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@chazthelad1407 Жыл бұрын
I wrote a story about a hippopotamus fighting a rhino in a spaceship and a random man and a mouse had to stop them. Got 36/40. Not even joking.
@2tee197 Жыл бұрын
that sounds tapped🤣🤣
@Abdul-wahaabKhalil Жыл бұрын
man just wrote random stuff and got 36/40
@gamerozstudios9196 Жыл бұрын
If it works it works 😂
@wetpeps9651 Жыл бұрын
wtf lmfao
@ieajackson5518 Жыл бұрын
Beautiful.
@43dl3ntil Жыл бұрын
AQA examiners on their way to award grade 9's to stories the personally relate to:
@GrindAcademy-126 ай бұрын
Violated 😂
@detectivethinker36376 ай бұрын
That's the thing about humanities subject.
@MaryamKamaly086 ай бұрын
If i get high marks for getting them to relate to me, i should write a story about someone profiting off students’ suffering
@takemetothelakes135 ай бұрын
@@detectivethinker3637they are most definitely relating to harold godwinson getting shot in the eye 😅
@GX_Ethernal4 ай бұрын
Drive by 😂
@thanos73729 ай бұрын
A guy I know wrote about himself sitting in the exam hall and basically talked shit about all the Qs on the paper. He got a 9.
@darrendavies57046 ай бұрын
Based madlad
@user-se6kk2wi6x5 ай бұрын
I'll do that next time
@issap-pope56093 ай бұрын
Our teacher told us bout that too😂
@yaraidk3 ай бұрын
Lmao the examiner must have been like “I feel you man”
@idfkimaclown2 ай бұрын
Bro I just did that shit in my Lang C1 paper lmao
@maxdaniels4897 Жыл бұрын
Bro wrote about his life😭
@dynamic7351 Жыл бұрын
🤣🤣🤣
@baburlu Жыл бұрын
naaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
@ResellHustlers Жыл бұрын
lol sure did
@msmjsiajdgdhsjajahgshsjaje8990 Жыл бұрын
😭😭😭😭
@oujikei Жыл бұрын
VIOLATION LMAOO
@mizginalgul13108 ай бұрын
I wrote about how festivals should be banned because kids get trampled and kidnapped and got 34/40😭
@wardz214 ай бұрын
im dead 😭😂 ur not wrong tho 😭
@That_One_Guy6113 ай бұрын
I though I could write the entire plot of a Christmas Carol is 30 mins. I was delusional
@MrEverythingEnglish3 ай бұрын
😂
@17snowflakes Жыл бұрын
I was one of the COVID year students, and I write a story about a woman with her daughter sitting at the airport feeling extremely anxious and then seeing her husband and running to hug him. Got a solid 8 on that 👏 Our teacher also had a go at us after since we were supposed to write a story about "loneliness" but everyone just made theirs extremely personal and he got really uncomfortable reading them 💀
@austinhayles3049 Жыл бұрын
😂😂. I was in the Covid year aswell. I think we all did so badly on the question the first time that they actually made us rewrite a completely new one 😂😂😂
@ulomaa3 ай бұрын
You guys have to read it out?
