"Blind Pain" (Pokémon Creepypasta)

[@SuperNerdDaniel]

Hey everyone, welcome to Video #3 for this year's installment of Creepytober! This one's a bit of a unique case, as it's technically the first time I've done full-scale tweaking/proofreading of an existing story -- the original work (as linked in the description) came across as somewhat rough and unpolished, so I decided it would be best to do some creative tweaking of the word choice and grammar to make it come across a bit more smoothly. I do hope the author comes back to flesh this out a bit more and hammer out the kinks writing-wise, 'cause I do like this one conceptually! It maybe just needed a second editing pass for the sake of the reader. Anyway, hope you all enjoy this one! Also, DRINK WATER

[@hongjoongsfluffyhat]

Second! Also I love your vids ☺️

[@Mecha_Elf92]

Awe man..I thought this was a sad zubat story and it hurt my heart already cuz i llve zubats and then hurt even more for the poor clefairy... How horrible those people are.

[@hongjoongsfluffyhat]

Wait omg this one is so sad :( poor clefairy

[@LeahLovesNature]

Aww man, first Ralts and now Clefairy? You're picking on all my favorites this year.

[@rakiahbaker5589]

Good afternoon. Such emotions.

[@kevinmcgiveney5128]

Can you do Paralysis next? It's one of my favorite pokemon creepypastas.