TPOT Rewritten: Ep.1 Preview

[@APOYOSC]

Note: When you do hear the original episode voices, it's a temporary thing, they're not gonna be in the final version of the video. Oh and also, I will do something with Nonexisty don't worry. docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSca2q22QkIXLfYdizOA8pN0bzsWmtqZ6SfwZNocEY9kwUyhNQ/viewform Now go and do this poll!!

[@LeynertheGamer]

Omg! I think I could imagine what team he’ll be joining

[@solidfire2923]

Will Nonexisty Become Twos brand new Cohost???

[@doritodragon9218]

Done

[@ake_kvarta]

Maybe you could add ai voices of characters

[@catte118]

Maybe you should do the Uber duck voices

[@____David]

I seriously feel really bad for Noexsisty, at least he gets to join Teardrop's team later on...

[@mr_tree5291]

JUSTICE FOR NONEXISTY

[@MajikButton]

i hate price tag, they have no respect for nonexisty

[@staceydougherty7865]

#justicefornonexisty

[@treywhite-gc3lx]

​​@@MajikButton Not only Price tag replaced nonexisty, but they STOLE NAILY'S PERSONALITY!!

[@OldiesJan19th]

Justice!!!!!!!

[@brunolike8631]

Finally some Nonexisty justice! I saw a video showing if they had eyes and mouth, and I find it hilarious.

[@Magma618]

I like it. But you have to keep in mind that these characters, have to act like normal sentient people, coming up with what they’re saying as they go. Like I don’t think anyone says, “Well, in any case,” anymore, they’d say something like, “Well, anyways.” The characters have to sound like they’re translating their thoughts into words as they go, this just sounds like they’re reading over their essay for Language Arts. Besides that, I really like the concept of rewriting TPOT and am excited for the final result, keep up the good work!

[@Magma618]

A good example of this is Fanny’s speech (0:14 - 0:27). There ain’t no way Fanny just thought of that on the spot, she would have had to practice. Again, this is not poorly written and I absolutely love the concept of giving Nonexistenty a purpose. It’s actually written TOO well, the complex language removes the effect of Fanny being a person and; again, just feels like an essay.

[@APOYOSC]

This is a bad move on my behalf, since I tend to use sentences like in any case normally Ill try to use those sentences less

[@treywhite-gc3lx]

0:41 - 0:47 EXACTLY!!! This is why Fanny is one of my favorite characters!

[@SacriStuff]

i personally feel like this adds a lot of unnecessary dialog since it eventually leads into the same outcome anyways.

[@APOYOSC]

That’s understandable, but this conversation would later be brought on later in TPOT 2, when teardrop joins TPOT, so this isn’t a scene just because, it’s moreso to foreshadow the idea I have for my TPOT 2’s rewritten Also hi sacri!!!

[@idiot_of_the_planet7550]

Damn, this seems pretty interesting! Cant wait to see what you’ll do with the rest of the episode!

[@Reeceepieecee666]

They should hire you for storyboard

[@APOYOSC]

Ngl I would love to be able to actually help with the writing, I have so many ideas for TPOT LOL

[@Enven37]

​@@APOYOSC it would be a good idea, this is looking really good

[@tuttoqui1379]

@@APOYOSC bro, same, but, we both know we cant do that

[@Helentar]

Hell yeah nonexisty gets justice

[@SpongyRules]

This is awesome already. If you wrote Tpot I would watch it so much.

[@GavinArtster]

Im exited for this!

[@jannahjalidar420]

When is this happening

[@averagebfdienjoyer7125]

Looks promising!

[@LucasTubeMapperGuy]

That's the same idea i got i'm also making an object show that is BFB but it is just gonna be in a london underground tube it's called Going Underground to the Grounded

[@WillithePhysticle531WP]

I don’t know; this feels rather dragged on.

[@LaHojaTonta2763]

THIS WILL BE AMAZING!!!! It Will Be BETTER Than The Original!

