(2021 May) How to get an A for your TOK Essay in 4 hours?

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[@rosiya189]

I love how we are all collectively (and eternally) confused over wth TOK is and what we are supposed to be doing 😂

[@benivory3761]

for real like i literally talked to my classmates and we all agreed we did and learned nothing except that i think therfore i am stuff we did at the beginning of y11

[@jackmoffatt8647]

My Tok essay is due in 4 and a half hours- time to start.

[@randomguy8115]

Yo did u do it in tine?

[@jackmoffatt8647]

@@randomguy8115 somehow yes. It actually seemed pretty decent too

[@NA-lu5wr]

Wow 😀😀😀😀

[@micahaas]

@@jackmoffatt8647 how much did you get?

[@micahaas]

mine is due in 3 hours 😍

[@fyasserr]

2:53 Rubric 5:18 Structure of the essay 8:34 Introduction 12:05 AOK 1 12:58 Knowledge claim 1 15:18 Example 18:29 Counterclaim 1 19:42 Example 21:46 Mini conclusion 22:44 AOK 2 23:25 Knowledge claim 2 25:06 Example 27:44 Counterclaim 2 30:21 Example 32:27 Mini conclusion 33:05 Conclusion

[@daniellee.8344]

thank you for this!!

[@Ghost-hy1tl]

You sir just did what my stupid TOK teacher couldn’t...... thank you!!!!!

[@fyasserr]

@@Ghost-hy1tl HAHAHAHA my pleasure

[@fyasserr]

@@daniellee.8344 no need

[@claudiacha2536]

i love and appreciate you

[@cankucuk1850]

Guys appreciate what he is doing, and stop complaining. He is putting his effort and time for all of you, so you can evantually be satisfied with your results.

[@kadabrar9846]

exactly. chinese jesus deserves our utmost respect

[@Hustler628]

plus, he didnt even monetize it

[@Manima108]

whos complaining?

[@gyuro7988]

uh who complained (no one in the comments)??

[@Parmie_03]

i'm so close to paying someone to write it for me

[@kim-qr6ek]

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MOOD

[@krishkumar4081]

The essays are easy if you follow this dude's method. I would rather write three of these instead of the EE :(

[@Parmie_03]

@@krishkumar4081 fr

[@veronicaadellan4037]

Same, i have to send my final work in like 1 week so im dying

[@noellebuttgereit228]

@@veronicaadellan4037 I have to submit mine in 12 hours and I'm not even half way done. Lmao I'm dying 😂

[@ariisair]

as someone with no clue where to start with any TOK essay, I'd like to say thank you for making such a detailed, concise video. So helpful.

[@shafimishtiaq3587]

Ryan thank you so much for this video!!! it has given me the outline and what to look for in your essay!! ill read the guide once more and start my essay soon!! i feel like this title was hard but since i understood this i can easily do it on other titles! thnx lov u

[@maksxperia02]

man... i can not paraphrase how much i appreciate this guy!

[@Neovrtuos]

Amazing video, thank you so much for the help!

[@soooslaaal8204]

oh yes, it's about 24 hours before my deadline and I'm watching this

[@aleenaasohail418]

This dude single handedly carrying my EE, TOK and Econ grade

[@MingKeatSng]

Thank you so much. This video has been really helpful. Appreciate your effort. Could I also ask if you do have something Biology-related? Thank you so much.

[@user-hf6bi3ml3i]

can you do this with the rest of the titles please as its very helpful

[@gtucker5424]

Thanks. This does provide a good roadmap.

[@jennyzhang2810]

u r a legend

[@smartrabbitvideos9384]

Your videos have helped me a lot!! Do you have a video for November 2022?

[@pahellalani6651]

can you create a video for unpacking the essay titles and also make a video of a exemplar essay?

[@shereenbatra3317]

Hi could you also please do the other tok titles too? Please do QUESTION 3 FIRSTTT

[@analaura-bz8fy]

what an amazing job

[@s.gmoney6983]

Thank you for your videos! My essay is due this friday, wish me luck!