@qpixelthree80 Жыл бұрын
A girl took off her shoes in my English lang exam and her feet smelt so bad, I wrote about that and got a grade A (did my GCSEs just before number grades started 👵🏼)
@spongsquad Жыл бұрын
oh hell naw
@Russian622 Жыл бұрын
LOL
@WSH3TM Жыл бұрын
this comment made me laugh so hard
@cha0spretzel-534 Жыл бұрын
bro just flamed the shit out of a girl for her creative writing and got an A for it💀
@greeniscoollol Жыл бұрын
It's easier to write about rhings you've experienced, I guess 😂😂
@jasonowusu5091 Жыл бұрын
Miss this guy made me pass my English👌🏾
@TrashyPeachy_ Жыл бұрын
Me too 😎
@Skizz-iy7ou Жыл бұрын
Same I was class of ‘22
@opsblock10266 ай бұрын
Factssss🎉
@umarishtiaq50613 ай бұрын
Brother been through it to write that 💀💀💀
@fw_aman7601 Жыл бұрын
aqa just found the story to be relative to their own experiences
@kamijo0o0o4 ай бұрын
fr my teacher said when writing your story you should remember these markers are getting paid minimum wage marking hundreds of papers and you need to write something relatable
@cardbored13 ай бұрын
i wrote about some guy getting kidnapped by the devil because he didn’t pay his bbc license
@tabi1222 ай бұрын
Can relate, if I go to hell that's why
@rubyemmott35632 ай бұрын
LMFAOOO
@mohanakulam79302 ай бұрын
his what license 💀
@tabi1222 ай бұрын
@@mohanakulam7930 lol £159 a year and no one really verifies you have one so it's probably one of the easiest crimes to commit
@eggonator3046Ай бұрын
@@mohanakulam7930 tv license
@ThePostBrazilianTheatre Жыл бұрын
I wrote a story about a bureaucrat finding a severed ear on a park bench, then spiralling down a rabbit hole due to the absurdity of the situation. Grade 9, then I did one about the weather factory, where businessmen pour acid rain on protesters; Grade 7, then I did one about a child describing a room to his blind father, grade 5: go for absurd
@jibzzzzzzzzzio4 ай бұрын
i wrote a story about smashing a vase. I got a Grade 9 in my exams. Write whatever you want.
@atlantic853 ай бұрын
i wonder what my planned steampunk gay romance about orcs will get
@isaacball2687 Жыл бұрын
As I said to my friend, he doesn't need to rewrite war and peace, just describe a moth buzzing around a room in insane detail and you will get far more marks
@cvpete Жыл бұрын
No it doesn't. It proves that good short stories turn on internal/character based conflict and resolution. But 100% agree that over ambitious plotting is a real downfall for students at GCSE.
@danielstuart64556 ай бұрын
No the English Language exam only cares about the English Language used in the exam. He's right.
@JosieBean.6 ай бұрын
I got grade 5 in English language had to get it remarked and a 6 in literature thanks to him in 2022.
@Dayvidalerxarndar6 ай бұрын
Fax
@Blakeisco0l3 ай бұрын
I wrote a story about a Spider-Man OC returning to the place his canon event took place in my mocks. All he did was look around the room, pick up the spider and then decide to fight the government for revenge. I got 38/40 for plagiarising off of ASTV and basically writing fanfiction 😭
@dangerbuffrocky3 ай бұрын
What.
@riyadhzenith8533 ай бұрын
What is OC ?
@dangerbuffrocky3 ай бұрын
@@riyadhzenith853 original character
@senjitsu2 ай бұрын
WHAAAAAAAAYT
@anonymous8737 Жыл бұрын
I wrote the plot of the TV show Vikings in my mock and my exam for GCSE English Language. Got 38/40 in the mock IIRC, it got me a 6 in the real exam 😅
@XhhdshvXhdbbdbd7 ай бұрын
😂
@qasimkhan343 ай бұрын
no way what did u write about
@omarmohammd5276 Жыл бұрын
i wrote about a priest 😂😂
@itsjennifertho63511 ай бұрын
how much did you score?
@omarmohammd52766 ай бұрын
@@itsjennifertho635 pretty bad tbh. i thought i did so well
@user-cc6lt9lp2o6 ай бұрын
What grade did you get?@@omarmohammd5276
@starrybugs Жыл бұрын
The grade shows the student’s competency in writing characters. You don’t always have time to develop a proper plot, so it’s better to develop and character and their internal conflict than to write a bunch of hemmed-in undeveloped nonsense.
@afkclash10 ай бұрын
i write "the river moaned in satisfaction it was getting fed"
@curiousarthoarder Жыл бұрын
Lol Harry Potter killed me 😂😂😂😂😂y😂
@Zacksiev Жыл бұрын
How? Avarda kedarvra?
