A HFY Story : Isolated Vengeance | 2200 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

[@valtiel2589]

the funny thing is, i finished writing the sequel to this barely a few hours before the premier!

[@MeanMartian]

So there is a part 2 then? Nice, can´t wait for the follow up... Great Job btw! 🔥💪🏻🤩💯

[@MrGoesBoom]

Enjoyed this one so looking forward to getting to listen to the next part

[@grogvaughan5649]

Epic work. Thanks 👍

[@natsuds1]

Moooore! ( ￣▽￣)

[@zaphodthenth]

Post the ending! Great story!

[@dragonoidsix]

i like how this one ship didn't kill the helpless freighter. Just gave it some repairs so it could leave.

[@elduquecaradura1468]

Wich is contradictory with this "Imperium of Mankind xenophoby" attitude

[@dragonoidsix]

@@elduquecaradura1468 Not if you think of what was said. It was mentioned how the system is under quarantine. The ship couldn't leave it when it arrived even if it tried. So the most optimal way to get them to leave is to repair the ship. Of course, it most likely hacked in and saw the logs on the ship's fight and the crew being merchants so filling their cargo too just encourages them to leave even faster since they have no room for more "goods"

[@joebollig2689]

I believe that was the “USS Second Amendment.”

[@garysprandel1817]

Probe sends bsck final image of warship's main cannon. Writing on muzzle is translated as reading smile and wait for the flash.

[@robertalexander5892]

I've seen that meme. Friend of mine thought it was hilarious and had that laser engraved on his Desert Eagle 0.50 cal. and his Springfield 1911 0.45 cal he uses as his CC gun.

[@peterhall8572]

Kentucky Ballistics eat your heart out

[@noppornwongrassamee8941]

Up until the last message, I had the impression of a Coast Guard cutter run by a Bolo AI that was going about doing its regular Coast Guard patrol duties and dealing with visitors according to standard rules of engagement.

[@ICountFrom0]

I think that's still possible, but it's hungry for revenge, because one time it tried to trust, things went BADLY. So now it is STRICTLY duty. Though maybe when the humans catch up to it again, then they'll be like, "nha, chill, let the nice ones in".

[@nathandc]

Loved the Bolo series, I have a hard time not believing that we humans never deserved their loyalty or service.

[@artyd42]

Angry puppy drone is angry... and puppy... and way too tough for it's own good. I have no doubt puppy drone is waiting for master to return to the stars. You can almost hear the "boop" when it followed the stealth probe.

[@toddnesbitt3113]

The 400mm main gun got me, “oh crap, 16” guns”…lol

[@elduquecaradura1468]

Well, is not out of reach for us, iirc in WW2 Battleships had a 350-420mm diameter guns., being the Yamato the biggest guns

[@Sanquinity]

Considering it's main cannon could fit that entire trader ship in it's barrel, I'm not surprised at 400mm guns. :P

[@erushi5503]

more like 1600 meter guns

[@kennethhummel4409]

Ah! The UNSS Overprotective is still on station I see.

[@valtiel2589]

god i forgot this one existed. thanks for the narration :) FOR THE VOICE! FOR THE ALGORITHYM! FOR THE BEARD! AND MAY ALL MEDICAL THINGYS GO WELL!!!

[@Wyck_Xaos]

Algorythm led me to few stories voiced by Agro and i got hooked up on his voice and style of reading.

[@valtiel2589]

FOR THE HOLY ALGORITHM

[@Sanquinity]

Been following him for years now. He started out a bit rough imo. With weird emphasis on certain words, pauses at the wrong times, wrong emotion at certain times, etc. But he obviously got the practice in with all the narrations he's done so far, and he's really come into his own style. Using other words than the original text was off-putting to me at first but it adds to his charm now. The emotion he puts into his narration and the different voices he gives characters have improved by leaps and bounds. He's quickly become my favourite HFY/Sci-fi narrator. :)

[@ArchonSG1]

Got to wonder, if one singular ship is all that powerful, how and who did this to Terra?