[@AgentCharles522002]

why so early

[@rigdby]

@@AgentCharles522002 probably to make sure they have it done

[@claudiacha2536]

good luck girly !! hope all is well

[@rigdby]

@@claudiacha2536 thank you!!!

[@Maria-rw7ek]

Hello this video is very helpfull but will you do the other questions?

[@salahkhayyat8173]

Thank you sooo much !!!

[@ibmetaenglish]

School teachers are always same lol 😸😸 not just your school teacher. 고마워요~

[@Anony2024]

Thank you very much

[@legeo3504]

i oficially have a new god, thank you

[@gabrieljackson79]

ty!!

[@janetlekoba6890]

Man I wish I saw this earlier

[@XanaChihiro]

The link to the math questionbank is not working. Gives a 404 error. Also the emails do not have the links to the free resources especially the chemistry questionbank one.

[@zurella9962]

Sorry can someone explain what does essay prompt means? English is not my first language ;-; Btw I would love to have this youtube professor help me with the essay he explains everything so well!

[@AgentCharles522002]

thanks sir

[@riaarora1346]

I love you

[@milagroschirinos4492]

Could you create videos about TOK titles?

[@alvinlam9830]

factual

[@alvinlam9830]

indeed

[@alvinlam9830]

very cool

[@leonezeekeh6749]

Fax

[@QM027]

Is there a “complete essay” for the example?

[@franek9558]

thanks

[@sophiacho5149]

does this count for M22 and M23 as welll?

[@lsk4091]

Its basically writting tok with 4hours and 33mins in lncluding your video length and youtube ads

[@cmoh437]

Is there a video that is for the current curriculum in TOK? Alas, this is no longer valid.

[@sunneyjim6186]

PLEASE, TOK NOVEMBER TITLE 5!!! I NEED A GUIDEEEEEEEE ASAP

[@hugoquetglas6143]

do you have an example with this structure ?

[@namanagrawal6110]

Hey! Where does your research team gets these real-life examples from.

[@amingaybulloev5853]

Can u pls help me to come with a RLS for the same topic? :)

[@eem.vtim21]

They probably just do some research on things being connected to the AOK.

[@rebaljerdi1122]

very helpful video thank you, but the link to the TOK sample essay link is not working where enter my email and everything and it says that it sends the essay but it doesn't, I tried this a few times too, and with different emails. Please help!

[@PETEKASHYAP]

any french ab initio or French b sample I A to score 7

[@aryanshah1938]

Please make one for may 22

[@pratikshanikam1463]

Not received the mail from you for IAs,TOK essay and EE

[@CCSuperC]

7:44

[@urmudder8867]

can you do november 2021 please?

[@tman16034HNG]

where can I get this ppt?

[@Anony2024]

Can I use religion as an AOK for this title? I am a bit confused about it because I think bias will be mixed with faith and certainty. Any thoughts??

[@rigdby]

i personally think that sounds like a great idea

[@ranveerpratapnalwa2193]

@@rigdby Agreed

[@jakublazar206]

Asian jesus saved my ass

[@akarshanmishra2351]

fr my essay was due 3 weeks ago bruh and i'm starting now😄 Edit : I’m done with this shit now, AFTER 2 WEEKS

[@tylerspovv]

my essay is due tonight at 11:59 lets see if i can do this😌

[@fluffyunicorn9688]

did u finish yours? mine is due today at 11:59 as well lol

[@tylerspovv]

@@fluffyunicorn9688 yea i did, waiting for my teacher to give feedback.

[@Ihatwpwrsona5]

Do you have any tok presentation tips

[@gursharanmarwaha3376]

no

[@gregtheflyingwhale6480]

die during presentation and your teammates get 10/10 for TOK

[@Ihatwpwrsona5]

@@gregtheflyingwhale6480 that's not bad

[@klaeparchment2938]

I feel like the hardest part is finding examples to support your points. Do you have any tips?

