4 Steps to Write Poetry

[@HannahLeeKidder]

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[@Sikanderkakkar]

u are so beauitful

[@darrelloliver5919]

Real hannah

[@vinicius99157]

"I'm just gonna... ooops" That's me with 90% of what I write

[@justluc8556]

Vinicius Morais mood 😂

[@NAIOMIUNIQUE]

Omg 😂

[@johnstroup845]

BRUH😂😂😂

[@poetfrost]

Accidentally Yours Stranger, Well met in shadows Ones and zeros allow. Seeing new water Flowing in wilderness Which met here Disjointed in continuity. Though it was welcome Grateful that you are you Farewell to you As you are; Looking forward to what you be.

[@savbrown]

loved seeing how u edit v cool

[@HannahLeeKidder]

Thank u, b ♡

[@bijaykantdubey6055]

While talking of poetry Talk we of rhyme, rhythm, stanza-pattern, Sound, music, lyrical note, Sign, symbol, Myth and motif, Idea, image, picture,, Memoir and remembrance.

[@justluc8556]

WHAT HAVE I DONE TO HAVE BEEN BLESSED WITH A 20 MINUTE VIDEO??? THANK YOU WE LOVE YOU

[@7gacha428]

Oop- Lucas I found you on the internet again--

[@laraires]

I didn't expect I'd love watching you edit -

[@AdamGaryPoetry]

Just on a break from editing my next vid and found this. Very interesting to watch you edit, and really great tips too! Thanks for an enjoyable break, and glad to have found your channel. Subscribed!

[@micahklassen7151]

And.......................🤔👀 EM DASH 👊🏼😉😩

[@sandyedwards2681]

Wow. I recently stumbled on your channel and am really appreciating your wisdom. I’m someone who usually writes a pretty great first draft (which sometimes serves as a finished piece) but admittedly I’ve hesitated to edit and lose any of the feeling. Watching you make changes in real time is liberating. And I see how you are actually enhancing the depth and original meaning and emotions. Well done!

[@HannahLeeKidder]

Thank you, Sandy! That's really sweet, and I'm so glad you're finding some value in the content. 🥰

[@Teddy-ez9qq]

Love this. Its good to see the process of taking the raven poem from slightly rambling to a cohesive piece that flows perfectly. Really good video thank you.

[@yunnazee]

I follow you, and for some reason for the last two months, this is literally the only one of your videos that shows on my feed, and has consecutively been there every day. XD wow youtube.

[@HannahLeeKidder]

Hey did you want to learn about poetry do you like poetry do you want to see this video about poetry it could teach you something about poems if you like poems do you like poems

[@edenmckinley3472]

I know this is an old video, but I implemented some of your tips for my poetry and this is one I wrote. It's called Some Other Time. [people in the comment section, tell me what you think!] I'll write a poem some other time the feeling is too fresh like a cut from a lemon knife a burn from sun-stung metal the pain of a tooth jerked out of tender gums -- too fresh -- entirely. wait until it is a dull memory old books on the back shelf of a cent store in peace, photos from the war...

[@cityman2312]

Hannah's amazing at what she does. We're lucky that she uploads these videos for free. Unfortunately I never got the hang of writing poetry. Is it just harder to write poetry in English and German (I'm bilingual) than in other languages, or am I just not poetic at all?

[@NAIOMIUNIQUE]

Poetry evocates feelings That's the purpose in any language

[@wahyuadisyahputra7532]

Thanks sis....

[@shadabkhan-ng5xe]

I was looking for this kind of explanation for poetry !!! thank you so much...

[@PaliSuttas]

Wow I love this. I would love for you to critique my self-published book of 30 poems.

[@thandiswadlamini9800]

Awesome video!Really love all the tips😍and this has even inspired me to start giving poetry advice on my channel to those in South Africa. Much love!

[@billyalarie929]

"rupi kaur is very successful 😒" she doesn't write poetry, she writes overheard high school conversations, but with line breaks.

[@SmallStepsNesh]

They've been made examples of!

[@dc37009]

I like poetry to be the spice in my prose, I feel that is the correct ratio ! Also, I love the real-time Editing videos. They feel like they're keeping alive the feeling I got from "Genius 2016", about Max Perkins (Editor of Genius, Thomas Wolfe played by Jude Law). That was the first time I felt an understanding for the technical brilliance and artistry of an Editor ! So... thanks for that !

[@bijaykantdubey6055]

What will it go with And what it remains here, Say you, Came I here with nothing Shall i go with nothing, Isn't it?