[@thomasschulz2167]

You can be the most powerful peaceful civilization in the galaxy. Doesn't mean Jack when the rest of the galaxy gangs up on you. Death by a thousand betrayals is still a death.

[@lupaswolfshead9971]

the ship did say its not the only one maybe the fleet is still fighting the original enemies

[@theannihilator8800]

Must be an isolated colony, and the ship must be from the main Human Empire, In other words, the cavalry is on its way

[@jessedunn9835]

In last part they mention they trusted once. If you could knock out someone walking up to you but trust them they can walk past you to your house. Then set your house on fire. No matter what you do to them your house is on fire. They describe a earth around 1800s level development that has supper advanced ship enforcing a quarantine of system. The reason of who entered seems implied factor of response. Entry on purpose death for surveillance, interaction of any kind. Entry due to unavoidable state, needed repair - repaired and informed is quarantined system. If they delayed exit may have been destroyed in response.

[@ufoe20011]

The ending confuses me. Those that came in with violent intentions were destroyed fine. The one ship allowed to leave was there to damage, we repaired it top off it's tanks and sent it on it's way. Cool no threat to us no harm to it. But then we send a message that as soon as we get back to space we are going full xenocide on the galaxy ? Now for me if the final message had been. We ventured out into space once. We trusted others, we befriended others. They attacked us, burned us, drove us back in time. When we return to space. we will not trust you. We will not befriend you. But if you do not attack us. YOU WILL BE ALLOWED TO LIVE. This is your only warning. That would have made more sense as we allowed the frieghter to live.

[@valtiel2589]

wrote this story months ago while under the influence of ANGURY HEAD BRAIN HURT NOISES and wrote the sequel under the influence of a flu infection. either that or im just an idiot and forgot half of what i did XD

[@melkiorwiseman5234]

@@valtiel2589 You have a ready-made excuse for the inconsistency. (SPOILER FOR PART 2 BELOW) .. ... .. Since the pilot of the ship is essentially a human-turned-cyborg, he would be subject to many of the same failings as humans, including having "moods" and deciding inconsistently to spare one alien ship even though he later decides that the safer option is to exterminate all aliens. Maybe that could even be a plot point? Does he decide based on his own feelings, or does he ask the Earth humans to decide if all alien life should be exterminated (all over again, since obviously it has arisen once more) and if the latter, does he abide by their decision?

[@valtiel2589]

you'll have to wait for part 3 i spose.@@melkiorwiseman5234

[@melkiorwiseman5234]

@@valtiel2589 Of course. I look forward to it (now that you've stated that there will be a part 3) 😆 I've done a little writing in my time too, so if I've helped you then I'll feel proud, and if you have a different idea for the direction the story should go, I'll enjoy seeing what it is. 😃

[@yomogami4561]

time to move to the next galaxy thanks for the story and narration i hope the surgery went well. speedy recovery but take your time

[@BatmanSeRiedeTi]

You re good, quality of stories varies a lot tough, this one´s good. It reminds me of the "Malfunctioning Destroyer".

[@Vonbek32]

That fleet lost the my fav game, "Fuck around and find out"

[@Ryu_D]

Thank you for the video. Cautious to the extreme, without trust, but not without compassion. An excellent story.

[@Shadow.Dragon]

Great story! I'm looking forward to the sequel to find out who the alien race is that is going to get their "ass kicked" by Earth! Muhahahaha!!!

[@chrisdufresne9359]

We made a bloody Star Destroyer, didn't we?

[@Silthrim]

Ah yes some drone operator likely had a heart attack getting point blanked by massive gun. If losing massive death ship wasn’t going to put them on edge.

[@rickkeimig993]

I truly enjoy listening to the stories, get well soon.

[@MidnightSmoke]

Here is your like and comment as payment for the story and to help your channel grow and get you the recognition you deserve.

[@peterwalls-qf7ii]

Such rage! Yes i can understand it, We can understand it! We gave up Everything for vengeance. Even our chance to Embrace Our Father and rest. He doesn't call us any more. I fear we found our doom.

[@Iggi-mv2ux]

11:57 "Hello There!"

