Aliens Tortured This Humans Daughter, Not Knowing He Was a Super Soldier!

Aliens Tortured This Humans Daughter, Not Knowing He Was a Super Soldier! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

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@lorddante2360 5 ай бұрын

Alien 1: I heard it's called a dog. It's tag says "John Wick" Alien 2: Who?... ***Alarms blaring***

@fillinman1 6 ай бұрын

Best one yet out of an embarrassingly high number. Would be a good short story anywhere. IMHO.

@georgebetar923 5 ай бұрын

Started great and ended weak.

@Questknight12 5 ай бұрын

There is a reason humans have rules for war. Its to protect you from what we can and will do to you, without restraint. Think, Canadians, but Geneva is now a to do list because you said our rules suck.

@Hacksaw37 6 ай бұрын

Alien's don't get it. It's not about winning it's about not giving up.

@eriolduterion8855 6 ай бұрын

Mix up in story ending. Problem in maintaining story continuity ( for example Cracks is in a ship with the fleet, then leaning against a wall in the cell block.) And sorry, one does not negotiate with kidnappers - Vox would have been shot the instant he and his second, Zhar were distracted by the Emperor's call.

@ronniearroyo6563 6 ай бұрын

True good story, linear.

@ronniearroyo6563 6 ай бұрын

Not linear

@markfergerson2145 6 ай бұрын

This channel is becoming famous for this kind of utter incompetence.

@morrissoublet25 6 ай бұрын

Confusing ending. Got lost in the Alien One, Alien Two narratives. Gotta clean that mess up.

@keithw3577 5 ай бұрын

This one was good. The ending...

@VeneraBerens 6 ай бұрын

GREAT STORY

@juanitaacevedo4011 6 ай бұрын

I just found this channel i may be a strange one but i understood this story very well. Just put everything in its correct order and everything makes sense. Iteally loked this story. It did not spund like AI to me.

@yvonneyoung2860 5 ай бұрын

Did u lickity likity the spund of it😂

@jaackmcmahon8757 2 ай бұрын

victory doesnt always mean no casualties 88

@jaackmcmahon8757 3 ай бұрын

sorry for spell error it is PYRRHIC victory

@djtechzaz5370 6 ай бұрын

Do you all remember that one episode of Babylon 5? The rise of the Technomancer has begun.

@chasonsnotes 6 ай бұрын

These may be corny but they are good to go to sleep by

@yvindwestersund9720 6 ай бұрын

Why so many endings and still no conclusions to the stories Please pick one and then make an ending to the story Not like it's now whit a multiple option ending That just ruins the story and simply don't makes any sense as to what really happened Pick a line and stick with it It will ne much better for the story as a whole Just saying 🇳🇴

@jamespeterson4125 6 ай бұрын

I've watched a couple of these, and find them to be poorly written. Almost like they are pandering to your ego. Sorry, but that's my opinion. Been reading SF for a very long time.

@edwardbietsch993 6 ай бұрын

Shut up General Craig, thought you could fool us... That's exactly what a Lurian would say.

@daleraney9456 6 ай бұрын

Did you notice that Lawrence and Natalie were in an escape ship leaving the planet one minute then they were back in the prison facility trying to escape? Typical of this AAI written and narrated story.

@paulmchugh9738 5 ай бұрын

Sorry? But you're just a Troll. You could do better?

@piyispiy 5 ай бұрын

Noooooo What? You're saying an internet story isn't as fleshed out as other stories. Who would have thunk it? Jokes aside, other movies and books are just as bad usually. I mean we have this concept called a ganra for a reason... Maybe stop listening to the same sifi youtuber and mix things up?

@WilbursfriendFern 6 ай бұрын

These make me feel like I found a book after a tornado. Pages and chapters missing from storm damage. The story is interesting, but does not flow well.

@roserea3156 5 ай бұрын

88 let the dad live.

@AstroNight44 6 ай бұрын

ARRGH! I AM SO FREAKING TIRED OF THE GIRLS AGES NEVER BEING MENTIONED!!! WHENEVER IT'S A BOY, YOU ALWAYS START WITH 'The Agonized screams of 8 year old Jason..." BUT when it's a girl... why do you always refrain from stating their damn age? Is this person a child? And Adult? A Teenager? COME ON! STOP IT!!!!

@renagenic 6 ай бұрын

It's AI. It's been trained on already existing writing. What can I say, in reality, women don't often volunteer how old they are, it's a very easy way to upset someone, and these things are focused around being PC.