[@MBdynamoBostik]

Can you give TB more scenes?

[@princessemmy]

I really like this format!

[@HiDuduuu]

I really like the idea

[@Mickey19286]

Please resume series

[@LeynertheGamer]

Omg it’s very cool so far! (This is totally my first time seeing it teehee!) Can’t wait to see the full video! Also will Balloony be included in the final thing lol

[@APOYOSC]

Yes balloony will be included

[@beandaily4074]

It would be cool for some scenes (like ones involving Ballony) being drawn in like ms paint or something lol

[@CheesePizz-zj2pr]

*Balunne

[@beandaily4074]

@@CheesePizz-zj2pr Balloony

[@yinyangyt8749]

Liking this so far

[@milomongoose9976]

FANNY IS AWSOME

[@animayt404]

this looks so epic

[@Fixwellmusic]

Price tag should just be replaced with nonexisty

[@jellystone07]

I like this

[@sammcmc9888]

If I knew my vote wouldn't count I would have voted for someone else.

[@PenTheAwesome]

Ep 2 should be Team 8's going to elimination and the Team Teardrop not existing

[@GamedOSC]

Before my birthday

[@sandybrown728]

❤❤❤❤❤

[@norifromreallife-di7hi]

THIS IS SO TRUE-

[@proto_117]

Thank you fanny

[@joaquinm9148]

Blud are you actually defending Nonexisty Alright then, IRYO

[@e_person882]

i voted on the google quiz thing

[@doritodragon9218]

Evil Leafy shouldve made the debut too

[@VeryAverageVideos]

Idk if you’re gonna see this but can you tell me what website you used for the random TTS voice please

[@APOYOSC]

freetts.com/

[@VeryAverageVideos]

Thanks :)

[@CheesePizz-zj2pr]

To be honest, Non-Existy is very overrated and my least favorite character in the whole show because he does absolutely nothing and the only argument people give is that "oH He hAs sO MuCh PeRsOnALItY AnD I LoVe HiM So MuCh." No. He literally does not exist. The idea sounds good on paper but he just boring. He has less then 30 seconds of "screentime," if you can even call it that. He just sucks Despite this, I do believe that Non-Existy should have been in TPOT, just because it could have created even more opportunities for characters to develop.

[@gotsbots2739]

Preventing ppl to say "Second"

[@HooverDam1935]

Nonexisty justice !!!!!

[@Kapuccinow]

I thougth liy would join, damn

[@justablimdumbraforfun]

Battle for non-existy

[@gabplayz8726]

W

[@Cardboard0916]

Nonexistenty should be a real contestant, i voted for him and they said that the top 2 vote getters would get in, but they lied! They could of just given him a shadow or smth…

[@carlosmattessich3883]

Nah bro is defending Nonexisty 💀 It’s alright, IRYO, I think he’s terrible

[@tatianedantas6430]

Just saying that you use an AI cover of the characters just saying. Otherwise two will sound like roboty with a voice and Fanny uhmmm... way to female,WAIT HOLD ON DON'T CANCEL ME DON'T DO IIIIIIIIIIIIT

[@theorangegoomba5378]

I voted winner so uhhh

[@ApolJuic]

#justiceforNonexisty

[@staceydougherty7865]

#justicefornonexisty

[@ApolJuic]

Lol just noticed I tagged the same thing and just saw this comment seconds later, whoops

[@MABSoffical]

I hate non existy

[@alexpgreatyoutubevideo8018]

Justice for Nonexisty is the stupidness thing I ever seem

[@CheesePizz-zj2pr]

I'm probably gonna get hated for this, but WHY THE FLIP IS NON-EXISTY SO LIKED?! H LITERALLY DOES NOT EXIST!! HE DID NOTHING AND HAS LIKE 30 SECONDS OF SCREENTIME IN TOTAL.

[@joaquinm9148]

Blud are you actually defending Nonexisty Alright then, IRYO