[@reginaldbull4922]

Good story, great aggro! Can't wait for second part.

[@robertalexander5892]

Same here.

[@techristopher8077]

Very well delivered on a very neat stry line.

[@kurtismiller9544]

Morning Agro, hope you're doing good.

[@pandablair4226]

Cool thanks for the story

[@elfeater1760]

For the Health of Agro!

[@Explorator_101]

Ah..yes the Automated dreadnought 🎉

[@nathandc]

For the Algorithm, for the Beard, and for the Narrator!!

[@codenamegnetne8209]

1:24 experimentation?

[@riverraven7359]

Wrecks fleet, drops spy, leaves cargo ship alone. Royal Navy is that you defaulting to convoy patrol? 😂 Was the freighter carrying caffeinated beverages and baked goods?

[@maxxammax0]

Hey Agro, goodluck with the medical thingemejiggy.

[@markotisovic8233]

for the Author, for the Bard and for the Almighty Algorithm

[@lazrustosadow5880]

12:00 omae wa mou shindeiru

[@Golden_Ace]

95.8 awesome up another hundred subscribers

[@SoManyDogs]

Raising of the thumb first for the Algorithm, followed by listening…as is the way.

[@zaphodthenth]

Fantastic tale! Where's part 2?

[@hanzzel6086]

It was finished mere hours before the premier of this video.

[@quinnhasse9170]

So future humans built a spiteful defensive war ship nice

[@barelyasurvivor1257]

For the Algorithm and the Agro Squirrel!

[@peterhall8572]

We really do know how to bear a grudge

[@wngimageanddesign9546]

Space-X AI legacy, protecting Sol System. Dreadnought USS Lost of Innocence.

[@allenmorgan1007]

For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Holographic Voice!

[@WildArmACF]

Ahh the USS BlackGuard on her rounds.

[@nigelsmith7366]

Cool bananas 👍👍👍

[@kevanfoster]

After listening to many stories, my dumb ass realized I forgot to subscribe... Problem now fixed.

[@mrdamiencom]

It's "continue-um"

[@slboson]

the black knight !!!!!

[@AlanMyronPrivate]

humanity is pissed

[@SmokeGrinder]

200 ships at seven seconds each for 1400 or 23 min and 20 secs.

[@klappstock943]

For the Algorithm the story and the voice

[@jeanannd]

Wanted to leave a thumbs up but it tells me that has been disabled for this video at this time.

[@DeepFleeceheart]

Contin-you-um

[@merlinathrawes746]

Hmmm... I wonder if that ship was from the Marvel universe and made from Vibranium and Adamantium or from the DC universe and made of Inertron? Star Trek's Neutronium or (I forget the story and author) collapsed matter? Regardless, you ain't scratching it!

[@Kirsten2933]

Like #3 🎉 😁

[@Modernnannenginemarineengine]

WHAT HAPPENED TO DUNGEON LIFE. we got up to 123 chapters.. I think. Please keep these sort of story’s running ok.

[@bugg3rthis]

The author got a commercial deal. There was an announcement a month or two ago

[@asandrewsilvaw]

For the algorithm

[@Jakes3130]

🤠🤠🤠🤠

[@RealArcalian]

Greetings, Mentlegent! For the Rhythm that is Algo Only the merchants will be spared. The rest of you are dead.

[@Tasarran]

con-TIN-you-um

[@VisiblyPinkUnicorn]

Agro: "The Eridani Consortium are a collective of corporate based species that focus on economic exploitation..." Me: "🎶O say can you see by the dawn's early light... 🎶"

[@silvadelshaladin]

The story was ruined by the ending. It seemed before that that it only met hostiles with hostility.

[@merlinwizard1000]

45th, 30 August 2023

[@TheJeikou]

Comment

[@JRMshadow260a]

Ouch!!

[@flaxtube322]

Many thanks Agro and valtiel2589.

[@Myrddraalfade]

[@bradley1128]

What is it? Violence or vengeance?

[@WildArmACF]

Its a warden and it loves its terrans

[@peterhall8572]

We really do know how to bear a grudge