardwilson2827]

keep them coming

[@neilkendrick4976]

it's a story & i enjoyed it.

[@toddwilson2297]

Just subscribed, yeah ,im sure there will always be some immune people in any virus outbreak. 👍

[@Solouna01]

So no explanation on why Jake didn't turn

[@storystream10009]

I took an idea from Z Nation, and I am Legend, where he is immune to the virus; I didn't explain it in this short story. But thanks for asking

[@jhonsmith6614]

Really good thank you loved the first 10min had me deep in trenched to the story. Love the channel ❤️

[@wadereynoldsdeadpool5768]

Jake/Joe and Ellie sounds like the last of us

[@storystream10009]

I forgot about that show, I was just trying to write a character that was a good human, a normal every day guy.

[@Monkeymoon940]

But he got bit and what happened to the guy that saved him ??

[@storystream10009]

I took an idea out of Z Nation where the guy was immune to zombie bites; just trying to mix up the stories so they are not all the same.

[@lavuntecolquitt]

Excellent.

[@storystream10009]

Thanks for listening

[@MagicIsMayhem]

Nice story, interesting characters

[@storystream10009]

Thanks!

[@stenmutt9812]

Dog dies, so I lost interest.

[@christinedidur364]

I’m so glad I read the comments because no, no more vicarious entertain,ent in dead dogs. Thank you.

[@jeffmclean9411]

Ya thanks. Don't like animals dieing, people I don't care

[@Stumppy60]

I would rather save a dog over a human because the dog will appreciate it and help you.

[@eleveneleven572]

​@@Stumppy60 It's been long said " the difference between dogs and people.....if you pick up a dog from the gutter, feed it and care for it, it will never turn around and bite you "

[@322subject]

All of you are terrible people 😊

[@Shadowcub69]

This guy misses his dog more than his wife i miss my dog i miss him so much i got a wife and daughter out there somehow damn I miss my dog.

[@storystream10009]

@@Shadowcub69 his only companion in an apocalypse dies, his journey isn’t over he’s will continue on to search for his family.

[@DillianPocius-zj6il]

Definitely needs some work; the timeline seems a lil weird but I'm loving the story! I was disappointed when Max met his end, though.

[@storystream10009]

@@DillianPocius-zj6il your right, my time lines are weird, but the KZbin algorithm makes it that way. The sweet spot for The algorithm is 1 - 1.5 hours for the zombie genre

[@rachelchacon82]

The monotone is hard to listen to. Then in the same minute of protecting the dog at all costs, the dog dies without so much as the guy saying the word heel. Cmon, bro.

[@erichoepelman7764]

Give me a break this guy mentions his wife and daughter once directly and once indirectly but the dog oh his dog he can wax poetic for hours about the dog

[@neldablanco1663]

44min

[@johnwhitaker545]

Who is Alex? How’d he get bit and not turn?

[@dewayneglass6926]

I don't understand you got Bit Didn't change. Did you not know? Your story line

[@doloresvalenzuela183]

What happened to the guy he escaped with?

[@richardwilson2827]

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