[@tk006]

Hi firstly pick a question you feel you have a good idea on how you should approach. Then ask yourself questions under the main question like why is this necessary? Then, find an example where it was necessary. Basically, break down the main question with smaller questions, and then find examples that answer these "mini-questions". Hope that helps.

[@devansshshah4537]

can i get the tok essay file

[@megansim8727]

will be trying this for Nov 2021 its due in 2 days wish me luck 😭

[@quinncab6624]

how'd u do?

[@pineapple9732]

Guys do not plagiarise this!!! my friend just got caught in plagerizing this whole video in his document..... my friend's turnitin score went upto 88% and now his parents were called upon the school and his diploma is going away now!!!..... I just wanted to aware you guys that who ever plagiarises this, Will 100% GET CAUGHT

[@akarshanmishra2351]

F

[@richardxu4340]

thats a rip man

[@joshlee1305]

due in 3 days :D

[@alyssatanchai]

Should you ever talk about your own personal real life experience in the TOK essay?

[@tk006]

You can in your introduction use it as a reason as to why you chose that question. Then, with your examples, if you personally have an instance where the thing in your example happened to you, you can bring it up, but try not to use just your personal experience as an example for your AOK

[@lianghl2957]

老师你愿意教我tok吗？（期待）

[@akarshanmishra2351]

你做完了吗？

[@ronilkapopara1956]

I just find tok useless 😂

[@suryas6279]

hi amaan

[@rigdby]

23:17

[@iiiexillieplayz3256]

my teacher recommends we only use one WOK, what do you think?

[@galexystarlight6285]

I know I'm not the channel and this might be too late: but limiting your WOK will definitely depend on the prompt and I would disagree with your teachers' recommendation. Of course, if a title states "address this statement with reference to two WOK," then obviously you MUST use two WOK (and no more than two) or you will lose marks. As for when the title does not require them, applicable WOKs vary greatly from AOK to AOK. For example, the AOK of natural sciences may depend on Sense Perception or Language and little on Faith; so limiting your argument to say "one WOK" like Faith would greatly limit how you may discuss the natural sciences under one title. Though discussing faith within the natural sciences would be an excellent exploration of WOK, we have to make sure these discussions align with the title you chose.

[@vikisentainment8269]

This is very helpful but one of my friends copied 50 percent of this video and his presentation was banned. so just take the idea, the video helps a lot and gives a better outline.

[@kim-qr6ek]

@@jaibachani hows life J. Are you safe now?

[@OLPlalogi]

It's due in 7 hours and it's 1:07 am😭

[@skedos4498]

shiit mine's due at 31/01 and its 26/01 - thats still hella time but i still feel a bit of anxiety

[@rigdby]

how did it go dude

[@kata7669]

Lol. 2:51 am rough draft due at midnight (3 hours ago)

[@rigdby]

6:17 (don't mind me :-))

[@anaulloa3282]

Me at 4:32 am

[@leviperez6440]

Why are mostly all tok teachers bad😐😐

[@tousifdewan659]

Because they don't even know by themselves what are they going to teach us? Instead, they pretend like they are the god of TOK. Just because of bad luck, they didn't get a chance to be an official IB TOK examiner.

[@feikemanting5258]

cause who tf acc likes tok lol

[@gregtheflyingwhale6480]

because for us, TOK was taught by physics/biology/english teachers and there is no such TOK teacher specialization

[@Anony2024]

My submission is tomorrow 😭😂😂😂😂😂 and I still didn't even finish a draft

[@abdelrahmanyassar6992]

yep same

[@rebaljerdi1122]

what kind of degenerate disliked this video, may he go to hell.

[@kyliec5418]

Did anyone really use this method and got an A? Plsss replyyyyyyy would do great help🥲

[@Peter-tr7gg]

I am interested as well

[@riaarora1346]

I love you

[@riaarora1346]

I love you