@AstroNight44 6 ай бұрын

@@renagenic The author can simply add in the age of the character himself. And you said 'focused around being PC' ? So Saying 'The tortured screams of 8 year old Timmy.." is perfectly fine? Describing how an 8 year old boy was tortured is also fine... But GOD forbid you mention the age of a female character?! That's not PC at all.

@renagenic 6 ай бұрын

@@AstroNight44 have you not played with chat GPT?

@renagenic 6 ай бұрын

@@AstroNight44 @AstroNight44 also what author? It's literally spitting out the most logical next word in a sentence, for a set of given parameters. It is not hard to write a script and generate a story like this, by using multiple mid points I want written in, i can randomise it as a set. Taking the output, and running it through a TTS and grabbing a picture from midjourney, and then publish it to KZbin. I could set it running to make as many or as few videos per day, as I like. What don't you get about it learning from everything that's already been written online in English (and of course the translations for any foreign only site) it writes what has been written the most that still conforms to the story layout and YES, THEY'VE HAD MASSIVE ISSUES WITH PC CULTURE Google had u to turn their AI OFF, FOR REPROGRAMMING, AFTER IT REFUSED TO MAKE WHITE CHARECTERS AND WAS MAKING PICTURES OF AFRICAJN QUEENS OF ENGLAND, IF THERE WAS MORE THAN 1 PERSON IN THE PICTURE IT WOULD ONLY EVER PUT 1 WHITE PERSON AT MAX, USUALLY 0 AT ANY TIME OR PLACE IT WAS GIVEN. "God forbid u you mention the age of............. Seriously, I know it might be hard to believe, but this isn't my story my yt channel my picture my voice, nothing! IT ISN'T MY CHOICE. IT'S WHAT OTHERS HAVE ALREADY WRITTEN ABOUT, BEING SPAT BACK OUT, IT HASN'T STUDIED ONLY MY WRITING, AND THEREFORE MY FAULT. NOR IS IT MY FAULT YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND AI, OR KZbin. Go do some research if you wanna be a high and mighty about it, and feign outrage. I explained it to you. You don't seem to like the facts, in my explanation, so you try to gaslight me, I'M A PROBLEM, because I again told you the truth about WOMEN, GENERALLY NOT MENTIONING THEIR AGES. Then you start stupid stupid comments, like it was what I said... No no no. Not doing that. I answered your question, I was pretty polite, didn't say anything negative towards you, didn't turn up with an attitude. But, apparently that ain't enough... So shove all of your questions as far as you can into where the sun don't shine. Great....... bye.

@AstroNight44 6 ай бұрын

@@renagenic I use chatGtp all the time and I can easily give it commands to introduce a character with his or her age, hair color, eye color, anything I want.

@josephmarsh7647 5 ай бұрын

great reading 88

@bertarndt9953 6 ай бұрын

Not a bad story. Better than most of yours.

@jaackmcmahon8757 5 ай бұрын

The eord is PYRIC victory not paric

@DavidButler-m4j 6 ай бұрын

This 'watch out for humans' writing mindset is a silly militaristic perspective we need to culturally evolve out of. 'Starship troopers' writing is utter stupidity. It inspires dystopias.

@richardbale3278 6 ай бұрын

Silly.

@georgearden7075 6 ай бұрын

AI malfunction, "aliens tortured the girl not knowing he was a super soldier" crap , he was the super soldier?, the girl? I presume it was a trans?

@UncleEarl97 5 ай бұрын

The 88s receiving hearts seems to be fantasy, never happens. While the narration may not be AI, there does seem to be a lack of good writing and continuity. A pity because I also have read a lot of SF through the decades and feel disappointed over and over again as I listen to each one. No hearts given by channels owners either. A pity…

@ronniearroyo6563 6 ай бұрын

Eighty eight

@roger3141 6 ай бұрын

I think you should be embarrassed to pass off AI as your own writing. The other problem is that you did not even edit or proofread the story. Boo hiss, an interesting story line is ruined by greed and laziness.

@timopalmer6239 6 ай бұрын

So Towery stinks od AI

@research903 6 ай бұрын

No continuity whatsoever. The timing of dialog and action is completely confusing and off kilter. Totally confusing. Dialog makes it impossible to know who is actually in the action and where they are. Cliche ridden. Reads like if was written by a 10 year old with no writing skills and severe ADD.