Alien Plasma Artist Accidentally Burned Away Her Outfit-The Human Offered His Jacket... | HFY Story

[@ScottBionicBlasters]

I've been listening closely to the story(and I may listen to this one again. It's that good so far. )All Though, it's 25:54 on the chronometer and she hunted him down, while still wearing his work jacket, to 'thank him' again. Where the hell is 'the kiss'. If she wasn't into him, she could've had the jacket delivered by drone or something. She came to find him herself. And he's already her at least mostly nude closely. She should've given him a hug and kissed him the cheeks, while stumbling trying to get some distance from the equipment.😎 Missed opportunity or a slightly different spin on the story or new slightly hotter version of the story. These 2 don't strike me as the that normally jump into a quick hot relationship, but this one started with a plasma fire or malfunction or whatever.

[@Futurexplorer]

Ah, I love your take on that moment! You're absolutely right-her coming to him personally while still wearing his jacket says a lot about their chemistry. I purposely held back from adding ‘the kiss’ because I wanted to build their relationship slow and steady, but now that you mention it... a cheek kiss or a stumble-hug could’ve added a lot of emotional weight to that scene! 👀🔥 Maybe I should work on a “hotter spin” version or a sequel where their connection heats up in unexpected ways? What do you think? 😉

[@ScottBionicBlasters]

Also, she could be a federation operative. Why, when they had these guys, did they just let them go, really.?! Your story not making since anymore.

[@Futurexplorer]

Thank you for catching that! You're right, letting the intruders go feels like a loose end, and it could have been handled more decisively. Maybe there’s a deeper reason-like someone higher up pulling strings or an operative’s hidden agenda. Hmm… now you’ve got me thinking! 🤔 What if she is a Federation operative, playing a long game, and letting them go was part of a larger strategy? Let me know if you'd like me to explore that angle in a follow-up! 🚀