@gamingwithcyt39253 ай бұрын
I got a 5 in english language, got it remarked and it went up to a 7
@th3radlad_7275 ай бұрын
Wrote about fnaf 3 got like 28/40 😂
@greeniscoollol Жыл бұрын
It's not about the story it's about how well it is written. Personally, just choose the simplest story: intro, climax, and end with the relaxation of the climactic point. Easier yet, don't do a story and just do description. :)
@I-like-dream-smp Жыл бұрын
TELL ME ABOUT IT, MY LANGUAGE PAPAER TWO WAS ABOUT TRAINS
@dankboi420695 ай бұрын
did that one as a mock exam and got grade 3
@OfficialTMBS5 ай бұрын
@@dankboi42069I did that for mock as well, got grade 4, I thought I did so well but I was confused in question 2 and I ran out of time.
@zacrongaming29085 ай бұрын
@@dankboi42069 same bro although i got a 2...
@iforgor4215 ай бұрын
@@dankboi42069 same bro i was 2 marks off a grade 4😭
@urmoonfaiiry3 ай бұрын
Did that for a mock, it didn’t even get a grade 1
@yashat11648 ай бұрын
bro had us in the first half ngl
@thehotd0g8 Жыл бұрын
Yeah i mean it sounds like a basic, quaint story, probably more descriptive then narrative.
@lolasimpson-tg3ig Жыл бұрын
they are attempting to destroy all creativity
@lolasimpson-tg3ig Жыл бұрын
chatGPT could already outdo anyone with a vivid description. A captivating plot always requires more original thought - thus why they try and restrain it so much.
@articticcblu5 ай бұрын
plot takes a long time to create, its not created in one spot whereas just describing the scene and creating the characters is much more easier. It does not need common sense !@@lolasimpson-tg3ig
@wippok423 ай бұрын
@@lolasimpson-tg3igcopium
@Ashton_-si8fj Жыл бұрын
wait a second that’s what i wrote about for mine
@aminah9141 Жыл бұрын
so was it ur story then that he's talking about?
@lucidvibes8133 Жыл бұрын
@@aminah9141 LMAOOOOO
@Abdul-wahaabKhalil Жыл бұрын
@@lucidvibes8133 cap
@-_Blitz_-4 ай бұрын
Basically the Examiners skipped the opening cutscene
@ArtistryinMotion710 ай бұрын
bruh how is that story getting 40/40
@Liverpoolarcool8 ай бұрын
Because it’s not about the plot
@mattaston7153 ай бұрын
I wrote about a modern cruise ship getting attacked by the ghost of the bismark and got 35/40 😂
@senjitsu2 ай бұрын
LOL
@OnyxKaylem Жыл бұрын
Me spending most of my time writing a story with good plot because it's just more fun :/
@zacrongaming29085 ай бұрын
I wonder if i just wrote about skibidy toilet in INSANE detail i could get a 9
@linksbetweenl52204 ай бұрын
Drop that skin care routine king
@senjitsu2 ай бұрын
LOL
@lucy93643 ай бұрын
Sylvia Plath had a novel like that to be fair
@brood__4 ай бұрын
we resonating with this one 🗣🗣🗣🗣🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@_Uchiha_Shisui Жыл бұрын
Bro I wrote about some anime cut scene from Naruto, 😅In my mocks, in my mocks, Amma try it in ma GCSE too 😅
@saifshyha6458 Жыл бұрын
What did you get in your mocks?
@okok4981 Жыл бұрын
aha I also wrote about a scene from One Piece! What scene did you write?
@_Uchiha_Shisui Жыл бұрын
Btw for those of you who are asking I got 37 out of 40 in the transactional writing
@_Uchiha_Shisui Жыл бұрын
@@okok4981 great shinobi war
@heavenlyisay2122 Жыл бұрын
madara going on about the intricacy's of life would be as sick for dialogue
@itsessa9 ай бұрын
wrote it. got a 1/40
@nuzzleloveАй бұрын
my heart genuinely goes out to you
@worstcasescenario489829 күн бұрын
I wrote about a mammoth whose biological brother was a man but the mammoth was inside a cage in a zoo.
