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@Sikanderkakkar3 жыл бұрын
u are so beauitful
@darrelloliver59193 жыл бұрын
Real hannah
@vinicius991575 жыл бұрын
"I'm just gonna... ooops" That's me with 90% of what I write
@justluc85565 жыл бұрын
Vinicius Morais mood 😂
@NAIOMIUNIQUE4 жыл бұрын
Omg 😂
@johnstroup8453 жыл бұрын
BRUH😂😂😂
@poetfrost4 жыл бұрын
Accidentally Yours Stranger, Well met in shadows Ones and zeros allow. Seeing new water Flowing in wilderness Which met here Disjointed in continuity. Though it was welcome Grateful that you are you Farewell to you As you are; Looking forward to what you be.
@savbrown5 жыл бұрын
loved seeing how u edit v cool
@HannahLeeKidder5 жыл бұрын
Thank u, b ♡
@bijaykantdubey60553 жыл бұрын
While talking of poetry Talk we of rhyme, rhythm, stanza-pattern, Sound, music, lyrical note, Sign, symbol, Myth and motif, Idea, image, picture,, Memoir and remembrance.
@justluc85565 жыл бұрын
WHAT HAVE I DONE TO HAVE BEEN BLESSED WITH A 20 MINUTE VIDEO??? THANK YOU WE LOVE YOU
@7gacha4284 жыл бұрын
Oop- Lucas I found you on the internet again--
@laraires5 жыл бұрын
I didn't expect I'd love watching you edit -
@AdamGaryPoetry5 жыл бұрын
Just on a break from editing my next vid and found this. Very interesting to watch you edit, and really great tips too! Thanks for an enjoyable break, and glad to have found your channel. Subscribed!
@micahklassen71515 жыл бұрын
And.......................🤔👀 EM DASH 👊🏼😉😩
@sandyedwards2681 Жыл бұрын
Wow. I recently stumbled on your channel and am really appreciating your wisdom. I’m someone who usually writes a pretty great first draft (which sometimes serves as a finished piece) but admittedly I’ve hesitated to edit and lose any of the feeling. Watching you make changes in real time is liberating. And I see how you are actually enhancing the depth and original meaning and emotions. Well done!
@HannahLeeKidder Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Sandy! That's really sweet, and I'm so glad you're finding some value in the content. 🥰
@Teddy-ez9qq2 жыл бұрын
Love this. Its good to see the process of taking the raven poem from slightly rambling to a cohesive piece that flows perfectly. Really good video thank you.
@yunnazee2 жыл бұрын
I follow you, and for some reason for the last two months, this is literally the only one of your videos that shows on my feed, and has consecutively been there every day. XD wow youtube.
@HannahLeeKidder2 жыл бұрын
Hey did you want to learn about poetry do you like poetry do you want to see this video about poetry it could teach you something about poems if you like poems do you like poems
@edenmckinley34722 жыл бұрын
I know this is an old video, but I implemented some of your tips for my poetry and this is one I wrote. It's called Some Other Time. [people in the comment section, tell me what you think!] I'll write a poem some other time the feeling is too fresh like a cut from a lemon knife a burn from sun-stung metal the pain of a tooth jerked out of tender gums -- too fresh -- entirely. wait until it is a dull memory old books on the back shelf of a cent store in peace, photos from the war...
@cityman23125 жыл бұрын
Hannah's amazing at what she does. We're lucky that she uploads these videos for free. Unfortunately I never got the hang of writing poetry. Is it just harder to write poetry in English and German (I'm bilingual) than in other languages, or am I just not poetic at all?
@NAIOMIUNIQUE4 жыл бұрын
Poetry evocates feelings That's the purpose in any language
@wahyuadisyahputra75324 жыл бұрын
Thanks sis....
@shadabkhan-ng5xe5 жыл бұрын
I was looking for this kind of explanation for poetry !!! thank you so much...
@PaliSuttas2 жыл бұрын
Wow I love this. I would love for you to critique my self-published book of 30 poems.
@thandiswadlamini98004 жыл бұрын
Awesome video!Really love all the tips😍and this has even inspired me to start giving poetry advice on my channel to those in South Africa. Much love!
@billyalarie9293 жыл бұрын
"rupi kaur is very successful 😒" she doesn't write poetry, she writes overheard high school conversations, but with line breaks.
@SmallStepsNesh5 жыл бұрын
They've been made examples of!
@dc37009 Жыл бұрын
I like poetry to be the spice in my prose, I feel that is the correct ratio ! Also, I love the real-time Editing videos. They feel like they're keeping alive the feeling I got from "Genius 2016", about Max Perkins (Editor of Genius, Thomas Wolfe played by Jude Law). That was the first time I felt an understanding for the technical brilliance and artistry of an Editor ! So... thanks for that !
@bijaykantdubey60554 жыл бұрын
What will it go with And what it remains here, Say you, Came I here with nothing Shall i go with nothing, Isn't it?