[@JoshuaMNielsen]

A second thought: Interesting interpretation at 6:08 but I feel it changes the original thought too much. You were aiming to make it more succinct yet clear and effective, yet I think you should have kept 'way' and rather removed the whole prepositional phrase 'in the dark'. The way knew her back, not the dark. The full repetition with the earlier portion is indeed unnecessary, but I feel like 'way' better evokes the prior 'way in the dark' than 'dark' evokes 'way in the dark'. The way can be windy, treacherous, whatever, but it's so familiar even if it's dark its features are all known. Dark is always dark (featureless?), but ways (terrain?) in the dark can change/variegate, or the way it is traveled on can change. That way with all its features is what knows its traveler back. (This is a nice poem, by the way!)

[@JoshuaMNielsen]

Arguing both sides here, perhaps you could argue for a creative metonymy of providing 'dark' for 'way in the dark'. But what I noted in my initial comment above seems clearer, else the reader likely will start dwelling on the essence of dark(ness) and not essence of the way. If that's your intent as a writer though, then go for it!

[@dinahakim7114]

I have a few poems that I write the problem is I am not able to help you in patrion because I'm a blind individual who writes about disabilities I love to write

[@HaneenIAdam]

Very useful, very informative video. Thanks Hannah.

[@caseygibson5422]

Omg I,,,,,love it? Can I even still say it's mine now? What comma the hell?

[@HannahLeeKidder]

Yes comma it is yours!!

[@marinagemoftheseas]

I really like your poem. It's so... strong, but also very vulnerable? IDK, it was just really pretty to me.

[@caseygibson5422]

@@marinagemoftheseas omg thank you! 😭❤

[@JoshuaMNielsen]

I really like Gloria's poem. Can I find it posted elsewhere online?

[@anandahuja4319]

Wow, I really love the way you edit poems, and explain why and how you do that - and make them appear so more poetic than what they were before. I'm a fan. I write poetry, would love to approach you for editing them.

[@vickytaa1]

Liked this video very much!

[@LonelyGamr]

Thank you

[@levvellene7246]

I hate poetry that doesn't really rhyme! And then I like those that doesn't do it best, anyway! Go away, Hannah! Schnut up! ;D

[@poetryinsky8680]

Love your presentation

[@timchichi4230]

Is huggable a word? If so your huggable! 😉☝️❤️

[@sergiojohnston5389]

You're amazing!

[@rentrashcan2930]

You remind me of Steve Harrington from Stranger Things- or like the actor

[@HannahLeeKidder]

This is an incredible compliment thank you

[@dak8793]

I wish you were my English teacher in school

[@ROMEO-qr1vt]

Can you make poem exercise video

[@a.harrispoems2738]

This was cool to watch and really helpful. Thank you.

[@thea4676]

I know this is old but i also read the last poem as sexy so you are not the only one.

[@lucinatorres9873]

Thea Is yeah me too but I thought I was being immature when I heard “peaks and valleys” and went 😉

[@brooklynnnp6667]

Love watching you live edit!! Is there anywhere we can read your poetry?

[@darrelloliver5919]

Real

[@saherapunekar4090]

Can you compose a new poem for me on nature. Please please. Means your own poem/ new. Please this is yours fans request...

[@bijaykantdubey6055]

Monkeys, Rhesus monkeys, Big and small, small and big Jumping, Sitting on the roads, Crossing by In groups, Hanging onto rooftops, The branches of trees, Plucking fruits, Leaves, Asking for food Or snatching from the hands If seen with, Looking with awe, suspense, Ogling, Gnashing the teeth.

[@lawratoujallow5474]

Please help me i wanna write poetry

[@gilbertonino5703]

Do you know any good poetry books?

[@leeandreialcantara2886]

Good day! Thanks for this very helpful for my upcoming seminar. I just hope I can contact you personally for more advise 🙂

[@nchangmireille2014]

Please I need help,I want to become an oral poet

[@gilbertonino5703]

You seem pretty awesome... Your video is good too.

[@chaishen4872]

Me making a peom for 500 dollar contest ,e when i watch this:... what is this o-o

[@HannahLeeKidder]

what are you trying to communicate to me?

[@johnstroup845]

😂😂😂

[@skhafijurrahaman9204]

She looks like Missy Copper.

[@kickinkickz3715]

Haha this is wrong. Poetry can't be edit this makes me feel y art is not fully evolved. 😤

[@gjjpabkriner2714]

I hope that's sarcasm.