@cBlessRL3 ай бұрын
so true man thank you
@ulquiorrra.6 ай бұрын
i wrote about an exorcism and got 39/40. shoukdve just given me the extra mark.
@wardz214 ай бұрын
fr 😭
@senjitsu2 ай бұрын
WOW
@mrduck46237 ай бұрын
Yeah but I love creative writing so much that I forget to include language 😂 still got a 7 so I don’t really care too much
@Skizz-iy7ou Жыл бұрын
I havnt seen this guy since last year for my GCSEs
@tayyabhussain7261 Жыл бұрын
i wanna see the essey how do i find it
@leaves.-. Жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/m2amiYd7qJt3rrs there it is
@OBI6 Жыл бұрын
My friend wrote abt terrorism and got 36/40. No one even noticed or told him of.
@Novusa Жыл бұрын
I got my mock week tommorow, 2 french exams I’m the morning and 1 English paper at 1pm
@exoticare32263 ай бұрын
I wrote about a half alien-human hybrid adventuring through an abandoned artificial planet flying through space to find a mysterious piece of technology that could generate infinite energy with no cost. The character got killed, and it cuts to the guys on their radio losing it because they keep on dying, but never got close to the source. 34/40
@arseniivoloshyn68603 ай бұрын
Really nice title man !
@lelimone99782 ай бұрын
I wrote about a chihuahua getting eaten by a dragon in a tree. It made zero sense but i still got 38/40
@eliseml9241 Жыл бұрын
i wrote about a bird abandoning me at the zoo
@VeryWeirdHumanVWH8 ай бұрын
Summary of the event: Write about your life
@Xx_Goldax_XxGoldax3 ай бұрын
Where can we find the story
@greatplatypus82262 ай бұрын
I wrote a story about a 14 year old that might have schizophrenia and extreme amnesia, or something supernatural happened. Open to interpretation. I got 32/40
@Mei0naise4 ай бұрын
I once wrote about a talking fish whos from yorkshire
@-gbx-3 ай бұрын
I got 99 but acc studied and prepared some plots lol
@Smash_17052 ай бұрын
Why am I watching this after finishing English 😭
@NoName-hu2df Жыл бұрын
Where can I find it I’m interested now
@leaves.-. Жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/m2amiYd7qJt3rrs the first 5 minutes, cant find the actual source tho
@Grace.22.3 ай бұрын
They really love short plots
@Riaaaa193 ай бұрын
Is it advised to write your own story or write about the image they give you?
@Lopholillie5 ай бұрын
I AIJT putting no effort into my GCSE story now wtf 😭
@hamzatastekin5731 Жыл бұрын
Is this the case for educas?
@kta6120 Жыл бұрын
Why tf schools choose the unknown examboards to do
@ventaliq10 ай бұрын
@@kta6120exactly what is that
@hamzatastekin57317 ай бұрын
@lucid6392i have already finished my gcse’s bro but thank you😂
@aaaggg7311 Жыл бұрын
Sounds like Waiting For Godot
@shieldo_9 ай бұрын
Bro i had to do this question for my PPE 😂
@yewyfn3 ай бұрын
I wrote about a guy drowning in a muddy puddle and got 34/40
@husaamasam58277 ай бұрын
Well i got 30/40 talking about how cold weather affects someone
@riley2476 Жыл бұрын
i wrote a story about a house floating in space and it flies into orbit and kills the guy inside i got 40/40 what the
@xxsid1979xx Жыл бұрын
Someone really should rewrite Harry Potter tho because JK is no longer fit for purpose.
@user-fu8bf1go4z Жыл бұрын
she is
@silentaimer Жыл бұрын
@@XDawggg being a vince cuh enjoyer means ur lgbtqphobic xdddd just like me
@Buggy_DClown Жыл бұрын
What’s the problem with her
@fortnite-kq7ok Жыл бұрын
@@Buggy_DClown well you see feminism is great until you challenge the pedos, then you're hated by everyone
@securitybreach5182 Жыл бұрын
@@Buggy_DClown Apparently it's because she's Transphobic?
