Aliens Ignored the Warning: 'Human Warships Are a Deadly Force' | HFY Full Story

[@josh3595]

It's always Chen, Sara, Reyes, trepidation, mandible and the same ship names and alien group names

[@madmacstoo-w7w]

And all of the preparation achieved in 72 hours (less the time taken gasbagging at the UN)? Ridiculous.

[@ClaytonLovendale]

Good story, irritating with the repeat, also rather superfluous. Wasting time with this repeat. Just to take up time. Ridiculous.

[@AbandonTheWest]

The movie "Contact" came to mind right off the bat.

[@Gnomleif]

Overall I liked this, but there were a few things that I think can be improved. - There's a repeated segment early in the story. This comes across as poor quality control. - The Mars colony preparations is dropped in there and then never mentioned again. Setups without payoffs are frustrating and lower the quality of the story. - Building entire ships over the span of three days, with the only explanation the story offers being "because humans smart and determined" feels disruptive and immersion breaking. It make it seem humans are so determined they pulled completely new technologies out of their behinds. A longer timeframe or a bit more foreshadowing than "we have made advancements in antimatter weapons and shields" would have made this much better.

[@jamespseaman4136]

You can tell that the AI doesn’t know English! Rondavis for rendezvous!

[@richardward9111]

I have to agree with the other statements made. Its a good story but the presentation needs some improvement. Repeated segments and oral presentation are two areas that need improvement

[@paullindsey9409]

I guess someone decided to fix the Aricebo dish, because it's in ruins now.

[@DrJRaven]

Chen again? I’m gone

[@pauls7956]

I'm beginning to think this Chinese AI.

[@Tenright77]

AI loops @16:00... The "Galactic Alamo" prerogative lives...

[@Ljoco913]

I see there’s no capable man left in the future

[@rodneygaul2227]

Humanity unifying ? With over 400 languages ,? This story makes Star Trek or Star Wars modern stories seem sane pure Fantasy with a "mary-sue" as the leader

[@GerberLP]

Just like a conveyor belt of AI stories with no quality control. I think I ll stick to paperback. So sad😂

[@nanaray5264]

It loosy program to repeat large blocks of critical test!

[@ahmedsk24]

WTF Is with the last name with Chen and petal And Evans change damn last names already

[@joshualasseff7530]

Ilon musk jr. 🤣

[@SolTerran5050]

Yet Another dam Chen

[@williamkennison8920]

This would be a good story. Unfortunately, the AI reader needs way better annunciation and pronunciation. I'll overlook the repetition of the story which seems to be a universal problem. Debris is pronounced debree , teach your robot hooked on phonics.

[@branhar]

Elon Musk Jr., lol!

[@Ljoco913]

And who tf is Chen?

[@0utrider]

Yeah, this computer voice really puts me to sleep, does not matter what story it is, they all the sound the same with this voice. Think I will stick with those who still use humans to tell the story, just can't fake real emotion.

[@adrianmitchell9819]

A good story line. 4 of 5.

[@zarb88]

. chen chen chen im out

[@matthewweeks1018]

Dude, why is the captain all ways named chen. What a joke, use a different damn name.

[@FeralPreacher]

The repetition serves no purpose other than making the story longer without added information. The petty arguments in the UN is typical of humanity, and not unexpected. It took weeks to get to the meeting but only days to return? Story lacks continuity. Good premise, but poorly written.

[@jamespseaman4136]

Quit it with this nonsense of double paragraphs!

[@davec5153]

I thought we were funked when he said "diversity is our strength" when in human history has diversity ever been a strength? Divercity of thought yes but DEI hires won't help much. Just as well we had a woman in charge of our tactics😅😅😅

[@GaryjeanAlexander]

Worst part of the story you had to put Elon Musk in the story I'm not sure which dictator is worse the aliens or musk in the future?

[@omoore4304]

PLEASE STOP with the “Chen” characters!