ANALYZING MY COMMON APP ESSAY THAT GOT ME INTO STANFORD, USC, NYU, & MORE!

Welcome back to my channel! In this vid, I BREAK DOWN and ANALYZE every paragraph of my Common App essay to show you guys what techniques and strategies I used while crafting my essay. I explain the structure of my essay and how I use certain phrasing to tie the story together. Let me know if there are any other videos you'd like to see from me!
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[@DyllenNellis]

✅ Learn how to craft a phenomenal college essay in 3 steps with my FREE MASTERCLASS!

[@crystalunegbu8944]

Omg, I wasn't going to watch this at first because usually other KZbinrs didn't really explain their techniques, they would just read their essay. But, WOW, you really took the time to actually ANALYZE and explain the strategies you used! Thank you so much, this was really informing!!!

[@jessicasong1707]

This is actually so helpful!!! Ahhh you deserve more views

[@kevinmei787]

would you ever consider doing one free essay review for students who are FGLI? Maybe like a giveaway or something because I know your time is important

[@annaforo4093]

This is very helpful, thank you so much.

[@cyand]

This is sooo in depth and well-done!! Your essay is so expressive and emotional.

[@jichanglin654]

I’ve been looking for something like this for so long. Thank you so much!

[@kamrynscott4094]

you are SO helpful Dyllen! Thank you for helping me through my college app szn :)

[@joelnganga7656]

Love your video. The video was so amazing

[@tuenguyen9493]

This is so helpful thank you so much you’re amazing. I was having a hard time doing the application. All the stress and procrastination but I feel so much better now. Thank you so much for providing these tips !

[@isaacrios8140]

This video is underrated! It deserves more views considering how well written this essay is! I love this!

[@armitahosseini8683]

This video was extremely helpful and so well-written!

[@mervynwinn1852]

you are a wealth of knowledge and your essay was actually inspiring!!!

[@AlleEsor28]

I have never heard anybody tackle this particular common app prompt, so it's really cool to see how you did it!

[@saumyatomar1372]

I just found your channel and I'm in love with your content ahh

[@winnifredadukwei951]

You’re amazing 🎉

[@jessicasong1707]

thank you for this video!! it's really informing and it definitely is helping me to write my essay in a meaningful way

[@walidsmali1847]

this is a really wow wow wow essay <3

[@35mmonica]

super rad video. great objective analysis on your own writing.

[@tate2252]

BRUHHHHH thank you so much for this