@carlmcsandwich95542 ай бұрын
Modern waiting for Godot
@TheAbbedSeagull Жыл бұрын
Wait people try to rewrite Harry potter isn't that just being unoriginal
@abiazkiron79 ай бұрын
I wrote about soldiers saving bunch of hostages from ter*orists, but ended up saving the ter*orist at the end.
@anonymoush46713 ай бұрын
In 2023 I wrote about a depressed girl who meets a cat got a grade 9 😁
@goodheavens15 ай бұрын
The mark you get for transactional and creative writing is basically just luck. You have to write a decent story but it could either get 28 or 40 marks based on who marks it
@wardz214 ай бұрын
where can i find the story
@philswift6135 Жыл бұрын
I wrote about Harambe
@geeti450 Жыл бұрын
I wrote about my first encounter with honey bee and got 40 i thought id fail i just did that because i was hopeless and got full😂
@dylan-kv5xu Жыл бұрын
the question yesterday for you mustve been a godsend
@NicoDiAngelo-023 ай бұрын
Tried to write a story about a guy who stabbed another guy in a knife fight. Somehow turned into a gay romance 37/40
@coolwarfare2 ай бұрын
I wrote a fever dream
@adlerz5433 Жыл бұрын
Bro I wrote about an old dude no clipping into the Backrooms
@durveshmohammed2955 Жыл бұрын
Oooh, how'd that one turn out?
@arathan9305 Жыл бұрын
Nah bruh I’m actually planning to do something about the backrooms for creative writing. How many marks did you get?
@hanadmahdihussein91974 ай бұрын
Maybe it was relatable to the examiner
@omarbaba98925 ай бұрын
Well yeah they don’t give a shit about the story itself it’s just how many methods you can throw into it
@axdul9996 Жыл бұрын
I thought it was 39/40 😂 still gud tho
@LukaBlazic-mz3uc6 ай бұрын
Ikr so annoying 😮
@LukaBlazic-mz3uc6 ай бұрын
Ik!
@bluemacaroons3 ай бұрын
I mean i wrote a story about a guy washing his hands and the bacteria suffering a horrible death and it got a 9 so 🤷♀️
@user-pp4pf8wh4r8 ай бұрын
story of my life 😪
@ollyshow7 ай бұрын
Amd what did you get
@Pope_Rural_I51843 ай бұрын
Write what you know !!!!!!
@spinogamerxd2 ай бұрын
I based mine off one piece anime
@ameera4656 Жыл бұрын
where is it!
@leaves.-. Жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/m2amiYd7qJt3rrs
@kxtie3298 Жыл бұрын
Nah cause in my exam I actually started to write abt the start of the first Harry Potter and realised half way thru
@crissjfkwf4 ай бұрын
OHHHHH
@unlucky81999 ай бұрын
i had a similar story but i failed :(
@alishaanimations3058 Жыл бұрын
Okay wow.. plot doesn’t matter
@AR253262 ай бұрын
0:08
@AirbourneTugКүн бұрын
😢
@dante-gf7hm Жыл бұрын
🔥🔥
@amaliearulappu94518 ай бұрын
27:30
@John14710 Жыл бұрын
Ye they never had the plot
@E18-X3 ай бұрын
Or AQA could just teach relevant stuff for our future and not BS
@propheticmessages17634 ай бұрын
There is one God, who created Heaven and Earth. He made us in His image and likeness. He made us to worship and we chose to rebel against God. As a result we are seperated from God but God didn’t leave us. Instead God sent His one and only Son, His Son is Jesus. He was born of a virgin and lived a life without sin, though He was tempted in every way as we are. He went on the cross and He willingly took our sins past, present and future. Jesus died in my place for my sins, paying my debt to God and purchasing my salvation. Jesus died but He rose on the third day victory over satan, sin, demons and hell. Jesus tells us to share this story of the Good News and there’s a God that lovingly pursues us. Jesus is coming to judge the living and the dead and those who trust in God will forever be with Him in His Kingdom and those who do not will suffer forever in hell.