@JoshuaMNielsen3 жыл бұрын
A second thought: Interesting interpretation at 6:08 but I feel it changes the original thought too much. You were aiming to make it more succinct yet clear and effective, yet I think you should have kept 'way' and rather removed the whole prepositional phrase 'in the dark'. The way knew her back, not the dark. The full repetition with the earlier portion is indeed unnecessary, but I feel like 'way' better evokes the prior 'way in the dark' than 'dark' evokes 'way in the dark'. The way can be windy, treacherous, whatever, but it's so familiar even if it's dark its features are all known. Dark is always dark (featureless?), but ways (terrain?) in the dark can change/variegate, or the way it is traveled on can change. That way with all its features is what knows its traveler back. (This is a nice poem, by the way!)
@JoshuaMNielsen3 жыл бұрын
Arguing both sides here, perhaps you could argue for a creative metonymy of providing 'dark' for 'way in the dark'. But what I noted in my initial comment above seems clearer, else the reader likely will start dwelling on the essence of dark(ness) and not essence of the way. If that's your intent as a writer though, then go for it!
@dinahakim71144 жыл бұрын
I have a few poems that I write the problem is I am not able to help you in patrion because I'm a blind individual who writes about disabilities I love to write
@HaneenIAdam2 жыл бұрын
Very useful, very informative video. Thanks Hannah.
@caseygibson54225 жыл бұрын
Omg I,,,,,love it? Can I even still say it's mine now? What comma the hell?
@HannahLeeKidder5 жыл бұрын
Yes comma it is yours!!
@marinagemoftheseas5 жыл бұрын
I really like your poem. It's so... strong, but also very vulnerable? IDK, it was just really pretty to me.
@caseygibson54225 жыл бұрын
@@marinagemoftheseas omg thank you! 😭❤
@JoshuaMNielsen3 жыл бұрын
I really like Gloria's poem. Can I find it posted elsewhere online?
@anandahuja43194 жыл бұрын
Wow, I really love the way you edit poems, and explain why and how you do that - and make them appear so more poetic than what they were before. I'm a fan. I write poetry, would love to approach you for editing them.
@vickytaa14 жыл бұрын
Liked this video very much!
@LonelyGamr2 жыл бұрын
Thank you
@levvellene72463 жыл бұрын
I hate poetry that doesn't really rhyme! And then I like those that doesn't do it best, anyway! Go away, Hannah! Schnut up! ;D
@poetryinsky86803 жыл бұрын
Love your presentation
@timchichi42303 жыл бұрын
Is huggable a word? If so your huggable! 😉☝️❤️
@sergiojohnston53893 жыл бұрын
You're amazing!
@rentrashcan29303 жыл бұрын
You remind me of Steve Harrington from Stranger Things- or like the actor
@HannahLeeKidder3 жыл бұрын
This is an incredible compliment thank you
@dak87934 жыл бұрын
I wish you were my English teacher in school
@ROMEO-qr1vt3 жыл бұрын
Can you make poem exercise video
@a.harrispoems27383 жыл бұрын
This was cool to watch and really helpful. Thank you.
@thea46764 жыл бұрын
I know this is old but i also read the last poem as sexy so you are not the only one.
@lucinatorres98734 жыл бұрын
Thea Is yeah me too but I thought I was being immature when I heard “peaks and valleys” and went 😉
@brooklynnnp66675 жыл бұрын
Love watching you live edit!! Is there anywhere we can read your poetry?
@darrelloliver59193 жыл бұрын
Real
@saherapunekar40903 жыл бұрын
Can you compose a new poem for me on nature. Please please. Means your own poem/ new. Please this is yours fans request...
@bijaykantdubey60554 жыл бұрын
Monkeys, Rhesus monkeys, Big and small, small and big Jumping, Sitting on the roads, Crossing by In groups, Hanging onto rooftops, The branches of trees, Plucking fruits, Leaves, Asking for food Or snatching from the hands If seen with, Looking with awe, suspense, Ogling, Gnashing the teeth.
@lawratoujallow54744 жыл бұрын
Please help me i wanna write poetry
@gilbertonino57034 жыл бұрын
Do you know any good poetry books?
@leeandreialcantara28864 жыл бұрын
Good day! Thanks for this very helpful for my upcoming seminar. I just hope I can contact you personally for more advise 🙂
@nchangmireille20149 ай бұрын
Please I need help,I want to become an oral poet
@gilbertonino57034 жыл бұрын
You seem pretty awesome... Your video is good too.
@chaishen48724 жыл бұрын
Me making a peom for 500 dollar contest ,e when i watch this:... what is this o-o
@HannahLeeKidder4 жыл бұрын
what are you trying to communicate to me?
@johnstroup8453 жыл бұрын
😂😂😂
@skhafijurrahaman92043 жыл бұрын
She looks like Missy Copper.
@kickinkickz37154 жыл бұрын
Haha this is wrong. Poetry can't be edit this makes me feel y art is not fully evolved. 😤